Fatejo confession - VO PEL /THAT MOMENT

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This is a fresh os not a continuous of the earlier ones

Fatejo - VO PEL/THAT MOMENT


10pm virks residence

He sat on the grey spring mattress enjoying the breeze of the darkness surrounding his lone soul. His new sleeping venue since she decided to move way from his personal space to surrender their marriage into the hands of the indian government rules for separation to free him from the loveless heavenly bond that was thrown upon them to save their families' honour ,


It was her decision that he should unite with his lady love and step forward into a loveful bond with her sibling whom he had craved for so dearly that life was turning to be lifeless for him

It was her who wanted to relieve him from his suffocations stating that she was the deoxygenated veins to his heart that should never be able to move on par with his pulses, and should be replaced with the one who could provide him with fresh air of life

Jasmin , her adorable little sister who she placed before anything else in her life


Ringggg

His phone tone

It was jasmin his love on the line

So rehey ho kya ? She asked impatiently but with excitement

Irrk;,, nehin . He replied in short , shifting restlessly on the spring mattress.

This was not the first time. The past two months his replies were always short whenever she called him and the lack of excitement in his innerself that tends to mute his speech as she continues talking for at least fifteen minutes or more on how glad she is that they are now dating each other again slowly moving into a new marital bond for him once tejo is released from the loveless ties once and for all


TEJO!

He took a deep breath everytime that magical name is mentioned vibrating his ear drums so hard that he could feel his pulses clearly

Jasmin mentioned tejo will be signing the divorce papers that nite and were to be delivered to him the next morning . His heart sank deeply as she completed the sorrowful sentence

So this is it? A piece of paper that would sweep her away from me forever ? She wont be there for me now?

Not on the same bed lying closer? Not in the kitchen preparing my meals ? Not sitting beside me to wipe my tears ?

Fateh! Tum sun rehey ho na ? Jasmin asked anxiously

Fateh disconnected the line and switched off his phone. Unable to bear the pain of jasmin's last few words he laid on his soft white pillow and closed his heavy eye lids back to the memories of her when she was entangled in his personal space

The memories came back bit by bit

How he threw tantrums the nite he was forced to marry her. How she pushed him into the ring despite of his unwillingness to face the challange. How she held his shoulder to support him in every manner be it to move on from his love filled sorrows and towards his career planning

How she taught him step by step to move forward in his life with joy and released from all pains but

Drops of tears at the corner of his eyes !

She removed herself suddenly that unfortunate day when jasmin's message of confession came out of the blue knocking the door of her phone which was lying just beside her and he didnt notice as his mind was busy indulging himself with the video games on his laptop.sitting on the bed beside her

And surrrended to his sleep moments later without realising that she was gonna leaving him forever the very next morning .


Flashback two months ago

He was shocked. She was nowhere to be seen . Not in the room not in the kitchen not in the house at all. Mahi screamed. All virks ran towards fateh's room . Her closet was

EMPTY!

She left !

Without any word. He was interrogated badly by his grandparents and dad blaming that he could have behaved harshly with her . He frowned we are best friends and u all know that . So ?

Virks were confused . Fateh is right . Even gurpreet has toned down a little with her. They were all accepting her as DIL with open hearts . What has occurred that she left out of sudden ? Without notifying anyone ?

Sandhus were shocked as well. She was not with them either. Where the hell is she ? Satti was crying loudly . Rupi was devastated . Oh no ! Not again

Second time she took the same step. Harman advised to check with jasmin . Perhaps this time also she could be rhe reason of tejo's disappearance as before. Rupi screamed loudly calling her name

Moments later she was interrogated harshly by all with satti coming forward and giving her a slap . What have u done to ur sister this time ? She asked furiously

Jasmin was nervous then slowly blurted it out with tears rolling down her cheeks that she still loves fateh and requested her older sister to give way

She then showed the text message sent to tejo the nite earlier. Second slap this time from rupi who claimed that she was a parasit in their family who lived on them but took away their happiness

Fateh was shattered as he heard the news from viraj who rang him immediately after jasmin's confrontation by sandhus.

His fingers searching desperately for her number on his phone . There was no ring tone .

THE NUMBER U DIAL IS NOT IN SERVICE

He rushed to his jeep frantically searching for her down the road showing her snap around to passers by

Viraj rang him again in an hour later stating that she had put up in the university campus in the boarding students' hostel giving excuses her in laws place is undergoing major renovation and they had moved to a distant relative's home which made it inconvenient for her to travel to work. The principal gave in to her application and one of the office staff who is also a friend of viraj informed him minutes ago

He was very much annoyed .

How could she do this to me ? Never for once asked what i wanted? Just listened to her beloved sister's appeal and moved on just like that ? Hello! Who am i ?

An idiot? A punching bag that u two siblings decided to push forward whenever u wished?

Frustration embedded deeply in his heart and a restless mind he didnt notice the splash of tears at the corner of his eyes and locked himself in his room the whole day.

The next morning he decided

Ok ? If this is what she want? So be it ? Neither will i call her or meet her from now onwards. Why should i ? When i dont carry any importance in her life . She shoved me away just like that giving in to her sister. I dont mean anything to her ?


Jasmin was crying lying on her bed . How would fateh react ? Will he shout at me? . To her surprise he was at her door the very next morning giving a big surprise to her family as well. Made an announcement that since jasmin had confessed her love for him and her older sister had given way he has no option but to give in to their both demands. Decided to release tejo from that loveless marriage life

Well thats what ur daughter wants . So dont blame me . He replied calmly to rupi's harsh confrontation

Sandhus and virks tried to meet up with tejo at the hostel to advise her to take back her decision but she refused to meet anyone of them in the first place

Babuji advised kushbeer just give in while sitting down in the living room accompamied by rupi as well. Allow the kids to move on . Dont tie them in the loveless bond . And uttered these words which sent huge waves of shock for all when he announced loudly

Tejo and fateh to be divorced followed by jasmin fateh marriage and walked away quietly to his room

Sandhus and virks tried to put forward their suggestions to him saying we could bring tejo back but he was firm in his decision saying she had done it twice

This time no apology.



10pm at the students' hostel

Her fingers shivered as she struggled to get a good grip of the pilot made ink to pen down her signature on the white sheets of papers that had the official stamp of the indian government declaring the end of her marriage

THE DIVORCE AGREEMENT


Tears rolling down on her soft cheeks

So this is it ? The end of tejo fateh singh virk?

FATEH!


That magical name that vibrated her ear drums so badly that she could feel her pulse clearly

In that two months duration since she left him , not a single day passed without his memories . His funny faces whenever she snapped at him. His lovely smile . His sweet apologies kneeling in front of her with beautiful roses when she was upset with his tantrums. His standing at the kitchen counter in front of her performing all kinds of hunger act while she prepares food for his family.


With a strong mind she pulled herself together and finally gave in to the papers . Wept the whole night for the closure of the chapter named tejo fateh singh virk moving forward to the former tejo sandhu again


11am virks residence two days later

He looked down at the envelope delivered to him in the morning by the courier service. Knew what was hidden inside.

HIS LIFE THAT HE WAS GOING TO PART WAYS WITH!

He kept it in his drawer and left it there unopened for a week till his grandfather reminded him


A week later 11pm in fateh's room

U dont love her ? U loved her sister all the while

So what are u thinking ? Sign the papers and release her?

Grandfather's words of annoyance ringing in his ears as he sat in front of fateh who was resting on his bed

Babuji in a day or two please. Fateh requested . Pain in his voice

Then grandfather gave him a weird snile

Give me one good reason why u still want to hold on to her when u love her sibling? Grandfather continued with that weird smile again

Release her and let her get married to whoever she wants after she divorce u . Grandpa continued

Fateh frowned and nervous at the same time

Babuji how can she marry someone else?

Why cant she ? When u can marry someone after her . So why cant she ? Grandpa continued smiling

U want her to stick to an idiot like u for the rest of her life who keeps drooling for her sibling instead

I was the one who got u married to her and now i command u to release her .Thats it

Hand over to me the divorce papers in the morning

He stood up and spoke firmly


Two days passed and still lots of excuses given for not handing over the papers and babuji was after him shouting give me the damn papers otherwise i will throw u out of the house.

Virks were suprised with the oldie's tantrums as he was the one who suggested their marriage in the first place


His fingers holding the grip tightly unable to move it forward on the sheets that laid on his desk.

Ringg

Buzo on the line asking how he was doing . In fact the same phone calls had been coming in from his dear friend past two months daily checking his condition after tejo left.


Horrible ! He exclaimed breaking down on the phone

I cant think straight. Babuji is after me to sign the divorce papers

I cant release her now . She is in me. I could feel her . I could smell her. Its like she's everywhere in my senses that i dont think i could live without her.

Buzo was silent but smiling all the way throughout fateh's tele conversation with him

PLAN WORKED

BINGO !


Twist in the tale

It was grandfather's plan with buzo as the partner in crime


Flashback 3 months

Buzo noticed tejo and fateh getting closer without both realising to the fact that they have developed feelings for each other.

Buzo decided to consult fateh's grandfather the love guru for a piece of advise on how to unite them

Grandpa replied excitedly that he noticed the same as well

And advised buzo to keep it as a secret between them and allow him to handle both the lovebirds

Grandpa was waiting for the opportunity and when jasmin's confession came in he took full advantsge of it.

Create a distance between both to bring them closer using jasmin as the bait

When they sign the divorce papers both will shit in their pants . Parting ways will be the last option they would want. Need to pressurise them to do it otherwise they wont confess

When viraj informed that tejo shifted to the hostel grandpa immediately rushed to see her secretly taking the auto rickshaw and warned her sarcastically that virks doors are closed for her and she should not speak or meet fateh

Tejo cried after he left. Little did she know that babuji was pretending

As he left the hostel compound he smiled with teary eyes

Thinking

Sorry beta i had to do this . Its the only way to unite both of u. Without pain there's no gain


VO PEL/THAT MOMENT WHEN U BOTH WILL SIGN THE DIVORCE PAPERS WHICH WILL DRIFT U AWAY FROM ONE ANOTHER U WONT BE ABLE TO HOLD BACK URSELVES ANY LONGER AND REALISE UR HIDDEN LOVE .

tejo u will have the courage to sign coz u are stronger. But not fateh. I know my grandson.

HE WILL FREAK OUT

JASMIN GEYI TEL LENE

HE WILL BE RUNNING BACK TO U TEJO

JUST WAIT AND WATCH

BE PATIENT MY CHILD

U HAVE SACRIFICED A LOT

BUT NOT THIS TIME

COZ THIS TIME UR GREAT BABUJI IS WITH U

AND I WILL MAKE SURE MY GRANDSON COMES CRAWLING TO U

GIVE HIM AS MANY KICKS AS U WANT

I WILL HELP U AS WELL

FOR THE IDIOT THAT HE HAS BEEN

IGNORING A PRECIOUS GEM LIKE U FOR A SELFISH WOMAN

grandfather grinned as he sat in the rickshaw on his way home



U ARE IN LOVE WITH TEJO BHABI

The seven magical words finally came out from the impatient buzo's mouth who had been waiting for the past two months to put some sense into his dear friend's head

Waiting when he will breakdown and that explained the reasons for him to call daily checking out

Fateh was shocked

Buzo continued impatiently and excitedly

That's why u are restless u cant let her go

The same feeling u had for jasmin before

Fateh realised truth in his words

I am in love and then frowned

Why didnt i realise it ? He asked buzo still sobbing

Buzo replied sarcastically

U are an idiot thats why

Fateh asked what shall i do ?

Buzo sarcastically

Go and jump in the river u knucklehead

Fateh angry

Tu mera dost hai ya dushman

Buzo repled

Both and now listen

Go and propose her

Fateh restless

Arey babuji after me to sign the divorce papers

Buzo laughed

Idiot it was his plan only

Fateh shocked buzo spilled the beans

Fateh disconnectef and ran to babuji's room

Babuji in the room asking angrily as fateh came in

Give me the papers !

Fateh tore them and handed over the pieces to his grandpa

Grandmother shocked scolded him for direspecting his grandpa

Both babuji and fateh laughed while hugging one another

Grandmother annoyed after fateh explained that her shrewd husband was behind it coz she was not aware about his plotting and said

U will always remain young !

Babuji gave a thumbs up to his wife and then advised fateh to bring tejo home the very next day with a full proof love confession script prepared by babuji the love guru


The next morning 10 am at university entrance


Her eyes were swollem and red but she was excited when the office staff came and said ms tejo ur husband is here

She ran towards the ftont gate

There he was . Handsome as ever. She felt her knees weak for the first time and stopped 30 metres away from him waiting anxiously. Thousands of questions in her mind

Has he signed the papers? Is he coming to say a final goodbye. Her heart sank . Trying to hide back her tears


Through his sunglasses he searched her to find out if she felt the same for him. Her conditioms clearly states she loves him as well

He moved towards her slowly step by step saying out loudly his babuji's script which he memorised full nite


VO PEL JAB TU MERI ZINDAGI MEY AYI

VO PEL JAB MERE DILNEY TUJHEY SHADAIN KAHA

VO PEL JAB TU KAREEB AYI

VO PEL JAB MERE DIL NEY TUJHEY DOST KAHA

VO PEL JAB TUNE MUJSEY SHADI KI

VO PEL JAB MERE DIL NEY TUJSEY KEREBI DOST KAHA

VO PEL JAB TU DUR HOGEYI

VO PEL JAB MERE DIL NEY TUJEY YAAD KIYA

VO PEL JAB TU MERI ZINDAGI SEY BAHAR GEYI

VO PEL JAB MERE DIL NEY TUJHEY APNA MAANA


He stopped 5 metres away tears rolling on his cheeks and opened his arms widely to embrace her

AAJ VO PEL HAI KEY DIL HAI KEY MAANTA HI NEHIN

AAJ VO PEL HAI KEY DIL TUJHEY BEINTIHAAN CHAHNEY LEGA HAI

AAJ VO PEL HAI KEY DIL TERE BEGHAIR SAAS NEHIN LE PA RAHA HAI

AAJ VO PEL HAI KEY DIL KEHNA CHAHTA HAI

I LOVE U TEJO

She was silent

Shocked

Tears rolling down her cheeks and ran into his arms when he finally said after impatienly waiting for 2 minutes


AAJ PETH KEHTA HAI BAHUT BHOOK LEGI HAI

TEJO KEY HATH KEY GOBI KEY PAROTHEY KHANEY KA DIL KARTA HAI

NEHIN TO CHELA JAUNGA

PHIR DONDHTI REHNA


They hugged each othet tightly releasing their pains after 2 months of parting ways

He took her into his arms and said to the security guard

SAMAN WALI KO LEKE JAA RAHA HUN

BAAD MEY AKAR SAMAN LE LUNGA

OFFICE WALON KO BOL DENA

security guard laughed with teary eyes and gave a thumbs up replying

AREY DILWALE DULHANIA LE JAYO!



FATEH RAN THROUGH THE CROP FIELDS CARRYING TEJO IN HIS ARMS SAYING SHE'S LIGHTWIEGHT AND HE WANTED TO DO WEIGHT LIFTING


It was babuji plan

Buzo will drop u and u bring her back run through the crop fields lifting her

Would be more romantic


Both laughed as he paved his way towards virls residence enjoying the morning breeze and sun rise that marked the new journey of ther love filled married life.


ENJOYING THE MOMENT

VO PEL!


Ps

Dear forum friends i only tag few ids coz i couldnt remember all who regularly reads my os

Apologies if u are not tagged

Pls feel free to read and u can share ur comments if u like

I hope makers will bring fatejo confession somewhat similar





























































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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing os from start to end

Loved how bauji made plan with buzo to confess love from both idiots😳

Buzo spill early or else I was expecting fateh to against bauji for his love

Shayari and romantic morning walk was superb idea by bauji.

Grandfather always rock in your stories.

He got being young compliment from grandmother

Didn't knew you writes such beautiful besides funny ones.

But you didn't tag me😔is any writing I left unread or not commented.

Please write such more and hope we will get like this in show.😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
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this was amazing. thanks for tagging me. I am really excited to know how this will unfold in the serial but I can feel it will definitely be a temporary separation track for realization to happen; just like yours. keep writing beautiful stories and keep tagging :)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dee10

this was amazing. thanks for tagging me. I am really excited to know how this will unfold in the serial but I can feel it will definitely be a temporary separation track for realization to happen; just like yours. keep writing beautiful stories and keep tagging :)


Tq👌👌👌

I think fatejo will realise their feelings if divorce track is brought in

With jasmin interferring too much now tejo might

Give in finally

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

Amazing os from start to end

Loved how bauji made plan with buzo to confess love from both idiots😳

Buzo spill early or else I was expecting fateh to against bauji for his love

Shayari and romantic morning walk was superb idea by bauji.

Grandfather always rock in your stories.

He got being young compliment from grandmother

Didn't knew you writes such beautiful besides funny ones.

But you didn't tag me😔is any writing I left unread or not commented.

Please write such more and hope we will get like this in show.😃


Tq for always reading appreciating and giving ur comments

For tagging would apologise coz there are many ids which are almost similar in the forum and i got confused

Worry would tag the wrong person

I usually dont tag but there was a request

I post my os for all who wishes to read

Thats why my earlier os dont imclude tagging

This time due to request for tagging i did it first time

Apology once again

I future when i write will tag u 👍👍👍

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