ShiVi story- Queen and her pawns BONUS CHAPTER UPDATED - Page 44

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Part 12

"Main." Mausapa walked to her and placed his hand on Raavi's head. He slowly took her hand and placed it on Shiva's. "Itni si thi jab tu pari ban kr mere ghar aayi thi. Tere nanhe qadam aur us mein chan chan karti payal mujhe khushiyon ka sandesa laati thi. Tu jab bhi hansti thi mere ghar ko roshan karti thi. Teri pyaari pyaari baaton se us ghar ki deewaren raunak se khil jati thi. Tujhe bahut chaha beta... par betiya na beta, woh kadiya hoti hain jo mazboot to maike mein banayi jati hain lekin mazbooti dikhati hain sasural mein ja kar. Ghar jodti hain dil jodti aur fir kisi ka sansaar bhi jod deti hai. Betiyan woh phool hoti hain jo kisi aur ped se aate hain par arpan dusron ko kiye jate hain. Agar ho sakta to main tujhe apna ghar chodne na deta. Kyunki bata tere mausapa tere baghair kaise reh sakte hain? Par ab waqt aa pahuncha hai. Main is kanyadaan mein vishwaas nahin rakhta beta. Main bas tujhe tere pyaar ko saunp raha hoon. Rahegi tu hamesha meri laadli. Koi vastu nahin jise mein de doon. Balki woh goonj jisse humari dunya khushiyon se bhar jaye. Woh ghar tera maaika hai. Woh hamesha tere liye khula hai. Tu jab chahe aa. Jaise chahe reh. Aur ye tere mausapa har pal tere peeche khade hain bacchi! Tu kabhi akeli nahin hogi. Par ab ek aur ghar bhi tera hone ja raha hai. Main is umeed mein tujhe wahan bhej raha hoon ki tujhe wahan mujhse bhi zyada chahne wala insaan le ja raha hai. Tu har pal khush reh. Teri qismat hamesha roshan rahe aur jaise tune mere ghar ko khoobsurat banaya tu us ghar ko bhi bana..." Mausapa told her emotionally. Raavi cried as her hand trembled in Shiva's. Shiva held it firmly. Mausapa smiled and turned to him. "Beti nahin... Apne jigar ka tukda de raha hoon tumhen. Yun to saari umar ise apne maate ka taj banakar rakh sakta hoon par nahin... ye tumhen chahti hai isliye bade maan ke saath ise jane de raha hoon tumhare saath. Iska khayal rakhna. Aankhon mein ek aansu aane na dena. Meri pari hai ye."

I am NOT crying

I am NOT crying

I am NOTTT cryinggggg

I swear this is the most beautiful paragraph I have read on Kanyadan...I MEAN IT

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Originally posted by: Mysterie_girl

I am NOT crying

I am NOT crying

I am NOTTT cryinggggg

I swear this is the most beautiful paragraph I have read on Kanyadan...I MEAN IT

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Tissue??

Thank you sooo much! I am glad you liked it this much! 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Oh I can't tell you how much I loved this!!! I want to quote all the beautiful dialogues Mausa pa said and everything Shiva replied with. All of it so beautiful and just touched the heart. I absolutely love love love this Shiva. Where can I get one for myself? This is definitely going to be on my repeat list to read.

I can't wait to see what else you'll write next! Please update Mine as well!

Okay, now this is ready!😆

You must be thinking ki kaisi ladki hai itni baar bolke gayi ki comment karegi but kiya hi nahi🤣 Uski wajah yeh comment hi hai!😆😳 I knew that I was going to be commenting in detail because here Raavi is smart and all this is her plan!

She's the queen and I prefer it that way.😎😳 Others are her pawns, and damn! Exactly what I want❤️

Firstly, thank you for treating us all with a story like this🤗 Me is a huge fan😳 Now let's start, shall we-

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Part #1

Aaawww!! Raavi knows that she can only show her true self, act like she wants to, behave as she desires, and do whatever comes to her mind, only with Shiva! But with others, she has an image to maintain.😆😳 So adorable!😳

OMG!😆🤣 These girls😆 Raavi will burn them alive and turn them into ashes for eyeing her bhootnath and talking about him like that. They want to be Raavi only to be around Shiva and Raavi is too lost in Dev to realize how hot her bhootnath is, hers😉 Jhalli ladki knows not that Shiva is the one who makes her truly happy. Like she can be her true self with him, is so comfortable around him and she thinks that it is Dev whom she likes🤪

That ice-cream and hot chilli comparison🤣🤣 Those girls didn't know what monster they had just created. They got Raavi to contemplate her true love and just like you said "And when Raavi fall in thought it was a dangerous thing to happen." Oh, this is gonna be fun!🥳

Fast-forward to 2 years, and our girl is finally noticing the things that have been so clear since the start. But better late than never! Both of them are so into each other but never realized, eagerly waiting for this to happen😳

Now she is staring at him😆 enjoying the way he moves. And she's got an inner alarm🤣 that starts buzzing whenever someone else is eyeing her bhoothnath. I pity all those girls!🤣 Sharm bechna allowed nahi🤣

Jhutti ladki!🤣 Apne aap ko bhabhi bolti hai tab itni possessive hai, toh jab wife ban jayegi tab kya karegi🤣 This is so hilarious!🤣 Raavi is so hilarious! Krish is always an absolute delight! He knows what's going in his Raavi bhabhi & Shiva's minds. Dude is very observant.

She saw Rishita and Dev🤣 Ab yeh Rishita ko fasayegi, Queen's first pawn😎🤣

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Part #2

Raavi is annoyed with DevTa - nothing new there😆 And now Raavi realizes that she made the right choice of leaving Dev and grabbing onto Shiva instead😆 Dev se kuch nahi hona🤣. Pyaar mein ladki kya kya ban gayi, stalker!🤣 Kya kya karna pad raha hai bechari ko Shiva ki attention ke liye.

It was a messed-up cycle and Raavi was tired. - yeh toh hona hi thha🤣 She needs to do something asap! And she has a plan! Oh, this is gonna be very very interesting😛🤣

Chalo, Rishita se mulakaat ho gayi and Raavi cleared up everything with her, that's good.👍🏼 Par ye "mera Dev" yahan par bhi hai🤪 Dev na sahi uska naam toh kaam kar raha hai, Shiva only gets interested in Raavi when she starts talking about Dev😆 Stupid guy!

Rishita ko kya darra-dhamka rahi hai yeh ladki👏🤣 Mereko mazze aaye!🤣

Yeh planning shuru!🥳🤣 Ab Shiva fasega, aurr bohot bure tareeke se!🤣 The classic formula to get the FL get interested in the ML but yahan thoda ulta hai🤣 Yahan ladki drama kar rahi hai ladke ko patane ke liye🤣🤣 Aurr woh chalti-firti Shiva calculator😆 ab yeh gundon ki jaan kaise bachayegi?!🤣

Ah!🤣🤣🤣🤣 Raavi is f*cking hilarious!🤣🤣 Ka chance pe dance kar rahi hai😆, Shiva ko pata hi nahi that he's being taken advantage of🤣 Mast haan mast!👏

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Part #3

Rishita toh Raavi ke sabhi orders maan rahi hai, dono ladkiyan, dono bhaiyon ko chhodne nahi waali🤣 Kya fase hain dono bhai🤪🤣

Yeh lo, Dhara is the second pawn😆 ab yeh shaadi waala drama shuru karegiAbhi Shiva waapis aayega and when he'll get to know about Dev-Raavi's wedding - tab ho ga hungama!🤣

Isne phhir chance maara😆 and I am eagerly waiting for that blast to happen. jaldi batao jaldi!!😆 And then it happened!!⭐️👏 Shiva won't let her marry anyone else other than him but he still doesn't know why he's feeling so. Koi na beta, thoda time hai tere paas cheezon ko samajhne ke liye😆🤣

He's the one who pushes her away and he's the one who keeps her safe. Ah, this push and pull madness. Arre! Isne toh Dev ko maarne ki bhi dhamki de di😆 and he still doesn't know why he is so ready to kill Dev if he gets married to Raavi? Stupid🤣

Mandir mein rasm poori karne ka kya mast idea hai😆 Abhi toh Krish bhi inki team mein lag raha hai mujhe.👏 And woh end mein pakka Krish hi hai, mujhe pata hai ki aurr koi nahi ho sakta. It is definitely the 3rd pawn of the story - Krish Pandya!

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I have to divide this comment into sections🤣 Ek saath drafts bana rahi hoon, ek saath hi post karungi!😎

Part 4,5, and 6😆

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Part #4

Mereko pata thha ki yeh Krish hi hone waala hai!😆 Aurr Rishita, she's so pitiful here as well🤣 Sabki complain yahi hai ki Dev kuch nahi karta! Usko bolo ki kuch kare!🤣 Raavi thinks that Shiva didn't express hi feelings for her but Krish knows that he did. Tabhi toh Dev aurr poore Somnath ko jalane ki dhamki deke gaya🤣

Krish ko ab apni Dhara bhabhi best lag rahi hogi, kyunki Rishita aurr Raavi toh chakram hain🤣 Dono ladkiyan pagal hain aurr ab yeh bhi inke pagalpan mein involve hone waala hai.🤣 Ek ek karke sabhi ko pata chalega ab ki kya kaand chal raha hai🤣

Yeh Shiva human hi hai na😆 insano ko kaccha chabana hai isse. Kitna bhooka hai yeh🤣 Aurr yeh Krish, he needs to control himself and so does Raavi, excitement mein kuch bhi bol denge yeh dono🤪

Dekha! Bola thha maine, yeh kabhi bhi kuch bhi bolti hai. Now she's missing the way he smells and even told him so🤣 Iss baar toh bach gayi but baar baar nahi bachegi🤣 Chalo bhai, abhi haldi ki rasam shuru karte hain😆 Aurr yeh Raavi ka mast jala rahi hai Shiva ko, aag mein ghee daal rahi hai yeh ladki. She's gonna get burned but I know she will love this😳

I loved this one!❤️

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Part #5

The informal rasam happened now it's time for the formal one. And yeh Raavi ke saath itna comfortable hai ki raat ko aise khidki se uske kamre mein chala aata hai and she doesn't say anything about that and he still finds it normal🤪😆

Oh ho, haldi waala paani exchange kar diya thha Shiva ne!🥳 He must be thinking that Raavi would be sad after learning about this but uske mann mein toh ladoo phoot rahe hain🤣

Drama-queen🤣 Mann mein toh dance kar rahi hai lekin bolti hai ki apshagun hai🤣 Haldi done, now comes the mehndi! Oh, I love mehndi, as in applying henna on my own hands, I love the smell of it😳

Shiva loves being close to her but dude still doesn't understand why?! Jhalla aadmi!🤪 But yeh Dev ke saath koi rasm nahi hone dega toh kuch theek bhi hai but he needs to realize why he is behaving so. And aawww, meri Raavi ko rula diya isne. Hugs for Raavi🤗 Don't worry behen, sab theek hi hoga.🤣

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Part #6

I love this mehndi ritual! My fav among all the marriage rituals😳 Let's see ki aaj yahan kya kaand ho ga🤣 Aaww, Raavi is panicking because she thinks that the mehndi doesn't belong to Shiva but Dev. Lekin mereko pata hai ki yahan bhi kuch jhol zaroor ho ga!😛😎

Lo, aurr kuch ho na ho, isne apni mehndi mein uska naam toh likhwa liya. Main kush! Main bohot khush!😆 Abhi yeh kya, Shiva ne kuch nahi kiya? But i still believe ki kuch ho zaroor gaya hoga😆 Jab tak uska pata chalta hai tab tak we got to know Shiva ke mann ki baat😆

Dude can't even imagine his chipkali becoming someone else's wife, waise ho gi bhi nahi, lekin agar ho jaati toh?!😲🤣 Oh, yes! Trishul mila! And sabki nigahein on Shiva🤣

Raavi khushi ke aansu baha rahi hai lekin log kuch aurr hi samajh rahe hain. Accha hai, apne liye toh yahi accha hai🤣 Arre re re! Yeh pakka musibat khadi ki hai isne yeh bol ke that he won't save Raavi even when surrounded by fire. Yeh ladki pagal hai, abhi kuch karegi. Pakka kuch kaand karne waali hai yeh!😆

Lo ji, kar diya ladki ne kaand. Laga di aag ab bachane waale ka intezaar hai😎🤣 Kushi, khushi, khushi! Shiva realized what Raavi means to him!🥳 Haayyee! Kya scene hai And Gautam knows, good!👍🏼

Wah! maasi ko bhi Shiva Dev se better laga, sabhi ko wahi lagta hain, sivaay Rishita ke🤣

ShiVi scene was so beautiful and finally Shiva knows that Raavi loves him and not Dev. Lekin Rishita ki baat nahi bata paayi🤔 But chalo, sangeet ki rasm bhi ho gayi. This was such an awesome chapter!

Part 7, 8, and 9😆

Issiliye itna late comment ho raha thha. Itna lamba comment hai ki post karne ke liye bhi I have to make 4 posts!🤣 Chalo, let's continue -

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Part #7

Aaww, Raavi thinks that Shiva confessing to her and those moments that she spent with him were a dream but then she saw that trishul and OMG!🤣 Ab yeh confused rehne waali hai ki aakhir raat mein hua kya thha🤣

Arre yaar, yeh Dhara bhi na! Accha khaasa game chal raha thha, isne naya rule daal diya beech mein. Ab is restriction ko kaise handle karenge?🤪 Poor Raavi, she feels she is going to fail now. Rishita isn't replying, Dhara is holding back Shiva and now what?! Abhi kya hoga?!😲

Tch! Ab yeh Rishita ke papa bhi panga daalne aa gaye🤪 Inko aurr koi kaam nahi hai? Abhi Shiva wants his trishul back too. Poor Raavi😒🤗

Yeh Dev!🤬 Sahi time pe yeh banda kuch nahi kar sakta! Aurr jab kuch karta hai toh gadbad hi karta hai! Pagal aadmi!🤬

Part #8

Yeh dulha exchange kab hua re?😲😆 No need to wonder Shiva, you are a fool! yeh realization bhi Raavi ki wajah se hi aaya hai, agar woh kuch nahi karti toh tera kya hota thakur?🤣 Aurr Dev, woh bakra sach mein bali chhad jaata🤣🤣

Nazuk toh nahi hai but she has a soft heart no😳 usko bhi toh pain hua hoga when she thought she was getting married to Dev and not Shiva😒 But she is Raavi aurr yeh behosh hone ka natak kar rahi thhi🤣 Nautanki🤣

Oh, so she knew! Chalaak lombdi!🤣🤣Baat bhi sahi hai, Dev bankar shaadi kyun karni? Khullam khula pyaar aurr shaadi karenge yeh dono😆🤣 And I am with Raavi on this. Usko pehle akal aa gayi thhi that she loves Shiva and usko yeh sab karna hi nahi padta agar Shiva mein thodi si akal hoti🤪

Aaawwwiiiiiieeeeee Such a beautiful scene between my fav couple. Bohot acche se likha thha. I loved it!❤️ Now let's see ki aakhir 24 ghante pehle hua kya?!😆

Okay so Shiva talked with Gautam about this, good idea. Accha🤣 Toh krish se pata chala inko sab kuch!🤣

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Part #9

Shiva🤣🤣Ab Raavi ko koi kuch bol ke toh dekhe, Shiva ne uska muh tod dena hai🤣 Krish needs to stop calling Raavi by names else he's gonna die🤣 Chalo bhai, kahani ka summary sunne ko mila😆 Gautam is so confused ki yeh jalebi kya hai, kyun hai?!🤣

Dev toh gayo!🤣 Ab woh uthega nahi, uth jayega🤣🤣 Kyunki agar Raavi ka dimaag ghooma nahi hota toh aaj Dev-Raavi ki shaadi ho gayi hoti aurr Shiva majnu bana ghoomta rehta🤣 Isko bhi toh akal baad mein hi aayi hai🤣

Dev ko maaro please! Kahin toh meri iccha ki purti ho!🤣😆 Batao yaar, Dev se sahi mein kuch nahi hota!🤪 Jis ladki ko pyaar karta hai usse bhi bhaga ke Shiva laa raha hai. Yeh shaadi ke baad bhi aisa hi rehne waala hai ya kuch karega bhi?🤣

Dev ke kuch na karne, kuch na kehne ki wajah se jo jhol hua hai uske mazze ab lenge baaki sab🤣 Shiva-Rishita ki shaadi🤣🤣 Now I wanna see Dev's reaction!

Part 10, 11, and 12😵

Finally!😆🤣

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Part #10

Mast natak chal raha hai yahan🤣 Dev ko chakri de rahe hain ki Shiva ne Rishita se shaadi kar li🤣 Ab toh kuch bol de nikhattu!🤪 Finally! Finally Dev bola. Bookmark this date, please!🤣

Dev ki dhulayi! Physically na sahi, verbal toh ho rahi hai. Jitna mil raha hai ussi mein khushi dhoondo!🤣 Khushi! Bohot saari khushi! Dev ke saath saath, Shiva ne bhi confess kar diya. Ab yeh drama plan karega apne waala. Lekin aisa karna nahi chahiye. In fact he should be thankful to Raavi.🤣

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Part #11

Haaye! Ab isko Raavi ka naam kissi aurr ke saath liya toh usse bhi problem hai😆 And Raavi innocent bilkul bhi nahi hai!🤪 Now I wish ki kuch toh ho jaata, phhir Dev ki kuch hadiyaan toh tod deta Shiva🤣 Mujhe bhi mazze aa jaane thhe🤣

Yeh 2 saal ka tag na meri life ke saath chipak hi gaya hai🤣 But koi baat nahi, yeh bhi seh lehnge hum🤣 Filhaal let's enjoy what Shiva is gonna do😆 But usse pehle Dev-Rishita ki shaadi ho gayi, good! Ek pareshani hatt gayi abhi dusri ki baari😆

Poor Raavi😭 Aisa nahi karna chahiye thha uske saath. Usne yeh sab planning plotting nahi ki hoti toh sab gadbad ho jaata! Abhi usko thank you bolne ki jagah yeh sab ussi ke mazze le rahe hain🤬

Mujhe gussa hai iss baat pe! Raavi ke saath aisa nahi karna chahiye thha😒. Issiliye baaki waala part maine show ke episode ki tarah skip, skip, skip karke padha liya!😳

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Part #12

Back to the present! And abhi ke liye last chapter pe comment🤣🤣

Raavi ko rulaya, mujhe bilkul accha nahi laga😒 Haan toh, you hadn't realized that you loved her that's why she had to do all that but you knew that she loves you and still did this drama with her. Me not like this at all!😳

ShiVi scenes are always beautiful, always my fav. Bas aisi understanding, aisa love mereko show mein bhi dekhna hai.❤️ Aath bacche🤣🤣 Beta country ki population waise hi bohot hai, tumhe aabaadi badhane ka itna shaunk kyun hai?🤣

Abhi shaadi ka time aayaAaww😭🤗Mausapaa's speech made me cry. It was another beautiful segment from this chapter. Shaadi ke beech mein Rishita ke papa ki entry😆 but usko nahi pata ki uski beti ki shaadi ho gayi, yahan ab kissi aurr ki shaadi ho rahi hai🤣

Raavi feeding food to Shiva was so cute and totally adorable! And then the last scene was cute too. But wiat, what?! This was the end? I thought that there must be another part or an epilogue pending but you just ended like that?

Arre, agli subah ka scene dikhao, thoda future mein leke jao and show us a pregnant Raavi. Epilogue toh de do!😆

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Finally! Finally, maine iss story pe comment kar diya! Promise kiya thha na, bas thodi der ho gayi😆 Abhi kitna lamba comment kiya hai, dekha!🤣 Pata hai mujhe ek word doc banana pada iss comment ke liye. Kitne dino se edit kar rahi thhi, aaj jaakar complete hua hai. Itni mehnat ki maine!😎

Abhi aise comment kar hi diya hai so you must know how much I really enjoyed reading this story! What I liked the most is that Raavi isn't a "tube-light" here. She's smart and she knows what she wants. And that is how I want her to be.❤️

Originally posted by: bhavna101

Okay, now this is ready!😆

You must be thinking ki kaisi ladki hai itni baar bolke gayi ki comment karegi but kiya hi nahi🤣 Uski wajah yeh comment hi hai!😆😳 I knew that I was going to be commenting in detail because here Raavi is smart and all this is her plan!

She's the queen and I prefer it that way.😎😳 Others are her pawns, and damn! Exactly what I want❤️

Firstly, thank you for treating us all with a story like this🤗 Me is a huge fan😳 Now let's start, shall we-

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Part #1

Aaawww!! Raavi knows that she can only show her true self, act like she wants to, behave as she desires, and do whatever comes to her mind, only with Shiva! But with others, she has an image to maintain.😆😳 So adorable!😳

OMG!😆🤣 These girls😆 Raavi will burn them alive and turn them into ashes for eyeing her bhootnath and talking about him like that. They want to be Raavi only to be around Shiva and Raavi is too lost in Dev to realize how hot her bhootnath is, hers😉 Jhalli ladki knows not that Shiva is the one who makes her truly happy. Like she can be her true self with him, is so comfortable around him and she thinks that it is Dev whom she likes🤪

That ice-cream and hot chilli comparison🤣🤣 Those girls didn't know what monster they had just created. They got Raavi to contemplate her true love and just like you said "And when Raavi fall in thought it was a dangerous thing to happen." Oh, this is gonna be fun!🥳

Fast-forward to 2 years, and our girl is finally noticing the things that have been so clear since the start. But better late than never! Both of them are so into each other but never realized, eagerly waiting for this to happen😳

Now she is staring at him😆 enjoying the way he moves. And she's got an inner alarm🤣 that starts buzzing whenever someone else is eyeing her bhoothnath. I pity all those girls!🤣 Sharm bechna allowed nahi🤣

Jhutti ladki!🤣 Apne aap ko bhabhi bolti hai tab itni possessive hai, toh jab wife ban jayegi tab kya karegi🤣 This is so hilarious!🤣 Raavi is so hilarious! Krish is always an absolute delight! He knows what's going in his Raavi bhabhi & Shiva's minds. Dude is very observant.

She saw Rishita and Dev🤣 Ab yeh Rishita ko fasayegi, Queen's first pawn😎🤣

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Part #2

Raavi is annoyed with DevTa - nothing new there😆 And now Raavi realizes that she made the right choice of leaving Dev and grabbing onto Shiva instead😆 Dev se kuch nahi hona🤣. Pyaar mein ladki kya kya ban gayi, stalker!🤣 Kya kya karna pad raha hai bechari ko Shiva ki attention ke liye.

It was a messed-up cycle and Raavi was tired. - yeh toh hona hi thha🤣 She needs to do something asap! And she has a plan! Oh, this is gonna be very very interesting😛🤣

Chalo, Rishita se mulakaat ho gayi and Raavi cleared up everything with her, that's good.👍🏼 Par ye "mera Dev" yahan par bhi hai🤪 Dev na sahi uska naam toh kaam kar raha hai, Shiva only gets interested in Raavi when she starts talking about Dev😆 Stupid guy!

Rishita ko kya darra-dhamka rahi hai yeh ladki👏🤣 Mereko mazze aaye!🤣

Yeh planning shuru!🥳🤣 Ab Shiva fasega, aurr bohot bure tareeke se!🤣 The classic formula to get the FL get interested in the ML but yahan thoda ulta hai🤣 Yahan ladki drama kar rahi hai ladke ko patane ke liye🤣🤣 Aurr woh chalti-firti Shiva calculator😆 ab yeh gundon ki jaan kaise bachayegi?!🤣

Ah!🤣🤣🤣🤣 Raavi is f*cking hilarious!🤣🤣 Ka chance pe dance kar rahi hai😆, Shiva ko pata hi nahi that he's being taken advantage of🤣 Mast haan mast!👏

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Part #3

Rishita toh Raavi ke sabhi orders maan rahi hai, dono ladkiyan, dono bhaiyon ko chhodne nahi waali🤣 Kya fase hain dono bhai🤪🤣

Yeh lo, Dhara is the second pawn😆 ab yeh shaadi waala drama shuru karegiAbhi Shiva waapis aayega and when he'll get to know about Dev-Raavi's wedding - tab ho ga hungama!🤣

Isne phhir chance maara😆 and I am eagerly waiting for that blast to happen. jaldi batao jaldi!!😆 And then it happened!!⭐️👏 Shiva won't let her marry anyone else other than him but he still doesn't know why he's feeling so. Koi na beta, thoda time hai tere paas cheezon ko samajhne ke liye😆🤣

He's the one who pushes her away and he's the one who keeps her safe. Ah, this push and pull madness. Arre! Isne toh Dev ko maarne ki bhi dhamki de di😆 and he still doesn't know why he is so ready to kill Dev if he gets married to Raavi? Stupid🤣

Mandir mein rasm poori karne ka kya mast idea hai😆 Abhi toh Krish bhi inki team mein lag raha hai mujhe.👏 And woh end mein pakka Krish hi hai, mujhe pata hai ki aurr koi nahi ho sakta. It is definitely the 3rd pawn of the story - Krish Pandya!

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I have to divide this comment into sections🤣 Ek saath drafts bana rahi hoon, ek saath hi post karungi!😎

Whoaaaa. This got to be one of my fav comments😂 I to Loved it Bhavna.

When I opened it, I am like I think Bhavna forgot and posted her story here🤣🤣🤣

But then I realised ohhh! This is not her story it’s her comment! 😄

What can I say to this beautiful piece of art comment except I love it! And I am glad you liked the story.

Last mein I had to make Shiva do something in this plan warna uske aur Dev ke beech kya farq reh jata? And I felt Raavi deserved the madness Shiva was displaying u know. She needed to be just as much loved if not more.

I feel every father should give assurance to the daughter during kanyadaan so she knows her backbone is intact.

Waise itna lamba story jaisa comment to de diya. Par when r u updating ua story? We waiting!

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Whoaaaa. This got to be one of my fav comments😂 I to Loved it Bhavna.

When I opened it, I am like I think Bhavna forgot and posted her story here🤣🤣🤣

But then I realised ohhh! This is not her story it’s her comment! 😄

What can I say to this beautiful piece of art comment except I love it! And I am glad you liked the story.

Last mein I had to make Shiva do something in this plan warna uske aur Dev ke beech kya farq reh jata? And I felt Raavi deserved the madness Shiva was displaying u know. She needed to be just as much loved if not more.

I feel every father should give assurance to the daughter during kanyadaan so she knows her backbone is intact.

Waise itna lamba story jaisa comment to de diya. Par when r u updating ua story? We waiting!

Issiliye itna time lag raha thha😆

When I like something, like really really like, then I do this😳

I like a smart Raavi, normal bhi chalega but not tube-light versions I have read of her😆 I mean it is funny but still I prefer Raavi being smart and knowing what exactly she wants.

Glad that you liked the comment, I was working on this one for long🤣

And my story, ah, aaj karungi uska update. Bas last ke kuch sentences likhna baaki hain😆🤣

Hii

So finally I finished reading this entire story in one go....this was amazing...one of the best stories I have read here

I started reading the first chapter....and it was so well begun that I read the second chapter...I didn't realise I was going to complete reading this in one go. This was so interesting and each part compelled me to go read the next part...too good👏

Starting with chirpy smartie Raavi trying all tricks by using Dev to get to shiva ..it was such a refreshing change to read it ...the dreamy Raavi...I loved her bond with rishitha...the three Krish Raavi and rishitha were also very cute ....❤️

The way story progressed and I started feeling the intensity in Raavi's feelings... especially the scene where she harmed herself to prove her love...mannn that was amazing...I got goosebumps reading it and read the chapter twice...

The haldi scene was hott...☺️one of my favourites of this story...

End mein shiva taking the plan ahead....and giving much needed jatka to Dev😆

I loved the entire story...u have super play fo words...can exactly feel what u write ...it was so interesting and beautifully written🤗

Waiting to read more of your works❤️