ShiVi story- Queen and her pawns BONUS CHAPTER UPDATED - Page 45

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Hii

So finally I finished reading this entire story in one go....this was amazing...one of the best stories I have read heresmiley27

I started reading the first chapter....and it was so well begun that I read the second chapter...I didn't realise I was going to complete reading this in one go. This was so interesting and each part compelled me to go read the next part...too goodšŸ‘



Starting with chirpy smartie Raavi trying all tricks by using Dev to get to shiva ..it was such a refreshing change to read it ...the dreamy Raavi...I loved her bond with rishitha...the three Krish Raavi and rishitha were also very cute ....ā¤ļø


The way story progressed and I started feeling the intensity in Raavi's feelings... especially the scene where she harmed herself to prove her love...mannn that was amazing...I got goosebumps reading it and read the chapter twice...


The haldi scene was hott...ā˜ŗļøone of my favourites of this story...


End mein shiva taking the plan ahead....and giving much needed jatka to DevšŸ˜†


I loved the entire story...u have super play fo words...can exactly feel what u write ...it was so interesting and beautifully writtenšŸ¤—


Waiting to read more of your worksā¤ļø


Thank you sooo much.

I am very glad you liked it.

It may or may not have an epilogue but for now it is completešŸ™‚

Writing something else but dunno if I will post it or not.🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace


Thank you sooo much.

I am very glad you liked it.

It may or may not have an epilogue but for now it is completešŸ™‚

Writing something else but dunno if I will post it or not.🤣


Please do post it....would love to readā¤ļø

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Posted: 4 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago

Oh my...this is actually bonusā¤ļø

Beautifully written Mahi

I hope you feel better today

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Scarysea

Oh my...this is actually bonusā¤ļø

Beautifully written Mahi

I hope you feel better today

Thank you soo much Chiki!

Feeling much better... šŸ–¤

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ufff šŸ”„ šŸ”„

Shivi are madly in love...

It was all soo cute.

Shiva is so unapologetic about his Love for Raaviā¤ļø


Thank you for writing itā˜ŗļø

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Posted: 4 years ago

Finaallyyy we got this bonus chapter!! ā¤ļø

Loveedd itt!! ā¤ļø

I hope u r alright now!! 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Swastika34

Finaallyyy we got this bonus chapter!! ā¤ļø

Loveedd itt!! ā¤ļø

I hope u r alright now!! 😊

Thank uuu

And I am much betteršŸ–¤

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Posted: 4 years ago

It was beautifulā¤

Truly a bonus to this amazing story!

Started with the sensual bedroom scene, uff uff

Ended with such emotional bedroom scene.

My favourite line "apne liye tere ilawa mai kuch nahi maangta"

Thank you for this mahišŸ’œšŸ’œšŸ’œ

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: nafees5

It was beautifulā¤

Truly a bonus to this amazing story!

Started with the sensual bedroom scene, uff uff

Ended with such emotional bedroom scene.

My favourite line "apne liye tere ilawa mai kuch nahi maangta"

Thank you for this mahišŸ’œšŸ’œšŸ’œ

Thank youuu and ua welcome Nairaaa!

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