RaghVi FF : Nightmare Thread 2 - Page 95

A beautiful ending to a beautiful journey❤️🥀.

She held him back as they found their solace in the moment.

The importance of this line can't be expressed in words. The whole plot revolves around this line. A perfect end to what was started.

Now the writer, you are immensely talented the way you play with word is just commendable. I have enjoyed each and every bit of this story all credit goes to you.

I will surely miss this thread, the discussion here, our senseless theories and your sarcastic replies all will be missed.

Thank you for this beautiful story and this thread.

P.s:- There is more to write about this but I am not good at writing long posts. Hope you get my views on the story through my posts.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Busy. Will reply in detail once free. just for uncle. Answered that back in chapter 13. Happy hunting.

that was me being silly! 🤦🏻‍♀️ Found without a difficult search. 👍🏼

Don't know what to say at this moment. I'm so sad that it came to an end but at the same time I'm glad too.

I loved that transistion from Sarika to Pallavi. And how Pallavi became Sarika Sawant.

While writing this did you get confused between them? Though they are same they are different too.

I loved the moment when she reacted as Pallavi but my absolute favorite was Raghav here. How he waited sitting beside her, poor baby. 🤗

It was sweet and cute, contrast to the other chapters. It was carrot not onion.🤣

Tbh I didn't expect an epilogue like that and you didn't spoil it at all.

Thanks for giving us a happy ending. A simple one.

What happened to my ved? Did you kill him? 😲

This was an emotional roller coaster for me, from horror to angst to grief to tragedy to mystery and finally to happiness. You have weaved the entire story in an outstanding way without making us bored in any instance. And you have ended it in a happy note with open ending. Your writings make readers to read between the lines and to widen their imagination power with a lot of solid open links. That's a ability which is possessed by a very few writers.

More than the plot, your word game got my attention. The way you depict complicated feelings in a simple short sentence is simply impressive. If you ask me to pinpoint my favourite sentence or dialogue or monologue in this story, I can't do it. Because in every single chapter there are more than one sentence which touched my heart.

You portrayed Raghav's condition and his every single emotions beautifully. I was living his life while reading this story, I felt his pain, guilt and anger throughout the entire story. The way you introduced Sarika's character was so thrilling and confusing at same time. And adding Pallavi's POV in last chapter was such a fantastic move as it helped the readers to connect more with their bond.

He was her soul and she was his beat.

Pallavi was The Fire and Raghav was Ice.

You have justified both of these statement till the end and that is your victory as a writer. I don't have any more words to express how much I loved this FF. And I am stopping here as I know I can't contain the appreciation for your writing in a limited words.

Thank you for giving us this masterpiece ❤️. And I am surely gonna miss all our 'serious discussions' in this thread.

Thanx a lot. It really helps me be sure that atleast I was able to tell with words what I intended. Thats what matters for me. So thnx for that confirmation.

Regarding cliff hangers and maintaining a bit of mystique, I feel those r cliché but r required because I myself hate predictable stories no matter how well they r written. It maybe just for me but I like to use my brain while reading. So its just what I prefer myself. Same I try to remember while writing.

‘Raghav Rao can burn the whole world if he wishes too but he can’t be on knees…’ This was specifically inspired by that which u r referring. P in d house stopping and scolding Raghav. In general not said much in series. But I have a hunch that for P no matter what, she thinks R as immovable constant for strength with many faults and he shouldn't break even if whole world around him is destroyed. Just my thought. Don't ask for reason.

Regarding all famed core idea, It was a really stupid and absurd idea that is y didnt wanted to reveal at first. It was just to challenge for my mind that can I as a writer write something justifying same person in two character without amnesia because thats easiest way around these things nd still maintain mystery. When I was thinking on that, not sure how extent of guilt added itself in to the story. And inception as an idea was something I always wanted to write about. I framed the story but writing was always an issue because of time required for it, hence OS and only inception/guilt can be worked on in single chapter thus leaving out original core idea itself. Left the original idea altogether just for me and posted OS. I know its not most sensible thought out plan but thats how much I move from one thought to another.

I m seriously glad I was able to do justice to this story as it seems from all the reactions.

Thanx... I wanted specifically to end with those words because as all of u mentioned, It inscribes the whole story from start to end.

Regarding discussions is upto u. How quickly u cn start ur story. U get to tag next writer once u finish, So there is a perk in it.

Thnx... And u wrote enough to tell ur POV for story. I like to use indirect picturization using analogies instead of using direct sentences. Its only for my pleasure as different people think differently about the same sentence and it helps in seeing how much different meaning same thought can have.

And don't worry about thread. we have our current champion on task. Trista.

Originally posted by: Prriyam

that was me being silly! 🤦🏻‍♀️ Found without a difficult search. 👍🏼

see I m that much afraid of u guys. Didn't left anything.

S to P transition was the thing I was most worried about to keep it under wraps still shouldn't be plain idiotic.

I wrote for P only. Even for S it was always how bad of an actor and how impulsive P is still keeping her iron willed for her task. So didn't needed to worry much.

Regarding that... It was coming out to be in 2-3 chapters with 3 different version. This was what i finally zeroed down still a very long epilogue.

I wanted to keep it a straight forward easy read so impact is more of what is happening to characters then why it is happening.

Ved is in Jail. U cn take food for him.

You absolutely justified your thoughts by fluidly expressing it....and the rollercoaster ride was worth reading