Story in current track
Dear forum friends
I stopped watching since last friday. Reason being too much ss for the villain which doesnt make sense
Only on updates thats all. Saw the latest precap shared in the forum. I moved on to short stories as they take lesser time to write a max of 1 hr thats all
There is a reason for writing this one which is towards the end . U can leave ur comments . I will surely get back to u later Tq for reading
THE DINNER DATE!
Decorated with beautiful lights the dine in was cosy and attractive but a little further from their residence suggested by gippy who've been there before with friends giving recommendations of its fabulous food and services
All four seated with jasmin clinging on to gippy saying
Yeh restaurant gippy ka favourite hai na gippy!
Gippy nodded with a wide smile putting his arms around her which annoyed the person sitting right in front who instantly did the same with his wife and interrupted
Gippy yeh sari tejo pey achi legti hai na !
The former replied with a thumbs up
Very nice tejo u are looking beautiful!
Akhir biwi kis ki hai!
Fateh claimed pulling her a little closer which affected her that she felt embarassed and gave an excuse to go to
The ladies!
She stood in front of the long wide mirror admiring her own appearance
Her slim figure wrapped in that red saree!
A wonderful unexpected gift from her husband!
Emotions building in her that she was trying to console as seconds later her phone rang and the caller was
Fateh!
Ajaona miss kar raha hun!
He stated excitedly trying to annoy the one sitting right opposite , his obsession
Jasmin sandhu!
The younger sister to his wife
His sali!
Jasmin ignored his gestures calming herself stating
He's just making me jealous thats all!
They started enjoying their taste buds with their delicious meals and both fateh and jasmin were serving their partners sweetly with lots of love in a competition to make the other
Jealous!
Tejo and gippy were touched with the duos warm gestures without realising the act of their
Pretense!
Minutes later fateh stopped eating suddenly
A distraction!
Dressed in a yellow shirt and blue jeans a guy seated alone at one corner of the dine in was staring at
Tejo!
Fateh noticed as he was having his meals and was getting disturbed with that hard stare of that hazel eyes that just doesnt seem to blink watching his wife very very closely
Just then jasmin's sweet voice interrupted to which he did not pay any attention
Gippy merey liye shahi paneer order kardo gey!
It was fateh's favourite dish yet he paid no attention as his mind was fully occupied with
that stranger!
He's pretending to ignore i know he's affected!
Jasmin smirked
He stood suddenly and gave an excuse to go to the
Gents!
Jasmin smiling as he walked away
Plan working !
He's jealous!
Soon he will be mine only!
As he walked towards the direction of the washroom with his dark eyes still set on that hazel ones wondering what is he upto
Her bare waist!
Exposure of the saree!
The eyes set still on that glowing skin of her curvy waist
Furious he grabbed a table cloth from one of the empty tables not occupied by guests
Covered her up!
Which choked her while drinking a glass of water
Fateh !
Bahut thend hai ! Tu yeh uper leley!
He blurted trying to control his
anger!
Tejo tried to uncover stating she was not feeling cold to which he spoke sternly and insructed her to recover
Bimar ped jaogi!
Gippy interuppted taking tejo's side
Rehney dey fateh itni thend nehin hai!
No! He replied angrily that tejo and gippy were taken aback exchanging glances with the same thoughts
What happened to him suddenly!
Koi baat ni it's ok main cover kerleti hun !
U calm down! She quickly covered herself again with the table cloth
Puzzled and confused!
Sighing to herself
Weird husband! Unpredictable!
And crazy!
Does anyone covers the other with a table cloth in the first place!
She ate her meal still unclear with his actions
Jasmin smirked
Mera gussa tejo par nikal raha hain!
He could not enjoy his taste buds any longer
Damn!
How dare he!
The guy stood up walking towards the entrance
I wont spare u !
Fateh glared at him
He excused hinself with a phone call to be made and rushed to catch up with
That pervert!
Seconds later he was riding on his bike speedily as an empty beer bottle flung into his direction!
If i ever get hold of u again that will be the end of ur life!
Fateh's furious voice close behind
He took steady steps ahead and sat at a bench approximately half kilometres away from the restaurant
Feeling the cool breeze of the dark nite calming his anger and frustrations
Why did i encourage her to wear the saree in the first place !
Damn!
I will never ever in my life purchase for her even if she begged for it!
No one has the right to see through her!
Only me!
He was confused with the last two words that crossed his mine
From now on only salwar kameez !
At least she's covered!
Jasmin was glad that her plan was working
Ringg
His phone rang and to which he answered immediately
The investor on the line enquiring some details of his business to whom he clarified to for at least half an hour
Suddenly he could feel a disturbance in his nostrils
Smoke!
Where is it coming from !
He was horified as he located tne exact direction
The dine in was on fire!
Heavy clouds of smoke
Oh no!
He ran frantically dropping his phone on the marble surface of the pavement near the bench
Speedy pace!
Running for her!
His life !
She was trapped!
He could feel his knees weak as he tried to pull a great force into his feared filled muscles moving forward to
Rescue her!"
The fear of losing her!
His heartbeat on par with his pace
He could hear the pulses very clear
I'm coming to get u!
The fire started from the kitchen side due to staff negligence and unfortunately raged towards the dining as the fire extinguisher was not working and so was the fire alarm and smoke detectors . Poor maintenance issues from the management despite being reminded by the supervisor numerous times
All guests were on the dance floor flowing with the music .Some semi drunk while others were either fully drunk or too sober
He reached the spot finally
Desperately looking out
Where is she!
His heart beating !
A chaos at the dine in with humans running and some trapped inside
Couldnt see through the thick smoke
Screams heard all over
His eyes searching for her
Gippy was seated on the floor of the parking lot still trying to breath in the clear air confused with jasmin's act of not coming along with him
She was waiting for him to come to her rescue with the strong belief that he loved her dearly
There he was trying to see through the smoke
Fateh!!
Pretending to choke with the smoke signalling to her rescue!
He obeyed and rushed forward
She held open her arms embracing him
I knew it !
He will come running !
To her surprise he ran past her brushing her aside towards the one lying unconscious on the floor a few steps behind her
Tejo!
Took her into his arms running frantically towards the exit through the thick smoke
Jasmin was left behind!
Couldnt believe her eyes
A stranger held her arm seconds later and guided her to her safety
Tejo ankhen khol!
He laid her in the backseat of his car
She was not responding
A bleeding fore head
Panicked he rushed her to the nearest hospital!
She was fast asleep . He sighed a relief
Thank god nothing happened
But he was restless
That stranger
How dare he!
The next morning she was glad that he rescued her as she folded his clothes to place them in the cupboard
He left early for the academy and had very little for breakfast
He looked upset!
Never mind i will bring him his favourite lunch
Will make his day
Seconds later she gasped
All her sarees were missing!
Only salwar kameez!
Where have they gone!
Reason for this fiction
Jasmin's obsession and delusions had taken over fateh's conscious mind so badly that he could hardly see the subconscious side which is occupied by tejo
Triggers are required for him to act towards the direction of the subconscious mind where his reflexes cordinates accordingly
The separation track which many predicted is also one of the triggers for him to realise the subconscious side of his brains
That also explains the flip flop between the two women
Though its annoying but the writers have done a good job
Tejo is already in him but with jasmin's obsession he cant see and understand it clearly
That also explains his approach when the investor was being friendly with tejo
It was clear possesivess and jealousy
An indication that tejo is already in his subconscious side that he havent realised yet
And it will come with time perhaps with the help of triggers
This is what i analysed from the recent episodes
Jasmin's obsession has preoccupied his conscious mind that he could barely see tejo on the subconscious side!
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