TS: DISGUISE KING (Part 3 updated on page 3)

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Posted: 2 years ago

Recently with all the Behind The Scene content we've been getting, my mind flipped onto this idea.

Plot: Raghav got backlashed from both Farhad and Amma on what he did to Pallavi so he just returned to her room to have a talk with her when he found her lying unconsioud on the bed just like he had left her before.

Here it goes....


Raghav  felt the floor beneath him slip when he saw her lying there. He ran to her in fast sprints patting her cheeks, begging her to open her eyes. But no reponse. His heart started beating faster than before as he rubbed her palms with beads of sweats forming all over his forehead as he let out a shout for help.

"Amma! Keerti! Farhad! koi hai?" he literally begged for someone to show up as he put her comfortably on the bed with soft pillows beneath her head.

Everyone came rushing in gasping at the body infront of them. Amma sat right beside her daughter-in-law with terror on her face.

"Pallavi ko kya hua?" she asked her son with tensed voice.

"Pata nahin Amma. Main idhar aaya toh yeh aise hi pada hua tha." he explained leaving out their detailed talk from the afternoon.

"Aisa ho hi nhin sakta. Aakhri baar Pallavi se tum hi mile the na Raghav. Amma issi ne kuch kaha hai Pallavi se main jaanti hoon." Keerti snapped back as she rubbed her best friends palms.

"Amma maine kuch nahin bola hai. Yeh sab uss Sanki Buddhe ki baaton ki wajah se hua hai. Farhad tum mera shakal kya dekh raha hai doctor ko bula." he shouted being impatient and stressed for his wife.


Farhad got the doctor who came rushing in to check up on the wife of Mr. Raghav Rao, who apparently kept asking questions, irritating everyone in that room. The list of questions went longer with each passing seconds from:

"Yeh uth jayega na?"

"Tumko ambulance ka zarurat hai?"

"Tumse nhin hoga Farhad hospital ke head ko bulana tha tujhe."

"Mera wife ko kuch hua toh main tumhara hospital band karwa dega."

And so on.....


Amma got so irritated that she finally pulled him out of the room so that the doctor can finally do her work.

"Amma tum kya kar raha hai. Woh doctor ka galti hai woh apna kaam dhang se nahin kar raha hai." he spoke with annoyance.

"Chupp. Ab ek awaaz nahin sunna hai mereko tumse. Woh doctor apna duty kar sakta hai." Amma replied.

"Agar kar pata toh ab tak Pallavi jaag chuka hota." he moved a hand through his hair peeking inside to have a glance of his wife.

"Bass tum idhar hi khada rahega. Aur doctor ko uska kaam krne dega. Samjha?" Amma have him a serious warning and went inside leaving him tensed to his gutt.

The next 15 minutes were pathetic to him, even if Farhad tried to calm him down. He felt so guilty that the entire journey flashed infront of his eyes until the last disagreement a few hours ago. Amma got out of the room thanking the doctor and handed the medicine prescription to Farhad.

"Amma ab kaisa hai woh saree ka Dukan?" he asked getting up on his feet.

"Pallavi! Woh theek hai ab. Bass thora stress ki wajah se tabyat kharaab hua uska. Doctor ne kaha hai ki hawa pani badalne ka zarurat hai." Amma explained to him with a serious tone.

"Han toh usko main woh balcony wala room main shift karwa deta hai." Raghav shrugged which earned a glare from his Amma.

"Kya Amma. Ab kya chahata hai tum ki main uss sarree ka- mera matlab Pallavi ko bahar lekar jaye?" he puffed.

"Han yahi chahta hai main. Ab tum dono ka shaadi ho gaya, tum usko honeymoon par nahin lekar gaya abhi tak." Amma scolded him.

"Kya Amma tum bhi janta hai aisa nhin ho sakta-" he tried to be reasonable but earned a glare.

"Kuch bola tum?" 

"Shaam ko kahin lekar jayega main usko. farhad ko bolta hai woh tickets book kardega." he turned to talk to Farhad when Amma stopped him.

"Boldiya hai main usko tum bas packing karo. Pallavi ka packing Keerti kar raha hai." Amma replied and left him alone as he slapped his forehead.

He went inside the room where he saw his wife sitting on the bed with a glass of juice in her hand.

"Woh Amma bola ki-" he started to speak not meeting her eyes.

"Janti hoon. par mujhe tumhare saath kahi bhi jaane main koi interest nahin hai woh toh Jaya Amma ne bola hai isliye. Par ek baar hum ghar se bahar nikle toh tum apne raste aur main apne raaste. Samajhla?" she spoke sprinting to the bathroom without even waiting for an answer.

"Main tumko aur Amma ko promise kiya hai ki kabhi tumko akela nahin chhodega. Tum Ragahv ke saath nahin rehna chahta hai na toh na sahi. Kal tumse Ragahv nahin koi aur milega." he smiled in mischief as he dialled farhad's number who picked up on the first call.

"Farhad tumko koi nakli beard ka shop pata hai?" he asked.

"Ji Anna ek theatre shop toh hai par kyun?" Farhad replied.

"Kuch nahin bas main tumko kuch samaan ka list bhej raha hai. Shaam tak mil jana chahiye." he cancelled the call with a satisfactory smile waiting for the night to arrive.


To be continued......

Tell me how you liked it. I just combined all the Behind the scenes together in one idea. Hope it wasn't a mess.

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Posted: 2 years ago

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I know where you are going ..... Budhau on the way🤣🤣

Great one🥳

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: unicornwriter

Recently with all the Behind The Scene content we've been getting, my mind flipped onto this idea.

Plot: Raghav got backlashed from both Farhad and Amma on what he did to Pallavi so he just returned to her room to have a talk with her when he found her lying unconsioud on the bed just like he had left her before.

Here it goes....


Raghav  felt the floor beneath him slip when he saw her lying there. He ran to her in fast sprints patting her cheeks, begging her to open her eyes. But no reponse. His heart started beating faster than before as he rubbed her palms with beads of sweats forming all over his forehead as he let out a shout for help.

"Amma! Keerti! Farhad! koi hai?" he literally begged for someone to show up as he put her comfortably on the bed with soft pillows beneath her head.

Everyone came rushing in gasping at the body infront of them. Amma sat right beside her daughter-in-law with terror on her face.

"Pallavi ko kya hua?" she asked her son with tensed voice.

"Pata nahin Amma. Main idhar aaya toh yeh aise hi pada hua tha." he explained leaving out their detailed talk from the afternoon.

"Aisa ho hi nhin sakta. Aakhri baar Pallavi se tum hi mile the na Raghav. Amma issi ne kuch kaha hai Pallavi se main jaanti hoon." Keerti snapped back as she rubbed her best friends palms.

"Amma maine kuch nahin bola hai. Yeh sab uss Sanki Buddhe ki baaton ki wajah se hua hai. Farhad tum mera shakal kya dekh raha hai doctor ko bula." he shouted being impatient and stressed for his wife.


Farhad got the doctor who came rushing in to check up on the wife of Mr. Raghav Rao, who apparently kept asking questions, irritating everyone in that room. The list of questions went longer with each passing seconds from:

"Yeh uth jayega na?"

"Tumko ambulance ka zarurat hai?"

"Tumse nhin hoga Farhad hospital ke head ko bulana tha tujhe."

"Mera wife ko kuch hua toh main tumhara hospital band karwa dega."

And so on.....


Amma got so irritated that she finally pulled him out of the room so that the doctor can finally do her work.

"Amma tum kya kar raha hai. Woh doctor ka galti hai woh apna kaam dhang se nahin kar raha hai." he spoke with annoyance.

"Chupp. Ab ek awaaz nahin sunna hai mereko tumse. Woh doctor apna duty kar sakta hai." Amma replied.

"Agar kar pata toh ab tak Pallavi jaag chuka hota." he moved a hand through his hair peeking inside to have a glance of his wife.

"Bass tum idhar hi khada rahega. Aur doctor ko uska kaam krne dega. Samjha?" Amma have him a serious warning and went inside leaving him tensed to his gutt.

The next 15 minutes were pathetic to him, even if Farhad tried to calm him down. He felt so guilty that the entire journey flashed infront of his eyes until the last disagreement a few hours ago. Amma got out of the room thanking the doctor and handed the medicine prescription to Farhad.

"Amma ab kaisa hai woh saree ka Dukan?" he asked getting up on his feet.

"Pallavi! Woh theek hai ab. Bass thora stress ki wajah se tabyat kharaab hua uska. Doctor ne kaha hai ki hawa pani badalne ka zarurat hai." Amma explained to him with a serious tone.

"Han toh usko main woh balcony wala room main shift karwa deta hai." Raghav shrugged which earned a glare from his Amma.

"Kya Amma. Ab kya chahata hai tum ki main uss sarree ka- mera matlab Pallavi ko bahar lekar jaye?" he puffed.

"Han yahi chahta hai main. Ab tum dono ka shaadi ho gaya, tum usko honeymoon par nahin lekar gaya abhi tak." Amma scolded him.

"Kya Amma tum bhi janta hai aisa nhin ho sakta-" he tried to be reasonable but earned a glare.

"Kuch bola tum?" 

"Shaam ko kahin lekar jayega main usko. farhad ko bolta hai woh tickets book kardega." he turned to talk to Farhad when Amma stopped him.

"Boldiya hai main usko tum bas packing karo. Pallavi ka packing Keerti kar raha hai." Amma replied and left him alone as he slapped his forehead.

He went inside the room where he saw his wife sitting on the bed with a glass of juice in her hand.

"Woh Amma bola ki-" he started to speak not meeting her eyes.

"Janti hoon. par mujhe tumhare saath kahi bhi jaane main koi interest nahin hai woh toh Jaya Amma ne bola hai isliye. Par ek baar hum ghar se bahar nikle toh tum apne raste aur main apne raaste. Samajhla?" she spoke sprinting to the bathroom without even waiting for an answer.

"Main tumko aur Amma ko promise kiya hai ki kabhi tumko akela nahin chhodega. Tum Ragahv ke saath nahin rehna chahta hai na toh na sahi. Kal tumse Ragahv nahin koi aur milega." he smiled in mischief as he dialled farhad's number who picked up on the first call.

"Farhad tumko koi nakli beard ka shop pata hai?" he asked.

"Ji Anna ek theatre shop toh hai par kyun?" Farhad replied.

"Kuch nahin bas main tumko kuch samaan ka list bhej raha hai. Shaam tak mil jana chahiye." he cancelled the call with a satisfactory smile waiting for the night to arrive.


To be continued......

Tell me how you liked it. I just combined all the Behind the scenes together in one idea. Hope it wasn't a mess.

so you have decided pallu will sing: haye mai kya karu ram mujhe budhha mil gya🤣

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Posted: 2 years ago

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Ekdum Paagal hai yeh Raghav. Doctor ko kaam toh karne do!


BTS ke hisaab se if you're taking the Old Man's route toh sahi varna Naya Maal bhi chalta hai Apun ko😆... 

Continue jaldi 😋

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🤩🤩 wow. Waiting for the next

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Originally posted by: Praveenyam

Thank you 🥺

Good writing.

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i am so sure of this idiot haha kuch to karega

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Originally posted by: Mihika

🤣🤣🤣

I know where you are going ..... Budhau on the way🤣🤣

Great one🥳

Continue soon


I saw that picture and this idea just popped off 🙈🙈

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Masth aa masth haan 👌👌loved it😍interesting 

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so you have decided pallu will sing: haye mai kya karu ram mujhe budhha mil gya🤣


Yes yes 😂😂