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Not so happy ending

Aey dil dil ki duniya me aisa haal bhi hota hain

Andar koi hasta hainbahar koi rota hain

Raghav Pallavi were leaving to Pallavi home but both are very silent and no one uttering any word becoz Raghav know Pallavi need sometime and space and he didn't force her to say anything he knew whenever she will feel she herself will come to him and Pallavi is not able to say anything she didn't even remember that Raghav is with her what she remember that what happen just while ago and it was unbelievable and unexpected for her, she just want that whatever has happened that's nothing but her bad dream no not bad dream but worst nightmare. One night has changed everything for her and her whole life her dream everything collapsed that dream which she saw for her life, her life was depending on that one dream.


R : Pallavi, Pallavi

P : no response

R : shaker her Pallavi

P : coming out from her chain of thoughts what ???

R : wo tumhara ghar aa gaya

P : haan ghar aa gaya and look at towards her home but she doesn't want to go at her home she cant stay there becoz her worst nightmare will haunt her and she just want to run away from that and she scares she cant bear that and will die soon nope she is not scare of dying but she doesn't want life like this.


R : Pallavi chale


Pallavi look at him helplessly Raghav understand what is she going through and just took her hand and led him towards her home and she was reculantly went with him after reaching to her home she sat down and Raghav brought water for her but she refused but Raghav forced and she drank water and she again went to her thoughts and kept quite that's enough for Raghav he can bear anything but not Pallavi's silence she is not the person who kept quite for so long but today seems ages she talk anything except yes or no and he just want to break her silence by any how


R : Pallavi please say something but still she just stare him Pallavi I really cant bear your silence Pallavi taking her hand I know what u are going through but you have to come out from these phase


P : how will I come out from these Raghav ??


R : Pallavi one day you will


P : I cant Raghav becoz its not phase but my life


R : Pallavi its not ur whole life but the worst phase and u have to come out from that phase be realistic Pallavi


P : realistic ??? that was reality what I wanted and that's ended and you are saying this to me


R : Pallavi zindagi me ek sapna toot jaane se zindagi nahi rukti


P : Raghav wo meri zindagi tha mera sapna meri zindagi tha maine kabhi koi sapna nahi dekha tha bas ek hi sapna wo bhi toot gaya ab to mere paas jeene ka koi maksad hi nahi


R : just shut up Pallavi, Pallavi this is life and all dream don't come true and life has to move on and u have to accept that and Pallavi ek dream toot gaya to naya sapna bhi to dekh sakti ho aur aisa kyun sochti ho koi nahi tumhare aayi baba hain tumhare dost hain amma hain aur aur main bhi to hoon tumhara ghamandi hi sahi lekin dost to hoon


Pallavi was still not convinced right now she was so much in that broken dream she forgot important persons in her life she is just looking towards her broken dream but not those person who is with her to give strength in this broken dream but we cant blame her becoz if anyone had been her phase they might have reacted same way but Raghav want her to come out from this phase and be alive and bubbly like earlier and she was so frustrated with her he just shouted on her


R : for god shake Pallavi why just cant you see that who is important in ur life and just crying love that dream be realistic and practical and its not necessary all dream should come and who know there is some better store for you just try to forgot and move on in life and becoz life is beautiful ahead and I want my happy and bubbly Pallavi back


P : this was limit for Pallavi and she just shouted on him bas Raghav tum kya samjhoge meri situation tumne, tum kabhi nahi samaj sakte ke main kis daur se gujar rahi hoon main insaan hoon koi khilona nahi ke humesh hasti rahoon mujh me feelings hain aur mujhe bhi hurt hota hain aur tum chahte ho ke main pehle jaisi ban jau meri zindagi pehle jaisi nahi rahi ke main pehle jaisi ho jau tum jante to ho ke mere saath kya hua hain aur tum phir bhi keh rahe ho be realistic and move on but I cant Raghav I m not toy and have feeling I get hurt and today I hurt becoz today I lost my dream for forever I lost my love my Mandar and u expect from me to move on in life why don't trying to understand my feeling ohh sorry how could u understand my feeling u don't have heart and u never love anyone be realistic my dream was my reality and I am not like you u will never understand feeling of love becoz for you love is nothing but stupid thing where girl and boy do timepass with each other and left and move on u will never understand becoz u never love anyone and please leave me on my condition i just want to stay alone


Raghav was really hurt with her words more than words he was hurt becoz it was said by Pallavi her best friend who knew him from inside out and she is saying this


R : he utter words after coming out from his shock and said Pallavi u need rest and take care and just go & sleep and left that place and Pallavi collapsed on her couch and cried cried and cried and slept there only

Aey dil dil ki duniya me aisa haal bhi hota hain

Andar koi hasta hain bahar koi rota hain


Raghav was walking towards her home and it was raining heavily buthe was not cared and just walking in

heavy rain and Pallavi words were ringing in his mind he wont understand love and her feeling becoz he never love anyone


Pallavi how could she think about me like this how ???


He started to run but doesn't know where is he going but he was just running running and thinking about Pallavi words and stop and bend on his knee and shouted loudly and Pallavi i can understand ur love ur feeling u are the person who taught me how live u are the only person who is my friend and know me so well and understand my silence its only u who show me important of life and love, Pallavi I can feeling ur love becoz u are my best friend and yes I didn't love anyone but you only becoz of you I feel love I know love and I love and I can understand how u feel whenever you see Mandar and Keerti together becoz I went through that phase and I know its not easy to move on becoz I myself couldn't move on but I am used to this life but I don't want to go through same Pallavi I just want you to move on either with me or without me but just ur happiness


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part 2

Raghav reached at his home and SA was shocked to see him like that all messy and tired more than physically he was looking tired emotionally


AMMA : Raghav kya hua beta sab theekhain na kya hua tum aur aise


R : woh who kuch nahi maa main party me bahut nacha na to thak gaya hoon to aaram ki jarurat hain main jakar fresh hokar aata hoon aur aap so jayiye apko kal office bhi jana hain aur apne kamere ki taraf chala gaya


Amma to herself kuch to gadbad hain pata lagana padega


Raghav came out after freshening up and he was lost in his own world


AMMA : Raghav garma garam coffee pee lou will feel better


R : maa aapne kyun takleef ki maine kaha than a main theek aur waise bhi mera mood nahi coffee peene ka


AMMA : haye re mere bete ke paas mere liye time nahi hain maine socha ki uske saath kuch aur time spend karu lekin wo hain ke mujhe bhaga raha hain haye re bas yehi din baaki reh gaya hain kahi koi GF to nahi mil gayi ???


R : amma tum bhi na puri ki puri nautanki ho aisa kuch nahi hain lao chalo coffe peete hain


AMMA : ab mera mood nahi hain


R : lekin mera hain aur main chahta hoon ke tum piyo mere saath aur koi argument nahi chahiye


AMMA : ok sir ji


R : u know what maa tum puri nautanki ho aur Pallavi to tumhari carbon copy hain


Mention of Pallavi name he again became quite and amma understood that matter is related to Pallavi, Raghav never said that he loves Pallavi to any one not even amma but after all she is mom and she was the first one who understood that Raghav loves Pallavi


AMMA : kya hua Raghav Pallavi se jagda hua hain kya ?


R : nahin to maa


AMMA : Raghav jab tum jhuth nahi bol pate to bolte hi kyun ho batao kya hua ???


R : maa wo and he narrates everything to her whatever happened at evening and amma was shocked to hear that


Maa mujhe Pallavi ki bahut chinta horahi hain pata nahi wo kaise bahar aayegi is daur se mujhe to samaj hi nahi aa raha ke usko kaise sambhalu aaj uski halat mujhse dekhi nahi gayi itni chup itni lifeless kabhi nahi thi wo mujhe samaj nahi aa raha main kya karu mujhe wo pehle wali Pallavi wapas lani hain


AMMA : aur tum Pallavi ko is daur se bahar laoge mujhe mere bete pe pura bharosa hain aur is me main tumhara saath dungi


R : sach maa with big smile


AMMA : haan to sabse pehle tum usko kal ghar lekar aa jana main use baat karungi


R : hesitantly maa wo kal


AMMA : kya hua Raghav aur kuch bhi hain kya jo tum mujhse chipa rahe ho


R : na nahi maa kuch nahi


amma stared at him


R : wo mera aur Pallavi ka jagda hogaya hain


AMMA : shocked kya wo is halat me hain aur fir bhi tum use jagda kar rahe the


R : nahi ma waisa nahi hain actually and he narrates everything whatever Pallavi said to him


AMMA : more shocked what Pallavi said all that


R : nahi amma isme uski koi galti nahi hain meri hi galti thi ek to wo itni udaas thi aur me usko move on ka lecture dene laga usne sach hi kaha k eke mujhe feelings samaj hi nahi aati


AMMA : shh tum waise nahi ho aur usne jo bhi kaha gusse me kaha I bet uske dil me aisa kuch bhi nahi


R : main janta hoon amma aur samaj bhi sakta hoon sach kahoon maa mujhe bahut gussa aya pehle uspe aur usko puchne ka man kiya ke kya wo sach me mere bare me aisa sochti hain lekin maine apne gusse ko control karke usko kuch der akela chod diya kyunki mujhe pata tha ke usko jarurat thi thodi der akele rehne ki kyunki main janta hoon kaisa lagta hain jab tumhara pehla pyar pura nahi hota hain aur mujhe is baat ki khushi hain ki usne kuch bola to sahi aur apne dil ki baat mere samane kahi wo uska gussa nahi lekin uska dard tha jo gusse ke roop me bahar aaya lekin mujhe gussa is baat kahain ke maine usko us halat me chhodkar aaya


Amma was just staring at him


R : kya hua ??


AMMA : just hug him and said mujhe nahi pata tha ke mera beta itna samajdar ho gaya hain aur bada bhi ke apne dil ki baat mujhe ab share nahi karta


R : matlab ???


AMMA : matlab mujhse jyada tum jante ho


Raghav started to sneeze aachho accho


AMMA : lag gayi na sardi kisne kaha tha barish me bheegane ko aaya bada hero banana


R : aachoo maa aachhoo


AMMA : bas chup yeh lo medicine aur chupchap so jao aur mujhe bhi koi arguments nahi chahiye samje


R : yes accho boss accho


AMMA : chalo so jao


R : amma thank you aachho


AMMA : aaya bada thank you wala u r always wel come and good night and switched off the light

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part 3

In morning

Pallavi woke up and realized that she slept on couch only and suddenly remember whatever happened last night Mandar his proposal to Keerti and she started to cried and remember her fight with Raghav and remind all those words OMG what did I do ??? maine kya keh diya Raghav ko he is my best friend and WTH I said to him OH god I will never forgive myself for this mujhe usse maafi mangani padegi and dial his number its ringing but he was not picking up jarur mujhse gussa honga aur kyu na ho hona bhi chahiye maine itni badi baat keh di us insan se jisne mujhe humesha saath diya aur maine uska hi dil tod diya usne mujhe kafi time warn bhi kiya tha Mandar ke bare me lekin main hi stupid thi jo nahi dekh payi main college jakar usse maafi mangugi and she got ready to left towards college


Near college gate she remember yesterday night main Mandar aur Keerti ka samna kaise kar paugi mujh me itni himmat nahi hain aur wo wapas jati hain kash Raghav bhi saath hota wo meri himmat hain and she reminds that I am here for Raghav and I have ask forgiveness and for Raghav I have to face Mandar already lost my love but don't want to loose my best friend and she again turn towards college it was not easy for her its really hard to face broken dream at whom ur whole life depended and its unbearable to see ur love with some one else she doesn't know how will she face but she has to do only for Raghav


Voice : hey Pallavi


P : Pallavi was shocked to heard voice and she doesn't have courage to look at their after getting so much courage she turned towards him


Mandar : hi Pallavi kaha bhag rahi ho


P : hi Mandar main actually wo Raghav


A : cutting OMG yeh miracle kaise hua ???


P : confused


A : arre aaj Pallavi Raghav ke bina kya hua dono ke beech jagda hua hain kya ??


P : don't know what to say ignoring his words tumne Raghav ko kahi dekha kya


A : nahi to kyu sab theek to hain na Pallavi tum pareshan lag rahi ho


P : trying to control her emotion haan sab theek hain main pareshaan nahi hoon bas thaki hui hoon


Voice : Hey Adi


A : hi sweet heart sorry Pallavi I have to leave


P : bye


Mandar and Keerti hug each other and Keerti kiss on his cheek and it hurt Pallavi so much and she just left that place as soon as possible


Pallavi ran towards washroom and after locking up just started to cried and those flashback was coming in front of her eyes Mandar Keerti hug and kiss and proposal I cant bear this Raghav I really need you after sometime she left towards her classroom and ask everyone about Raghav but no one saw him from morning Pallavi was getting worried about Raghav first he is not picking his phone and he is not in college and she was scared to loose Raghav kahi Raghav bhi mujhse dur to nahi chala jayega nahi main usse manakar rahungi chahe kuch bhi karna padega and she saw Mandarand Keerti towards class room and she didn't have courage to go there but right now its not time to get upset becoz of them but Raghav is more important and she checked class room but Raghav was not there she left college and went towards Raghav's home.

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Part 5



Outside Raghav's home


Pallavi was getting courage to ring the bell and doing practice to say sorry to Raghav and prepare for everything whatever will come from Raghav and she will manao him by hook by crook she doesn't want to loose friend like Raghav but at the end it will be his wish she will accept that becoz whatever she said that was really harsh and she knew Raghav is not like that it would have been really hurt him.


Finally after getting courage she rangthe bell no answer and one more time and again no answer and 3rd time she rangthe bell and she heard voice of opening door and close her eyes and said IamsorryRaghavmainejokahawogussemekaha merawomatlabnahithapleasemujhemaafkardo and she opened her one eyes to see the reaction of Raghav but to her surprised or shock it was not Raghav but amma who was looking at her confusingly


P : aunty aap ??? mujhe laga Raghav hain


AMMA : haan main yeh mera bhi ghar hain sirf Raghav ka nahi said grinningly


P : sorry aunty wo mera matlab wo nahi tha


AMMA : arre tum to serious ho gayi main to majak kar rahi thi aao andar aao bahar kyun khadi ho


P : haan thank you aunty


AMMA : to beta kya hua itni subah subah


P : wo actually aunty Raghav aaj college nahi aaya tha aur phone bhi nahi utha raha tha isi liye mujhe tension ho rahi thi


AMMA : yeh ladka bhi na kitni baar kaha ke mobile ki ring jab bhi ghar pe ho tab silent pen a rakhe lekin nahi karni to apni marzi ki hain karni hain


P : looking here and there for raghav wo aunty


AMMA : beta kya logi koi coffee logi


P : nahi aunty wo main


AMMA : kya ???


P : wo main Raghav ko milne aayi thi wo mujhe laga ke wo mujhse naraj hain isi liye mera phone nahi utha raha kyunki maine kal usko bahut bura bhala kaha said embarrassedly


AMMA : janti hoon


P : sorry aunty maine wo job hi kaha


AMMA : cutting her tumne job hi kaha tum wo kehna nahi chahti thi bas gusse me nikal gaya aur main tumse naraj nahi hoon aur main samaj sakti hoon Raghav ne mujhe sab bata diya hain


P : trying to stop her tear aunty


AMMA : hugging shhh nahi mera baccha aise nahi rote shhh chup hoja dekho beta main samaj sakti hoon tumpe kya beet rahi hain lekin beta isse zindagi nahi rukti tum yeh kyun dekhti hoke tumhe tumhara pyar nahi mila yeh dekho ke tumhara pyar khush hain jaha bhi wo yeh aasan nahi lekin namumkin bhi nahin aur tum akeli nahi hoon tumhare sath hum hain, Pallavi kayi baar hum zindagi me us cheese ko dekhkar rote hain jo hamare paas nahi hain aur nahi kabhi hamari thi aur un logo ko ignore karte hain jo hamare saath hain aur jab humein us baat ki ehsaas hota hain tab tak der ho jati hain Pallavi tumhare liye asan nahi hain is daur se bahar aana lekin beta tum kab tak aise hi rahogi dekho kaisi ho gayi ho Pallavi main yeh nahi kehti aaj hi move on karo lekin aaj se shuruaat to karo samaj gayi beta main kya kehna chah rahi hoon ??


P : haan aunty sayad aap theek keh rahi hain thanks aunty


AMMA : haye re mera bacha bada samajdar hain


P : nahi aunty me samajdar nahi hoon agar samjdar hoti to Raghav ke saath jagda nahi karti wo bhi to wohi batane ki koshish kar raha tha jo aap keh rahi ho


AMMA : nahi aisa nahi hain beta us waqt tum samjane ki halat main nahi thi samjane ka bhi ek waqt hota hain Raghav galat nahi tha lekin uska samjane ka waqt galat tha lekin jo ho gaya wo bhul jao aura age badho


P : aap theek keh raho ho aunty aapse baat kar ke bahut acha lag raha dil ko sukun mila kash kal main seedha aapse milne aati to main Raghav se wo baatein nahi kehti aunty Raghav kaha hain mujhe usse mafi mangani hain


AMMA : wo so raha hain


P : KYA ??? abhi tak so raha hain kyun???


AMMA : wo sahib kal bheegkar aaye theghar to bukhar ho gaya hain aur medicine ki heavy dose ki wajah se so raha hain warna tumhe lagta hain wo ab tak sota


P : aunty main Raghav ko dekh kar aati hoon


AMMA : theek hain beta main tab tak tum dono ke liye nashta banati hoon main janti hoon tumne kuch bhi nahi khaya hain kal raat se hain na ??


P : haan said hesitantly


AMMA : theek hain jao tum usko milkaraao


Pallavi left towards Raghav room and amma towards kitchen

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Part 5

In Raghav room

Pallavi entered Raghav's room and Raghav was still sleeping due to medicine effect. Pallavi sat beside Raghav and spread her hand in his hair,


P (to herself) : agar abhi jaga hota to bolta Pallavi balo ko mat choona mimicking him pata nahi baalo me kya khazana hain ya diamond se bane hue hain ke kisi ko haath lagane nahi deta mujhe to chhodo apni amma ko bhi nahi haath nahi lagane deta sadu kahi ka lekin kitna pyara lagta hain sote hue bilkul bacche jaisa iska dil bhi to waisa hain bacche jaise najuk aur saaf aur maine isi dil ko dukhaya hain bahut buri tarah hey bhagwan please mujhei tni himmat dena ke main iska samana kar paau jab yeh uthe aur mafi maang paau aur wo mujhe maaf bhi karde kyunki ab main apne dost ko khone nahi dena chahati wo jo bhi saja dega main use bhugatane ke liye ready hoon


Raghav was opening his eyes slowly slowly and at the other hand Pallavi was getting scared second by second and he stretched his hands and look here and there and he saw Pallavi near him and said good morning to her smilingly and Raghav was in his dream land and looking towards her smilingly and dreamingly and murmured to himself haye re kitna pyara sapna hain kash ke ek din sach hojaye Pallavi was confused by his behavior she was expecting outburst for last night and watching her in his room


P : (scared) Raghav


R : (dreamily) hmmm


Pallavi was scare of Raghav not becozof his anger but his weird behavior


P : Raghav utho


Raghav was still looking at her dreamily and Pallavi was feeling uncomfortable and looking here and there


P : Raghav uthona


Raghav took her hand in his and said


R : Pallavi


P : haan


R : u know


P : kya ???


R : Pallavi u r most beautiful girl


P : thanks


R : aur tum janti ho


P : kya ???


R : tum bahut achi ho


P : haan lekin tum se kam


R : hmmm Pallavi tum janti ho ke I


P : haan


R : Pallavi I I l……….


AMMA : yeh rahi tumhari garma garam coffee by saying this she entered in his room and hearing her voice Raghav got up hastily and looking towards amma and Pallavi confusingly and he realized that Pallavi is not in his dream but in reality and he thank his star that he didn't said about his feelings to Pallavi


R : Pallavi tum yaha


P : haan


R : mere kamre me


P : haan


R : Pallavi tum yaha mere kamre me wo bhi itni subah subah


P : wo Raghav main tumse


R : oh shit Pallavi mujhe tumhe lene aana tha college ke liye aur tum hi aa gayi tum thodi der ruko main fatafat ready ho jata hoon


P : par Raghav


R : par war kuch nahi Pallavi tum coffee peelo main fatafat ready hota hoon


AMMA : are Raghav


R : maa dekho hum already late ho chuke hain


P : Raghav


R : kya hain Pallavi


Amma and Pallavi were trying to say something to him but he was not listening after irritating both shouted


P & AMMA : RAGHAV


Raghav was cared after hearing their voice


R : kya hua ??? tum dono chilaayi kyun ??? itna jor se koi chillata hain


his face was scare and confuse and looking at his face Pallavi and amma burst out in laughter


R : tum dono has kyun rahe ho


AMMA : laughingly Raghav but she couldn't speak any thing


R : kya ???


P : in same condition but control her laugh and said Raghav tumhara chehra dekho kaisa hain


R : kyun kya hua mere chahere ko look at mirror


P : tum kitne dare hue ho


R : main main nahi darta kisi se


AMMA : accha bacchu tumhe kisi se darr nahi lagta


R : haan to aap dono jis tarah se chillaye the koi bhi darr jayega


P : haan to hum log kya karte tum hamari baat hi nahi sun rahe the


R : haan to ek to college ke late ho gaya hain aur tum dono aur late kar rahe ho


AMMA : Raghav tumne time dekha


R : nahi


AMMA : to dekh lo


Raghav look towards watch and shouted WHAT ???


P : keeping her finger in her ear by god Raghav aise koi chillata hain


R : itni der ho gayi mujhe uthaya kyun nahi maa ???


AMMA : kyunki tumne jo medicine khayi thi uska asar tha aur tum bahut gehri neend me the bacchu tum bhul gye kya tumhe bukhar tha


R : phir bhi maa aapko uthana chahiye than a meri aaj ki class miss ho gayi


AMMA : to kya hua ??? arre tum insaan ho machine nahi aur kaunsa bada toofan aa jayega agar tumne college nahi attend ki to ek din


R : maa tum janti ho na kuch bhi ho jaye me college kabhi bhi miss nahi karta


P : tum aunty ko kyun suna rahe ho unhone jo kya wo sahi kiya aur tum over react kyun kar rahe ho ???


R : main over react kar raha hoon Pallavi mene aaj college miss kiya hain mere lecture miss ho gaya


P : theek hain na Raghav ek din chalta hain


R : Pallavi tumne college attend kiya tha


P : haan lekin lecture nahi kiya


R : kyun ???


P : tumko dhundh rahi thi


R : by god Pallavi tum bhi na at least lecture attend karti to notes to milte mujhe


P : to tum kisi aur se le lena na usme kya hain


R : kya main aur kisi aur se notes lunga


P : haan to kya hua ??


R : Raghav Rao se log notes mangate hain naki wo logo se


Amma keep her hand on her head and Pallavi was looking at him shocking


P : kya ???


R : kya kya laga rakha hain ??? maine Raghav Rao hoon jiske notes student mangate hain aur tum chahte ho ke main unse notes mangu meri izzat ka kya ??


P : kya izzat lol Raghav notes mangane se tumhari izzat nahi loot jayegi


R : shut up Pallavi rehne do main khud ho notes bana lunga


P : na koi jarurat nahi notes bananeki aaj ke din aaram kar lena kal jo karna wo karna jitni notes banana hain wo bana lena


AMMA : haan Pallavi theek keh rahi hai aur baccho mujhe market jana hain kuch saman lana hain to main aati hoon aur Pallavi aaj ka lunch hamare saath fix hain to kahi mat jana


P : theek hain aunty


AMMA : ok bye aur Raghav tum ready ho jao aur medicine le lena Pallavi uski jimedari tumhari


P : ji aunty aap fikar na kare iska khayal main rakh lungi


AMMA : aur haan tum log jagda mat karna ache bacho ki tarah behave karna


R : suna Pallavi no jagda


P : haw tumhara matalab yeh ke main jagda karti hoon sabse bade jagdalu to tum ho


R : main main jagdalu nahi tum ho humesh jagda tumhi start kartiho abhi bhi tumne hi jagda start kiya hain


P : jagda maine start kiya ya tumne ???


R : tumne


P : maine nahi tumne


R : tumne


AMMA : CHUP dono ke dono chup and both are quite maine kaha tha na koi jagda nahi karega matlab koi nahi said fake angrily samje


R & P : ok


AMMA : good and bye


After amma left


P : by god aunty ko gussa bhi aata hain pehli baar dekha


R : yeh ammaka fake anger tha asli gussa abhi tak dekha nahi hain


P : aunty ko itna gussa bhi aata hain


R : haan to mera gussa amma pe hi gaya hain


P : main nahi manti


R : mat mano


P : by god agar yeh sach hain to bachke rehna padega


R : ghabrao mat amma ka gussa jyada hain lekin wo bahut kam time gussa karti hain waise Pallavi tumne lecture kyun attend nahi kiya


P : wo maine kaha na ke main tumhe dhundh rahi thi


R : kyun ??? ek phone kar leti


P : wo main tumse kal ki baat ke liye mafi mangana chahti thi Raghav maine jo kaha wo mera matlab nahi tha I swear Raghav mere dil me aisa kuch nahi hain tumhare bare me balki main tumhari bahut respect karti hoon aur tumse bahut pyar karti hoon kyunki tum mere bahut hi ache aur khas dost ho aur maine tumhe bahut phone kiya tum utha hi nahi rahe the to mujhe laga tum bahut naraz aur gussa ho to maine socha yaha aakar hi mafi manglu kyunki maien apna pyar to kho diya hain lekin apna sabse acha dost nahi khona chahti (she said cryingly)


R : shhh Pallavi chup bilkul chup


P :Raghav please mujhe maaf kardo tum jo chahe wo saja dena lekin mujhse dosti mat todna aur mujhse dur mat jana main toot jaugi


Raghav just hug her and let her cry, after sometime when her sobbing was lessen


R : baitho yaha are u ok ???


P : nahi jab tak mujhe maaf nahi karoge tab tak main theek nahi hougi


R : maine tumhe maaf nahi kiya ???


P : kyun ?? dekho Raghav main janti hoon ke maine jo kiya wo galat tha lekin please tum mujhe jo saja dena chaho wo de sakte ho lekin please mujhse dosti mat todo please Raghav I beg of you


R : shhh chup bilkul chup kitna bolti ho tum meri puri baat to sunlo tumhari train hain jo chalu hui wo rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahi aur ab main jo bolunga tum chupchap sunogi kuch bhi nahi bolungi samji


Pallavi just nodded her head


R : good girl to suno maine tumhe maaf nahi kiya kyunki maaf usko kiya jata hain jo insaan naraj hota hain aur jab main tumse naraj hu hi nahi to maaf karne ki baat hi nahi aati aur maafi tumhe nahi mujhe mangani


P : cutting Raghav par Raghav


R : shhh maine kaha na kuch bhi nahi bologi haan to main kaha tha ha na mujhe tumse maafi nahi mangani chahiye balki mujhe magani chahiye kyunki maine tumhe kal akela chhod diya jab tumhe meri sabse jyada jarurat thi Pallavi I am really sorry main yeh nahi kahuga ki mujhe bilkul bhi bura nahi laga juth nahi bolunga mujhe bahut hurt hua tha ke meri sabse acchi dost mere bare me aisa sochati hain isi liye maine waha se jaldi chala aaya lekin baad me mujhe ehsaas hua ke maine galat kiya kyunki tum mere bare me wo nahi sochti lekin us waqt tumhe tumhara dard bahar nikalana aur wo tumhara mujh par gussa nahi lekin mujh par bharosa tha haan tumne mujh par bharosa kiya aur wo gussa mujh pe kiya


P : Raghav tum mujhse sach me naraj nahi ho na kahi tum mera dil rakhne ke liye to nahi keh rahe ho


R : hey bhagwan maine itna kuch bola aur fir bhi tum wohi pe atki ho main tumse naraj nahi hoon tum batao ke tumne mujhe maaf kiya ki nahi


P : Raghav tumhe maafi magane ki jarurat nahi hain tum bahut acche ho aur tumhari koi galti nahi I m sorry


R : hmmm ek idea hain hum ek dusare ko maaf kar dete hain theek hain


P : lekin Raghav


R : lekin wekin kuch nahi deal or no deal???


P : ok deal


R : aur yeh topic yehi pe khatam karte hain


P : Raghav I promise ke main kabhi bhi is tarah se behave nahi karungi


R : mujhe aisa koi promise nahi chahiye lekin ek promise chahiye ke we will be best friend for forever


P : promise


And both smile and like this all 3 spended their whole day happily and Raghav Pallavi were really happy becoz they were thinking that everything was over in their relation but it was come out as more strong and looking them happy she was most happy, though plan was for lunch but it stretched till dinner and it was too late Raghav drop Pallavi at home and return back.


At Raghav home


R : thanks amma


AMMA : for what ???


R : amma main samaj gaya hoon ke aap us din kya bolna chahti thi aap janti thi na ke main Pallavi se pyar karta hoon


AMMA : haan main janti thi


R : par kaise ???


AMMA : kyunki main maa hoon said dramatically

R : mom I love you and you are my strength u are not my life but becoz of you I am having life thanks for being their with me always either I said or not to you


AMMA : awww mera beta senti ho gaya aur mujhe bhi senti kar diya I love you too beta and becoz of you I m alive becoz after ur dad's death its only you who is the reason of my life


Raghav just hugged her


AMMA : chal ab bahut late ho gaya emotion talk chalo ab so jao kal college hain agar miss hui to phir se bologe mera lecture miss ho gaya meri notes


Raghav just smile at her and kiss on his cheek and good night amma and I love you


AMMA : pagal good night


R : thanks amma for saving me in morning warna aaj to main jata kaam se


AMMA : pehle maine socha tha ke tumhe apne dil ki baat bolne du aise nahi waise to bloega lekin who waqt sahi nahi tha usi wajah se maine tumhe toka warna aaj tumhare relation pe affect karta jo main nahi chahti thi

R : haan wo to hain mujhe to laga tha kal raat ke baad pata nahi kitna waqt lagta hamare relation ko lekin agar aaj me bol deta to sayad hamara relation hi nahi rehta


AMMA : haan aur is waqt Pallavi us condtion me nahi hain ki who is baat ko samaj jaye


R : hope so wo is phase se jaldi bahar aa jaye


AMMA : wo to aayegi hum hain na bas humein use force nahi karna chahiye


R : hmmm aapp theek keh rahi ho


AMMA : chalo ab seriously so jao its too late


R : good night


AMMA : Raghav mujhe acha lagega agar tum mujhse apne dil ki baat share karoge


R : I promise mom and same goes to you


AMMA : yes boss

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Part 6

New beginning

It was not easy for Pallavi to move on in life becoz she truly love Mandar and still loves him kyuki pehla pyar bhulaye nahi bhulta itni asani se Raghav also feels hurt when he saw love Mandar in Pallavi'e eyes but keeping aside that he was always there with Pallavi and just pray for her happiness he was truly Pallavi's strength like this they completed graduation and after graduation Pallavi parents decided to get her marry in nice family it pierced Raghav's heart but he knows this is betterment for Pallavi she really has to move on and stay happy in her life and who knows his to be husband will give her that happiness which she truly deserve and fulfill all her dreams but Pallavi was not happy with this decision becoz she knew that she cant love any one how much she love Mandar and its next to impossible to forgot Mandar and give his place to anyone but for her parents she will get marry and fulfill all her responsibility as a wife and daughter in law and that day arrive when boys family come to see Pallavi and as per Pallavi Raghav was there though it was difficult for him to stay there but only for Pallavi he stay there ignoring his pain and when boy's parent arrived it was shocked for Raghav Pallavi both specially Raghav he never expected that and Pallavi look towards Raghav shockingly and asking him about this and he signaled her that he himself don't have any idea about this and that person was non other than Raghav's mom, elder were laughing on them becoz of their funny face and they told him actual reality it was clear that amma always love Pallavi as her daughter but it was surprise for RaghVi that Pallavi parents also like Raghav and always wanted to see him as their son in law so they made this plan becoz the way RaghVi know and understand each no one can understand that but they were not forcing RaghVi for this they will accept whatever will be their relation. First it was awkward for RaghVi this situation what to do what to say but atlast Pallavi broke this silence


P : Raghav


R : hmmm


P : is this awkward na ?


R : really I never felt like this but Pallavi whatever will be ur decision our friendship will be same and we will be bestfriend for forever


P : (smiles) yes Raghav u are good boy you will get better girl than me who will love you and only you I cant give you that love which u deserve becoz I still love Mandar and I cant give that place anyone hope you understand


R : what will be ur decision if I say that I don't have any problem with that look Pallavi as per our parents we know and understand each other right so what's wrong in this relation and Pallavi after my mom its only you who can handle very well and even after marriage we will be friends not husband and wife.


P : but Raghav I don't want you to sacrifice becoz of me you deserve love and I cant love you. You have ur own life don't spoil becoz of me


R : and you are my life Pallavi


Pallavi was shocked adter hearing that


Yes Pallavi you are hearing right rightI love you truly but never said this to you becoz I don't want to loose my friend becoz of my love first I was not happy with our parents decision becoz I thought it will affect our friendship but I think there is no harm to giving our relation chance and Pallavi I am not expecting anything from you except having you in my life


P : after coming out from shock are you kidding


R : nope


P : this is wrong Raghav u will get better girl in ur life


R : but u r best for me


P : why are not understanding


R : becoz I don't want to


P : u will regret


R : I will regret if I will let you go again like earlier


P : I cant give you that love what you deserve I cant love you any one


R : in our relation my love is enough


P : Raghav i will be your wife not your lover


R : I want friend who will know me understand me and moreover handle me and love its already there


P : means


R : means I love you and u love yourfriend, don't you ???


P : but not as a that love


R : love is love not is or that


P : Raghav today it seems easy for you but after some time we will lost our frndsship becoz our failed relation


R : our relation will never get failed becoz u know Raghav never get failed in any thing


P : but Raghav


R : (cutting her) Pallavi I am not forcing you its up to u what u want to do in our relation and and I will support you in that decision and as I said we will frnds forver. I will wait for ur decision bye Pallavi


P : Raghav tum bhi sochlo ek baar please


R : Pallavi tum janti main sochkar bolta hoon na ki bolkar sochta hoon aur I am ready


Raghav left and Pallavi was hellc onfused what to do and what not at some where she was happy that she will get marry her best friend who know her very well and will understand her but other side she doenst want him to get suffer beocz of her he deserve true love which she will never give to him after thinking so much she decided what to do.


After 2 days


Raghav phone was ringing


R : hey Pallavi whats up ?


P : Raghav I want to meet you in our place


R : everything is ok na Pallavi ???


P : yes Raghav I just want to talk toyou about my decision


R : ok will reach their soon


Raghav was getting scared but he prepared himself for everything becoz Pallavi happiness is most imp thanhimself afer getting courage


R : hey Pallavi


P : hi Raghav


R : bolo


P : (hesitantly) Raghav woh


R : Pallavi don't be scared i am ready for ur decision and I said na we will be frnds forever


P : after getting courage Raghav I m ready for this marriage


Raghav was expecting no from her but It was shocked not shocked but biggest surprise of his life he was never happy in his life like this not even that day when he got first prize in college


R : say it again


P : Raghav I am ready for this marriage


R : OMG OMG OMG i cant say how much I am happy thank you so much Pallavi for giving me life with this decision and just hugged her but Pallavi didn't hug him back and was looking upset and Raghav realized that


Hey what happen ??? everything isok ??? is this ur own decision na no one has forced you na ??? and don't take decision only to make me or others happy becoz for us ur happiness is most imporatant


P : started crying Raghav no one forced me and this is my own decision but I don't know how to say that


R : say It ??? Pallavi you are scaring me


P : after controlling her tear Raghav u know na that I really love Mandar


M : disappoitntingly yes and what wrong in that


P : Raghav I will marry you and will be ur wife and fulfill my all responsibilities as a wife but I cant love you and cant give that place to you but I will love you as a my best friend


R : hey bhagwan Pallavi tumne to mujhe dara hi diya tha pata nahi kya ho gaya mujhe yeh sab pata hain aur yeh jana neke baad hi maine tumse shadi ki baat ki thi aur iske aage mujhe aur koi behas nahi chahiye


P : but Raghav


R : no but wut ok chalo yeh news apne parents ko batate hain wo log bahut khush honge


P : Raghav are you sure ???


R : I was never sure in my life and I trust you and my love more than any thing and any one and my love will never change for you except growing


P : (guiltily) Raghav why cant I love you ???


R : Pallavi no need to be guilty


P : Raghav you were there when I was heart broken when mandar announce about Keerti I was literally dying it was you and your support who help me to come out from this worst phase but what I did I hurted you so much you were also literally heartbroken when I announced about mandar to you and I said you heartless Raghav kaha se aayi itni himmat


R : tumse ???


P : mujhse main hi to tumhare dard ki wajah thi na tumhe bhi dard hua honga jab maine mandarke bare me baat karti thi kyunki main samaj sakti hoon tumhara dard kyunki mujhe bhi dard hota hain jab bhi main mandar aur Keerti ko dekhti hoon


R : Pallavi tumne pyar karna shikhaya aur tumhine shikhaya pyar dena janta hain lena nahi tum meri takat thi pehle mujhe bahut hurt hua tha socha tha ke tumse akar kahu ki kyun tum mujhse pyar nahi karti kyun main tumhara pyar nahi ban sakta ?? tumpe chikhu chilaau gussa karu


P :to kiya kyun nahi ??? kash ke tum aate aur kehte


R : to kya hota ??? tum mujhse pyar karne lagti nahi na balki humari dosti toot jati humare beech deewar aa jati jo main nahi chahta that aur mujhe is baat ka ehsaas hua tha ke mere liye tum meri zindagi me hone se badhkar tumhari zindagi me khushiya honi chahiye jo Mandar ke saath thi


P : Raghav tum itne ache kyu ho ???


R : kyunki tum meri best friend ho


Pallavi just hugged him


P : thanks for being their with me always


R : what are friends for and I am happy that I got wife in my best friend who will never object if I will have affairs with others


P : (shocked) what ???


R : started laughing tumhara chehra dekho


P : Raghav I will kill you


R : hawww apne honewale pati ko marongi duniya ka kahegi


P : touch his feet Raghav was shock


R : what are u doing


P : aap mere prannath ho apke charano me mera swarg hain said shyingly


R : WHAT ???


Pallavi burst in to laughter now look at you face Pallavi se panga longe to yehi honga


R : maan gaye


P : haan pata hain I am the best


R : haan aur mera pata nahi kya honga


P : matlab ???


R : matlab ki filmy maa aur nautanki biwi ke beech is bicahre ka kya haal honga


P : bichara kis angle btw hamarai wajah se tumhari life colorful hain warna kitne boring ho itne boring ki bore bhi tumse bore ho jaye


R : hey I am not boring I am intelligent

P : intelligent my foot btw aunty se yaad kya aunty ko bhi pata tha tumhari feeling ke bare me


R : haan


P : means tumne unko bata diya tha ???


R : maine nahi bataya tha


P : to unko kaise pata chala


R : kyunki wo maa hain unko sab patahain


P : kya ???


R : jab maine maa ko pucha to unhone yehi kaha


P : awww how cute


R : cute kahe ka puri ki puri dramebaaz hain


P : khabardar maa ko dramebaaz kaha to


R : oho abhi se maa pe haq jatana shuru pata nahi mera kya honga abhi se will banakar rakhni padegi


P : hum log kya tumhe maar denge


R : nahi tum dono ki wajah se mains uicide kar lunga


P : Raghav ab to tum pakka maroge


R : pehle pakadkar to dikhao


And tom and jerry fight start


R : time please I am tired


P : same here


R : btw u don't need to feel bad that u cant give me Mandar place


P : kyun ???


R : agar Mandar ki tumhare dil me wo jagah hain jo tum kisi ko nahi de sakti waise hi tumhare dil me chhoti si hi sahi lekin wo jagah hain jo koi nahi le sakta


Pallavi just stared at him


R : aise mat ghuro main janta hoon I am handsome but aise ghurogi to najar lag jayegi


Pallavi putting kala tikka on his face


P : you are handsome from ur face and more that good by ur heart


R : aaye haye main mar jawa gud khakaraaj Pallavi Rao ne meri tariff ki hain finally tumhe akal aa hi gayi


P : oh hello I am still Pallavi Deshmukh


R : haan to to be Pallavi Rao ho aur to be main hi itna dimag aa gaya jo Pallavi Deshmukh ke paas nahi thi


P : bas haan ab jyada hawa me udane ki jarurat nahi hain aur ab chalo ghar jakar sabse pehle amma ko batate hain wo bahut khush hongi


R : haan chalo to be Pallavi Rao ab tum dono ka drame se bhagwan hi bachaye


P : chupchap muh bandh rakho warna ghar jane ke lale pad jayege


R : by god abhi se biwi ke tevar


P : haan chalo muh bandh kar ke follow me


R : haan chaliye madam ji


P : good be a good husband


R : haan haan chalo madam ji

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Part 7

At Raghav home

Door bell ring & Amma open the door.

AMMA : aao dono tum dono ka hi intezar tha and RaghVienter to the home with serious face


AMMA : kya hua tum dono ko ? itne serious kyun ho ?


R : amma wo wo wo


AMMA : kya wo wo lagakar rakha hain seedhe se batao kya hua ? sab theek to hain na Pallavi tum hi batao kya hua ??


R : aunty wo aapko Raghav hi batayega


AMMA : Raghav tum chupchap bata rahe hoki nahi ??


R : ammaPallavi ne shadi ke liye haan kehdi hain


AMMA : kya ??


M (happily) : haan maa Pallavi ne shadi ke liye haa kar di hain and just hug her


AMMA : hugging him back I m so happy for you and Pallavi , Pallavi tum kyu waha khadi ho yaha aao mere paas


Pallavi come towards amma


AMMA : tum nahi janti me kitni khush hoon yeh sunkar I cant wait for that day when you will come to this home for forever Pallavi don't know what to say so she just hug her


Raghav clap and both broke their hugand saw towards them


AMMA : kya hua ??


R : aap dono ka pyar dekhkar mera dilbhar aaya and wipe his eyes


Pallavi just hit him lightly nautanki kahi ka


R : ouch Pallavi lagta hain abhi se mujh pe haath uthane lagi wo bhi apni saas ke samane


Pallavi remember that ammawas also there and feel uncomfortable becoz situation is not same like earlier now she is future daughter in law of this house


P : lowering her head sorry


AMMA : (understood her dilemma) sorry kis liye ?? tumne bilkul sahi kiya


R : haan haan lo uski side abhi tak shadi hui nahi party pehle hi badal li aapne haye re me akela pad gaya ab mujhekoi bachayega in dono se


AMMA : kaan pakadkar chup kar nautanki aur ja hum dono maa beti ke liye coffee banakar aa aur sath me kuch nashta bhi lana


Raghav understood that both of them need sometime alone so he decided to leave soon, after Raghav left amma come towards Pallavi


AMMA : Pallavi kya hua beta ??tum khush nahi ho kya is rishtey se?? dekho beta koi jabardasti nahi hain aisa mat socho ke agar tum shadi ke liye mana kar dogi to tujhse hamara koi rishta nahi rahega tum aaj bhi is ghar ki beti ho aur humesha rahogi chahe tum Raghav se shadi karo ya na karo, dekho beta agar tum khush nahi ho to abhi bata do main tumhare baba se bhi baat karti hoon


P : nahi aunty aisi baat nahi hain maineyeh faisla soch samajkar liya hain aur mujhe koi bhi afsos nahi hain is faisale se lekin lekin aunty me aap se ek baat puchu ???


AMMA : haan beta pucho ?? tumhe kabse permission lene ki jarurat pad gayi


P : (hesitatntly) aunty wo wo aapko mujhpe gussa nahi aaya tha jab aapko pata chala tha ke Raghav mujhse pyar karta hain lekin main nahi aur meri wajah se Raghav ko itna dard mila ??


AMMA : smilingly nahi


P : kyun ?


AMMA : kyun ?? kyunki Raghav jaise mera beta hain waise hi tum meri beti ho


P : par aunty fir bhi aapko bura to laga hoga na Raghav ko pain me dekhkar


AMMA : haan laga tha na jab Raghav ko maine dard me dekha tha lekin iska matlab yeh nahi ke mujhe tum par gussa aya tha aur gussa karu to bhi kyun beta pyar me koi shart nahi hoti ke maine pyar kiya to samane wala bhi mujhse pyar karna chahiye. Main Raghav ke liye dukhi thik e usko uska pyar nahi mila lekin main tumhare liye bhi utni hi khush thi jab mujhe tumhari feeling ke bare me pata chala tha aur utni hi sad jab tumhara dil toota tha lekin beta jeena isi ka naam hain na jaruri nahi humei wo sab mile jo hum chahe aur waise beet gayi baat gayi ab peeche mudkar dekhne ka nahi aur aage badhne ka hain


P : aunty aap bahut achi ho bahut bahut achi ho


AMMA : lekin tumse kam


P : aap ko pata jab mujhe pata chala ke Raghav mujhse pyar karta hain tab mujhe ehsaas hua ke maine anjane me hi sahi aap dono ka dil dukhaya jinhone humesha mere khushiyo ke bare me hi socha Raghav ko jitna dard diya utna hi aapko diya main I am sorry aunty for that


AMMA : Pallavi mujhe us waqt utna dard nahi hua tha jitna tum abhi de rahi ho aisi baat kar ke sayad tumne mujhe apna samja hi nahi isi liye aisi baat kar rahi ho


P : nahi aunty aisi baat nahi aap to mere liye maa jaisi ho


AMMA : to fir aisi baat kyun karti ho


P : sorry kaan pakadkar sorry duniya me jitney bhi sorry hain utne sorry


AMMA : lol Raghav's style


P : aap bolo to me murga bhi ban jati hoon


AMMA : haan


P : kya ?


AMMA : chalo murga bano


P : theek hain aunty and she stood upand just was going to bent amma stop her


AMMA : ruk pagli kahi ki pagal hain ekdum


P : anything for you


AMMA : pakka


P : haan

AMMA : then be always happy, you will be my daughter always either you marry Raghav or not


R : aur main tumhara best friend humesha humesha ke liye mujhse peecha nahi chuda paogi


P : aur tumse peecha chudana bhi kaun chahta hain I am so lucky to have you both in my life thanks for coming in my life


AMMA : same here dear and have a trio hug


R : Amma Pallavi ??

Amma & P : haan


R : app dono ko nahi lagta kuch jyada hi filmy situation ho gaya hain aur aap dono ka pata nahi lekin mujh pe yeh bilkul suit nahi karta and got slap on his both shoulder by amma & Pallavi


R : aur nahi to kya aap dono ko nahi lagta ke aap log kuch jyada hi senti ho gayi ho abhi se itna melo drama pata nahi shadi ke baad kitna melo drama hoga arre is bichare TV ka to socho uski jarurat bhi nahi padegi aap dono jo hain


AMMA : haan to hum se hi to teri life me entertainment hain hamare bina teri kitni boring hain study assignment lectures uff


R : ohh hello boring aur main ?? chance hi nahi hain college ka cool dude hoon me aur ladkiya marti hain mujhpe pucho Pallavi se hain na Pallavi(said proudly)


P : haan haan ladkiya marti hain ispe waise bhi jaise tum rehte ho wiase maregi hi tumhari wajah se and hi fi with amma


R : kuch jalne ki boo aa rahi hain koito jal raha hain


P : ohh hello main aur jealous no chance


R : yes u r


P : nope I am not


R : yes u r


Amma slapped her head and said yeh kabhi nahi sudharege and went near them both realized her presence and look towards her


AMMA : god bless you and stay always like this happy

R & P : awww amma and hugged her

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7 updates in a day--had you written this story long ago?

This was long--no complaints--i had to take 2 breaks in between while reading this😅

I think the story has not ended yet---Raghav and Amma's convo was love--the pain which Raghav was feeling was well potrayed through words.

Amma and Pallavi have got the sweet bond--and these two teaming up against Raghav was epic--bechara Raghav ko ab do aurton ko sehna padega

I am waiting for your next update--ab Pallavi and Raghav have agreed for marriage

Btw: have you uploaded your SS Family?

Edited by ReemShah - 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ReemShah

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7 updates in a day--had you written this story long ago?

This was long--no complaints--i had to take 2 breaks in between while reading this😅

I think the story has not ended yet---Raghav and Amma's convo was love--the pain which Raghav was feeling was well potrayed through words.

Amma and Pallavi have got the sweet bond--and these two teaming up against Raghav was epic--bechara Raghav ko ab do aurton ko sehna padega

I am waiting for your next update--ab Pallavi and Raghav have agreed for marriage

Btw: have you uploaded your SS Family?

Thanks for commenting 😊

Yes it was written long time ago and few parts are pending

I was going to post all parts but it is really tiring to edit the parts so decided to post later 🤣

You are really good reader you understand and try to reason out character and situation 👍🏼


We are family I will update in 1 or 2 days 😊

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#10

Originally posted by: ...EhSaas...

Yes it was written long time ago and few parts are pending

I was going to post all parts but it is really tiring to edit the parts so decided to post later 🤣

You are really good reader you understand and try to reason out character and situation 👍🏼


We are family I will update in 1 or 2 days 😊

Ok, post it whenver you wish but don't keep us waiting for too long😆

Thank you😊

Ok--will keep an eye for that update...thanks

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Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".