Poems: Aaditya: choo gai hai jo…(pg1), Anu: Chahe jo bhi ho…(pg 2)

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गुज़रान is routine

तम is darkness

क्लेश is painful agitation

तुंग is mountain

ऐंठ is attitude

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: S_n_t



Do share what you think 🙂

beautifully written ❤️


keep writing.. 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Can you post in eng sorry can't read hindi

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Originally posted by: naadanmasakalli

Can you post in eng sorry can't read hindi

👍 will do in sometime

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: S_n_t



Do share what you think 🙂

Wow, dear this just blew me away. You write so well and each picture that you chose and the lines just seem to fit so perfectly. Please do write more and share, would love to hear more of your thoughts. This was beautifully written

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Originally posted by: naadanmasakalli

Can you post in eng sorry can't read hindi

Image 1:

Bedag gujran se muh bhi kyon modate

Rangeen ehsason ne kabhibhi ki na thi pehal |


Tuzase ulazi jo rahen,

Jindagi mili failayen bahe .

Tuzsang umra safar se badh mela hai,

Tuzbin binch bheed pal pal akela hai.

Jana ke man panchi nahi bas, ye to mor hai,

Teri udaan se hi to mere pankho ka jor hai.

Teri shraddha hai jo ban rahaa hun tirath,

Varna tha fakat ful ladi murat.

Meri preet hasti pohonch ka prichay,

Teri sochne chooke ubhara hai. || 1 ||


Image 2:

Vishwas ji utha yun aith hath chodke,

Aastha ki aanchpar patthar gaya pighal.

Tam chir, chur hi honge kleshtung,

Bana sath jo hamara hai || 2 ||


Barso lutayen iradon ke piche daudate,

Ruke na bandhe na dare, rahe shoron se achal.

Choo gai dhadkan jo teri Goonj……

Ab har kshan tumhara hai || 3||


Image 3:

Mund baithe kyon abbhi palake, jab dekh li hai bhor?

Lab tak kare ansuna niyat honi ka kahaa?

Bhagya sang jud rahe pravah do,

Daav kismat me yu khela hai || 4 ||


Dhara se jabbhi utha ped, badha gagan hi ki aur,

Sagar me ghula jal, palat kab nadi me bahaa?

Dhaka ho sach paradon me sau,

Vakta ne khoj hi nikala hai || 5 ||


Kaise mil payengi, jitna hi lagalo jor,

Bite kal ki chand parchaiyan tak yahan?

Choo gai aatma jo sakal lau,

Ab kan kan ujala hai || 6 ||


Gujran is routine

Tung is mountain

Tam is darkness

Klesh is painful agitation

Aith is attitude

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Apsvenky

Wow, dear this just blew me away. You write so well and each picture that you chose and the lines just seem to fit so perfectly. Please do write more and share, would love to hear more of your thoughts. This was beautifully written

thanks dear 😊

A lot of it goes to what a phenomenal performance GM has given to convey all of this and to the writers who created AKT.

I had tough time selecting moments all are equally beautiful.

Writing one more thing, hope it turns out worth sharing 😜


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Khoobsoorat ❤️..

Keep writing dear👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: S_n_t



Do share what you think 🙂

तुंग is mountain




English script posted below.


Can you write it in English ? I can't read hindi font 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Apudip

Can you write it in English ? I can't read hindi font 😊

posted on page 1👍


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