ShiVi OS ft Dhara- Ghuroor (pride) - Page 5

Originally posted by: AppleOfEye

This was super beautiful VP!! ❤️❤️ Totally Loved the whole story! And I so wish ki show mei bhi aisa dikhaye🥺❤️

Thank you so much AE. Means a lot to me. I am glad you enjoyed.

Lets see ki aisa kuch hota hai ya nahin. But low expectations...😂

Originally posted by: Gurikaur_ginni

I have cried bucket of tears reading MINE😒

Though I am silent reader most of the time 😆i am so lazy🤪

🤣🤣🤣 Actually I wanted to make people cry in Mine!!! Hehe. And I am glad people did cry in it!

No worries sometimes I read silently and cannot comment because of the same reason too. Or sometimes I just feel words do not express my feelings🤣

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Hi ML!

Thank you so much!🌹🌹

They didn’t fall in love and also have kind of a history so I just thought that maybe they should become confidantes first you know. The go to person for the other.

The whole OS was based on that... Pride.

Actually there is a confusion because even Scarysea thought here Dev And Rishi are negative but actualy Rishi Dev were just part of Dhara’s plan n were helping. Maybe I wasn’t clear. But yes Rishita is a brat in the show.🙂

I do hope Raavi replies to her nicely. But low expectations...

Sorry, I misunderstood the last bit. The way Dev and Rishita left, it seemed like it was just GauRa's plan. But good to know they were in on it and truly don't feel what they said about Shiva.

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Aww thank you so much. I dunno your name so... SS?

Oh my name is Bastabika ..nickname Chiki ..scarysea I just gave it for sake of it🤣

So reading this made me cry 🤧. How beautifully you've given them character growths, how beautifully you've binded them slowly with each other without compromising their own identity and how beautifully they've understood the importance of each other! It was truly stunning. What a beautiful OS! ❤❤

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Sorry, I misunderstood the last bit. The way Dev and Rishita left, it seemed like it was just GauRa's plan. But good to know they were in on it and truly don't feel what they said about Shiva.

Yeah I guess it wasn’t very clear. 🤷🏻‍♀️

Originally posted by: Scarysea

Oh my name is Bastabika ..nickname Chiki ..scarysea I just gave it for sake of it🤣

Chiki! Yes I agree that it was confusing in the end😂

Originally posted by: Miss_SR

So reading this made me cry 🤧. How beautifully you've given them character growths, how beautifully you've binded them slowly with each other without compromising their own identity and how beautifully they've understood the importance of each other! It was truly stunning. What a beautiful OS! ❤❤

Thank you soo much SR🙂🙂🌺

I loved this one

What an idea❤️

Every emotion was portrayed perfectly.

But I wanted to see how they spent there first anniversary😃

Otherwise on top😳

This is really well done!! I loved reading about how their relationship progressed!