ShiVi OS ft Dhara- Ghuroor (pride) - Page 3

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful os❤️🤗

No words for it, loved the way Shivi's relationship progressed❤️

Thank you!!🌹🌹🌹

Slow and steady...

Originally posted by: Mus@

Awesome, beautiful, loved it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Loved how beautifully you wrote the story.

Thank you so much!

I am glad you liked it!🌹

Originally posted by: D_e_s_t_i_n_y

Beautiful OS❤️

Thank you!🌹

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

This was soooo beautifully writen...

I just loved there progress...

The last part was amazing...

Thank you so much.🌹

The last part where Dhara tells them about giving them her pride was the first line that actually came to my head. This OS developed on that line.

Originally posted by: Swathu

Woww!!! Excellent story👏👏

The way they stood for each other was beautiful

Dhara stepping away so that their relationship develops was really thoughtful👍🏼

Loved the story❤️❤️

By the way, if you don't mind me asking, what's your name??

Thank you🌹

They need space and she needs to concentrate on her own life too.

Call me Maahi.

Originally posted by: ananya269

Wow! This was so beautiful ❤️

Thank you A2🌹🌹🌹🙂🙂

Originally posted by: lourel24

I don't know what should I comment that it would suffice the beauty of the story n your writing style .just beautiful.loved it loved it.loved it.loved it.

Thank you to the power four and your warm words are quite sufficient. I am glad you liked it😛🌹🌹🌺

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Wow ! This is a masterpiece.

Wow thats too high of a praise.

Loved it to the core.❤️

Thank you

Hats off to you.👏👏

Thank you again

This OS is truly a treat.

Honestly I don't know how to phrase the extent to which I loved this OS.

I am glad you like it

Do write more like this.

Will try my best

CVs should learn from this gem of a writing.

🤣🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: bluecool

Beautiful ❤️

What a emotionally charged OS !!! 👏 I could actually feel Raavi's emotions.

There. Thats success then. A reader feeling the words is the tell tale of a writers success🙂🙂🙂

My Fav line :

If Shiva was the epitome of sacrifice and obedience, Raavi was the epitome of forgiveness, strength and care.

This really is so true.

She has forgiven and she is strong. Also very caring. So had to give them both tribute..

Originally posted by: SandhiaM

Awh this was so beautiful 💕💕

Hope something like this happens in the show, but not the two years before they tell they loved each other. 😂

Thank youu!!!🌺

I hope so too.