Beautiful OS.
Loved it. You have a wonderful way with words and an amazingly creative outlook. Loved it.
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Beautiful OS.
Loved it. You have a wonderful way with words and an amazingly creative outlook. Loved it.
It was so so so good...I really liked the whole concept and kudos to the parenting...everyone was exactly the same as expected
His boys, despite being so similar physically, were totally opposite. Everybody thought so. Not him. They weren't opposites, just complementary. Both of them balanced each other's virtues and vices perfectly. Ryan's act of kindness and Ian's sense of fairplay assured him that as parents, he and Pallavi, had done a decent job.
"Did they apologised?" he inquired.
"I made sure, they do." pride was evident in his voice.
Raghav grinned but the expression evaporated as soon as it came.
"Did I made a mistake, dad?" he asked.
NO, was his answer. But voicing it out loud might've relayed a wrong message.
"Fighting is never good Ian. But I won't fault you for standing up for your brother" he ruffled his hair lovingly.
The child looked up at him with eyes shining with unshed tears.
"Do you want me to do something about that suspension" Raghav asked eyeing the note clutched in his good hand.
"No... It's fine. That's the least I can do to show some mercy on old Ms Das's poor nerves"
That earned him a chuckle from his father.
"I made sure, they do"
That line is full of RR's attitude š
re read this for the umpteenth time ,can't get over the beautiful story telling ! Loved RR as a father of the boys, wondering how he would be with a little girl ? awaiting ur next eagerly
re read this for the umpteenth time ,can't get over the beautiful story telling ! Loved RR as a father of the boys, wondering how he would be with a little girl ? awaiting ur next eagerly
Thatās a compliment of highest order dear...š¤
You know fathers are really good with daughters actually... I thought itād be quite challenging for him to have a son whoās so like him... And how he manage to keep his son from making the mistakes he did as a kid...
Iām literally mad about writing these days... letās see if I write about a baby girl...
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So lovely OS ā¤ļø
Hello... long time..
Iām glad you read it and liked despite not being so active in this forum...
It really warmed my heartā¤ļø
Thank youš¤
your RR in all ur OSs is love ā¤ļø , yes as a father of twin boys , husband of Pallavi and son of amma he is IRRESISTABLE.
Hello... long time..
Iām glad you read it and liked despite not being so active in this forum...
It really warmed my heartā¤ļø
Thank youš¤
Helloš¤
Ya ,I am not that active in this forum , but do visit time to time and when I see it's your OS , I just have to read it because I know I gonna like itš
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Omg
Iām in love with this OS ā¤ļø
Re-read for 5th time in a day
Will keep reading it again
Raghav as family man
Pallu as mom āØ
You kept their characters intact šÆ
Iām sure theyāll have different parenting skills but theyāre doing so well āØā¤ļø
In Love with the twins and this family
No words āØ
Ian is really like Raghav and Ryan is ā¤ļø Like Pallu
But yeah- it would be great to see how Raghav will behave if he ever has a princess
Sheāll have him tied around her lil fingers - I swear āØ
Iām just swooning at this OS āØā¤ļø
I loved it šÆ
Write more š³ā¤ļø
This is such a brilliant take on how RaghVi would act as parents šš¼
Awesome š