RaghVi FF : Nightmare Thread 2 - Page 96

"without making us bored in any instance." and "make readers to read between the lines" if I can achieve that in my writing then I m completely satisfied. So thnx for mentioning that.

I do get u there. While writing I didn't think much but while proof reading I myself was astonished how many lines I seriously liked. It was a first for me too.

To be honest, I m not that good at writing for P. I seriously think there r better writers for that and I don't feel bad about it. But I like writing that because that is always a challenge. That chapter took multiple days writing. Most than any other chapter.

He was her soul and she was his beat.

Pallavi was The Fire and Raghav was Ice.

You gave core with these sentences of this FF.

'serious discussions' Now C'Mon. Whom r we kidding. Those ended in first chapter itself I guess.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Ved is in Jail. U cn take food for him.

If Ved wait for her food, he will die of hunger before his sentence end. She haven't yet delivered the Pizza you offered us.

Originally posted by: Joyness

You absolutely justified your thoughts by fluidly expressing it....and the rollercoaster ride was worth reading

Thnx... Now I cn be in peace. I already had an idea yesterday but shut that out as have zero time even for OS. Maybe in few months. It was nice to write that.

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

If Ved wait for her food, he will die of hunger before his sentence end. She haven't yet delivered the Pizza you offered us.

Don't even put that on me. U guys made her undisputed queen right. I suggested U or Reem I guess.... Not sure.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

To be honest, I m not that good at writing for P. I seriously think there r better writers for that and I don't feel bad about it. But I like writing that because that is always a challenge. That chapter took multiple days writing. Most than any other chapter.

Then you have definitely won the challenge. In that single chapter I was able to understand and feel everything Pallavi had gone through in past 2 years.

Taking challenge in their writing is a good thing for a writer. It will definitely help you to improve your writing skill.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Don't even put that on me. U guys made her undisputed queen right. I suggested U or Reem I guess.... Not sure.

I didn't put the blame on you. I was just implying that you are the kind soul who offered us Pizza.

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

Then you have definitely won the challenge. In that single chapter I was able to understand and feel everything Pallavi had gone through in past 2 years.

Taking challenge in their writing is a good thing for a writer. It will definitely help you to improve your writing skill.

I can't write if I don't feel motivated... Today's epilogue goes to prriyam. I read her post about how i maintained my schedule and that was straight written in an hour and a half with just one proof reading. First for me. Its never less then 10-12.

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

I didn't put the blame on you. I was just implying that you are the kind soul who offered us Pizza.

Good... good then... keep appreciating me. how good i m. how kind i m . I m just God incarnate. Or leave it I m God itself. So good to hear appreciation.

NOTE : Is a joke.

No please don't shut down your idea....you will make time...where there is a will there is way.....waiting...

Originally posted by: Joyness

No please don't shut down your idea....you will make time...where there is a will there is way.....waiting...

Will try. No promises.