ShiVi OS Series: Reimagining Them [Part3Page24 06/08/2021] - Page 16

Question:

Hello my jaans 🤗 it's been a hot minute since I've updated this series and I wanted to work on it this week but I'm a bit confused.

What scene do you think I should do next? Chronologically? Some of them seem a bit small to do or should I still do them?

Here's the index that raindropsroses made for us for your reference: [CLICK]

Let me know your thoughts 😳

Whatever you prefer

If that scene is not significant than skip it

Dance won't have much of a monologue or events in itself, so if you write that, you'll probably need to add new things, so your wish.

Proxy samajh lo is also rather small scene, I doubt it could turn into an os, you can always try though.

Vegetable scene, Raavi is kinda more engrossed in Dev, but its worth trying.

Knife is scene is nice, you should definitely do that one.

Its your choice in the end of course, just offering my suggestions😳

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

Question:

Hello my jaans 🤗 it's been a hot minute since I've updated this series and I wanted to work on it this week but I'm a bit confused.

What scene do you think I should do next? Chronologically? Some of them seem a bit small to do or should I still do them?

Here's the index that raindropsroses made for us for your reference: [CLICK]

Let me know your thoughts 😳

Shiva throwing haldi on maami

Raavi supporting Shiva against maami

Kids dancing around Dhara

I personally feel all these can be connected... They are few happy moments between these two..

Something revolving around haldi.. Maybe mixture of them putting haldi on each other and the one where pot breaks and he protects her from getting injured

If the scenes are too short, you can combine them maybe or whatever you prefer of course, we would love to read anything you write for us🤗

I want a reimagine of mehndi scene.. Shiva was so intense there.

You can do the scenes in any way, your preference really. But one of my favorite scenes in the whole show was the "I can be Shiva's proxy" scene. I dunno, it just touched my heart that they are there for each other always, regardless of their fights.

As an idea, you could have the vegetable throwing scene, explain what happens post-vegetable throwing, and then have one of the characters, maybe Krish, tell Shiva that Raavi stood as his proxy and describes his emotions as he reflects on those words. Then after that scene, you could make the knife scene be a lot more playful where he is essentially teasing her for calling herself "Shiva's proxy." And then when you get to the scene where Shiva finds out about the Dev-Raavi wedding, you could explain how he feels betrayed as just a few days ago, she was so ready to represent him.

You could scrap these ideas. but those are my thoughts.

Originally posted by: SandhiaM

Awhh super cute. Love this concept 💕

thank you so much jaan 🤗

Originally posted by: Dreamer3003

This was beautiful

I so loved this scene in the episode😆

These 2 are adorably funny🤣

Well written❤️

-Aishu-

thank you so much meri jaan for reading 🤗

I'm not one for childhood scenes to be very honest but ShiVi have completely changed my perspective on them 😆