Drive to Delhi - TS - Page 9

Originally posted by: anjali9996

Fantastic update, very well written

Loved how shaurya expressed his feelings

Pls do write more on the current track

u r an awesome writer man!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much❤️

I'll definitely write more as and when possible 🙂

Originally posted by: IFLove

Thank you so much Lavs☺️

Their emotional conversation is really long due in the show!! I await it more than any romantic scene!

No matter how much this possessive behaviour could be irritating in real life, show mein we love his possessiveness, no?😆 what's SS without possessiveness😆 He needs to take a journey down the lanes of past and I can't wait for that track to kick in!!

Anokhi needs to emotionally open up. This is one of the very few FLs who has cried the least in ITV show. I don't expect her to keep crying to show her sadness over anything, but I want to see her breaking over something. If nothing could break her till now, only Shaurya's betrayal (maybe as misunderstood by her) can break her. And the worst thing is, she wouldn't have shaurya with her when she breaks down. I wish this is not the scenario! I want to see her breaking down only in the arms of Shaurya. This might happen if Bhallas come into the picture and papaji does something unthinkable.

Anokhi understanding devgun's game is my dream. She very well knows what Devi is. So it shouldn't be difficult for her to understand it. And once she understands, I don't want her to become typical jagga jasoos FL of itv and setting on some mission of exposing them alone keeping the ML in darki want her to be the guiding light in the life of Shaurya and it should be only shaurya exposing his own people!!

I wish I could send this to CVs...but serial ek week mein khatam ho jaata😆 So let's have a faith in them that they do what they are best at!!😊

Even I want when Anokhi has a breakdown, it should be in Shaurya’s arms. They both need to build that trust with each other. I don’t want her to while away crying in every episode( I hate that). But even strong people need to let go at times.

Yes please. No Jagga Jasoos type nonsense. I want her to gently guide Shaurya towards the truth. Gently coz it’s gonna break him apart.


Yaar of the cvs even take 20-30 % from your story, we will have a wonderful treat. But still, I have hopes from our cvs. They have been mostly balanced. Just wish they get done with Shagun already.

OMG!!!!!!

Lemme scream first.............

What was that whole update?? So many surprises, shocking elements & when I would guess the scene might go this way, it went the other. The Shagun fiasco majorly!

It felt so nice seeing ShaKhi's banter 😄 ShaKhi & their famous tu tu main main is always epic & you nailed it. Did the long hair dialogue come from DeVir's interview? Mujhe wohi yaad araha tha 😆😆🤣🤣

Anyway.. How things escalated quickly, from being lovey dovey to coming across their major issues, Anokhi's dreams being neglected by her father, how Shaurya went emotional for her sorrows, then him making it about himself (I liked that particular portion loads, its the same process in his head in the show too You've just written it perfectly to set the scene & showed his vulnerability), how Anokhi understood his insecurities, all the scenes were beautifully written

Their love for each other is so much that they want o recognise the real individual within them to live the life they want together. Its precious & it was made special by you when they kissed to seal the deal ❤️ Such a warm & sweet scene followed & I might've giggled during the glass moment. Best part was while imagining that scene as if real, made me wish we could get such a scene. Even if we don't get, you made it possible here 🤗

Shaurya & Anokhi being so comfortable had my heart. His coat for her, him rubbing her feet & kissing them (Ahhh!!! 💛) & finally sleeping in each others comfort 💙

Whou! I didn't expect Anokhi to backlash Shagun like that 😂😂 That was real smooth & she was on fire 🔥🔥 Glad you didn't make them reveal Shaurya applied sindoor on her head Such things are meant to be kept as secrets 🤗 Its their private moment!

Finally as Shaurya revealed the truth to Anokhi, I can say this is how I want him to tell her about it. That engagement is downright trash, where he made Shagun wear the ring on the middle finger (See the irony ) & himself forced her fingers to make him wear his 😂😂🤣🤣 Kya nautanki tha... 🤡🤡🤠🤠😝😝

Anyway Anuja, you're a really good & understanding writer. Specifically the plot you've carried out ended so well. Keep writing more work & if possible tag me too! Really enjoyed this story!

Stay safe & keep on writing!

It was an awesome read.Hope they would show Anokhi dealing with Shagun in this manner.You all are such amazing writers.keep it up 💕💕

I really wish they show like this in the show but happy you wrote it.. I loved it so much. .I really want Anokhi to answer shagun like this.

Awwwsome is the word, you guys write so nicely that you should be with writers, hats off, will love to read more stuff from you