Raghvi OS : New shade - Page 3

Originally posted by: Inese_20

It’s lovely. Captures the raw emotions! Isn’t it what love looks like out of the itv, in real world. There are no reasons for things we do and no justification for our actions when one is falling in love! Sometimes people just need other people, when they are vulnerable, even if that meant Pallavi would call a truce with Raghav. Nothing else matters in those broken moments. Beautifully captured. Do write more please. ❤️

Thank you.

Yes we can't expect these kind of scenes from Itv.

And I absolutely agree with you. When we are vulnerable we always will want some one or other to be there. We don't look for any reasons for our actions, it just happens.

I will try to write more! 😳

Wow, loved it so much. You write really well, I could easily visualise the scenario in my head. I'm very intrigued with whatever has made Pallavi this broken and I hope you'll continue the story :)

Originally posted by: __VIHU

Such a lovely os...

If you’re going to write that well then you’ll have to make it a little longer.... but it really made me feel same excitement that I do while watching Raghvi onscreen...

“I want to sleep”... Truckloads of vulnerability in a such a short line... And Raghav’s reaction... Aww

Thank you❤️

Thank you so much. 🤗

@B That really means alot. I'm happy to have made you feel like that. 😳

I usually write long OS but I wanted this to be simple yet powerful.

This was so beautiful, so emotionally touching! It's amazing how Raghav can be so soft and yet full of swag in the same moment. Ah, Pallavi. The things this girl has had to endure. I'm just glad she has Raghav in her life now.

Originally posted by: Mihika

I felt all of Pallavi's emotions in this small piece. Pain, grief, broken, vulnerable, empty and could very well see Raghav's undying care for her.

This is such a beautiful write up. Looking forward to more of your works. Had a lovely reading👏👍🏼

Thank you so much. 🤗

I had read your stories too, and I love them. I have been busy so haven't commented on them yet and right now I'm catching up with those one shots so I will definitely comment on your shots soon. 😳

Originally posted by: K_keechu

Thank you so much. 🤗

I had read your stories too, and I love them. I have been busy so haven't commented on them yet and right now I'm catching up with those one shots so I will definitely comment on your shots soon. 😳

This is such a sweet OS ❤️

Originally posted by: SONIA441

You have written it really well😳. The last line by Raghav was as usual full of swag😎. Apart from few spelling mistakes which obviously would go away in proofreading, I didn't see any flaws.

Raghvi is becoming like a drug to me & when you write this on a Sunday Noon with such great scenes between them, I can't thank you enough 😍

I'll wait for more of your work❤️

Thank you so much for reading it.

And yeah, I noticed that mistakes, actually I typed it in my phone, so that happened. I proof read it, I hope I cleared all the spelling mistakes.

Thanks again. I will try to write more. 😳

Woahhh...!! ❤️...that last dialogue of raghav...☺️❤️😆

Such a beautiful one ...keech...🤗..loved reading it...thanku n keep writinggg⭐️