RaghVi FF : Nightmare Thread 2 - Page 5

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

You should put a disclaimer in the first page of your threads,

Keep your sarcasm radar on while reading the posts other than the actual chapters.

You all agree with me in this?

@bold--will keep it in mind the next time.

Thanks for the early warning

Stunned. That should sum it up.

Always knew V is in the backdrop; but for having him spring in, did bring in a jolt. V really is portrayed villainous - a bad simile, but cant hold mentioning ‘yin to R’s yang’. The more he gets R stumble and reach the lows, the more ferociousness will be witnessed.

Liked the pace of the story. At its pinnacle before everything start unfolding and give clarity. Not that anything was hidden. But it is so camouflaged, that its all hiding so well in plain sight.

As to S, interesting to read the emotions she is in. And yet again being the fire that takes the bullet. The peace she gets to R and his dilemma, the story has got it in such wonderful words and moments. R’s brain vs heart has come out so effectively, that it aches the readers.

A brilliant crescendo!


Here it is, my mind is full of queries and random theories. But zipped it; talked only of the chapter!

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

Okaayy. This got to be my favourite chapter so far. I loved the way you portrayed the importance of Pallavi in Raghav's life. You honestly have a way with words 👏👏.

You really have the ability to make readers feel every emotions of the characters. The angst and rage of Raghav was written so well.

P.S. My brain can't make anymore theories on this

Thanx... I also felt good about this chapter. minimum changes done from first draft to final post.

And I have full confidence in u that u will get a theory in next read.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

You should put a disclaimer in the first page of your threads,

Keep your sarcasm radar on while reading the posts other than the actual chapters.

You all agree with me in this?

Yes, more like the story and the comments belong to two different individuals.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

him here.

I am sorry about that. I didn't know.

Originally posted by: ReemShah

What happened to Ved after he fires the shot hitting on the ledge?

Fight squence---thanks for that--I now really want a fight sequence in the show

After the hug with Sarika--Raghav realizes she is not Pallavi.

and Sarika is dead---is this cycle going to continue until Raghav is killed??

I really liked how you have written Raghav's emotional conflict withing itself--the war in his mind regarding Sarika and his feelings for Pallavi and what he felt at the moment with Sarika.

I actually have no idea what should I expect ahead of this chapter.

Thanx and I don't have much expectation with fight scene in show. In order to be unconventional and realistic they r even brushing aside high impact scene. so its very much fine if we get it or not. atleast for me.

Originally posted by: Prriyam

Stunned. That should sum it up.

Always knew V is in the backdrop; but for having him spring in, did bring in a jolt. V really is portrayed villainous - a bad simile, but cant hold mentioning ‘yin to R’s yang’. The more he gets R stumble and reach the lows, the more ferociousness will be witnessed.

Liked the pace of the story. At its pinnacle before everything start unfolding and give clarity. Not that anything was hidden. But it is do camouflaged, that its all hiding so well in plain sight.

As to S, interesting to read the emotions she is in. And yet again being the fire that takes the bullet. The peace he gets to R and his dilemma, the story has got it in such wonderful words and moments. R’s brain vs heart has come out so effectively, that it aches the readers.

A brilliant crescendo!


Here it is, my mind is full of queries and random theories. But zipped it; talked only of the chapter!

Thnx a ton... and yes ur theory post should definitely be coming.

This was for me... that will be for u guys....

It helps to know if what intended is communicated or something was missed. Thats y asked for this. So thnx.

So S is P or S is dead pallavi or S is sulochna as Reem wants that?

Originally posted by: ReemShah

I am sorry about that. I didn't know.

sorry not needed. too much "Modesty " flows in this forum. just info in public welfare.

Wha- What the hell is happening asdfghjkl!!🤯😵

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

So S is P or S is dead pallavi or S is sulochna as Reem wants that?

Nah..I would never want S to be Sulochna--you were the one who suggested it. and if S were supposedly Sulochna then she would have never felt anything for Raghav other than hatred.

I had mentioned I thought S is Pallavi only