ShiVi OS ft Dhara- Ghuroor (pride) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Foxii

How beautiful was this

I loved the Flashback were Raavi had an outburst and Shiva listened and promised that she could come to him

Thank you🌹🌹🌹

I really hope that they would speak! They would just speak then it be so good.

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Thank you so much for always being so warm with your words. In this story though Dev and Rish actually helped Dhara and Gautam to push these both.🌹

Ohh they were helping? Woh last ko Dev aise chalagaya ki ab tu Raavi ku kuch nahi bolega ? Toh mai confuse hogai😅

Your stories always fill me with the same warmth

Originally posted by: Gurikaur_ginni

👏👏❤️❤️

M still crying😭😭😭

Tissue for you....

I want this to happen in the show

Me too! Kaash they would speak.

Loved it🤗

Thank you for sharing this piece😳

Thank you so much and my pleasure🌹

P.S.

You always make me cry 😆

Aww. Not my intention. When did I make you cry?

Next time, I'll need tissue box before reading your work🤪

Hehehe hadn’t read this when I typed the first sentence...

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

I have cried bucket of tears reading MINE😒

Though I am silent reader most of the time 😆i am so lazy🤪

This was very beautiful! It makes me feeling so wistful. I loved the part you wrote about how the first right they exercised on each other was around caring for each other: physically and emotionally. Loved the way Raavi poured her heart and Shiva just listened. Their bond has evolved so beautifully with time. And this is what I want with slow burn. Slow progress with care, acceptance, respect, and then love. Loved their simple confession at the end and the way defendwd each other. Truly both have something to be proud of for being with each other.

And Dev-Rishita re hopeless. It irks me to no end that's Rishita is never asked to apologize and always gets away with it. I wish Shiva had made her apologize. It's like for all of them only Dhara's feelings matter. Rishita should apologize for what she said about Shiva and the way she behaved with Raavi. Dev should apologize for all the crap he did, but they get a free pass cause they're older.

So thank you for writing this! If anything, someone's calling out spade as spade.

this was lovely! truly enjoyed ❤️

Originally posted by: Scarysea

Ohh they were helping? Woh last ko Dev aise chalagaya ki ab tu Raavi ku kuch nahi bolega ? Toh mai confuse hogai😅

Your stories always fill me with the same warmth

Aww thank you so much. I dunno your name so... SS?

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

this was lovely! truly enjoyed ❤️

Thank you! I an glad you enjoyed...🌹🌹🌹

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

This was very beautiful! It makes me feeling so wistful. I loved the part you wrote about how the first right they exercised on each other was around caring for each other: physically and emotionally. Loved the way Raavi poured her heart and Shiva just listened. Their bond has evolved so beautifully with time. And this is what I want with slow burn. Slow progress with care, acceptance, respect, and then love. Loved their simple confession at the end and the way defendwd each other. Truly both have something to be proud of for being with each other.

And Dev-Rishita re hopeless. It irks me to no end that's Rishita is never asked to apologize and always gets away with it. I wish Shiva had made her apologize. It's like for all of them only Dhara's feelings matter. Rishita should apologize for what she said about Shiva and the way she behaved with Raavi. Dev should apologize for all the crap he did, but they get a free pass cause they're older.

So thank you for writing this! If anything, someone's calling out spade as spade.

Hi ML!

Thank you so much!🌹🌹

They didn’t fall in love and also have kind of a history so I just thought that maybe they should become confidantes first you know. The go to person for the other.

The whole OS was based on that... Pride.

Actually there is a confusion because even Scarysea thought here Dev And Rishi are negative but actualy Rishi Dev were just part of Dhara’s plan n were helping. Maybe I wasn’t clear. But yes Rishita is a brat in the show.🙂

I do hope Raavi replies to her nicely. But low expectations...