Kalma ts:- journey(chapter:-4 updated 01-08-2021) - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Phlo004

thank you di 🥺🥺🤧🤧

Mujhe acha laga aapko ye chapter pasand aya 😘😘

Malhar ko sachmain uss time par kisi aise ki jaroorat thi jo use samjhein lekin cvs ne aisa kuch nahi dikhaya

Even unhone kuch bhi acha nahi dikhaya

But hum hain unki iss bekaar crap ko bhi acha kar sakte hai kuch sikho humse cvs kya pata tumhara show chal sake

Unhein sach main aapki FF padhne ki jarrorat hai kya likha hai apne sabki jindagi ke baarein main kitna ache se bataya hai

How beautifully you wrote it ❣️❣️

And again thank you di 🥺🥺 for this long reply 🤗🤗❣️❣️


Thank you for the beautiful compliment Vanshu.. I am really glad you liked my FF plot.


Mujhe bhi bohot dukh hai ki after leap koi sensible story nahi dikhayi CVs ne..


Koi nahi hum log khud hi apne armaan pure kar lenge.. 🤗🤗


I'm loving your way of expressing emotions..

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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Priyu second chapter kaisa laga

I loved it vanshika


This part is like trip down memory lane..

You did a fabulous job 👏👏


Malharji ki emotions kitne bakhubi bayan kare hai tumne..


I love you for this😘😘😘😘😘😘



Thanks for writing such long update..

Aur kya bolu bas aise hi kamaal likhti raho 😘😘😘😘😘


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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

I loved it vanshika


This part is like trip down memory lane..

You did a fabulous job 👏👏


Malharji ki emotions kitne bakhubi bayan kare hai tumne..


I love you for this😘😘😘😘😘😘



Thanks for writing such long update..

Aur kya bolu bas aise hi kamaal likhti raho 😘😘😘😘😘


thank you priyu 😘😘🤩

I am glad you liked it ☺️☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Phlo004

thank you priyu 😘😘🤩

I am glad you liked it ☺️☺️

I loved it vanshi


Kash show me aise emotions dikhaye hote malharji ke…

Malharji par kitna kuch beeta hai par kisi ne gaur hi nahi kiya just forgot about it..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

I loved it vanshi


Kash show me aise emotions dikhaye hote malharji ke…

Malharji par kitna kuch beeta hai par kisi ne gaur hi nahi kiya just forgot about it..

mene same rekha di ko yahin bola ki unhone kabhi Malhar ke character ke emotions ko dikhaya hi nahi

Unki itni tragic life hone ke bavajood bhi unhone kabhi kuch nahi dikhaya sabse jyaada to usne hi suffer kiya hai iss poori journey main aur ab tak bhi kar rahe hai

This ph is worst ph I have ever seen channel to jo hai vo hai hi lekin ye ph kitni biased hai iske do jo aur shows starplus par chalte hain dekho unhein roz koi na koi function aur sabki equal timing no overdose of anything

Lekin isse raabta se jyaada problem hai

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Phlo004

mene same rekha di ko yahin bola ki unhone kabhi Malhar ke character ke emotions ko dikhaya hi nahi

Unki itni tragic life hone ke bavajood bhi unhone kabhi kuch nahi dikhaya sabse jyaada to usne hi suffer kiya hai iss poori journey main aur ab tak bhi kar rahe hai

This ph is worst ph I have ever seen channel to jo hai vo hai hi lekin ye ph kitni biased hai iske do jo aur shows starplus par chalte hain dekho unhein roz koi na koi function aur sabki equal timing no overdose of anything

Lekin isse raabta se jyaada problem hai

Yeah right

I have seen some clip before..


Maine bhi bola tha PH bahut hi biased hai



Raabta ko hi inlogo ne barbaad kar diya which got fame for them..

Raabta ki cast kitni achhi hai aur leads ki chemistry to mashallah hai

Inhe bas achhi story deni thi wo bhi nahi hua inse..

Leads ka to mazaak bana kar rakh diya hai..


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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Yeah right

I have seen some clip before..


Maine bhi bola tha PH bahut hi biased hai



Raabta ko hi inlogo ne barbaad kar diya which got fame for them..

Raabta ki cast kitni achhi hai aur leads ki chemistry to mashallah hai

Inhe bas achhi story deni thi wo bhi nahi hua inse..

Leads ka to mazaak bana kar rakh diya hai..


inke most popular show of Hindi raabta hi tha

Aur ye Jo itna fame Mila na inhein vo bhi sirf raabta ki vajah se hi Mila

But now they have got fame aur more shows so they are using it like their tissue paper

I really want channel to change the pH of this serial but channel ko to khud hi interest nahi hai to vo kyun itni sirdardi Lega

Aur sahi poochon to ig main bhi Jo baache haina vo sirf aur sirf actors ke true fans aur ve ye jaante hai ki sehreem shayad aage ek saath kaam na Kar payein to mainly vo unhein dekhna chathe they are also not interested in this rental crap

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Posted: 4 years ago
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After whatever kalyani did malhar wants to shout at her wants to scold her for her past action but after seeing her laying down in front of him like a lifeless soul he forgets all his thoughts and started crying

But after seeing malhar like this Kalyani becomes more guilty and averted her face in other direction

With trembling legs he comes near her slowly and slowly and sit on the stool beside her stretcher

After whatever kalyani did she think that malhar will scold her or shout at her but he didn't anything like this and his next action shocked her

He cried...

He cried holding her in his arms like a baby

Malhar (cryingly):- kyun kyun mujhe aise darati ho baar baar kyun just why ??

Kyun hamesha mujhse door chali jati ho

Janti ho kitna tadpa Hoon main tumhare Bina tumhein Meri itni si phikar nahi haina tumhein Meri

Kyunki agar hoti na to tum aise chodkar mujhe kabhi nahi jaati

Kyun kalyani kyunnn .......

He cried and cried until his eyes becomes swollen and his heart gets full

But after that he didn't left kalyani

Kalyani becomes shocked after seeing him in this emotional state because till now she never seen him like this even when sampada betrayed him at that time also he didn't break like this she without wasting a second covered him in his arms

Kalyani ( slowly in her feeble state):- I am sorry malharji I am sorry

Main galat thi ...

Pls. Meri galti ki saza aap khudko mat dijiye pls sambhaliye khudko pls

Aise nahi toot sakte aap pls

Malhar after listening her slowly untangled from her and gently gives a forehead kiss to her

He softly made her sit with the help of cushions so that she doesn't feel uncomfortable

Kalyani:- Mai jaanti hoo Meri maafi aapkein jakhmon ko kaam nahi karegi na hi mere kuch karne se aapka dhukh Kam hoga

Par agar ho sake to pls mujhein maaf Kar dijiyega sahi Kiya Jo aap aage badh Gaye Varna main sachmein iss layak nahi Hoon ki kisike ke bhi pyaar ko deserve Kar sakoon

Thik kiya aapne..

Now malhar got angry on her and shouted at her

Malhar:- samajhti kaya Hoon tum khudko jab Dekho saaari baatoein ka galat Matlab hi nikalna hota hai tumhein

Haad hoti hai main yahan isliye Mara jaa Raha Hoon ye janke ki tumhein brain clot tha aur tumne mujhein baatya bhi nahi aur tum abhi bhi uss avni ki baat Kar rahi hoon had hai

Kalyani gets scared after seeing him this much angry and in slow voice she said

Kalyani - to malharji main aur kiski baat karungi

Hum maane ya na maane ab vo aapki patni hai aur ab to vo aapke baache ki maa bhi banne wali hai to phir main kaise uskein baarein main Kuch na baat karoo

Malhar:-(loosing his patience he said) baass kalyani Sach main mein sahi kehta tha ki basanti ki dhaano main bhi tumsein jyaada akal hai

Meri maa koi Shaadi nahi hui hai koi vo mere baache ki maa vaaa nahi baane wali vo Shaadi sirf ek naatak tha aur kuch nahi

Kalyani (shockingly):-kyaa naatak kaisa naatak ..

After that malhar tells her all about that how avni and ahir made plan to steal thier property using their child and she is pregnant with ahir child not him and how he is only living with her to give the name to her child only not more than that and yesterday only he get to know about their real intention and he even made them arrest

Kalyani got shocked after listening that avni is not pregnant with malhar child and she is not even his wife

Kalyani (shockingly):- iska Matlab vo baacha ahir ka hai aapka nahi malharji

Malhar (in his typical angry voice):- haan kalyani vo baacha ahir ka hai ab tumhein jab Sara Sach pata chal Gaya hai to pls dobara vo avni ko hamare beech mat Lana pls thak Gaya Hoon main tumhare taane taane sun sunkar

Kalyani got happy after listening that and excitedly says

Kalyani:- iska Matlab aapki koi Shaadi nahi hui hai haash

Thank God abhi bhi aap mere hi pati hai but in excitement she totally forget that she is unwell and she is having drip on her hands and due to this her wire gets out and she shouted in pain

Kalyani :- aaaa malharji

Malhar immediately after seeing this attach her wire properly and made her sit properly on headrest

Malhar (angrily):- kab jayega tumhara bachpana abhi kitna dard hua na lab samjhogi tum ki haar baaat majak nahi hoti kalyani

Mujhein laga tha ab dm ban chuki hoo to ab to tumhara bachpana khatam ho Gaya hoga lekin main galat tha haad karti ho tum

Kalyani:- haan to do ban gayi to Kya main apne pati ko vapas Milne ki Khushi main Khush bhi na Hoon haaa

Aur rhi baat mere bachpane ki to main aapkein liye hamesha vaisi hi rahoongi hoongi mature main doosro le liye lekin aapkein saamne to mujhein mature baanne ka naatak nahi karna padega

Aapke saath to main humesha aise hi rahoongi

They both stare each other with pure love mad adoration but malhar averted his gaze from her

And emotionally says

Malhar:- jhoote vade nahi karne chahiye kalyani aaj bhale hi main tumhare saath hoon lekin Kal to phir tum mujhein chodkar vapas aapni aai ke pass chali jaogi aur main tumhare Kya hi mayine rakhta Hoon

Pehle tumhara pati to tha lekin divorce hone ke baad to vo bhi nahi Raha aur rahi baat moksh ki his eyes got filled with tears and kalyani too started crying listening his name

To vo bhi aab hamare saath nahi hai to hamara to ab koi rishta nahi hai na aur maain mamuli sa sub inspector he laughed painfully while saying this tum jaisi badi dm ke saath aur tumhare parivaar ke samne Mera Kya vajood hoga tumhare liye

Kalyani got emotional after listening him and hug him tightly malhar tries to broke it but she tighten her hold on him

Kalyani:- Kya itna hi jaante hai aap mujhein Kya mere liye aapka pyaar jhootha malharji

Haan main maanti Hoon ki Meri galtiyon ki jitni bhi saza mujhein di jayein vo Kam hi hogi lekin phir bhi kya Mera pyaar jhootha pad Gaya

Aur ye Kya keh rahe hai aap chota bada aap mere malharji the hai aur hamesha rahenge agar iss bar apne aisi baat ki na to aapki kasam sachmain Mar ja

He cutted her off in between keeping his hand on her mouth

Malhar :- chup khabardar aage se aisi baat ki to do lagonga kaan ke neecehe

Kalyani cryingly says

Kalyani:- haa to laga dijiye do do kyun char Che jitne Marne hai maae lijiye lekin pls ab door Jane ki baat mat kijiye

Main jaanti Hoon ki aap mujhse gussa hai lekin malharji mujhein Sach main kuch nahi pata tha ki aap aise sub inspector ban jayenge ya aai pregnant thi Sach main

Malhar:- kalyani vo Saab to thik hai lekin tum ye bataon ki tum itne saal Kahan thi aur ye brain clot sab Kya hua tha kalyani 5 saal pehle

Kalyani started to naarate that how after he shoot her she has fallen down in the cliff but due to God grace she is rescued by the near villagers of that place after a week

They due to their helping nature helped her by admitting in the hospital

She is being treated by the doctor as she has no one so the doctor decided to pay her amount from the hospital fund only as that hospital has this these type of funds people like her who don't have any family

Malhar gets emotional after remembering again that worst that day of his life and cried thinking that due to him only she have to suffered so much and he is not with her at that time

Kalyani:- malharji aap pls roiye mat ismein aapki koi galti nahi hai aap to trilok par goli Chala rahe the aur mere hi baar baar chillaane ki vajah se aapka nishana mujhpe lag Gaya

Pls roiye mat she started to wipe his his tears his ears softly with her hands

Malhar:- lekin kalyani jab tumhein vaahan admit Kara Diya Gaya tumhein hosh main kab aayi vahan aur tumme mujhein ya kisi koi phone call kyun nahi Kiya

Kalyani:- malharji actually vo ...

Malhar:- kalyani Kya hua aise aatak kyun rahi ho baataon na Kya hua tha

Kalyani:- vo malharji actually main coma main chali gayi thi ...

do saal ke liye aur usi vaqt Mera clot bhi diagnose hua tha doctor ne surgery to Kar di thi physical injuries to dheeere dheere theek hone lagi thi lekin internally bleeding se main itne time coma main rahi

Malhar gets shocked after knowing about her that what happened to her in two years he could not could not control his tears after that

Kalyani gets worried after seeing him like that

Malhar:- malharji Dekho main isliye aapko kuch nahi bata rahi thi

Aap pls aise mat roiye abb main bilkul thik hoon sachmain aapki tabiyat dobara bigad jayegi aaur aapko bhi phir Meri tarah yahan bistar pe letna pad jayega

She tried to lighten his mood but he is too shocked to react something

She slowly slowly made him lay down his head on her lap and gently started to move her fingers in his head

Kalyani:- malharji aap sabse Milne jab aayi think tab gussa thi aapse lekin maan main mujhein aapki bhi phikar

Uss waqt kuch keh nahi payi thi lekin aai ki chinta me saath mujhein aapki bhi chinta hai

Malhar slowly asked her

Malhar:- Kalyani uskein baad tum dm kese bani jab tum humse Milne aayi thi to uskein baad kh gayi tum

Kalyani:- malharji aap logo ke na Milne pee main vapas Pune chali gayi poori tarike see there to nahi thi main uss samay lekin phir bhi jaise taise karke vahan Tak phoch gayi

Apne purane Ghar jaane ke baad mene kuch time Tak papa ne Jo mere naam par account khole hue the unhein use karke apna guzaara kiya

Phir thode time baad mene college main admission leke apni graduation complete Kar li

Uss samay Job bhi nahi Kar sakti thi college ke saath to bacchon ko tuition dene start jinse Mera maan bhi lag jaata tha aur main apna kharcha bhi nikaal pati thi

Phir ek din mere pass Jo baacha padhtha tha uskein paapa civil service main the unhone mujhe upac exam ka offer Diya

Pehle to Maine Mana Kar Diya tha lekin phir unkein force karne ke baad Maine bhi socha dene ka

Aur Maine vo exam pass Kar Lia phir uskein baad main Meri coaching ke liye Delhi institute main chali gayi

Aur phir jab mujhein pata Chala Meri posting Aurangabad main baad main hui hai as dm main bohot Khush hui

Aai se to milna hi chahthi thi lekin maan hi maan main aapse bhi milna chahthi malharji

Malhar slowly get up from her lap and hug tightly and kissed her forehead

Malhar:- Jo beet Gaya use to main badal nahi sakta kalyani lekin aab he wada jarror Kar sakta Hoon ki tumhare liye main hamesha khada rahunga tumhari dhaal bankar

Agar tum chaho to main tumhein force nahi karna chatha with this he started to get up from the stool

But kalyani stopped him by holding his hand

Kalyani:- Kya Matlab meri marzi

Aap bhool Gaye to yaad dila Doon ki bhale hi hum ab pati patni naa ho lekin hamare bete ke maa baap hum hamesha rahenge

Aur Kya aap ye beheki behki baatein Kar rahe hai main aapki kalyani thi Hoon aur hamesha rahoongi to aage se mujhein chodne ki sochna bhi mat

Tabiyat kharab hai lekin abhi bhi aapse Main lhoob lad sakti Hoon

Malhar gives a small smile to her and made her lay properly on the bed for rest

Malhar:- Chalo kalyani tum ab thoda aaram karo main doctor se poochke AATA Hoon ki tumhein kab discharge mil sakta hai

Kalyani:- malharji rukiye na pls itne time baad to mile hai baithye na mere pass thodi Der

Malhar:- haan Kalyani lekin abhi tumhari Tabiyat poori tarah see thik nahi hui haina abhi pehle tum thik ho Jaaon

Their talk got disturbed by the doctor who came to check on kalyani

Malhar after seeing the guy of 20s gets confused as the one who treats kalyani is a aged man and he knows him very well

Malhar:- aap Kon kalyani ko to doctor kothari treat Kar rahe the na

Dr. :- oohh yes sir actually he has to go his home for some urgent work so he send me to get a checkup on ms.deshmukh

Malhar;- ohh it's ok you can check her I am sitting on sofa there

Doctor nodded her head and starts checking kalyani as he is jolly by nature and is not more bigger Than kalyani so they gets comfortable with each other and laugh on something but by looking like them malhar gets jealous with that doctor

Malhar:- ho Gaya aapka Checkup kyunki Jiss hisab se aap uska checkup Kar rahe Hain aisa lagta hai ki Kal Tak hi ho payega

Kalyani understands his jealousy after noticing his continous angry glares on doctor and laughed internally to see him talking like that

Dr.:- oh man take it easy aap to bohot jaldi gussa hote hai main aur Ms. Deshmukh to bas thoda has rahe the

Kalyani:-(controlling her laugh) haan malharji vo to sirf mujhein hasa rahe the thoda baass....

Malhar:- kalyani.... Tum to chup hi raho aur aap pls jaldi checkup kijiye kalyani ki medicine ka time bhi ho raha hai mujhe Dr. Kotahri uska prescription list de ke Gaye tha

Dr:- vese aap Ms. Deshmukh ke Kya lagte hai as aap unki kaafi close lagte hai

Malhar:- pati hoo main uska ab aap pls jaldi karnege

Kalyani got happy after seeing him claiming her like as his wife before only whether it's just in jealousy

The doctor done his work fastly after knowing that this angry man is her husband as he don't want to get murdered by his eyes after noticing that how he is shooting continuous angry glares on him and left the room hurriedly

Malhar:- baadi hasssi aa rahi thi tumhein haan

Chalo jaldi ye dawai loo pehle hi uss doctor ki phaltu baaton se late ho gayi 5 minute

Kalyani after taking laughs on his cute jealousy

Kalyani:- vese aapp jealous hote ve kaafi cute lagte hai malharji

Malhar feels embarrassed after listening that but cover up with his simple sad and said

Malhar:- Kya Matlab jealous main koi jealous velous nahi tha vo to vo doctor tumhein late Kar raha tha isliye aur kuch nahi

Kalyani:- Maine to uss doctor ka naam bhi nahi liya

Malhar:- haa haa thik hai tha main jealous Khush aur Meri biwi ko koi aise muskura Kar phaltu Mai. Uski Tabiyat bigadne ki koshish karega to main aise hi react karunga

Kalyani:- acha laga ye jaankaar ki aap abhi bhi mujhein apni patni mante hai

To be continued........

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Posted: 4 years ago
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superb yaar kaam pe hu so bahuth lambi praise nahi likh paa rahi hu

but just one thing it was beautiful

how natural normal and realistic

ek vinthi he aage bhi raabta dose kam rakhna i don't want interferences

lots of love and thanks for updating

❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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superb yaar kaam pe hu so bahuth lambi praise nahi likh paa rahi hu

but just one thing it was beautiful

how natural normal and realistic

ek vinthi he aage bhi raabta dose kam rakhna i don't want interferences

lots of love and thanks for updating

❤️❤️❤️

thank you gayu 😀 😀

I understand Don't worry

Don't worry tumhein Meri ffs main to raabta Kam hi dikhega main to khud iske khilaaf hoo😂😂

Read my new ff on shera also I have posted today pls give your review on that ☺️☺️

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