Kalma ts:- journey(chapter:-4 updated 01-08-2021) - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you gayu 😘

I hope you liked his breakdown moments

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Oh my Goodness…👏

This is so so so so so beautifully written Vanshika…❤️

Thanks for writing such long part 🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼

You perfectly described Malharji emotions and his journey till now…

Main humesha se kehti hu agar THR me kisi ne suffer kiya hai sabse jyada to wo Malharji hai…


Tune ek TS me unki puri daastaan bayan kardi…


Take a bow …. 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Oh my Goodness…👏

This is so so so so so beautifully written Vanshika…❤️

Thanks for writing such long part 🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼

You perfectly described Malharji emotions and his journey till now…

Main humesha se kehti hu agar THR me kisi ne suffer kiya hai sabse jyada to wo Malharji hai…


Tune ek TS me unki puri daastaan bayan kardi…


Take a bow …. 🤗

thank you priyu 🤧🤧💓


I am glad you liked it 😘😘


Mujhe mere malhar ke emotions express karne the CVS to kabhi kisike bhi emotions express karenge to ye kaam mene hi Kar Diya 😁😁


💓💓 🤗🤗 for this long reply 🤧🤧😘😘

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thank you priyu 🤧🤧💓


I am glad you liked it 😘😘


Mujhe mere malhar ke emotions express karne the CVS to kabhi kisike bhi emotions express karenge to ye kaam mene hi Kar Diya 😁😁


💓💓 🤗🤗 for this long reply 🤧🤧😘😘


Yes Vanshu.. Thank you for bringing out Malhar's emotions.

The soul who has mostly suffered in this whole story is Malhar. His feelings have never been prioritised..

But you brought it out well.. 👏

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Yes Vanshu.. Thank you for bringing out Malhar's emotions.

The soul who has mostly suffered in this whole story is Malhar. His feelings have never been prioritised..

But you brought it out well.. 👏

thank you rekhu di 🐱🐱😍😍
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Malhar pov continue

Jab aausaheb ne use Ghar se Babar nikal Diya tha to Mai ne bhi uss din jaane ka faisla kiya uss din unn dono ke beech mujhe Sach main laga jaisa ek maa beti ka rishta hoo

Mene unn dono ko apne Ghar main panha di

Kalyani ki jindagi to sach main apne gusse main baarbad Kar Chuka tha

Sampada ke dhoke aur kahi na kahi uske Marne ke dard ne mere andar ek juala mukhi si Jala di thi

Par usmein ghee dalne ka kaam aausaheb ne Puri tarah ke se kiya tha vo hi Jisne mujhe kalyani see Shaadi karne ka prastav Diya tha

Aur main use samay itni aag main Kal Raha tha ki maan bhi Gaya uss prastav ke liye

Bevakoof tha main Jisne sampada ke uss chitthi par bharosa Kar liya

Lekin maai aur kalyani ke baartav ne mere Shaq ko ek panah de di thi

Mana atharav ne unhein majboor kiya tha lekin

Mene uss din sachmein bohot badi galti ki think ek 18 saal ki ladki ko majboor kiya tha ki vo El aise insaan see Shaadi karein Jo pehle se hi ek baache ka baap ban chuka hoo

Kyunki main jaanta tha ki kalyani maaai ko apni aai maan chuki hai aur vo unhein bachane ke lite kiss bhi haad thak jayegi

Aur usne mijhse Shaadi Karli

Shaadi ke baad humne Kai utaar chadav dekhe

Kabhi mene uspe Shaq Kiya kabhi usne mujpe lekin phir bhi hum ek dooje me saath rahe

Bohot sitam dhaye mene uspe lekin phir bhi uss ladki ne mera saath nahi chodha

Aur balki just bacche see uska koi vaasta nahi tha vo uski asal maino main aai ban gayi

Unn Dino Meri jindagi main bass moksh hi Mera sukoon tha

Aausaheb ki chaalbaziyan sunkar to vese hi main unhein ghar see bahar nikalna chatha tha

Lekin kalyani ki chinta apni maa me lite unhein bacha gayi

Varna main unhein vo hi dukh Dena chahtha tha Jo unhone mujhe diye the

Lekin mene use samay ek baath notice ki think kalyani ko main bhale apni kadhvahat main kitna kuch kehta tha lekin uss ladki ne mujhe mud ke kabhi jawab nhi Diya naa hi Mera gussa uss nanhi so jaan par nikala

Moksh sirf vo hi sukoon tha Mera uss waqt lekin uss parivaar see vo bhi nahi Dekha Gaya pallavi mami ne mere dimag shaq ke been boo diye ki vo Mera beta hai bbi ya nahi ya kahi vo atharav ka baacha to nahi

Aur mera dimag uss baat ko aise ghard Kar Gaya ki uska dna test karwane Chala Gaya main aur jab mujhe ye pata Chala ki uska blood group atharav me blood group see match karta hai

To pgla sa Gaya tha main ek aur dhoka aur ussi main main moksh ko chod aaya galti see jiski saza mere bacche ko mili lekin waqt rehte vo thik hogaya lekin jab kalyani ne mujhe sachai see rubaroo karwaya tab pata Chala ki agar vo Mera baacha bhi nahi Hain tab bhi main usse apne see ek pal ke lite door nahi Kara saktaa Meri jindagi ban chuka tha vo

Aur jabse leke aaj Tak Mera baacha moksh hai moksh tha aur vo hi hamesha rahega

Uss din sampada pehli baar bhagwan se bheek mangi thi ki mere bacche ko bacha lein

Bhagwan ki kripa see vo Bach bhi Gaya lekin kalyani ka use liye pyaar aur mere see uske liye ladna

Sabne mere andar uske liye jabse kuch paida Kar Diya

Aur vo waqt ke saath saath badhtha chla gaya

Iss beech na jaane kitni baar mujhe kitni kasotiyo pe kahara utarna pada

Kitni baar Kalyani ko unn kasotiyo pe khara utarna pada

Lekin hum dono phir kabhi peechein mood Kar nahi dekha

Sampada atharav aur Kalyani ke baba sabne humein alag karne ki koshish ki lekin hamara rishta aur pakka hota gaya

Jab mujhe Mera parivaar doobara Mila tha na tab mujhe baba pe bohot gussa Aya tha ki unhone doosri Shaadi Karli aur kahi na kahi dard bhi hua tha ki Kya unhein Meri itni so bhi yaad nahi aayi

Kya unhein ye yaad nahi aaya ki unka ek 12saal say baacha bhi tha aur Kya unka maan itna sa bhi nahi kachota jab unhone doosri Shaadi ki

Lekin mene sab kuch bhoolake sabko seene se lagaya

Lekin phir ek baar jindagi me mujhe dhokha de Diya be Saab dhokebaaj the

Sabke chahre pani ki tarha saaf hote chale Gaye

Meri babdi Meri baacchi usse apne baache ki tarah rakha tha na mene jab vo choti thi use kitna kuch sehna pada just because vo ek dancer see pyaar karti thi to uske pyaar ko Mar diya Gaya

Sabki jindagi baarbad Kar di thi uss Sach ne Mai kaka Kalyani Meri baabdi sabki

Maai ki marzi na hote hue bhi Kalyani ne unki Shaadi kaaka se karvadi kaaka aur maai ke rishte ko dekhkar main bhi yahi chhatha lekin maai ki marzi see na ki vese jabardasti

Uss din Kaka se bhi ek dhoka kha liya tha men unhone mujhse pehle hi jhooth bola tha aai ke baarein main bohot mushkil see maaf Kar paya tha main uske lite unhein lekin phir ek baar unhone mujhse see ye chupaya tha ki babdi air baba jinda hai

Aise Kai dhoke milte Gaye

Lekin sachmuch kalyani mere saath humesha thi

Jab kalyani ne mujhe unn naksaliyon see bachaya tha na tab mere Dil ko sachmein pyaar karne ki vajah mil gayi thi

Uss par bharosa karna aaasan nahi tha mere liye itne dhoke khaye itne dhoke Kaye ki toot chuka tha main aur uski saaza kalyani ko bhogni padi jiska inn Saab Main koi haath bhi nahi tha

Jab vo mujhe chodkar rachit ke pass gayi thi na tab mujhe uspe raatti bhar bhi Shaq nahi tha ki vo sampada ki tarah dhoka de rahi hai lekin ek dard tha ki jisse apni jindagi se bhi jyaada chahne laga Hoon use kisi aur ke saath dekhne ka dard usse door rehne ka dard

Even main janata tha ki vo mujhse jaarrora kuch na kuch chupa rhi hai

Kyunki usne apni achai aur sachai see mere maan ko Jeet liya tha

Aur main sahi tha moksh ko bachane ke liye use ye kadam uthaya tha pagal thi vo ladki sabki bhalayi ke liye apni jaan jhokhim main gairna to uski aadat thi

Kayi baar daraya hai usne mujhe kitni baar khote khote bacha hoo main use

Haar baar vo mujhe iss khayal se todti hai

Lekin jab uss din use rachit see bachaya to Meri jaan nikal gayi uski haalat dekhke Kar Diya apne pyaar ka izhaar

Uss pagal si ladki see Jo mujhe dhedh saal pehle mitti main rangi hui mili thi

Kabhi nhi socha that ki use itna pyaar Kar baithunga

Moksh ki bimari se to main vese hi ladies laeta use kahi nahi jaane deta

Aur ab to kalyani ka saath bhi tha

Lekin jab usne Meri Bina marzi ke ivf karwaya to bohot gussa Aya tha uspe kitni umar thi ki sirf 19 saal jismein usne Mujhse jhooth bhi bola ki vo baacha rachit ka Hain

Khud ko maaf Nahi Kar paya tha main ki rachit me uske saath chii

Lekin uske Karan ko samjhkar use maaf Kar Diya

Pehli pregnancy thi uski aur vo bhi itni kaam Umar main jismein jaan Jane ke khatre jyaade hote hai

Lekin use Bina soche samjhe karva liya tha ivf

Khush tha main ki mere baache ki jaan Bach jayegi aur kahi na kahi iss baat see bhi ki iss baar mere bacche ko Janam dene Vali vo aurat hogi jisse mere pyaar ki kadar hai Jo samjhti hai mujhe

Lekin phir ek baar jindagi ne mujhe dhokha de Diya uski jaan par ban ayi thi baat Kya karta main mere pass koi raasta nahi tha tiya lekin phir bhi mujhe uska abortion karana pada

Jisse janke baad usne Mujhse rishta talk todne ki dhamki de di thi lekin jaanta Tha ki vo naa mere Bina jee sakti hai aur na moksh ke Bina

Trilok naam ka vo insaan jiski vajah se mene apne baache ko kho Diya apni patni ko khote khote bacha Hoon

Uss insane ne apne rang mujhe pehle hi dikha diye the kitni ghatiya baat kahi this lekin vo mujhse badla Lena chahtha tha

Badi mushkil see moksh ka operation hua tha vo sab baarbad hogaya uss din

Vo din sabse manhoos tha

Pehle nal chal Gaya phir baba ka accident ho Gaya jiske baad vo jinda to the lekin apni saari shaktiyan kho chuke the

Aur sabse jyaada Meri Patni aur Mera do saal ka baacha moksh Chala gaya

Sab chale mujhe chodkar

Aur innsab ka ilzam hamesha ki tarah mujhpar as gaya

Maai ka dhukh samjahtha Hoon main unhone apni beti khoyi this lekin main bhi kalyani ko maarna nahi chatha tha

Vo to Kaka the jiski vajah see main jail see bahar a paya agr vo uss din mujhe nahi bachate to main to jindagi bhar jail ki salankhon ke peeche rehta

Saab badal gay inn 5 saalon aausaheb ne apne pote ka badla Meri behen ki jindagi barbaad ke liya

Are vo to pehle hi apni jindagi main kitne dhukh bhog chuki hai

Lekin use bhi Meri ek nhi maani aur chali gayi mujhe chodkar us ghatiya parivar main apne pita je Umar ke insaan ko apna pati kehti hai vo

Lekin ek Khushi hai ki vahan par maai bhi hai Kam se kaam vo dono ek dooje ka saath to bani hui hai

Meri jindagi ka Kaya sabne maajak samajh rakha hai

Pehle mujhse Meri naukri chin gayi jismein saach poochon to mujhe koi fark nahi pada inn 5 saalon main kyunki kiske liye jita kiske liye kaamata

In 5 saalon main ek aisa din nahi gya jiss din mene bhagwan se apne Marne ki baat na ki ho

by saying he breakdown intears

Seeing malhar Tia also could not stop her tears

And goes to comfort him

Tia:- mujhe Khushi hai malhar ki aaj tumne apne Dil ki ye baatein ye bojh sab halka Kar Diya

Itne mahione se tumhare saath thi lekin tumne kabhi bhi apne maaan ki baat nhi batayi

Malhar:- Tia main andar see itna toot chuka tha itne dhoke khaye liye the ki aur kisi pe bharosa aur iss jindagi main jeene ki koi vajah hi nahi bachi thi

Tia:- main samjhati Hoon jindagi main itna kuch dekhne ke baad kisi pe bhi bharosa karna mushkil hi hai

Lekin malhar tumne mujhe avni se Shaadi ka Karan nahi bataya

Balki mujhe to kalyani ko goli lagna aur tumhara bekasur hona bhi parso hi pata Chala

Jab kalyani vapas AA gayi

Malhar:- baba ke accident ke baad vo sahi nahi rehte the unhone apne haathon parion ki shakti bilkul khodi thi

Aausaheb ne mujhe that see bahar nikalna Diya tha tab police mujhe arrest karke le gayi thi kyunki unhone mujhpe kalyani ko jaanbochke ke Marne ka ilzam laga Diya tha

Main uss waqt kalyani aur moksh ko khone ke itne dard main tha ki mujhe kuch samajh hi nhi AA RHA tha

Phir do din baad Meri court main peshi thi uss waqt main khudko begunah saabit bhi nahi karna chahtha tha isliye Jo ho RHA that bas Shanti se dekhta jaa rha tha

Par vahan Kaka ne akkar ye keh Diya ki abhi Tak kalyani ki koi body nahi mili hai isliye hum ye nahi maan sakte ke ki kalyani Mar hi gayi ho

Meri bail to ho gayi lekin unlogo ke taane maai ki aakhom mere liye nafrat sab dekhna mushkil hoota jaa rha tha

Ye sab pehle bhi hua tha jab sampada mujhe chodkar gayi thi lekin shayad jab mere saath kalyani Meri dhaal bankar khadi thi isliye kiss bhi dukh see lad liya tha main

Lekin naa jab kisi see lad paya na kuch

Kaka mujpe Ghar le aaye nal ki mauth ke baad to vese hi pura deshmukh khandan mere khilaaf ho gya tha

Mene apne aap ko kamare band Kar liya tha Tia

Joss insaan ne humesha saari musibaton ka saamna datt ke kiya tha vo insaan kamare main band ho Gaya

Kaka ne Kai koshish ki lekin main bahar nahi aaya

Phir kuch dino baaba jab hospital see har aaye to humein ussi din ye pata Chala ki maai maa banne Vali hai

Unndono ko khone ke dukh see to Main jabhi ubhar nahi paya tha lekin phir bhi maai aur kaaka ke liye Khush tha

Maai ne mujhe dekhte hi ye keh Diya tha ki agar main yahan Raha to ve Kaka me saath nahi rahengi

Aur aausaheb ne itne dino main unke maan main humsab keiue khoob jehar ghol Diya tha

Yahan Tak ki Meri khud ki behen ke maan main

Main nahi chahtha ki maai aisi haalat main akeli rahein

Isliye main vahan see Chala gaya Kaka ne rokne ki bohot koshish bhi ki lekin bas

Sampada aur Mera Jo purana Ghar tha vahi par maan to nahi tha lekin koi aur chaara bhi nahi tha

Vahan Jake saarin cheezon ne aur akela baana Diya tha

Kuch time Kaka jab Milne aye the to unhone bataya ki Mera demotion aausaheb ne apni pooch see karva Diya hai isliye ab main sub inspector ban Gaya tha Kaka ne unhein rokne ki bohot koshish bhi ki thi lekin maai ki vajah see chup rehna paada

Jab main sub inspector ban Gaya tab mujhe Mera quarters mil Gaya tha main phir vahi Durga ke saath akela rehne laga

Jab main police station jaata tha na to pehle Mera seena phark see choda ho jata tha lekin ab vahi mujhe roj logo ki ghin nighaein aur naa jane mere peeth ke Kya Kya baatein karte the

Mujhe koi phark nahi pad rha tha na Mera jeene ka koi maan hi nahi tha jinke liye Jeet tha vo dono hi mere pass nahi the

Maai ki nafrat main samajh sakta tha lekin unhome ek baar bhi ye jaane ki koshish nahin ki main Jisne kalyani se jabhi apne pyaar ka izhaar usse kiya tha

Sabki aakhoein ki nafrat dekhne ki to aadat thi mujhe lekin roj ek hi taana ki Meri vajah se naal Mar Gaya haatyara aur na jaane Kya Kya sunna pada hai inn saalon main mujhe

Ek din humein pata Chala ki maai ko delivery ke liye le Jaya Gaya hai

Main bohot Khush tha ki Kam see Kam kaaka ki jindagi main to khushiyan aane Vali hai Meri to bhagwan ne sari khushiyan hi cheen li thi

Lekin kaka ki khushiyon pee bhi nazar lag gayi thi maai kalyani ko khone ke itne gaam main thi ki be apna dhyaan hi nahi rakh payi aur unki bacchi paida hote hi Mar gayi


Uss din ke baad Mai aur Kaka aaj Tak saath nahi rehte kaka to balki nafrat karte hai kalyani see ye samjhte ki kalyani ki vajah see unki bacchi Mar gayi

Mene unhein bohot samjhane ki koshish ki thi lekin vo hai ki sunne ko hi Tayyar nahi the

Ve baba ko apne saath lekar nagpur chale gaye

Swara lekin vahin ahilya niwas main ruki maai ki dekhbhaal ke liye maai ne bhi Kaka see rishta tod liya tha kyunki kaaka ne Meri bail karwayi thi aur aausaheb ki baaton main aakr unhome phir ek baar unke aage ghutne tell liye the

Swara ne bhi mujhse mooh mod liya tha lekin jaab aausaheb ne uski Shaadi mujhse ya hamare parivaar main kisi se bhi Bina pooche apne us ghatiya bete Vivek see karwa di thi to uss din Meri sari haad toot gayi

Unkein Ghar jaakar unka poora Ghar jaala Diya Meri behen ki jindagi baarbad kardi thi unhone mujhe vo phark see laaddo bhej rhi thi

Swara ko bohot samjhane ki koshish lekin vo nhi mani aur mai Se to saari ummed hi tod chuka tha main

Unke Ghar jalane par unhome mujhpe phir Naya case Kar Diya

Jab Kaka ko ye baat pata chali unhone aausaheb aur unke poore parivaar par swara ki abardasti Shaadi karane ke jurm main case Kar Diya

Lekin ve saab swara ki gavahi se Bach Gaye swara ne unkein sayog main gavahi de di lekin mene jab ye kaha ki uss Vivek ki pehli patni jinda hai to pharzi divorce ke kaagaz dikhakar mujhe bhi chup Kara Diya

Aur court me hamari kuch nhi Suni


Ve log ye kehte ki mene unki jindagi baarbad are aassal main to unke poore parivaar ne Meri aur mere poore parivaar ki jindagi barbaad kardi

Kaka maai see aur nafrat karne lage the swara ki Shaadi ke baad ve bhi gussa hokar chle Gaye


Kuch saaal baad ahir jail see choot Gaya aur chhote hi usne Naya kaand Kar Diya

Hum sabke samne seedha bankar vaaps aagaya

Aur baba aur Kaka apne bache hue paarivar ko khona nahi chathe the to isliye use APna liya

Lekin kuch time baad vo phir unhein dhoka dekar bhag Gaya

Main jaanta tha ki vo kabhi nahi sudhar sukata

Do teen baad uski girlfriend avni hamare Ghar as gayi jab kaaka ur baaba dono mere yaaahn aaye hue the mujhse Milne

Avni ne ye bataya ki vo ahir ke baache ki maa banne Vali hai aur ahir usse dhhoka dekar bhag Chula tha jabtak

Baba pehle hi thik nahi rehte the aur itne saalon ye sab dekhne ke baad ve aur toot chooke the isliye unki aur badnami na hon

To unhome iss baache ko mujhe naam dene ke liye

Main iske saakth khilaaf tha lekin baaba ki bigadti haalat aur Ek ladki ke charitable par aise swaal uthte hue bhi nhi dekh sakta tha aur uparse kaka ne bhi bhi yahi kaha ki kalyani to Mar chuki to ab mujhe doosri Shaadi Kar Leni chahiye

Aur main kabtak aise akela jindagi guzaaroonga moksh bhi nahi hai to mujhe avni ke aane wale baache ko apnakar apni jindagi ko sawar Lena chahiye

Unndono ne apne apne faaaydon ke liye mere saath jabardasti karni shuru Kar di

Ek ko apne paarivar ka vansh badhte hue dekhna tha to doosre ko kalyani see itni nafrat thi ki vo use apne aas paass uska naam bhi nahi sunna chahthe the

Unn dono ek baar bhi ye nhi socha ki main akela itme saal kese guzaar rha tha apne paarivar ke Bina

Uparse swara ki din raat chinta saataye jaati this chakar bhi kuch thik nahi Kar paa rha tha main

Isliye Tang aakar mene avni ke bacche ko apna naam dene ke liye taayyar hona pada

Tia gets shocked after listening that the child is not of malhar but ahirs

Tia:- to tumne sirf uske baache ko apna naam Diya hai vo tumhara baacha nahi hai

Malhar:- nhi balki mene to use shaddi bhi nahi ki main sirf uske baache ko apna naam dene vala tha na ki use Shaadi ki lekin Kaka aur baba ke saamne humne yahi jataya ki hamari

Baba ne ahir ke baache ka naam sunte hi apni purani pusthani kothi Jo kaafi saalon main unhone aur Kaka ne banyi thi uska batwara mujhmein Kaka aur ahir main saman baat di thi

Kaka ne apna hissa mujhe hi de Diya tha

Main to apna hissa Tak nahi chahtha tha lekin unhone mujhe majboor Kar Diya

Ye property jab banti thi tab ahir hamre pass tha even isliye vo hum sabke saamne itna aacha ban rha tha lekin vo iss baat see Khush nahi that ki Kaka ne apna hissa mere naam Kar Diya hai

Isliye usne bhagne ka naatak avni ke saath milkar Kiya

Aur jabbi main sochoon ki vo itne aasani see mere saath Bina Shaadi ke rehne ke liye kese Tayyar ho gai

Vo to even Kaka ke sammne itni acchi bahu hone ka naatak karrhi this ki poochon mat aur kaaka bhi kalyani see nafrat ke Karan ek dum uski baaton main aajte the

Usne aur ahir ne hamari saari property lene ka plan banaya tha aur usi plan ke hisaab se vo hum sabke saamne aise bechara banke aayi thi jisse hum sab use apne Ghar main rakh lein

Aur sabke samne achi baane ka naatak karke hum sabse hamare share lekar vo dono aish Kar sake

Lekin property ke naam par ahir ke pass ek chota sa tukda tha aur usse pura gahr chahiye tha

Aur vo mere pass tha Kaka aur baba ne bhi uspe Taras kahakar aur vaaris ke laalach main usse mujhe Shaadi karne ko Kahan

Tia:- lekin tumhein ye Saab pata kese chala aur vo abtak tumhare saath kyun reh rahi hai

Malhar:- mjhhe aaj subah hi jab vo mere piche chupke ahir see Milne jaa rhi thi tab apta Chala uar humne hathon haath saarein saboot police ko dekar unke khilaaf complaint kardi

Lekin ye baat kisi ko bhi nahi pata tha

Main to balki parso jab kalyani ko dekha to kitna Khush ho Gaya tha ki Meri kalyani jinda hai

Lekin ye sunke shock ho Gaya ki vo dm bhi ban gayi iska matlab vo jaan boochkar mujhse door rahi main toot Gaya Tia main toot Gaya ye jaankaar ki jiske Marne ke dukh main mene itne saal dukh main manaye

Vo jinda hote hue bhi mere pass nahi aayi aur uski aakhoein main vo apne liye nafrat dekhkar na main samajh Gaya ki sabki tarah aab vo bhi mujhse nafrat karti hai

Vo bhi mujhse door ho chuki hai

Jab vo parso Ghar aayi thi na aur avni ne mujhe apna pati bataaya uske saamne mene jaanbochke use kuch nahi bataya kyunki jab mujhe bhi koi phark nahi pada uski aakhoein main aanson dekhkar

Jab usne mujhe itne saalon main itne dhoke main rakha to phir main bhi use usi dard main dekhna chahtha tha

Lekin Sach poochon to use jyaada mujhe phark pad rha tha uski be aakhoein dekhkar

Tum pooch rhi thi na Tia ki aaj aisa Kya hua Jo mene apna sabr kho Diya ye hua tha

Bhar gaya tha mere sabr ka bhaar itne salon main bhar Gaya tha jiski aakhon main aajtak pyaar dekha tha unnn aakhoen main khud ke lite berukhi aur vo narazgi dekhkar toot Gaya tha

Roj naye naye dhoke khakar thak Gaya tha

Tia:- I understand malhar lekin tumne jab it saalon main koi dawa nahi li koi treatment mahi liya to phir kuch mahino pehle hi kyun

Malhar:- pehle iss dard see Jeet leta tha main Tia lekin uske jaane ke baadse bikharna shuru hua tha aur ye dawaiyan mujhe khaani nahi thi kyunki inse main jinda rehta Jo mujhe nahi rehna tha

Lekin kuch saaal baad vo dard itna badh Gaya ki bass ke baahar hota jaa rha tha isliye sharab ka sahra lene laga jiski vajah se Kai suspension hue mere lekin mujhe koi phark hi mahi pad rha tha

Lekin phir mujhe ek din ek chota sa baccha dikhan Jo bilkul mere moksh ke jitna tha vo kisi anthalya ka baccha tha Mera Dil bhar Aya usse dekhkar

Jab main uss anthalya main Gaya to vahan Mera maan lagne laga Maine unke saath apna din bitana shuru Kar Diya tha

Aur sharab ko dhire dhire chod Diya aur jisse unn bacchon ka kharcha utha sakoon to mehnat karke dobara apne kaam pe dhyaan dene lga

Lekin jab vo avni aai aur Roz Roz vo baatein hone lagi to mujhe panick attack and lage

Aur mene uski jimmendari bhi le li thi isliye mujhe doctor ke pass jaana pada kyunki

Malhar kuch bhi Kar skata hai lekin apni jimmendariyon se piche nahi hat skata

Tia:- malhar bohot acha Kiya tumne medical ki help leke isse bahane sahi main tumhein tumhari doctor bhi mil gayi aur tumhein ek friend bhi

Lekin malhar jab tumne kalyani ko labhi dhoondhe ki koshish kyun nhi ki

Malhar:- ki thi tia bohot ki thi lekin naa jab mere pass Meri naukri thi aur naa paise jinki madat see main use jyaada unchi level pe dhoondh Pata

Aur baki gharwaloon ko apne se hi fhursaat nahi thi Kaka see bhi madat nahi le sakta tha pehle vo maai ke saath busy the aur phir unki uske liye nafrat

Aur mere saare accounts bhi aausaheb ne seal karva diye the Jiss vajah se naa main apne paise use Kar sakta tha aur nahi Bank se loan le sakta tha

Bohot saalon baad kahi vo jaakr khule

Lekin jab vo khulein to mere maan ki asha unn dono ke jinda hone ki kahabar ko chod chuki thi

Tia:- I am proud of you malhar I am really proud of you tumne abhi Tak bohot himmat rakhi hai itna Saab hone ke baavjood tumne apni itni himmat rakhi bohot kabiliyat baat hai

Lekin bass dhukh iss baat ka hai tum itne dhukh main the lekin main tumhare saath nahi reh payi I am really sorry for that I am so sorry

Malhar:- aise Kyun keh rahi hoo tumhare saath bhi Kam bura nhi hua tumhari bhi Shaadi tutne ke baad tumne kaafi himmat rakhi

Aur aise to mujhein bhi tumhein sorry bolana farz hum dono ka tha kisi akele ka nahi

Tia:- malhar aaj ek baat kahoon tumse itne saal chupayi hai

Malhar:- Kya baat hai Jo tumne mujhse chupayi aaj tum bhi bol Doon

Tia:- main bhi tumse college ke dino se pyaar karti thi malhar pata hai jab tumhein kuch mahino pehle dekha tha tab shock ho gai kyunki Jiss malhar ko main jaanti this vo to kitna sweet but disciplined aur strict bhi tha jispein college ki saari ladkiyan Marti thi lekin ab tum bilkul vese nahi rahe the malhar

Jab mujhe ye pata Chala tha ki tumhari Shaadi sampada se ho gayi hai to main toot si gayi thi college main to tumse sirf dosti hi Kar payi this lekin kabhi himmat hi nahi Kar payi ki apne pyaar ka izhaar Kar sakoon aur jab phir mene bhi tumhari Shaadi ka sunke ashutosh see Shaadi karne ke liye has Kar di

Lekin hum dono apne rishte main adjust hi nhi Kar paye roj roj ke jhagde hone lage hamare beech aur phir ek din humne mutually decide kiya ki humein divorce le Len chahiye

Phir mene bhi apne carrer par dhyaan Dena shirt Kar Diya aur Sab bhoolne ki koshish karne lagi

Lekin jab tumhein itne saalon baad dekha aur pata Chala ki tumhari Dusri Shaadi ho gayi hai to main chup rahi doobara main nahi chahthi thi ki tumhari Marital life khaarab ho

Malhar gets shocked after listening that Tia loves him from college days and even hide it

Malhar :- Tia lekin tum mujhe ab Bata sakti thi jab nahi bata payi to

Tia :- mene Kahan main nahi chahthi ki tumhari Shaadi kharab ho lekin malhar acha hua mene jab apni Dil ki baat tumse nabi batayi thi

Malhar:- kyun

Tia:- aaj jab kalyani ki aakhoein main tumhare liye vo chinta aur tumhari aakhoein main uske liye pyaar jabhi bhi tum uska naam le rahe the

Sach baaton to main kabhi bhi tumhein kalyani ke jitna pyaar nahi Kar skati thi

Jiss tarah tum dono ek dusre ke liye apne pyaar ke liye kayi baar Bina soche samjhe jaan di haina vo har koi nahi Kar sakta

Tum dono Sach main made for each other hoo

Malhar laughed painfully after listening her

Malhar:- par use to mujhe Darane see hi Kahan phursat hai jabko Dekho mujhe darati rehti hai

By seeing towards the icu where Kalyani is admitted

Dekho ek baar phor milke mujhe chodkar Jane ki koshish Kar rhi thi

Mujhe kuch nahi bataya apne clot ke baarein I'll ll

Aur main bhi use itna gussa tha ki aaj uspein chilla pada

Tia:- malhar main ye nhi kahoongi ki usne joo Kiya vo sahi Kiya lekin doctor me kaha na uski Tabiyat kitni kharab thi

Aur phir jab vo thik hui hogi to usne kisi se bhi contact karne ki koshish isliye nahi ki hogi kyunki vo sabse gussa hogi ki use kisi ne dhoondhe ki koshish nahi ki aur tumse Milne isliye nahi aayi hogi kyunki vo gussa naraz ya nafrat kuch bhi de loon kyunki tumne uspe goli chalai thi aisa use lagta tha

Aur tumhi ne to kahana ki vo kitni bacchon Vali harketein karte Thi

Malhar main jaanti Hoon uski naadani ki vajah se Jo bhi tumhein sehna pada uske baad use koi maaf Nahi karega

Lekin mian ye bhi jaanti hoo ki tum usse kitna pyaar karte hoo

Malhar:- main nahi jaanta Tia abhi Kya hoga

Main usse maaf Kar bhi paaonga ya nahi ya uske maan Kya hai

Lekin itna jarrora jamta Hoon ki use mere kayi sawaolen ke jaawab ab dene honge

Bhale hi koi haq nahi banta Mera uspe

Lekin mere bete ki maa aur mere pyaar ka rishta vo kabhi nahi thukra sakti aur issi naate use ab saare jawab dene honge

Tia:- malhar shaant dimag see kaam Lena

Pls aur apni health mat bigad Lena kalyani ko abhi tumhein hi sambhalna hai

Aur ek baad yaad rakhna Jo galti mene aur ashutosh ne apne rishte main ki ek doosre ko na samjahkar vo tum Matt karna

Main aur vo aajtak bhugat rahe Hain na vo Khush reh saka hai na main

Isliye pls soch samajh Kar Saab karna

Malhar:- main samajh Raha Hoon Tia

Par aaj Jo baat pata chali hai vo hum yahin rehne dete hai pls aapne maan main koi aasha ki Kiran mat

Tia cutted him in between

Tia:- main janti Hoon tum kalyani ki jagah kisi ko nahi de Paoge aur na main vo maangoongi iss rishte agar tum bandh sakte Hoon to sirf kalyani ke saath

Mene ye baat sirf tumse isliye baatayi kyunki main aaj see hamare iss dosti ke rishte main koi baat nahi chupana nahi chahthi thi

Jisse tumhein baad main pata chalke ye lage ki mene bbi tumhein dhoka Diya hai

Aur bhale hi ab Tak main tumhare saath nahi thi lekin aaj see ye wada karti Hoon ki main humesha jindagi main jabhi tumhein jarrorat padegi as a friend humesha khadi miloongi

Malhar:- thank you Tia Mera itna saath dene ke lite aur mujhe sunne ke liye thank you so much

Tia:- acha malhar main chalti hoo Ghar par mummy aai hui hai jaise hi kalyani ko hosh aye pls mujhe Bata Dena

Malhar nooded his head and Tia left from there

After sometime ward boy inform malhar that he can meet kalyani as she gained her consciousness

Malhar goes in the icu to meet kalyani but got emotional after seeing her attached with so many wires and laying like a lifeless soul

Malhar politely pronounce her name

Malhar:- Kalyani...

To be continued......




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Wow this was amazinga dn emotional too waiting for next❤

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Originally posted by: sehreemstory

Wow this was amazinga dn emotional too waiting for next❤

thank you arwa🐱🐱

I will try to update soon ☺️

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Wow

Yaar wait tumne toh poora paanch saal kahada kar di hamare saamne

How emotional and how beautifully crafted

Loved it yaar

Waiting for more .hope Tia postive rahe and vamp na bane ❤️

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Originally posted by: Phlo

Malhar pov continue

Jab aausaheb ne use Ghar se Babar nikal Diya tha to Mai ne bhi uss din jaane ka faisla kiya uss din unn dono ke beech mujhe Sach main laga jaisa ek maa beti ka rishta hoo

Mene unn dono ko apne Ghar main panha di

Kalyani ki jindagi to sach main apne gusse main baarbad Kar Chuka tha

Sampada ke dhoke aur kahi na kahi uske Marne ke dard ne mere andar ek juala mukhi si Jala di thi

Par usmein ghee dalne ka kaam aausaheb ne Puri tarah ke se kiya tha vo hi Jisne mujhe kalyani see Shaadi karne ka prastav Diya tha

Aur main use samay itni aag main Kal Raha tha ki maan bhi Gaya uss prastav ke liye

Bevakoof tha main Jisne sampada ke uss chitthi par bharosa Kar liya

Lekin maai aur kalyani ke baartav ne mere Shaq ko ek panah de di thi

Mana atharav ne unhein majboor kiya tha lekin

Mene uss din sachmein bohot badi galti ki think ek 18 saal ki ladki ko majboor kiya tha ki vo El aise insaan see Shaadi karein Jo pehle se hi ek baache ka baap ban chuka hoo

Kyunki main jaanta tha ki kalyani maaai ko apni aai maan chuki hai aur vo unhein bachane ke lite kiss bhi haad thak jayegi

Aur usne mijhse Shaadi Karli

Shaadi ke baad humne Kai utaar chadav dekhe

Kabhi mene uspe Shaq Kiya kabhi usne mujpe lekin phir bhi hum ek dooje me saath rahe

Bohot sitam dhaye mene uspe lekin phir bhi uss ladki ne mera saath nahi chodha

Aur balki just bacche see uska koi vaasta nahi tha vo uski asal maino main aai ban gayi

Unn Dino Meri jindagi main bass moksh hi Mera sukoon tha

Aausaheb ki chaalbaziyan sunkar to vese hi main unhein ghar see bahar nikalna chatha tha

Lekin kalyani ki chinta apni maa me lite unhein bacha gayi

Varna main unhein vo hi dukh Dena chahtha tha Jo unhone mujhe diye the

Lekin mene use samay ek baath notice ki think kalyani ko main bhale apni kadhvahat main kitna kuch kehta tha lekin uss ladki ne mujhe mud ke kabhi jawab nhi Diya naa hi Mera gussa uss nanhi so jaan par nikala

Moksh sirf vo hi sukoon tha Mera uss waqt lekin uss parivaar see vo bhi nahi Dekha Gaya pallavi mami ne mere dimag shaq ke been boo diye ki vo Mera beta hai bbi ya nahi ya kahi vo atharav ka baacha to nahi

Aur mera dimag uss baat ko aise ghard Kar Gaya ki uska dna test karwane Chala Gaya main aur jab mujhe ye pata Chala ki uska blood group atharav me blood group see match karta hai

To pgla sa Gaya tha main ek aur dhoka aur ussi main main moksh ko chod aaya galti see jiski saza mere bacche ko mili lekin waqt rehte vo thik hogaya lekin jab kalyani ne mujhe sachai see rubaroo karwaya tab pata Chala ki agar vo Mera baacha bhi nahi Hain tab bhi main usse apne see ek pal ke lite door nahi Kara saktaa Meri jindagi ban chuka tha vo

Aur jabse leke aaj Tak Mera baacha moksh hai moksh tha aur vo hi hamesha rahega

Uss din sampada pehli baar bhagwan se bheek mangi thi ki mere bacche ko bacha lein

Bhagwan ki kripa see vo Bach bhi Gaya lekin kalyani ka use liye pyaar aur mere see uske liye ladna

Sabne mere andar uske liye jabse kuch paida Kar Diya

Aur vo waqt ke saath saath badhtha chla gaya

Iss beech na jaane kitni baar mujhe kitni kasotiyo pe kahara utarna pada

Kitni baar Kalyani ko unn kasotiyo pe khara utarna pada

Lekin hum dono phir kabhi peechein mood Kar nahi dekha

Sampada atharav aur Kalyani ke baba sabne humein alag karne ki koshish ki lekin hamara rishta aur pakka hota gaya

Jab mujhe Mera parivaar doobara Mila tha na tab mujhe baba pe bohot gussa Aya tha ki unhone doosri Shaadi Karli aur kahi na kahi dard bhi hua tha ki Kya unhein Meri itni so bhi yaad nahi aayi

Kya unhein ye yaad nahi aaya ki unka ek 12saal say baacha bhi tha aur Kya unka maan itna sa bhi nahi kachota jab unhone doosri Shaadi ki

Lekin mene sab kuch bhoolake sabko seene se lagaya

Lekin phir ek baar jindagi me mujhe dhokha de Diya be Saab dhokebaaj the

Sabke chahre pani ki tarha saaf hote chale Gaye

Meri babdi Meri baacchi usse apne baache ki tarah rakha tha na mene jab vo choti thi use kitna kuch sehna pada just because vo ek dancer see pyaar karti thi to uske pyaar ko Mar diya Gaya

Sabki jindagi baarbad Kar di thi uss Sach ne Mai kaka Kalyani Meri baabdi sabki

Maai ki marzi na hote hue bhi Kalyani ne unki Shaadi kaaka se karvadi kaaka aur maai ke rishte ko dekhkar main bhi yahi chhatha lekin maai ki marzi see na ki vese jabardasti

Uss din Kaka se bhi ek dhoka kha liya tha men unhone mujhse pehle hi jhooth bola tha aai ke baarein main bohot mushkil see maaf Kar paya tha main uske lite unhein lekin phir ek baar unhone mujhse see ye chupaya tha ki babdi air baba jinda hai

Aise Kai dhoke milte Gaye

Lekin sachmuch kalyani mere saath humesha thi

Jab kalyani ne mujhe unn naksaliyon see bachaya tha na tab mere Dil ko sachmein pyaar karne ki vajah mil gayi thi

Uss par bharosa karna aaasan nahi tha mere liye itne dhoke khaye itne dhoke Kaye ki toot chuka tha main aur uski saaza kalyani ko bhogni padi jiska inn Saab Main koi haath bhi nahi tha

Jab vo mujhe chodkar rachit ke pass gayi thi na tab mujhe uspe raatti bhar bhi Shaq nahi tha ki vo sampada ki tarah dhoka de rahi hai lekin ek dard tha ki jisse apni jindagi se bhi jyaada chahne laga Hoon use kisi aur ke saath dekhne ka dard usse door rehne ka dard

Even main janata tha ki vo mujhse jaarrora kuch na kuch chupa rhi hai

Kyunki usne apni achai aur sachai see mere maan ko Jeet liya tha

Aur main sahi tha moksh ko bachane ke liye use ye kadam uthaya tha pagal thi vo ladki sabki bhalayi ke liye apni jaan jhokhim main gairna to uski aadat thi

Kayi baar daraya hai usne mujhe kitni baar khote khote bacha hoo main use

Haar baar vo mujhe iss khayal se todti hai

Lekin jab uss din use rachit see bachaya to Meri jaan nikal gayi uski haalat dekhke Kar Diya apne pyaar ka izhaar

Uss pagal si ladki see Jo mujhe dhedh saal pehle mitti main rangi hui mili thi

Kabhi nhi socha that ki use itna pyaar Kar baithunga

Moksh ki bimari se to main vese hi ladies laeta use kahi nahi jaane deta

Aur ab to kalyani ka saath bhi tha

Lekin jab usne Meri Bina marzi ke ivf karwaya to bohot gussa Aya tha uspe kitni umar thi ki sirf 19 saal jismein usne Mujhse jhooth bhi bola ki vo baacha rachit ka Hain

Khud ko maaf Nahi Kar paya tha main ki rachit me uske saath chii

Lekin uske Karan ko samjhkar use maaf Kar Diya

Pehli pregnancy thi uski aur vo bhi itni kaam Umar main jismein jaan Jane ke khatre jyaade hote hai

Lekin use Bina soche samjhe karva liya tha ivf

Khush tha main ki mere baache ki jaan Bach jayegi aur kahi na kahi iss baat see bhi ki iss baar mere bacche ko Janam dene Vali vo aurat hogi jisse mere pyaar ki kadar hai Jo samjhti hai mujhe

Lekin phir ek baar jindagi ne mujhe dhokha de Diya uski jaan par ban ayi thi baat Kya karta main mere pass koi raasta nahi tha tiya lekin phir bhi mujhe uska abortion karana pada

Jisse janke baad usne Mujhse rishta talk todne ki dhamki de di thi lekin jaanta Tha ki vo naa mere Bina jee sakti hai aur na moksh ke Bina

Trilok naam ka vo insaan jiski vajah se mene apne baache ko kho Diya apni patni ko khote khote bacha Hoon

Uss insane ne apne rang mujhe pehle hi dikha diye the kitni ghatiya baat kahi this lekin vo mujhse badla Lena chahtha tha

Badi mushkil see moksh ka operation hua tha vo sab baarbad hogaya uss din

Vo din sabse manhoos tha

Pehle nal chal Gaya phir baba ka accident ho Gaya jiske baad vo jinda to the lekin apni saari shaktiyan kho chuke the

Aur sabse jyaada Meri Patni aur Mera do saal ka baacha moksh Chala gaya

Sab chale mujhe chodkar

Aur innsab ka ilzam hamesha ki tarah mujhpar as gaya

Maai ka dhukh samjahtha Hoon main unhone apni beti khoyi this lekin main bhi kalyani ko maarna nahi chatha tha

Vo to Kaka the jiski vajah see main jail see bahar a paya agr vo uss din mujhe nahi bachate to main to jindagi bhar jail ki salankhon ke peeche rehta

Saab badal gay inn 5 saalon aausaheb ne apne pote ka badla Meri behen ki jindagi barbaad ke liya

Are vo to pehle hi apni jindagi main kitne dhukh bhog chuki hai

Lekin use bhi Meri ek nhi maani aur chali gayi mujhe chodkar us ghatiya parivar main apne pita je Umar ke insaan ko apna pati kehti hai vo

Lekin ek Khushi hai ki vahan par maai bhi hai Kam se kaam vo dono ek dooje ka saath to bani hui hai

Meri jindagi ka Kaya sabne maajak samajh rakha hai

Pehle mujhse Meri naukri chin gayi jismein saach poochon to mujhe koi fark nahi pada inn 5 saalon main kyunki kiske liye jita kiske liye kaamata

In 5 saalon main ek aisa din nahi gya jiss din mene bhagwan se apne Marne ki baat na ki ho

by saying he breakdown intears

Seeing malhar Tia also could not stop her tears

And goes to comfort him

Tia:- mujhe Khushi hai malhar ki aaj tumne apne Dil ki ye baatein ye bojh sab halka Kar Diya

Itne mahione se tumhare saath thi lekin tumne kabhi bhi apne maaan ki baat nhi batayi

Malhar:- Tia main andar see itna toot chuka tha itne dhoke khaye liye the ki aur kisi pe bharosa aur iss jindagi main jeene ki koi vajah hi nahi bachi thi

Tia:- main samjhati Hoon jindagi main itna kuch dekhne ke baad kisi pe bhi bharosa karna mushkil hi hai

Lekin malhar tumne mujhe avni se Shaadi ka Karan nahi bataya

Balki mujhe to kalyani ko goli lagna aur tumhara bekasur hona bhi parso hi pata Chala

Jab kalyani vapas AA gayi

Malhar:- baba ke accident ke baad vo sahi nahi rehte the unhone apne haathon parion ki shakti bilkul khodi thi

Aausaheb ne mujhe that see bahar nikalna Diya tha tab police mujhe arrest karke le gayi thi kyunki unhone mujhpe kalyani ko jaanbochke ke Marne ka ilzam laga Diya tha

Main uss waqt kalyani aur moksh ko khone ke itne dard main tha ki mujhe kuch samajh hi nhi AA RHA tha

Phir do din baad Meri court main peshi thi uss waqt main khudko begunah saabit bhi nahi karna chahtha tha isliye Jo ho RHA that bas Shanti se dekhta jaa rha tha

Par vahan Kaka ne akkar ye keh Diya ki abhi Tak kalyani ki koi body nahi mili hai isliye hum ye nahi maan sakte ke ki kalyani Mar hi gayi ho

Meri bail to ho gayi lekin unlogo ke taane maai ki aakhom mere liye nafrat sab dekhna mushkil hoota jaa rha tha

Ye sab pehle bhi hua tha jab sampada mujhe chodkar gayi thi lekin shayad jab mere saath kalyani Meri dhaal bankar khadi thi isliye kiss bhi dukh see lad liya tha main

Lekin naa jab kisi see lad paya na kuch

Kaka mujpe Ghar le aaye nal ki mauth ke baad to vese hi pura deshmukh khandan mere khilaaf ho gya tha

Mene apne aap ko kamare band Kar liya tha Tia

Joss insaan ne humesha saari musibaton ka saamna datt ke kiya tha vo insaan kamare main band ho Gaya

Kaka ne Kai koshish ki lekin main bahar nahi aaya

Phir kuch dino baaba jab hospital see har aaye to humein ussi din ye pata Chala ki maai maa banne Vali hai

Unndono ko khone ke dukh see to Main jabhi ubhar nahi paya tha lekin phir bhi maai aur kaaka ke liye Khush tha

Maai ne mujhe dekhte hi ye keh Diya tha ki agar main yahan Raha to ve Kaka me saath nahi rahengi

Aur aausaheb ne itne dino main unke maan main humsab keiue khoob jehar ghol Diya tha

Yahan Tak ki Meri khud ki behen ke maan main

Main nahi chahtha ki maai aisi haalat main akeli rahein

Isliye main vahan see Chala gaya Kaka ne rokne ki bohot koshish bhi ki lekin bas

Sampada aur Mera Jo purana Ghar tha vahi par maan to nahi tha lekin koi aur chaara bhi nahi tha

Vahan Jake saarin cheezon ne aur akela baana Diya tha

Kuch time Kaka jab Milne aye the to unhone bataya ki Mera demotion aausaheb ne apni pooch see karva Diya hai isliye ab main sub inspector ban Gaya tha Kaka ne unhein rokne ki bohot koshish bhi ki thi lekin maai ki vajah see chup rehna paada

Jab main sub inspector ban Gaya tab mujhe Mera quarters mil Gaya tha main phir vahi Durga ke saath akela rehne laga

Jab main police station jaata tha na to pehle Mera seena phark see choda ho jata tha lekin ab vahi mujhe roj logo ki ghin nighaein aur naa jane mere peeth ke Kya Kya baatein karte the

Mujhe koi phark nahi pad rha tha na Mera jeene ka koi maan hi nahi tha jinke liye Jeet tha vo dono hi mere pass nahi the

Maai ki nafrat main samajh sakta tha lekin unhome ek baar bhi ye jaane ki koshish nahin ki main Jisne kalyani se jabhi apne pyaar ka izhaar usse kiya tha

Sabki aakhoein ki nafrat dekhne ki to aadat thi mujhe lekin roj ek hi taana ki Meri vajah se naal Mar Gaya haatyara aur na jaane Kya Kya sunna pada hai inn saalon main mujhe

Ek din humein pata Chala ki maai ko delivery ke liye le Jaya Gaya hai

Main bohot Khush tha ki Kam see Kam kaaka ki jindagi main to khushiyan aane Vali hai Meri to bhagwan ne sari khushiyan hi cheen li thi

Lekin kaka ki khushiyon pee bhi nazar lag gayi thi maai kalyani ko khone ke itne gaam main thi ki be apna dhyaan hi nahi rakh payi aur unki bacchi paida hote hi Mar gayi


Uss din ke baad Mai aur Kaka aaj Tak saath nahi rehte kaka to balki nafrat karte hai kalyani see ye samjhte ki kalyani ki vajah see unki bacchi Mar gayi

Mene unhein bohot samjhane ki koshish ki thi lekin vo hai ki sunne ko hi Tayyar nahi the

Ve baba ko apne saath lekar nagpur chale gaye

Swara lekin vahin ahilya niwas main ruki maai ki dekhbhaal ke liye maai ne bhi Kaka see rishta tod liya tha kyunki kaaka ne Meri bail karwayi thi aur aausaheb ki baaton main aakr unhome phir ek baar unke aage ghutne tell liye the

Swara ne bhi mujhse mooh mod liya tha lekin jaab aausaheb ne uski Shaadi mujhse ya hamare parivaar main kisi se bhi Bina pooche apne us ghatiya bete Vivek see karwa di thi to uss din Meri sari haad toot gayi

Unkein Ghar jaakar unka poora Ghar jaala Diya Meri behen ki jindagi baarbad kardi thi unhone mujhe vo phark see laaddo bhej rhi thi

Swara ko bohot samjhane ki koshish lekin vo nhi mani aur mai Se to saari ummed hi tod chuka tha main

Unke Ghar jalane par unhome mujhpe phir Naya case Kar Diya

Jab Kaka ko ye baat pata chali unhone aausaheb aur unke poore parivaar par swara ki abardasti Shaadi karane ke jurm main case Kar Diya

Lekin ve saab swara ki gavahi se Bach Gaye swara ne unkein sayog main gavahi de di lekin mene jab ye kaha ki uss Vivek ki pehli patni jinda hai to pharzi divorce ke kaagaz dikhakar mujhe bhi chup Kara Diya

Aur court me hamari kuch nhi Suni


Ve log ye kehte ki mene unki jindagi baarbad are aassal main to unke poore parivaar ne Meri aur mere poore parivaar ki jindagi barbaad kardi

Kaka maai see aur nafrat karne lage the swara ki Shaadi ke baad ve bhi gussa hokar chle Gaye


Kuch saaal baad ahir jail see choot Gaya aur chhote hi usne Naya kaand Kar Diya

Hum sabke samne seedha bankar vaaps aagaya

Aur baba aur Kaka apne bache hue paarivar ko khona nahi chathe the to isliye use APna liya

Lekin kuch time baad vo phir unhein dhoka dekar bhag Gaya

Main jaanta tha ki vo kabhi nahi sudhar sukata

Do teen baad uski girlfriend avni hamare Ghar as gayi jab kaaka ur baaba dono mere yaaahn aaye hue the mujhse Milne

Avni ne ye bataya ki vo ahir ke baache ki maa banne Vali hai aur ahir usse dhhoka dekar bhag Chula tha jabtak

Baba pehle hi thik nahi rehte the aur itne saalon ye sab dekhne ke baad ve aur toot chooke the isliye unki aur badnami na hon

To unhome iss baache ko mujhe naam dene ke liye

Main iske saakth khilaaf tha lekin baaba ki bigadti haalat aur Ek ladki ke charitable par aise swaal uthte hue bhi nhi dekh sakta tha aur uparse kaka ne bhi bhi yahi kaha ki kalyani to Mar chuki to ab mujhe doosri Shaadi Kar Leni chahiye

Aur main kabtak aise akela jindagi guzaaroonga moksh bhi nahi hai to mujhe avni ke aane wale baache ko apnakar apni jindagi ko sawar Lena chahiye

Unndono ne apne apne faaaydon ke liye mere saath jabardasti karni shuru Kar di

Ek ko apne paarivar ka vansh badhte hue dekhna tha to doosre ko kalyani see itni nafrat thi ki vo use apne aas paass uska naam bhi nahi sunna chahthe the

Unn dono ek baar bhi ye nhi socha ki main akela itme saal kese guzaar rha tha apne paarivar ke Bina

Uparse swara ki din raat chinta saataye jaati this chakar bhi kuch thik nahi Kar paa rha tha main

Isliye Tang aakar mene avni ke bacche ko apna naam dene ke liye taayyar hona pada

Tia gets shocked after listening that the child is not of malhar but ahirs

Tia:- to tumne sirf uske baache ko apna naam Diya hai vo tumhara baacha nahi hai

Malhar:- nhi balki mene to use shaddi bhi nahi ki main sirf uske baache ko apna naam dene vala tha na ki use Shaadi ki lekin Kaka aur baba ke saamne humne yahi jataya ki hamari

Baba ne ahir ke baache ka naam sunte hi apni purani pusthani kothi Jo kaafi saalon main unhone aur Kaka ne banyi thi uska batwara mujhmein Kaka aur ahir main saman baat di thi

Kaka ne apna hissa mujhe hi de Diya tha

Main to apna hissa Tak nahi chahtha tha lekin unhone mujhe majboor Kar Diya

Ye property jab banti thi tab ahir hamre pass tha even isliye vo hum sabke saamne itna aacha ban rha tha lekin vo iss baat see Khush nahi that ki Kaka ne apna hissa mere naam Kar Diya hai

Isliye usne bhagne ka naatak avni ke saath milkar Kiya

Aur jabbi main sochoon ki vo itne aasani see mere saath Bina Shaadi ke rehne ke liye kese Tayyar ho gai

Vo to even Kaka ke sammne itni acchi bahu hone ka naatak karrhi this ki poochon mat aur kaaka bhi kalyani see nafrat ke Karan ek dum uski baaton main aajte the

Usne aur ahir ne hamari saari property lene ka plan banaya tha aur usi plan ke hisaab se vo hum sabke saamne aise bechara banke aayi thi jisse hum sab use apne Ghar main rakh lein

Aur sabke samne achi baane ka naatak karke hum sabse hamare share lekar vo dono aish Kar sake

Lekin property ke naam par ahir ke pass ek chota sa tukda tha aur usse pura gahr chahiye tha

Aur vo mere pass tha Kaka aur baba ne bhi uspe Taras kahakar aur vaaris ke laalach main usse mujhe Shaadi karne ko Kahan

Tia:- lekin tumhein ye Saab pata kese chala aur vo abtak tumhare saath kyun reh rahi hai

Malhar:- mjhhe aaj subah hi jab vo mere piche chupke ahir see Milne jaa rhi thi tab apta Chala uar humne hathon haath saarein saboot police ko dekar unke khilaaf complaint kardi

Lekin ye baat kisi ko bhi nahi pata tha

Main to balki parso jab kalyani ko dekha to kitna Khush ho Gaya tha ki Meri kalyani jinda hai

Lekin ye sunke shock ho Gaya ki vo dm bhi ban gayi iska matlab vo jaan boochkar mujhse door rahi main toot Gaya Tia main toot Gaya ye jaankaar ki jiske Marne ke dukh main mene itne saal dukh main manaye

Vo jinda hote hue bhi mere pass nahi aayi aur uski aakhoein main vo apne liye nafrat dekhkar na main samajh Gaya ki sabki tarah aab vo bhi mujhse nafrat karti hai

Vo bhi mujhse door ho chuki hai

Jab vo parso Ghar aayi thi na aur avni ne mujhe apna pati bataaya uske saamne mene jaanbochke use kuch nahi bataya kyunki jab mujhe bhi koi phark nahi pada uski aakhoein main aanson dekhkar

Jab usne mujhe itne saalon main itne dhoke main rakha to phir main bhi use usi dard main dekhna chahtha tha

Lekin Sach poochon to use jyaada mujhe phark pad rha tha uski be aakhoein dekhkar

Tum pooch rhi thi na Tia ki aaj aisa Kya hua Jo mene apna sabr kho Diya ye hua tha

Bhar gaya tha mere sabr ka bhaar itne salon main bhar Gaya tha jiski aakhon main aajtak pyaar dekha tha unnn aakhoen main khud ke lite berukhi aur vo narazgi dekhkar toot Gaya tha

Roj naye naye dhoke khakar thak Gaya tha

Tia:- I understand malhar lekin tumne jab it saalon main koi dawa nahi li koi treatment mahi liya to phir kuch mahino pehle hi kyun

Malhar:- pehle iss dard see Jeet leta tha main Tia lekin uske jaane ke baadse bikharna shuru hua tha aur ye dawaiyan mujhe khaani nahi thi kyunki inse main jinda rehta Jo mujhe nahi rehna tha

Lekin kuch saaal baad vo dard itna badh Gaya ki bass ke baahar hota jaa rha tha isliye sharab ka sahra lene laga jiski vajah se Kai suspension hue mere lekin mujhe koi phark hi mahi pad rha tha

Lekin phir mujhe ek din ek chota sa baccha dikhan Jo bilkul mere moksh ke jitna tha vo kisi anthalya ka baccha tha Mera Dil bhar Aya usse dekhkar

Jab main uss anthalya main Gaya to vahan Mera maan lagne laga Maine unke saath apna din bitana shuru Kar Diya tha

Aur sharab ko dhire dhire chod Diya aur jisse unn bacchon ka kharcha utha sakoon to mehnat karke dobara apne kaam pe dhyaan dene lga

Lekin jab vo avni aai aur Roz Roz vo baatein hone lagi to mujhe panick attack and lage

Aur mene uski jimmendari bhi le li thi isliye mujhe doctor ke pass jaana pada kyunki

Malhar kuch bhi Kar skata hai lekin apni jimmendariyon se piche nahi hat skata

Tia:- malhar bohot acha Kiya tumne medical ki help leke isse bahane sahi main tumhein tumhari doctor bhi mil gayi aur tumhein ek friend bhi

Lekin malhar jab tumne kalyani ko labhi dhoondhe ki koshish kyun nhi ki

Malhar:- ki thi tia bohot ki thi lekin naa jab mere pass Meri naukri thi aur naa paise jinki madat see main use jyaada unchi level pe dhoondh Pata

Aur baki gharwaloon ko apne se hi fhursaat nahi thi Kaka see bhi madat nahi le sakta tha pehle vo maai ke saath busy the aur phir unki uske liye nafrat

Aur mere saare accounts bhi aausaheb ne seal karva diye the Jiss vajah se naa main apne paise use Kar sakta tha aur nahi Bank se loan le sakta tha

Bohot saalon baad kahi vo jaakr khule

Lekin jab vo khulein to mere maan ki asha unn dono ke jinda hone ki kahabar ko chod chuki thi

Tia:- I am proud of you malhar I am really proud of you tumne abhi Tak bohot himmat rakhi hai itna Saab hone ke baavjood tumne apni itni himmat rakhi bohot kabiliyat baat hai

Lekin bass dhukh iss baat ka hai tum itne dhukh main the lekin main tumhare saath nahi reh payi I am really sorry for that I am so sorry

Malhar:- aise Kyun keh rahi hoo tumhare saath bhi Kam bura nhi hua tumhari bhi Shaadi tutne ke baad tumne kaafi himmat rakhi

Aur aise to mujhein bhi tumhein sorry bolana farz hum dono ka tha kisi akele ka nahi

Tia:- malhar aaj ek baat kahoon tumse itne saal chupayi hai

Malhar:- Kya baat hai Jo tumne mujhse chupayi aaj tum bhi bol Doon

Tia:- main bhi tumse college ke dino se pyaar karti thi malhar pata hai jab tumhein kuch mahino pehle dekha tha tab shock ho gai kyunki Jiss malhar ko main jaanti this vo to kitna sweet but disciplined aur strict bhi tha jispein college ki saari ladkiyan Marti thi lekin ab tum bilkul vese nahi rahe the malhar

Jab mujhe ye pata Chala tha ki tumhari Shaadi sampada se ho gayi hai to main toot si gayi thi college main to tumse sirf dosti hi Kar payi this lekin kabhi himmat hi nahi Kar payi ki apne pyaar ka izhaar Kar sakoon aur jab phir mene bhi tumhari Shaadi ka sunke ashutosh see Shaadi karne ke liye has Kar di

Lekin hum dono apne rishte main adjust hi nhi Kar paye roj roj ke jhagde hone lage hamare beech aur phir ek din humne mutually decide kiya ki humein divorce le Len chahiye

Phir mene bhi apne carrer par dhyaan Dena shirt Kar Diya aur Sab bhoolne ki koshish karne lagi

Lekin jab tumhein itne saalon baad dekha aur pata Chala ki tumhari Dusri Shaadi ho gayi hai to main chup rahi doobara main nahi chahthi thi ki tumhari Marital life khaarab ho

Malhar gets shocked after listening that Tia loves him from college days and even hide it

Malhar :- Tia lekin tum mujhe ab Bata sakti thi jab nahi bata payi to

Tia :- mene Kahan main nahi chahthi ki tumhari Shaadi kharab ho lekin malhar acha hua mene jab apni Dil ki baat tumse nabi batayi thi

Malhar:- kyun

Tia:- aaj jab kalyani ki aakhoein main tumhare liye vo chinta aur tumhari aakhoein main uske liye pyaar jabhi bhi tum uska naam le rahe the

Sach baaton to main kabhi bhi tumhein kalyani ke jitna pyaar nahi Kar skati thi

Jiss tarah tum dono ek dusre ke liye apne pyaar ke liye kayi baar Bina soche samjhe jaan di haina vo har koi nahi Kar sakta

Tum dono Sach main made for each other hoo

Malhar laughed painfully after listening her

Malhar:- par use to mujhe Darane see hi Kahan phursat hai jabko Dekho mujhe darati rehti hai

By seeing towards the icu where Kalyani is admitted

Dekho ek baar phor milke mujhe chodkar Jane ki koshish Kar rhi thi

Mujhe kuch nahi bataya apne clot ke baarein I'll ll

Aur main bhi use itna gussa tha ki aaj uspein chilla pada

Tia:- malhar main ye nhi kahoongi ki usne joo Kiya vo sahi Kiya lekin doctor me kaha na uski Tabiyat kitni kharab thi

Aur phir jab vo thik hui hogi to usne kisi se bhi contact karne ki koshish isliye nahi ki hogi kyunki vo sabse gussa hogi ki use kisi ne dhoondhe ki koshish nahi ki aur tumse Milne isliye nahi aayi hogi kyunki vo gussa naraz ya nafrat kuch bhi de loon kyunki tumne uspe goli chalai thi aisa use lagta tha

Aur tumhi ne to kahana ki vo kitni bacchon Vali harketein karte Thi

Malhar main jaanti Hoon uski naadani ki vajah se Jo bhi tumhein sehna pada uske baad use koi maaf Nahi karega

Lekin mian ye bhi jaanti hoo ki tum usse kitna pyaar karte hoo

Malhar:- main nahi jaanta Tia abhi Kya hoga

Main usse maaf Kar bhi paaonga ya nahi ya uske maan Kya hai

Lekin itna jarrora jamta Hoon ki use mere kayi sawaolen ke jaawab ab dene honge

Bhale hi koi haq nahi banta Mera uspe

Lekin mere bete ki maa aur mere pyaar ka rishta vo kabhi nahi thukra sakti aur issi naate use ab saare jawab dene honge

Tia:- malhar shaant dimag see kaam Lena

Pls aur apni health mat bigad Lena kalyani ko abhi tumhein hi sambhalna hai

Aur ek baad yaad rakhna Jo galti mene aur ashutosh ne apne rishte main ki ek doosre ko na samjahkar vo tum Matt karna

Main aur vo aajtak bhugat rahe Hain na vo Khush reh saka hai na main

Isliye pls soch samajh Kar Saab karna

Malhar:- main samajh Raha Hoon Tia

Par aaj Jo baat pata chali hai vo hum yahin rehne dete hai pls aapne maan main koi aasha ki Kiran mat

Tia cutted him in between

Tia:- main janti Hoon tum kalyani ki jagah kisi ko nahi de Paoge aur na main vo maangoongi iss rishte agar tum bandh sakte Hoon to sirf kalyani ke saath

Mene ye baat sirf tumse isliye baatayi kyunki main aaj see hamare iss dosti ke rishte main koi baat nahi chupana nahi chahthi thi

Jisse tumhein baad main pata chalke ye lage ki mene bbi tumhein dhoka Diya hai

Aur bhale hi ab Tak main tumhare saath nahi thi lekin aaj see ye wada karti Hoon ki main humesha jindagi main jabhi tumhein jarrorat padegi as a friend humesha khadi miloongi

Malhar:- thank you Tia Mera itna saath dene ke lite aur mujhe sunne ke liye thank you so much

Tia:- acha malhar main chalti hoo Ghar par mummy aai hui hai jaise hi kalyani ko hosh aye pls mujhe Bata Dena

Malhar nooded his head and Tia left from there

After sometime ward boy inform malhar that he can meet kalyani as she gained her consciousness

Malhar goes in the icu to meet kalyani but got emotional after seeing her attached with so many wires and laying like a lifeless soul

Malhar politely pronounce her name

Malhar:- Kalyani...

To be continued......




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Such an emotional chapter laying all the characters underlying motivation in the open.

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