Raghvi OS : The Twin Trouble - Page 3

oo god this is so amazing

👏wow baba raghav is so cool like him

And the twins ❤️are mini.pallavi and raghav love it

Give us more beautiful stories 👍🏼😉

This OS was so cute Vihu

RaghVi & Their children Aww☺️❤️

I'm Adding this one to index thread

Next time if you write any new story, do comment the link there for me to add👍🏼

Fascinating OS! perfectly written

loved how Raghav spoke to Ian

he handled the matter well

he has been through this

so he knows better

the kids have a good upbringing

Originally posted by: __VIHU

I’m so happy that you liked it... Your comments always make me feel like a real writer people really wanna read from... (And less like a fangirl just posting her fantasies about this man and his family to pester others here, though that’s not so bad... God knows how I love doing that😆)

You liked the names.... high five... They have been in the back of my mind since time immemorial..

Glad I could make you feel that way😳Trust me all of us here love to read all your fantasies about this man ❤️😆

Hi5! We’ve good choices 😆

Hi!

I recently became active on this forum and have been reading your stories - you write so well! The concepts are so thoughtful and true to Raghav and Pallavi's characters. This was such a sweet take on their life as a family and their parenting skills. I LOVED that Raghav didn't snap back at his wife in front of their kids and how he truly taught the boys to fight for self defense, nothing more.

Beautifully written! Can't wait to read the next one! ❤

Originally posted by: Phoenix_75

Omg this was so cute waaahhh ❤️ Thank you for feeding our imaginations with Raghvi as parents Continue to write more❤️

After reading your short os.. such a nice compliment coming from you feels like an award in itself...

I hope you'll support the stories I'll about Raghvi in future too❤️

Originally posted by: christobelle

Next time u can include Farhad n harish spoiling this kids too🤣

Ian calling Harish gorilla uncle n asking him to dance would be fun🤣

If I ended up writing about the kids again.. I'll definitely include them.. 😆

Originally posted by: MsCeylon

Oh wow this was soooo touching

Beautifully penned bringing out the personalities of the parents so well balanced in the kids.

Hey there!

I'm so glad you found it well balanced... Such appreciative comments from readers really help dispell my insecurities about my writing...😳

Originally posted by: xerxes12

I loved this so much ❤️

wonderful bachhe they are..I so could imagine the little ones...and the proportionate blend of parenting they are getting. I loved how the little one is taught about the rules of fighting from the father as well as to be empathetic to sensitive issues from the Mother.

And the amezing parents..The parents have grown up so much as well. They have taught themselves the perfect timings ..when to be strict..where not to be angry...when to listen to their kids ...

It was such a pleasure to read this.

Keep writing on them.😘

Thak you for taking time to write such an insightful comment... Your comment really lifted my spirits, dear...

And it is always a pleasure for me as well for such lovely and appreciative readers ❤️