Originally posted by: Wandering_mind
Hey there!
Just read all the parts in the go!
Had been really busy last two weeks so didn't get a chance to comment on this beautiful piece of work!
Same girl same! I didnt even get to respond to all the lovely comments, been so swamped.
This may sound repetitive but I truly love how your words portray the inner turmoil of Asad and Zoya so well! The emotions flow freely in your words, it feels like I can see everything happening in front of me! Keep it coming, because it really makes me want to read more and more from you!
Not repetitive at all! I love hearing words like yours over and over 😳
Coming to the story, I loved the emotional quotient throughout! Both of them were caught up in the battle of heart vs mind, and I loved how you portrayed their restlessness of wanting to know what the other feels. ( Probably it was Zoya who wanted to know it really badly, because well, Asad is slow and stubborn -_-)
Classic Asad but that's him. I somehow always love writing about their confusions beforehand, possibly that's what makes it more worthy when they come together at end.
I always craved a long, sincere apology from Asad. True Asad loved her, but that didn't give him the liberty to disrespect her and always doubt her intentions, her upbringing or at times even her character. I loved to see their love, but a part of me always felt bad for Zoya since she never got an apology she deserved. Thanks for writing this one!
We never got one and it was so frustrating. I always think of them as you and me in daily life. Zo's and Asad's character both didn't permit unnecessary bs. Forever pissed at the lack of self respect.
Asad is a man of few words, so while I didn't expect him to spell out every emotion in his heart, it would have been endearing to see him pour out his heart through a sincere apology! Zoya deserved that, but that's just how Zoya is ...Always forgiving! She always understands him and his unsaid words!
It was hard to make her forgive him, he needed a lil more torture but i figured that wouldnt justify zo's character
I loved the ending too! It's just so Asad! He's always holding on to the last thread of self-control and needs a strong trigger to stop her from leaving him. RIGHT!
Despite having a life-threatening awakening, during the Mangalpur faisco. But my heart goes out to him when I see his fears come to light. He wants to protect her, shield her from every pain he has gone through and always thinks he cannot be good enough for her.
It's times like these where I realize that he in fact respects and values her the most even when his words betray those feelings most of the time. And just like Zoya, my heart goes out to him:(
I KNOWWWW. We all love our Asad at the same time. It's such an intense ,deep character.
Loved it Anu! Please do write more! It's a treat to read your stories because you preserve the essence of the characters and yet give us what we would have liked to see ! Thankyou sooooo much ❤️
P.S. Now that the new season is out, I would like to read something on that too if you are willing to write :)
I'll be honest. Though I loved most parts of qh2, I havent connected to that asya just yet, maybe because the story hasnt let us see their emotional, vulnerable sides. So I dont know if i'll write on that anytime soon but ya never know 🥱
Love,
Shreya
Always a pleasure to hear from you! Be back soonish!
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