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Posted: 4 years ago
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Omg thank you for your kind words you are so sweet! Love purvir hating sakshi for playing them emotionally

Originally posted by: Kaiina

Amazing Narration 👍🏼👏

You're just too good!!

Everything that happened was spot on with their character. I could picture your words coming to life.

You've captured their thoughts & emotions too beautifully. You made me fall for PurVir a lil harder after reading this!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This one is dedicated to @amaraddict hope things get better for you 😊❤️


Purvi and Vir break their kiss and they hug knowing that nothing and no one can separate them now and they’d withstand everybody and won’t leave each other no matter what.


Babbar Sherrrrrrr suddenly they hear Manas and Juhis excited screams and turn to look at the kids. The kids come running and hug both Vir and Purvi. Then they start crying that they got so scared and so upset when they heard their baba had an accident! They wanted to come but daadi and Anjali Chachi were tired so they said they were going to sleep and Sakshi maa said she had a headache so she had her glass of milk and went to sleep too! Purvi is shocked seeing how unattached and unbothered Sakshi was. Kids tell them they called MS and he sent his car with driver to pick them up. Vir is stunned too but doesn’t say anything. He thinks my family and the most important people who love me unconditionally are here with me why should I think abt others. He gets teary eyed and hugs Purvi and kids. He felt his family is complete with them.


MS coughs and comes there. Vir and Purvi get shy and break the hug! MS says “mein bahut khush hun ki finally mere Vir ko uski takkar ki Patni aur uska pyaar mil gaya. Mein tum dono ke saath hun, mein Sakshi se baat karunga, mujhe ajeeb laga jis terhaan usey koi farak naa padha!”


Pur tries to cover up for sakshi saying “shayad unki tabiyat kharaab ho….” Vir raises his hands motioning her to stop talking, he understood what she was trying to do. He looked at her and she looked down knowing she couldn’t cover up for sakshi even if she tried.


Suddenly Juhi’s phone rings. She puts it on speaker, it’s sakshi on the other side. She says “ juhi tum aur manas kahan ho? Mujhe abhi bhuri ne bataya ki tum kahin bahar Gaye ho car mein. Mujhse bina pooche bahar jaane ki tumhari himmat kaise hui” juhi starts crying she says “ maa woh hum baba…”


“Kya baba baba laga rakha hai! Theek hain mukhiji, humne hi MS ko wahan bheja hai unka khayal rakhne ke liye” MS is surprised as Sakshi didn’t say anything to him. Juhi says “sorry maa, hum khud ko rok nahin paaye” sakshi says “ab kya ker sakte hain! Tum log bhi naa! Achcha Maine MS ke rehne ka arrangement pass ke hotel mein kerwa diya hai, unki agle 14 din quarantine mein wahin rehna hoga, tum log bhi unke saath waale kamre mein reh lena, ghar aane se mujhe…mera matlab hai hum sabko khatra ho sakta hai, waise bhi kal shaadi hai, mukhiji to shayad kuch din hospital mein hi rahenge, mein ek naukarani ko bhej doongi.”


Juhi says “maa haathi bhi hamare saath hai”

Sakshi is shocked she says “kya!! yeh Purvi ne kya kiya woh bhi naa ab kal shaadi kaise hogi, Purvi ko phone do”


Purvi takes the phone almost in tears hearing and seeing the rude side of sakshi and feels what a horrible injustice she was going to do with her mukhiji and her kids by sacrificing everything for this woman.


Sakshi “Purvi yeh tumne kya kiya! Kya zaroorat thi tumhein bachon ke saath jaane ki (she thinks Purvi went with kids, doesn’t know Purvi couldn’t stand there for a second hearing mukhiji’s accident and ran bare feat) ab tumhari shaadi kaise hogi, yeh tumne theek nahin kiya!”


Purvi - sakshiji hamein nahin lagta hum yeh shaadi ab ker paayenge. Hum Vipul se baat ker lenge”


Sakshi gets scared and says “haan ab tumhein bhi 14 din quarantine kerna padhega theek hai hum shaadi 14 din ke liye postpone kerwa denge, achcha hai tum wahan ho bachchon ka dhayan dena”


Before Pur could say that she won’t be getting married at all, sakshi cuts the phone. She was scared Purvi would cancel the wedding so didn’t want to give her a chance to say so.


Vir is shocked and upset but he thinks bad times show the real faces of people. The doctor comes and Vir asks him is it ok for him to leave, doctor says you should remain admitted for at least 3-4 days so that we can keep an eye on you. Mukhi says winking at Purvi “Arrey doctor manne bhi ab 14 din quarantine kerna padhega, mukhiyaani hai naa mera achche se khayal rakhne ke liye”

MS couldn’t stop from laughing and coughs knowing what Vir meant!


Purvi gets super embarrassed and blushes red while glaring at Vir knowing very well what he was hinting at…

Edited by Sandy7722 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Wow this was so amazing.... Loved it❤️

Keep writing💕

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it!

Please update soon☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sandy7722

This one is dedicated to @amaraddict hope things get better for you 😊❤️


Purvi and Vir break their kiss and they hug knowing that nothing and no one can separate them now and they’d withstand everybody and won’t leave each other no matter what.


Babbar Sherrrrrrr suddenly they hear Manas and Juhis excited screams and turn to look at the kids. The kids come running and hug both Vir and Purvi. Then they start crying that they got so scared and so upset when they heard their baba had an accident! They wanted to come but daadi and Anjali Chachi were tired so they said they were going to sleep and Sakshi maa said she had a headache so she had her glass of milk and went to sleep too! Purvi is shocked seeing how unattached and unbothered Sakshi was. Kids tell them they called MS and he sent his car with driver to pick them up. Vir is stunned too but doesn’t say anything. He thinks my family and the most important people who love me unconditionally are here with me why should I think abt others. He gets teary eyed and hugs Purvi and kids. He felt his family is complete with them.


MS coughs and comes there. Vir and Purvi get shy and break the hug! MS says “mein bahut khush hun ki finally mere Vir ko uski takkar ki Patni aur uska pyaar mil gaya. Mein tum dono ke saath hun, mein Sakshi se baat karunga, mujhe ajeeb laga jis terhaan usey koi farak naa padha!”


Pur tries to cover up for sakshi saying “shayad unki tabiyat kharaab ho….” Vir raises his hands motioning her to stop talking, he understood what she was trying to do. He looked at her and she looked down knowing she couldn’t cover up for sakshi even if she tried.


Suddenly Juhi’s phone rings. She puts it on speaker, it’s sakshi on the other side. She says “ juhi tum aur manas kahan ho? Mujhe abhi bhuri ne bataya ki tum kahin bahar Gaye ho car mein. Mujhse bina pooche bahar jaane ki tumhari himmat kaise hui” juhi starts crying she says “ maa woh hum baba…”


“Kya baba baba laga rakha hai! Theek hain mukhiji, humne hi MS ko wahan bheja hai unka khayal rakhne ke liye” MS is surprised as Sakshi didn’t say anything to him. Juhi says “sorry maa, hum khud ko rok nahin paaye” sakshi says “ab kya ker sakte hain! Tum log bhi naa! Achcha Maine MS ke rehne ka arrangement pass ke hotel mein kerwa diya hai, unki agle 14 din quarantine mein wahin rehna hoga, tum log bhi unke saath waale kamre mein reh lena, ghar aane se mujhe…mera matlab hai hum sabko khatra ho sakta hai, waise bhi kal shaadi hai, mukhiji to shayad kuch din hospital mein hi rahenge, mein ek naukarani ko bhej doongi.”


Juhi says “maa haathi bhi hamare saath hai”

Sakshi is shocked she says “kya!! yeh Purvi ne kya kiya woh bhi naa ab kal shaadi kaise hogi, Purvi ko phone do”


Purvi takes the phone almost in tears hearing and seeing the rude side of sakshi and feels what a horrible injustice she was going to do with her mukhiji and her kids by sacrificing everything for this woman.


Sakshi “Purvi yeh tumne kya kiya! Kya zaroorat thi tumhein bachon ke saath jaane ki (she thinks Purvi went with kids, doesn’t know Purvi couldn’t stand there for a second hearing mukhiji’s accident and ran bare feat) ab tumhari shaadi kaise hogi, yeh tumne theek nahin kiya!”


Purvi - sakshiji hamein nahin lagta hum yeh shaadi ab ker paayenge. Hum Vipul se baat ker lenge”


Sakshi gets scared and says “haan ab tumhein bhi 14 din quarantine kerna padhega theek hai hum shaadi 14 din ke liye postpone kerwa denge, achcha hai tum wahan ho bachchon ka dhayan dena”


Before Pur could say that she won’t be getting married at all, sakshi cuts the phone. She was scared Purvi would cancel the wedding so didn’t want to give her a chance to say so.


Vir is shocked and upset but he thinks bad times show the real faces of people. The doctor comes and Vir asks him is it ok for him to leave, doctor says you should remain admitted for at least 3-4 days so that we can keep an eye on you. Mukhi says winking at Purvi “Arrey doctor manne bhi ab 14 din quarantine kerna padhega, mukhiyaani hai naa mera achche se khayal rakhne ke liye”

MS couldn’t stop from laughing and coughs knowing what Vir meant!


Purvi gets super embarrassed and blushes red while glaring at Vir knowing very well what he was hinting at…



Ok! Firstly I am absolutely good ❤️

Thank you so much for this 🤗🤗

Just loved loved it.. I love how you are portraying Sakshi in the story, Uninterested and unbothered for Vir and his happiness that's how she actually is but I don't think we are gonna get anything similar to this in the show 🤦‍♀️


Aage I could sense some amazing moments between my muchkins please please update soon eagerly waiging for it

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awww am glad all is good with you! 😊❤️
will try to update during the weekend too late at my end now 12:01am 🤦‍♀️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Will try doing it over the weekend, thank you 😊❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is beautifully penned! Wish makers had gone this route! Hating the current track! My heart breaks seeing the two lovers sacrificing their love.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful beautiful story dear.. ❤❤

Loved every part.. ❤

Loved the way you portrait purvir emotions and the situation.. Loved it.. ❤

Hoping against hope ki show mai bhi kuch aisa dikhaye.. Lekin pata hai writer saba hai.. 🥺🥺🥺

Thank you for such wonderful story.. ❤

Please please update soonst.. 😝

And write more dear..

Loved to read more from you.. ❤❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awww you made my day! Will definitely try to write more! 😊❤️

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