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Posted: 4 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: wamavasant

unres❤️

Majnu sabherwal 🤣🤣

Looks like kafi sari cheezein tumhare TS k first part ki puri hongi 😆

Beautiful update

Rishta wahi soch nayi

Shaurya being the ultimate bahurani 😆

Btw he was adorable and anokhi couldn't resist his charm.

How i wish we get so many kisses in the upcoming episodes 😆


Haha😆

Thank you Wama!!

I have updated the second part...it's pretty long and intense...give it a read when you are free🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#52

Thanks for tagging, Rosh... err.. Anu. 🤣


Will try and read this tonight.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Thanks for tagging, Rosh... err.. Anu. 🤣


Will try and read this tonight.


Haha😆

Yeah...np...take your time. This one's also as long as bepannaah one😆

First part is on first page, I forgot to tag you yesterday.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#54

Oh my god.....this is so beautiful ❤️

I am literally bursting with happiness rn.

I wished they actually showed something like this in the show. This had everything that I would love to see. Completely in-line with the show story and the character archs are beautifully maintained. 👏

Hands down, this is the best story I have ever read on ShaKhi ☺️

Anuja, what an amazing writer you are! 🤗

Pls do keep writing. Will love to read more of your stories ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#55

Omg! This is soo awesome Anuja.. how did you manage to write all this in such little time!!?? 👏👏🙌🙌🙌 Hats off.. Loved the writing , the dialogues, the details.. everything is just so perfect! ❤️ You really did take us through and emotional roller coaster ride, starting with the ladai and their much needed heart to heart talk.Followed by the passion.. and Anokhi Sherni Sabherwal defending her husband against Shagun!! 😍🔥❤️😁LOVED IT!! Wow we are blessed with such incredible talents here.. so thankful for sharing this with us !! 🤗🤗 Keeping on keeping on!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: pratikshaa100

Oh my god.....this is so beautiful ❤️

I am literally bursting with happiness rn.

I wished they actually showed something like this in the show. This had everything that I would love to see. Completely in-line with the show story and thr character archs are beautifully maintained. 👏

Hands down, this is the best story I have ever read on ShaKhi ☺️

What an amazing writer you are! 🤗

Pls do keep writing. Will love to read more of your stories ❤️

@bold

So totally agree! It felt so real while reading . and the feels! 😍🙌👏👏

Akshu you are no less too! 😁❤️
All you gals are so talented !❤️❤️
Amazing stuff.. please do keep writing and sharing


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Posted: 4 years ago
#57

Wow wow 👏👏👏


Sach mein maza hi aa gayw


Sab kuch tha ismein, kaash serial mein bhi aisa kuch ho, haayyyyeeee


Wonderfully penned. Too good 👍👌


Bas aise hi likhte raho, jo serial mein milta dekhne ko wo aise enjoy karwate raho humein.


Thank you for writing it so Wonderfully.


Love Preet ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#58

Anujaaaa!! ...I loved it so muchh ..Hatsoff to you girl 👏👏.. What an amazing story ❤️❤️

While reading this I can actually imagine shakhi.. It is so so good.

You have included everything which I wanted from this delhi track.. That hotel room wala I was thinking yesterday only and you have added that also

You write so well.. Please write more often..💖😍

You are so talented 👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
#59

Take a bow Anuja.🤗👏

Loved it so much!!!!


You have written so beautifully. N in line with the show, the characters and their character graphs.
It was gripping and emotional.
Want to see this happening on the show so badly. Both of them baring their souls and past pain to each other. Both of them trying to understand why the other is like this.


I am so happy that you showed Shaurya changing and willing to change for her, willing to understand her and willing to delve into the past so that the same doesn’t happen to them. Him understanding and feeling her pain is very dear to me. But I am very happy you didn’t completely change his character, his possessiveness and stubbornness is an intricate part of his character, and it can’t be changed overnight, till his abandonment issues are settled.


I loved that you made Anokhi give words to her pain and insecurities. She never talks about it. She never opens up. I am so glad you made her tell her reasons behind her conditions. Glad that you made her break down. Being strong doesn’t mean you can’t break down. Strength is allowing yourself to break down and then get back up again. She needed to release the emotions she has suppressed for so long. And I when she took a stand for their love in front of Shagun, I could see our Jugni there. N also that she could see through Devi’s manipulation.

They have a long way to go. But they are on the right path.


Please send this to the CV’s Anuja. 🤣🤣

They need writers like you.

Thank you much for writing this, took me away a little from the gloomy mood I am in. 🤗❤️❤️


Please continue writing more Yaar. You have an amazing talent. ❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#60

Anuja!🤗

Its a treat!!!

I loved it! Every part of it!

The conversation concerning their painful past and childhood.

The rain sequence 😳

Shagun ki beizzatti!

Oh Goodness, what a twist you wrote there! It was soooo unexpected! I like that!

And the sindoor ending part is just tooooo cute!

I love love love it!

Delightful reading time i had!

❤️

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