ShiVi OS ft Dhara- Ghuroor (pride) - Page 2

Wow ! This is a masterpiece.

Loved it to the core.❤️

Hats off to you.👏👏

This OS is truly a treat.

Honestly I don't know how to phrase the extent to which I loved this OS.

Do write more like this.

CVs should learn from this gem of a writing.

This was so beautiful. My eyes welled up, it felt like a fairytale. 

The emotions I felt while reading it is symbolic of the name of your handle on IF. You created a valley of peace in my ❤. No amount of praise can suffice... It was just pure bliss.

Beautiful ❤️

What a emotionally charged OS !!! 👏 I could actually feel Raavi's emotions.

My Fav line :

If Shiva was the epitome of sacrifice and obedience, Raavi was the epitome of forgiveness, strength and care.

This really is so true.

Awh this was so beautiful 💕💕

Hope something like this happens in the show, but not the two years before they tell they loved each other. 😂

How beautiful was this

I loved the Flashback were Raavi had an outburst and Shiva listened and promised that she could come to him

Originally posted by: bhavna101

You made me cry😭😭

Tissue?

Initially they were sad tears and by then end they became happy😭

🍫chocolate then. Mun meetha ho jaye.

But I am still crying because this OS was really really beautiful.

Thank you so much Bhavna🌹

I don't have the words to tell you how much I loved this. So I will just tell you that I, loved reading this OS.

That does the trick. Thank you🙂

Thanks for this OS.🤗❤️

My pleasure

Originally posted by: Scarysea

This turned out super good ..the progress with time was great ..Them standing up for each other was great ..I am starting to hate Dev and Rishita even in stories ..beautiful story as always

Thank you so much for always being so warm with your words. In this story though Dev and Rish actually helped Dhara and Gautam to push these both.🌹

Originally posted by: Transference

This is so beautifully written! I wish the show explored even half of what you've written so far!

Thank you🌺🌺

Frustration with what they are not showing usually flows through what we write🤣

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

This was so beautifully written ❤️

If only Dhara had half this much sense in the show, we would be enjoying it so much more!!

Loved this so much 🤗

Thank you Ananya!🙂🌺🌺

Dhara has turned out to be the hallucination queen. Hope they do not degrade that character anymore. She had been so much put together before.

👏👏❤️❤️

M still crying😭😭😭

I want this to happen in the show

Loved it🤗

Thank you for sharing this piece😳

P.S.

You always make me cry 😆

Next time, I'll need tissue box before reading your work🤪