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Posted: 4 years ago
#31
hey i think it will be really greatful if you just mention the durect link to the other chapters here in the end of the first chapter.. it would be quite easier for the readers. hope you won't mind
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: cozy_vibes

hey i think it will be really greatful if you just mention the durect link to the other chapters here in the end of the first chapter..it would be quite easier for the readers.hope you won't mind

Thanks for suggestion.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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very peaceful at the end. ☯️❤️

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Chapter 7

P - Yes... I will be there on Friday.

OS - .................

P - No, I will come alone.

OS - .................

P - No. It has to be this way. Anyhow it won't matter once done.

R - Saaree Ka Dukaan... Raghav Rao is home.

P - Need to go. Raghav has come. Lets Keep it for friday. Bye.

She hanged up the phone and raced downstairs before he comes up.

R - Saaree Ka Dukaan... I won't wait. Ur plan will be ruined. Don't blame me afterwards.

P - No, I am here. We can't miss it. After so many days we have planned for movie. I won't miss it for the world.

R - Who plans movie in middle of the week? Lets plan it on Friday. We can have better plans for today.

He passed the smirk.

P - No. We planned today. Tickets are booked and we are going. Anyways Friday I have different plans.

R - What plans? And without informing me.

P - Yes, secretive plans. U cannot know.

R - Thats Bad. No Problem, ur order, my command.

She smiled on his innocenece. The smile which was on her face but was soothing his heart. Past month has been a blessing. She healed him. All the baggage, All the hurt, All the pain he felt in his life and especially all the guilt of past 6 months was like washed away from his life. For the first time in his life, he was happy. The mornings waking up next to her were the best part. Sometimes he wonder how I managed to be this lucky. She was the warmth in his heart and what if someth..

R - What the hell idiot?

He said to himself.

P - What happened?

R - Nothing. Lets go. U don't want to be late for movie.

And he turned to move towards the door. When she hold his hand.

R - What?

P - I asked something. What happened?

R - Told u, nothing. Lets go for ur movie.

P - Raghav last time I m asking and u know I will know if ur lying.

She looked at him with her big eyes. He smiled.

R - Nothing Saaree Ka Dukaan... was just lost in ur smile. Ur beautiful smile and was thinking how i got so lucky. Thats it nothing else.

P - Nothing else Raghav?

R - Yes its just u r the beats to my heart and what will happen to me....

He choked.

P - if i die? Nothing. u r The Raghav Rao. Girls will be lining up for u. I suggest u wish I die so that...

His tears stopped her sentence.

P - Raghav... I was just joking. I am not going anywhere. I have to take all the revenge from u. U can't get rid of me so soon.

His knees suddenly felt heavy and he dropped to the floor. The mere thought of his heart leaving his life brought him to his knees.

P - Raghav... Sorry...sorry... I didn't knew u will get this serious. I was just joking and no one is that important....

R - U r.

His eyes puffed up holding back tears and clear rage in them.

R – Nothing can happen to Pallavi Raghav Rao. I will burn this whole world if u even get as much as a paper cut.

P - Ok.. Ok Raghav calm down. I am fine. Everything is fine. It was just a hypothetical scenario.

She poured water in glass.

P - Get up and have this. We need to reach theater also and if I missed trailers so I dont know about Pallavi Raghav Rao but Raghav Rao will face a lot of troubles.

He had a faint smile. She had a big one.

P - Such a baby. Baby Raghav Rao. Now run, we will be late.

R - U Saaree Ka Dukaan.

He had a proper smile. He picked the keys and went out to get the car.

P - What if this thought crossed to prepare u Raghav?

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Chapter 8

It was Friday morning. Pallavi was up and roaming around the whole house. All HHs were assigned tasks. Special lunch order was given. She has asked to get the Extra rooms cleaned and ready too. Raghav got curious seeing everything but was instructed in morning itself to don't ask or else. He didn't knew what or else means but the expression She had while saying so was enough for him to zip his mouth.

P - Reddy anna... This should have been done already. U know right how much work is left.

R - Reddy... now say Pallavi Ji is always...

She turned and her eyes told him to shut up or else and Raghav got that or else and went to his room. Pallavi got busy in her work and HHs prepared for their field day.

P - Lunch check... Rooms done... flowers...

R - Who is coming that u r getting so worked up?

P - sush... Let me do my work and y r u not ready yet. I asked u to wear what I have placed on the bed. U also have to go to railway station after that.

R - Railway station??? Y? Saree ka dukaan... I have dropped my plan to send out of Hyderabad. U can live here. No need to go to railway station.

P - Ha...Ha...Ha... Funny. Not to send anyone but to receive.

R - Receive? Who is coming? Ur brother?

P - No... My mother in law and my sister in law.

R - What??? Amma and keerthi are coming. How ... Y... Sorry what...

He raced through the stairs and picked her up.

R - U did that right? Thats y all these preparations and planning. And y u didn't informed me. I have to plan so many things. Amma's favorite food, her room, her..

P – Stop and get me down. Everything is done Mr. Rao. Only his son is not ready and will be late. So go and get changed.

R - No need to change. I am going... There can be traffic. Station might be logged.

P - Its still 3 hrs Raghav. Go change.

R - No. I can't be late. I need to go. I will change aftercoming back.

P - What? After coming back? Stupid. Ok don't change just listen one thing before leaving.

R - Is it important? I am getting late. We will talk later.

P - No. Just a min. It won't take long.

R - Ok just talk fast. I am getting late.

P - Ok. Thank you and I love you Raghav Rao.

R - Yes... I also thank you and lo.. What… What u said?

P - Nothing. Now u r not getting late.

R - Pallavi what u said?

P - I love you Raghav Rao.

He was shocked. It was first time one of them have said this but they always planned to make it special and then it never happened. But today without anything she said it. She said it.

P - What... now go. U will be late. Amma will be waiting.

R - Ya... Yes amma. Will call u once I... I received her.

P - Sure. Bye Raghav Rao.

R - I will ... I will talk to u.

She smiled. He turned back and start going towards his car. He didn't knew what just happened. He was happy but.. and y he didn't said back. She must be expecting. Should I go back and say or should I do something special.

F - Anna... lets go. Amma will be waiting.

R - Yes Farhad.

He get in the car.

Her smile. Her eyes. Those eyes. Why it is feeling like I m leaving something behind? Why this sudden pain again? What am I ...

He was silent in complete journey. Even on meeting amma, keerthi he smiled but it didn't reached his eyes. Amma saw that and looked at keerthi. They reached back home by 5 and reddy welcomed amma on main door.

R - Where is Pallavi?

HH - She went out for some work and have asked us to take care of this.

R - What? She knew amma is coming. How can she...

A - Leave it Raghav. Something urgent might have come up. Lets get inside. I m tired and need rest.

Farhad takes them inside. Raghav kept standing there on door.

How come she missed amma's welcome. She will never miss itfor the world. She missed... "Thank you and I love you Raghav Rao" her words echoed. Thank u for what? And y out of all days she choose today to say...

R - Farhad... Farhad... Farhad... come here at this moment.

F- What happened anna?

R - I will be asking only once and I don't need any explanation or side talk... just answer. I won't ask twice. Where is pallavi?

He ran inside the hospital throwing everything in his way and reached inside OT in a zip. There she was lying. No motion. All machines attached. Doctors operating on her.

D - Who are u and how u came inside? Go out.

Farhad ran in and hold him.

F - Anna... operation is going on. U have to move out for Pallavi Ji. Anna...

He dragged him out and before closing of door he saw her. Her face... her face.

Farhad made him sit on chair but his legs was not able to support him. He dropped to the floor. Amma and keerthi also reached and tried to talk to him but he kept staring at the red OT light.

A - Everything will be fine Raghav.

F - Anna she will be fine. Don't worry.

No voice can reach where he was. Eyes were dry. The pain was back. The restlessness was back. She smiled. She smiled and then she said it. She said I Love You. She said I...

And the OT light was off.

Edited by lateuser1234 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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what a cliffhanger....


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Posted: 4 years ago
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oh god now what

please dont make them suffer

he wont be able to live

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: lateuser1234

i want her alive in any case.. i can’t take plz make her smile again and him smile again i want this i love u from raghav.. plz don’t do bad with them plz bhayankar cliffhanger diya yr.. my heart skip beat😭

Chapter 8

It was Friday morning. Pallavi was up and roaming around the whole house. All HHs were assigned tasks. Special lunch order was given. She has asked to get the Extra rooms cleaned and ready too. Raghav got curious seeing everything but was instructed in morning itself to don't ask or else. He didn't knew what or else means but the expression She had while saying so was enough for him to zip his mouth.

P - Reddy anna... This should have been done already. U know right how much work is left.

R - Reddy... now say Pallavi Ji is always...

She turned and her eyes told him to shut up or else and Raghav got that or else and went to his room. Pallavi got busy in her work and HHs prepared for their field day.

P - Lunch check... Rooms done... flowers...

R - Who is coming that u r getting so worked up?

P - sush... Let me do my work and y r u not ready yet. I asked u to wear what I have placed on the bed. U also have to go to railway station after that.

R - Railway station??? Y? Saree ka dukaan... I have dropped my plan to send out of Hyderabad. U can live here. No need to go to railway station.

P - Ha...Ha...Ha... Funny. Not to send anyone but to receive.

R - Receive? Who is coming? Ur brother?

P - No... My mother in law and my sister in law.

R - What??? Amma and keerthi are coming. How ... Y... Sorry what...

He raced through the stairs and picked her up.

R - U did that right? Thats y all these preparations and planning. And y u didn't informed me. I have to plan so many things. Amma's favorite food, her room, her..

P – Stop and get me down. Everything is done Mr. Rao. Only his son is not ready and will be late. So go and get changed.

R - No need to change. I am going... There can be traffic. Station might be logged.

P - Its still 3 hrs Raghav. Go change.

R - No. I can't be late. I need to go. I will change aftercoming back.

P - What? After coming back? Stupid. Ok don't change just listen one thing before leaving.

R - Is it important? I am getting late. We will talk later.

P - No. Just a min. It won't take long.

R - Ok just talk fast. I am getting late.

P - Ok. Thank you and I love you Raghav Rao.

R - Yes... I also thank you and lo.. What… What u said?

P - Nothing. Now u r not getting late.

R - Pallavi what u said?

P - I love you Raghav Rao.

He was shocked. It was first time one of them have said this but they always planned to make it special and then it never happened. But today without anything she said it. She said it.

P - What... now go. U will be late. Amma will be waiting.

R - Ya... Yes amma. Will call u once I... I received her.

P - Sure. Bye Raghav Rao.

R - I will ... I will talk to u.

She smiled. He turned back and start going towards his car. He didn't knew what just happened. He was happy but.. and y he didn't said back. She must be expecting. Should I go back and say or should I do something special.

F - Anna... lets go. Amma will be waiting.

R - Yes Farhad.

He get in the car.

Her smile. Her eyes. Those eyes. Why it is feeling like I m leaving something behind? Why this sudden pain again? What am I ...

He was silent in complete journey. Even on meeting amma, keerthi he smiled but it didn't reached his eyes. Amma saw that and looked at keerthi. They reached back home by 5 and reddy welcomed amma on main door.

R - Where is Pallavi?

HH - She went out for some work and have asked us to take care of this.

R - What? She knew amma is coming. How can she...

A - Leave it Raghav. Something urgent might have come up. Lets get inside. I m tired and need rest.

Farhad takes them inside. Raghav kept standing there on door.

How come she missed amma's welcome. She will never miss itfor the world. She missed... "Thank you and I love you Raghav Rao" her words echoed. Thank u for what? And y out of all days she choose today to say...

R - Farhad... Farhad... Farhad... come here at this moment.

F- What happened anna?

R - I will be asking only once and I don't need any explanation or side talk... just answer. I won't ask twice. Where is pallavi?

He ran inside the hospital throwing everything in his way and reached inside OT in a zip. There she was lying. No motion. All machines attached. Doctors operating on her.

D - Who are u and how u came inside? Go out.

Farhad ran in and hold him.

F - Anna... operation is going on. U have to move out for Pallavi Ji. Anna...

He dragged him out and before closing of door he saw her. Her face... her face.

Farhad made him sit on chair but his legs was not able to support him. He dropped to the floor. Amma and keerthi also reached and tried to talk to him but he kept staring at the red OT light.

A - Everything will be fine Raghav.

F - Anna she will be fine. Don't worry.

No voice can reach where he was. Eyes were dry. The pain was back. The restlessness was back. She smiled. She smiled and then she said it. She said I Love You. She said I...

And the OT light was off.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Epilogue

P - What are u doing here?

R - Nothing just watching amma and keerthi do the preparations for Pooja.

He gave the slight smile.

P - So go and help them. Why are u lying like a log when they are working.

R - Because I want to sit with my wife and talk. Do u have any problem?

P - We can talk anytime but right now go and help them. See they are doing all the work.

R - Don't worry... If they will ask I will inform them that their sister in law is not letting me come.

P - sush.. U don’t say anything.

A - What are u doing there Raghav come here and help us. We only are doing all the work.

P - See I told u. Go and help Amma.

R - Let me tell her who is stopping me here.

P - Raghav... don't.

R - So what I will get for not complaining about u to her?

P - U will get a badge saying good boy. Happy?

R - No. I want a kiss.

P - R u mad? Nothing like that is going to happen.

R - Y r u worried. Its my dignity on the line. How will I show my face to world if somebody see this?

P - Ha... Ha... very funny but no. Just go and help her.

A - Raghav come here. What are u doing there alone? Come and help.

R - See she cannot notice u. Just go ahead. No one will know.

P - Raghav... nothing like that is happening. Now get up and help them or else.

R - No... No... Or else. U Mrs. Rao torchers ur husband too much.

P - Me what have I done?

R - U r not allowing a husband to sit and see her beautiful wife's face and thats a crime I tell u.

P - Don't blabber and go now. They need ur help.

A - So finally its done. Raghav... come we can start pooja now.

R - So its call. Lets go.

And she picked her up in his arms gently.

P - Raghav put me down. What amma will think. I can walk u know.

R - I know but u r not allowed to.

A - What are u doing?

R - Isn't it a tradition to carry ur six month pregnant wife to Pooja. I heard somewhere.

A - U and traditions, Right. I was about to say to get her too. So thats what u were doing sitting there. Sorry Pallavi... I didn't see u there.

Pallavi was out of words so just hid her face in his shoulders. He was smiling the whole time and she was just blushing.

P - Raghav now put me down. We have to start pooja. Pandit ji is also here. Its embarrassing.

R - What embarrassing. Pandit ji also should carry his pregnant wife. Its tradition.

Everyone had a good laugh.

P - Ok... now put me down. Pooja... remember?

R - U r too demanding Mrs. Rao.

And he put her down gently making her sit for Pooja and then taking his place by her side.

P - Amma u should have let me do the preparations. U guys had to do everything as some people were very busy.

She said staring at Raghav.

R - Busy in what... can u explain?

He smirked. She blushed.

A - U only did most of the things. We just handled a bit. Lets start the Pooja now.

Pandit Ji started chanting the hymns...

R- (Getting closed to her ears) U know what?

P -what?

R - I love u Pallavi Raghav Rao.

P - I love u too Raghav Rao.

She smiled. He smiled. His heart was at peace. His life was at his side.

Edited by lateuser1234 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Lovely. This is beautiful. Great piece of writing. Everything is there in this story. Guilt, Pain, Agony, Love, Care, Happiness. It's a complete story. Please write more.

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