Take a bow Anuja.๐ค๐
Loved it so much!!!!
You have written so beautifully. N in line with the show, the characters and their character graphs.
It was gripping and emotional.
Want to see this happening on the show so badly. Both of them baring their souls and past pain to each other. Both of them trying to understand why the other is like this.
I am so happy that you showed Shaurya changing and willing to change for her, willing to understand her and willing to delve into the past so that the same doesnโt happen to them. Him understanding and feeling her pain is very dear to me. But I am very happy you didnโt completely change his character, his possessiveness and stubbornness is an intricate part of his character, and it canโt be changed overnight, till his abandonment issues are settled.
I loved that you made Anokhi give words to her pain and insecurities. She never talks about it. She never opens up. I am so glad you made her tell her reasons behind her conditions. Glad that you made her break down. Being strong doesnโt mean you canโt break down. Strength is allowing yourself to break down and then get back up again. She needed to release the emotions she has suppressed for so long. And I when she took a stand for their love in front of Shagun, I could see our Jugni there. N also that she could see through Deviโs manipulation.
They have a long way to go. But they are on the right path.
Please send this to the CVโs Anuja. ๐คฃ๐คฃ
They need writers like you.
Thank you much for writing this, took me away a little from the gloomy mood I am in. ๐คโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Please continue writing more Yaar. You have an amazing talent. โค๏ธโค๏ธ