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Part 8

Hospital:

Mukti was resting in a bed, she was having weird flashbacks. They were all very unclear, and she couldn't understand anything. She could see a girl resting in a guys arm on the ground, with her hand on her chest, she sees the girl's mouth moving but couldn't understand, and then she hears an "I Love You", suddenly she wakes up, she screamed.
"Kya hua are you ok?"
Mukti looked to her side and saw Prem.
Mukti: tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Prem: mein toh tumhe yahan le aaya hoon.
Mukti: hum yahan kaise aaye? Aur tumhe toh chot lagi thi na, toh tumne kya apne treatment kar liya?
Prem: Mukti tum kya keh rahi ho?
Mukti: Prem! Tum… (She got off her bed and walked over to Prem) tumhe pata nahi…tumhe toh bohot gunde ne mara tum theek toh ho na???
Prem: Mukti…tum theek toh ho…
Mukti: haan, lekin… mein…me...tu...tum...Pre… (She faints)

15 minutes later she wakes up again, but this time in a different room, and Prem was next to her.

Mukti: Prem…tum, yahan kaise?
Prem: Mukti tum theek toh ho, tum kuch keh rahi thi, keh mujhe chot lagi thi, ya kuch
Mukti: kab…mujhe yaad nahi…
Prem: (thinks for a while) kuch nahi…tum theek toh ho, ghar chalna hai?
Mukti nods, then walks to the door, soon Prem come and they leave.

They get to the car and Prem opens the door for Mukti she sits and then he does to and they leave…

Prem: toh Mukti Avni ne mujhe kuch…
Mukti: mujhe kuch nahi suna….Avni ke barde mein..
Prem: nahi suna…kya….lekin agar voh baath yeh thi ke tum mujhe se pyaar karthi ho toh…
Mukti's mouth dropped open: tum kya keh rahe ho, tum toh sirf mere dost ho…
Prem: haha! Jhoot tum jhoot bhol rahi ho…
Mukti: nahi…mein nhai keh rahi koi jhoot…
Prem: toh mein ek sach kahoon???
Mukti: jo kuch bhi kehna chate ho kehdo…lekin mein kuch nahi sun rahi…
Prem: lekin tumhe suna parega…
Mukti: nahi!
Prem: I love you!
Mukti and Prem have eye lock, suddenly its starts raining, and the car stopped…
Mukti: gadi kyon rukhi?
Prem: meine nahi rukhi
Still looking at each other.
Prem: mein dekhe ata hoon…
He opens the hood still looking at Mukti, and then gets to work, he comes back quickly saying the car is broken.
Mukti: kya…gadi kharab hogaye ab hum ghar kaise poocheinge?
Prem: don't worry I always have a plan
Mukti: haan u do…but what about when…
Prem: ok don't get there, I will get a plan…okie…ur phone???
Mukti: I dunno where it is…
Prem: aur mera toh ghar pe hai…chalo hum walk kar ke jate hai…
Mukti: nahi…barish ho rahi hai…mein nahi jaongi!
Prem: toh tum nahi jao! Mein toh ja raha hoon! ...And he leaves the car.
Mukti has no choice but to follow and quickly runs behind him.
"Mukti! Bad choice! Stupid! Pagal! Is din pe yeh pehn rahi ho! Bohot sardi hai! Ab mein ji the ji mar…"suddenly Prem puts his coat over he shoulder. "ek minute gadi mein Prem ne Mujhe I love you kaha tha…"
Prem: Mukti meine jo tumse kaha, tumhe yaad hai…
Mukti: Prem…mujhe yaad nahi tumne kya kaha? (Pretending to hear him say I love you again…)
Prem grabbed Mukti's hand stopping her from moving forward…cupped her face in his hands and repeated.
Prem: I Love you!
Mukti closed her eyes: I love you too
Prem: Mukti…ek baath poochoon?
Mukti nods.
Prem: tum Avni se nafrat kyon karti ho?
Mukti suddenly opens her eyes: Kya!
Prem starts laughing: sorry…sorry! Tum jab gusse voh shocked wala face banati ho, toh…u look hilarious!
Mukti gets angry…
Prem: uh oh!
Prem starts running while Mukti chases him.
Prem suddenly gets to a very slippery slope and slips, Mukti comes and starts laughing at him, then Prem pulls Mukti down to so she was sitting next to him, but instead of sitting she slide down te slope and into the little lake at the bottom.
Prem quickly tried to grab her but she fell already, he also slides down to try to catch her,
Mukti: bachao! Bachao!...Mukti couldn't swim.
Prem: MUKTI! He stepped into the water and started to swim towards Mukti when he realized the water wasn't deep, Mukti stood up laughing.
Prem: that was not funny!
Mukti: it was for me!
Prem: agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh...he pulled Mukti in for a hug.
Mukti: ouch!
Prem: kya hua?
Mukti ran out of the water, and sat with her legs crossed.
Mukti: something bit me…on my foot….
Prem: omg…now what could it be? A shark?
Mukti: seriously Prem…dekho khoon nikal raha hai!
Prem ran to her side and saw that her foot was bleeding pretty badly.
Prem: omg…lekin kaise?
Mukti: ahh…shayad….it was a crab…
Prem: no look, he started to clean the cut and then tied it with a piece of Mukti's dupatta.
Mukti: Prem! Mera joda kharab kar diya!
Prem: sorry! Lekin I had to…
Mukti ab hum upar kaise jayenge?
Prem: umm…
Mukti: aur…I can't even put my foot down…it hurts….
Prem looks around and saw a cottage: wahan jake hum raat keliye yahan ruk jate hai…theek hai!
Mukti: ok...chalo…
She got up and started limping…suddenly Prem picks her up and carries her to the cottage, there was a little stool there so Mukti sat there while Prem tried to open the door.
Prem: chalo mujhe kuch do thake mein is thale ko khol doon.
Mukti looks around and didn't find anything, while Prem tried to open it with his hands. But finally Mukti found something and gave it to Prem, but before he grabbed it Mukti took his hand instead…haath she kyon try kar rahe the? Dekho…kitna khoon beh raha hai! meri baki dupatte she apna haath bandh lo…
Prem: ek minute Mukti…mujhe thala kholne do phir mein bandh longa!
Mukti: nahi! Haath do!
Prem gave her his hand, Mukti started cleaning his hand with half the dupatta piece left and then tied his hand with the other half.
Prem started to try opening the door again…soon it opened…Prem went in was shocked it looked like a bomb has exploded in there, but he did see a bed and a couch, there didn't look much bad, so he carried Mukti in and put her on the bed,
Mukti: tum kahan so ge?
Prem: yahin couch pe…
Mukti: ok…
Prem looked around to see if there was ne fire place or anything to drink or eat, Prem found a bottle and didn't notice that it was beer, and drank the whole thing; there were boxes of beer everywhere.
Prem: Mukti…tum kuch peogi?
Mukti: nahi…mein theek hoon!
3 hours later…
Prem was sitting at the end of the bed, crouched on the floor.
Mukti kept asking "Prem tum theek toh ho na…" but Prem never answered….
Prem: tumhe pata hai Mukti, ke mein tumse kitna pyaar kartha hoon!
Mukti shakes her head….
Prem: itna ke mein…ji the ji…tumhe voh kushiyaan dunga ke tum soch bhi nahi sakti!
Mukti: sachi!
Prem nods…
Mukti: Prem…tum so jao, tumne bohot pii li….
Prem: nahi…meine kya piya? Yeh toh pani hai…
Mukti: nahi Prem! Yeh daroo hai!
Prem: kya! Yeh daroo…
Mukti: haan Prem so jao….
Prem stood up and came on the bed…
Prem: kyon na mein yahan so jao…
Mukti: nahi! Mein tumhare saath nahi so sakti…
Prem: kyon nahi! Hum jab shaadi karenge toh phir hum ono ek saath hi soenge…toh abhi kyon nahi…
Prem comes on top of her holding her hands down…
Mukti: Prem…yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?
Prem: kuch nahi…bas mere pyaari Mukti ko admire kar raha hoon…tumhe problem ho rahi hai…
Mukti: nahi…lekin admire karo lekin mere upar se toh utharo…
Prem slowly moves towards her and started kissing her on the neck…Mukti just melted under him…she couldn't think of anything else as he put his lips on her. The whole night went as they were in each others arms. They didn't sleep for a long time.

The Next Morning….Mukti woke up to see Prem's face right in front of hers, Mukti thought I can't wait till me and Prem get married! I love you so much Prem!....omg! what! Prem…nooo...he…how could he spend the night with me…and I told him….how could I just melt under his arms like that…"
Prem: kya soch rahi ho…?
Mukti: um…ur awake?
Prem finally opened his eyes: iv'e been admiring ur face for the past hour.
Mukti got up quickly just sitting in the bed: Prem! I told u! We can't sleep together
Prem: Mukti, I love you, I can't resist…sorry.
Mukti: its ok this time, but it wont happen again…ok
Prem: promise…
They both find a phone in the house and phone Avni to pick them up…they starts to climb up the slope they fell down…after a tough time they finally get up and find Avni walking the other way looking for them.
Mukti: AVNI!
Avni turned around…oh thank god! Tum dono theek ho! Tumhe pata hai, tum dono ke parents ne mujhe aur karan ko raath bhar sone nahi diya, hum sab tumhe doondh rahe the!
Mukti: Avni….(she goes up to her and holds her ear) who'd you tell my secret too?
Avni: ouch! (she looked at Prem) sorry! You were upset, and I was planning on getting you guys together.
Mukti whispered in her ear: well good cause we are together.
Avni: ab mein drive karoon ya…tum dono chate ho ke mein drive karoon?
Mukti: nahi! Prem ko drive nahi karne do! Usne poori raath dharoo pi…
Avni: KYA Prem!
Prem looks down…: sorry I was really thirsty…
Avni: poori raath tum log soye kahan?
Prem: neeche ek cottage tha hum vahan gaye the…
Avni: acha chalo!
In the car:
Avni: toh Mukti! Tumhe pata hai! Tumhare parent's keh rahe the ke unhone ek lardki pasand kiya hai…tumhare liye…voh smart bhi hai….handsome aur toh aur…tum use janti ho!
Mukti: kya! Meri shaadi! (she looked at Prem)
Avni: mere paas uski tasveer bhi hai…dekhna chati ho…?
Mukti: lekin Avni…
Avni: na na na! dekho!
Mukti took the envelope from her and opened it, pulled the picture out, and saw Prem's picture.
Mukti: Kya! Yeh kaise?
Avni: meine tumhare maa baap ko bata diya tha…accidentally ke tum dono ek doosre she pyaar karthe ho…
Mukti: haan haan! Bohot natak karthi ho tum!
Avni: well atleast you guys r marring someone you love, my parents also picked a guy for me…he's handsome but I don't know him…I also have his picture…dekho gi?

Mukti: wow! kitna handsome hai yeh! Aww tum trade karo gi!
Prem: nahi! Kyon ki mein tumse hi shaadi karoonga!
Mukti: mein mazak kar rahi thi!
Prem: haan haan!
Avni: lo agaya tumhara ghar….
Prem and Mukti thank Avni as they leave the car, they enter Prem's house…and see there parents there…
(Mukti's Mom=MM, Mukti's Dad=MD, Prem's Mom=PM, and Prem's Dad=PD)
MM: Mukti! Beta tu kahan thi! mein kitni gabara gayi thi! Aur Prem ne teri khayal rakha na!
Mukti: haan maa….humhe kuch nahi hua…
Pm: Prem…tumne kya dharoo pi? Ugh mein yahan thak smell kar sakti hoon…
Prem: sorry mom…
MD: acha choro voh bekari baathein…humhe tum dono ko kuch batana hai!
Prem and Mukti: bataye…
PD: humne tum dono ki shaadi ki date fix kardi hai!
PM: aur tum soch rahe hoge ke hum kaise pata hai ke…
Prem: humhe pata hai..Avni ne app logo ko bataya…na
PM: haan lekin…oh mein bhool gayi…usi ne tum dono ko drop kiya tha…
MD: lekin tum dono ki sagaai bhi kuchi mahino mein nahi hai…pandit ji keh rahe the ke agla saal June mein shub morhurat hai…toh…
Mukti: theek hai…toh hum apni parai bhi khatam kar sakte hai…
MM: haan! Yeh achi baath hai!
Mukti: neways Avni ki bhi shaadi ho rahi hai…
PD: haan humhe pata hai!
Mukti: kool toh ab hum jaye Maa?
MM: haan chalo!
Mukti, her dad and mom all leave, but Prem pulls Mukti aside…
Prem: ek papi do na…
Mukti: Prem...kya keh rahe ho…sab ke samne…
Prem: koi baath nahi…plz…
Mukti: nahi Pre...(she quickly kisses her on the cheek and lets her hand go…Mukti quietly walks away)
PM: besharam! Apne maa baap ke samne hi!
Prem: oops….
PD: chal apne kamre mein ja…fresh ho ke khana kha…theek hai!
Prem nods and leaves.

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Luv ya Umam

kool so PM are getting married and Mukti has already started to have flashbacks! Can't wait for their wedding. That guy 4 Anvi is ok, but who is he? really hope that Basu pariwaar meet PM soon and the 2 remember their pichla janam as well. it will great seeing that! continue soon Umam

Part 9

A few months later

College Canteen:

Avni: toh Mukti, you know what! Mama told me everything about the guy, his name is Rajeev, I met him on the weekend too, he is really nice…and to too cute!
Mukti: nice and what did he think of you did he say anything?
Avni: he said I was adorable and he was lucky that he got a girl like me, he also said he was sure that we'd make a good couple and that he'd love me so much!, but seriously Mukti, it was like Love at first Sight!
Mukti laughs: so Avni where is Karan and Prem…?
Avni: oh there in the gym, working out as usual…but they don't have a class for like an hour, but we got to go, our class starts in 10 minutes! And it's in another building hurry!
Mukti: Okie hold on let me finish this drink… (She quickly took a few sips then ran after Avni)
Avni: toh Mukti, you know Rajeev's family is known in the Film industries! What if I get to meet a star! Like Johnny Depp!
Mukti: Johnny Depp kyon? Tum toh Orlando Bloom she miloge! Aur mein bhi!
Avni: haan! Orlando is so hot!
Mukti: aur Shiney! Hum use bhi milenge!
Avni: …Mukti…voh dekho…R.J, the schools jock, what is he doing here?
Mukti: mujhe nahi pata…aur voh dekho kaun hai?
Avni: voh toh Debonita hai! School ki sab si khoobsurat lardki…yea right! She looks like a…
Mukti: Na na! Don't be mean!
Avni: chalo lets go quickly otherwise if the look at us then, one of the groupies will try to get on you.
They safely get out of the school and get to the other building, soon in there class they start talking about mathematics, as they were taking a MBA course. After there class they all met again in the canteen

Prem: Mukti, tell me did you see that dude R.J today?
Mukti: haan aur it was a good thing Avni mere saath thi warna mein toh phass jathi
Avni: haan
Then Mukti suddenly stands up and rushes towards the bathroom,
Prem: Mukti!
Avni: kya hua?
Prem: mujhe nahi pata! Tum jake check karo!
Avni runs to the bathroom too, while Prem and Karan wait outside.
Avni soon comes out saying: call the school nurse, Mukti's tabyat theek nahi hai…ultiyaan kar rahi hai! Jaldi nurse ko bolao!
Prem runs toh the main office and tell them to send a nurse toh the canteens bathroom, the nurse soon comes and tell Avni to go outside and the other girls that were inside to get out.
Prem: oh my god…what happened to Mukti….is she ok…
Avni: well all she was doing was ultiyaan…toh mujhe nahi pata…
10 minutes later Prem couldn't wait outside anymore so he barged in,
Prem: nurse what happened to Mukti?
The nurse and Mukti turn around; Mukti looked scared, Mukti runs to Prem and hugs him,
Mukti: meine kaha tha na! You shouldn't have done that! I told you! Why didn't you listen to me…?
Nurse: Ms. Mukti…plz don't scream, it's not good for…
Prem: what happened? Mukti why are you crying...Prem slowly pulls her away, but still holding her arms he repeated his question.
Mukti: mein…mein…mein maa bane wali hoon…
Prem's arms drop to his side: kya…tum kya keh rahi ho?
Mukti: HAAN! Mein maa bane wali hoon, tumhare bache ki maa,
The nurse quickly leaves.
Prem: Mukti, toh yeh, buri khabar toh nahi hai…humare shaadi bhi 6 mahine mein hone wali hai (it is January)
Mukti: lekin Prem, shaadi she pehle maa bana buri baath hai, agar log kuch aur soche toh…meri beizaati hogi.
Prem: nahi, kuch nahi hoga, I promise!
Mukti just hugged Prem.

That evening when they went home
Prem: Mukti, mein tumse ek baath poochoon?
Mukti nods.
Prem: kya tum yeh baath apni mama aur papa se kahogi?
Mukti looked at Prem: mujhe nahi pata, kya kahoon mein
Prem: mujhe lagta hai ke tumhe unko batana chaiye…dekho yeh baath koi, raaz nahi hai, it's not a secret, but just don't tell anyone at school, vahan tumhari beizaati ho sakti hai…aur yeh mein seh nahi paonga, tum bas apni maa aur papa she kaho yeh baath...theek hai…
Mukti nods and quickly runs into her house.
Prem drives a little further and soon reaches his house.

Prem's House

He quickly freshens up and went downstairs for dinner but when he came down he saw Karan, Mukti, Avni and Rajeev at the door. Karan had a box in his hand it seemed large.
Prem: tum log yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Karan: Prem, meine abhi hi mere dost seh ek game bijwaya hai, its awesome…lets play it!
Prem: game…um kaunsa game?
Karan: it's called Guitar Hero 3, but it works for PS2, don't you have that?
Prem: uh, yea, but Guitar Hero, I've never heard of that.
Karan: c'mon Prem! Let's play!

An hour later:

Karan was on Expert already, and he just got the game, Rajeev was on Medium, and Prem was still on Easy.
Avni: Karan! Mujhe bhi khelna hai!
Karan: shh, mein abhi khel raha hoon
Suddenly he misses the key and it was really hard for him to get back on track and he lost.
Karan: see! You made me loose!
Avni: haan I wouldn't have if you let me play!
Karan: arg! Fine play!
Karan puts the game on easy and puts the song One on for Avni, on easy she was pretty good but she remembered something and paused the game.
Avni: Mukti tumne khelna hai?
Mukti shock her head: na mein bas dekhoon gi!
Avni: c'mon Mukti…plz try to karlo.
Mukti: theek hai…
She goes to bonus games and plays Through the Fire and Flames
She was so good she went onto Medium and was still pretty good, she went onto hard, but couldn't go ahead.
Rajeev: oh Prem! Man she's better then you!
Prem: yea yea, mujhe bhi khel ne do plz.
He takes the guitar from Mukti and tries each song she played but only got it on easy, and medium.
Mukti started laughing at him.
Prem: whatever she's better then you too.
PM: acha…chalo sab ko ghar jana hai…it is too late.
Everyone groaned…
Soon they were by the door heading outside.
Karan: hum kal aayenge…theek hai…
Prem: yea…bye…
PM: Mukti beta…ek minute ke liye ruk jao plz.
Mukti nods and comes over.
Prem: kya baath hai maa?
PM: Mukti tumne aaj jo apne maa baap ko bataya hai kya voh saach hai?
Mukti: haan, mein maa bane wali hoon.
Prem: kya mein kuch keh sakta hoon, mere deemag mein ek khayal aaya hai…kyon na hum shaadi abhi karein…
PM: ab karna hi parega, tu ne yeh jo kiya hai…
PD: lekin panditji she baath karni parega…
Mukti: mere maa baap karlenge, aap chinta mat kijiye.
PM: chal, ab tu ghar ja, bohot thak chuki hogi…chal ja ke so ja.
Prem: mein bhi jata hoon, Mukti ko drop karke ata hoon.
PM: acha theek hai beta, bye Mukti.
Mukti: namaste.
They both leave.

2 months later.

Basu House was decorated beautifully with flowers and lights. There was an engagement going on, but whose?
When we enter we see Prem and Mukti standing dressed in
Mukti wore:

Prem wore:

Suddenly we see Prem's Mom (Kanya) and Prem's Dad (Rahul) with Prerna and Anurag.
Then Mukti's Parent's (Laila and Manav) with Sneha and Yuvi and Simi and Rohan. Avni and Rajeev were having a drink in the corner and Karan was looking at girls with his friends. Karan's little sister was talking with Prem and Mukti.
Pia: oh aap dono mere kya lagte hai…chachi aur chachu ya bhabhi aur bhaiya???
Prem: Pia! Hum tumhe ek ghante se bata rahein hai ke jo tum chaho voh hi bolao ab kya tum ja sakti ho?
Pia: haan lekin rishte to nibane parega toh bataye, hum aap dono ko kya pukarein?
Mukti: Pia, hum tumhare chachi aur chachu ke umar nahi hai, toh tum humhe bhabhi aur bhaiya bolao, theek hai.
Pia: haan lekin aap toh mere chachu aur chachi… (They go on about what to call Prem and Mukti)
(So guys! Prem and Mukti have there memories back and are living with there families in Basu house.)
Soon the lights turn off, a song starts, some girls laughing, and then some people talking, we see Sneha, with Yuvi
Sneha starts singing…
Sneha: Aaj Hai Sagai Sun Lardki Ke Bhai Zara Nach Ke Humko Dikha
Aaj Hai Sagai Sun Lardki Ke Bhai Zara Nach Ke Humko Dikha
Kudi Ke Tarah na Sharma
Kudi Ke Tarah Na Sharma
Tu Meri Gal Maanja
Tu Meri Gal Maanja

Yuvi: Sabko Nachao Nach Nach Ke Dikhao Aa Mujhko Gale se Laga
Sabko Nachao Nach Nach Ke Dikhao Aa Mujhko Gale se Laga
Munde Se Zara Aankh Lara
Munde Se Zara Aankh Lara
Tu Meri Gal Maanja
Tu Meri Gal Maanja
Oye Soniye!

Rajeev: Sar Pe Saaja Ke Sehra Baarat Leke Aaon
Dulhan Tujhe Bana Ke Doli Mein Leke Jaon

O Shava O Shava O Shava O Shava

Avni: Bholi Samajh Ke Mujhpe Na Daal Aise Daane
Shaadi Nahi Karoongi Jaa Maanja Deewane

O Shava O Shava O Shava O Shava

Rajeev: Sun Albeli Meri Thanha Akeli Ab Kat Thi Nahi Ratiyaan
Avni: Jaare Harjai Chal Chod Kalai Sab Dekhti Hai Sakiyaan
Tu Meri Gal Maanja
Tu Meri Gal Maanja

Rajeev: Hoye!
Tu Meri Gal Maanja
Tu Meri Gal Maanja
Maanja!

Simi: Kehti Hai Meri Sakiya Dil Mein Hai Chor Tere
Kyon Haath Dhoke Aise Peeche Para Hai Mere

O Shava O Shava O Shava O Shava

Rohan: Sakiyon Se Apni Kehdo, Yeh Beech Mein Na Aayeen
Ban Jaye Meri Saali, Jija Mujhe Banaye

O Shava O Shava O Shava O Shava

Avni: Mein Na Aaon Tere Sang Tere Ach Nahi Dhaang
Na Aise Baath Bara

Rajeev: Mujhe Kar NA Toh Thaang Ab Baandh Kar Jaang
Aa Banke Dulhan Ghar Aa

Rohan, Yuvi and Rajeev:
Tu Meri Gal Maanja
Tu Meri Gal Maanja

Simi, Sneha and Avni:
Haan Tu Meri Gal Maanja
Tu Meri Gal Maanja

3 girls: Aaj Hai Sagai Sun Lardki Ke Bhai Zara Nach Ke Humko Dikha
3 guys: Sabko Nachao Nach Nach Ke Dikhao Aa Mujhko Gale se Laga
3 girls: Kudi Ke Tarah na Sharma
3 guys: Munde Se Zara Aankh Lara
3 girls: Tu Meri Gal Maanja
3 guys: Tu Meri Gal Maanja
3 girls: Tu Meri Gal Maanja
3 guys: Tu Meri Gal Maanja

Prerna: ab beta, Prem tu bhi nacho!
Laila: Mukti beta tu bhi!
Prem: hum kaise nachein? Um Mukti ki condition bhi toh….hum nahi nacheinge!
Prerna: Prem beta plz
Kanya: Prem, beta agar yeh keh rahi hai, toh baath nahi dalo, jake nacho.
Prem: theek hai, Mukti chalein?
Mukti: nods: but Avni and Rajeev, and Yuvi aur Sneha ko bhi nachna hoga humare saath!
Sneha: kya! Hum toh abhi nachke aaye hai! Nahi hum nahi jayenge!
Avni: haan! Mukti aise nahi karo humare saath…
Mukti: theek hai phir mein bhi nahi nach rahi
Suddenly the DJ calls Prem and Mukti to the floor for slow dancing.
Prerna: acha agar akele nahi nachna hai, toh phir yeh toh karlo, sab tumhe bola rahe hai!
Mukti and Prem nod and head to the floor a song starts.

Pehli Nazar Mein Kaise Jaado Kar Diya
Tera Ban Baita Hai Mera Jiya
Jane Kya Hoga Kya Hoga Kya Pata
Is Pal ko Milke Aa Jeele Zara

Mein Hoon Yahan Tu Hai Yahan
Meri Baahon Mein Aa, Aa bhi ja
O Jaan-E-Jaan Dono Jahan
Meri Baahon Mein Aa Bhool Ja Aa

O Jaan-E-Jaan Dono Jahan
Meri Baahon Mein Aa Bhool Ja Aa

Baby I Love You, Baby I Love You, Baby I Love You, Baby I Love You…So
Baby I Love You
Oh I Love You
I Love You
I Love You…So
Baby I Love You

Har Dua Mein Shamil Tera Pyaar Hai
Bin Tere Lamha Bhi Dushwar Hai
Dhadhkon Ko Tujhse Hi Darkar Hai
Tujhse Hai Rahtein
Tujhse Hai Chahtein

Har Dua Mein Shamil Tera Pyaar Hai
Bin Tere Lamha Bhi Dushwar Hai
Dhadhkon Ko Tujhse Hi Darkar Hai
Tujhse Hai Rahtein
Tujhse Hai Chahtein

Tu Jo Mili Ek Din Mujhe
Mein Kahin Hogaya Lapata

O Jaan-E-Jaan Dono Jahan
Meri Baahon Mein Aa Bhool Ja Aa
O Jaan-E-Jaan Dono Jahan
Meri Baahon Mein Aa Bhool Ja Aa

Kar Diya Deewana Dard-E-Kash Ne
Chain Cheena Ishq Ke Ehsaas Ne
Bekhayali Di Hai Tere Pyaas Ne
Chaya Suroor Hai
Kuch To Zaroor Hai
Yeh Dooriyan

Kar Diya Deewana Dard-E-Kash Ne
Chain Cheena Ishq Ke Ehsaas Ne
Bekhayali Di Hai Tere Pyaas Ne
Chaya Suroor Hai
Kuch To Zaroor Hai
Yeh Dooriyan

Jeene Na De
Hal Mera Tujhe Na Pata

O Jaan-E-Jaan Dono Jahan
Meri Baahon Mein Aa Bhool Ja Aa
O Jaan-E-Jaan Dono Jahan
Meri Baahon Mein Aa Bhool Ja Aa

Baby I Love You, Baby I Love You, Baby I Love You, Baby I Love You…So
Baby I Love You
Oh I Love You
I Love You
I Love You…So
Baby I Love You

Part 10

After the Engagement, Prerna had asked Mukti to come talk to her about something; Mukti came over, while everyone was heading off to their beds'.
Mukti: ji choti maa, apne mujhe bulaya
Prerna: Mukti beta, kya tu Doctor ke paas jathi hai, regular check up keliye?
Mukti: voh kya hai na ke mere paas time nahi hota, toh mein kabhi ja nahi payi.
Prerna: Mukti, you know this could be critical for you and you're child! Tomorrow after you're collage, tell Prem to take you! Ok…
Mukti smiles then nods and heads off to her room.

The Next Day:

Everyone was at the table eating breakfast.
Prerna was looking at everyone, they were talking and laughing, she was so happy to see her family again.
Prerna "Finally my family is back together! My Prem and Mukti are with me again, how long I have waited for them to come back t me! I knew they weren't dead, the couldn't, Apo*na had killed not only 2 people, but 3, the poor child who was in Mukti's stomach at that time died too, but this time nothing should happen! If that Apo*na comes to ruin our lives again, I won't spare her."
Soon the phone rings.
Prem: I'll pick it up.
He heads over to the phone, and then picks it up.
Prem: hello…
"Hello kaun?"
Prem: im Prem, who is this.
"Prem! Kya! Tu zinda hai lekin kaise"
Prem: hello who is this…?
"Um, Prem if you didn't recognize me then…im sorry I can't tell, I just wanted to see if what m son said was true or not, bye!"
The person hung up the phone.
Prerna: kaun tha…?
Prem: mujhe nahi pata, it was a guy, he said he wanted to see if what his son said was true or not.
Prerna: kaun ho sakta hai…
Anu: humare toh koi, mardh dushman nahi hai…
Mukti: lekin humare the…
Prem: kaun…?
Simi: Mukti tumhara matlab, voh toh nahi…
Mukti nods: Rocky…
Prem: Rocky…lekin, voh kaise…voh kiska baap hai…
Avni: I know! I was in student council in junior high!
Mukti: aur, yeh kiska baap hai?
Avni: uh, voh sunke toh tum log…nahi mein nahi bata sakti.
Mukti: c'mon Avni, plz tell us.
Avni: R.J…he's R.J's father.
Prem: R.J!
Avni: Rocky Junior…
(Kk kinda stupid, but it makes sense doesn't it)
Karan: agar mein kahoon toh, hum college ke liye nikal jayen ya nahi, humhe der ho rahi hai…
Mukti: theek hai…chalo.
They all leave.
Prem drove while sat Mukti in the front also, Rajeev, Avni and Karan all sat in the back.
Prem kept looking at Mukti, noticing she was kinda nervous, she found out she was pregnant the night they got killed, and then Rocky, they're worst enemy called there house, and R.J, he is also an enemy cause he is taking revenge for his father.
Mukti "does that mean, Debonita is also with them. She was with R.J ever since she started at school, well as far as I know, we just came here, what like a year ago, so that long I have seen them together, they have been giving me these weird looks for a long time, and I never figured it out, and Oh My God he looks exactly like him too!"
Prem "What is Mukti thinking, what if R.J tries to hurt her, if he even tries to touch her, I swear I'll kill him right then!"
They soon get to the college and everyone goes to there own classes. Unfortunately, Mukti's first class was with R.J.
Because in this class they got to sit wherever they wanted, R.J came and sat next to Mukti.
Mukti: tum yahan kyon bethe ho?
R.J: kyon mein chata hoon, koi problem…?
Mukti: haan, mein tumhare saath nahi bethna chati!
R.J: kya hua tumhe Mukti, har waqt Prem ke saath kyon bethi ho, huh, hum hai na, hum tumhare saath har waqt beth sakte hai…
Mukti: kyon ki…kyon ki…
R.J: kyon ki tum usse pyaar karthi ho, ya natak ka pyaar…
Mukti: mein usse pyaar karthi hoon, tumhe koi problem ho rahi hai, toh tum chale jao!
She got up and left the class, but on her way out the professor was heading in so he told Mukti to sit, the only seat left to sit in was next to R.J. Mukti sat down quietly.
The professor started giving long lectures as they had to write down what he was saying, they had to get in partners for a lab class they had, but Mukti got paired with R.J. they had to go on the computer and do some accountings. Mukti was getting a bit drowsy, and the professor kept telling her to keep her head in the work, don't doze off. But Mukti couldn't help it.
Mukti: professor, im getting a little tired, can I go home.
Professor: then you should've rested before you came
Mukti: im sorry professor, it's just that…
Professor: yes it's just that…
Mukti: mein aap sabko nahi bata sakti, mein ja rahi hoon!
And she left the class, once she got to the canteen; she saw Prem and Rajeev there.
Mukti: tum log yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Rajeev: oh humare class jaldi khatam hui to hum yahan beth rahe the.
Prem: Mukti tumhari tabyat toh theek hai, you look, like you really tired.
Mukti: haan, class mein, I was dozing off, aur professor mujhse pooch rahe the sab ke samne ke mein kyon jana chati hoon.
Prem: Mukti don't all teachers know about it…
Mukti: haan lekin humare professor aaj nahi tha, it was a substitute.
Prem: haan lekin he shouldn't be asking you like he needs to know, I mean he's just a sub….
Rajeev: Toh ab tumne aapna classes skip kiya hai …?
Mukti nods: haan im skipping it.
Rajeev: omg! Really! I never thought you'd do it…
Mukti: actually Prem, mujhe aaj ek check up keliye jana hai, toh agar tum ao toh theek hoga…
Prem: haan, I'll come…kab hai appointment?
Mukti: 1:30…
Prem: ok we have to be there in (he looks at his watch) omg! Like 10 minutes, chalo…
Prem: Rajeev…Sabko batana ke aaj tum logon ko bus pe wapas jana hoga!
Rajeev nods and Prem and Mukti leave.

Hospital:

Nurse: Miss. Mukti…ab aap aa sakti hai…
Mukti gets up…and goes in to the room, soon a nurse comes out calling Prem into the room…once the check up was over they finally gave the results to them, Prem wasn't in the room, he was told to get some medicine for Mukti.
Doctor: Miss. Mukti…kya aapne aapna khayal rakha hai in char mahino mein?
Mukti: actually mujhe bas time nahi mila regular check up keliye jana mein…aur…
Doctor: Miss. Mukti, the thing is, Ur in a critical state….
Mukti: kya…what do you mean…
Doctor: actually, I don't think it's in how you're taking care of your self because they baby is healthy, but the thing is... (He tells her something in mute.)
Mukti: lekin bacha toh theek hai…
Doctor: bacha theek hai, lekin delivery ke waqt kuch complications ho sakte hai!
Mukti: oh…
Doctor: isiliye, meine Mr. Prem ko kaha hai ke kuch strong dawai leke Aayeen, aapko bohot aram chaiye!
Mukti: theek hai…mein samajh gayi…lekin yeh baath aap Prem ko math bataye…theek hai…
Doctor: lekin kyon, voh toh baap hai is bache ke…
Mukti: lekin agar usko yeh baath pata chali toh voh yeh se nahi payega…
Doctor: oh…
Mukti: …Doctor agar mein is bache ko janam doon toh…
Doctor: humhe nahi pata, is mein 50-50 chance hai ke aap bach jayengi…
Mukti: aap please yeh baath Prem se nahi kijiye…please…
Doctor: agar aap chahe toh um yeh baath Mr. Prem ko nahi batayege, lekin agar aapne delivery thak nahi bataya, toh humhe batana hoga…
Mukti nods and gets up to leave, when she c's Prem at the door, Mukti gets shocked.
Prem: Mukti kya hua, you seem as if you saw a ghost…what happened?
Mukti: kuch nahi
Prem: Aur Doctor what were the results…?
Doctor looks at Mukti: Miss. Mukti is having a healthy baby, just make sure she takes those medicines ok..
Prem nods, Mukti smiles: chale Prem?
Prem: haan, aur yeh hai tumhari dawai (one of them), sone se pehle ek aur uthne ke baadh ek. Aur doosre dawai ko tumne har 5 ghante ke baadh lana hai.
Mukti nods and they soon get to there car.
That evening, Mukti had to study for her last exams in the college. So she, Prem, Avni and Rajeev were staying at the Colleges canteen to study.
Avni: im thirsty! Who wants a drink…
Mukti: uh, mujhe Pani Chaiye…
Avni: Prem…?
Prem: nah, im ok…
Avni: ok! Rajeev, tum mere saath ao!
Rajeev: ok…chalo…
They both leave and soon come back laughing.
Avni: yeh lo Mukti…still laughing…
Rajeev: that was hilarious!
Prem: kya hua…why are you laughing?
Rajeev: oh kya hai ke humne R.J ko dekha…(he says something, we can't hear)
Prem and Mukti start laughing their heads off: really!
Mukti: omg that is hilarious…
Prem: why would she do that too him?
Rajeev: I don't know…then she spilt all her coke on his face…
Prem: wow! Must have been really hurt…
Avni: yea…lekin ab mujhe nahi lagta ke humhe un par hasna chaiye…
Mukti: haan, I feel bad too, agar koi mujhe aise dump kare toh…I would be really hurt! Aur sabke samne! Oh My God, mein toh kabhi college wapas nahi aati!
Prem: Eyyy! Aise kya baath kar rahi ho, dekho im the one and only…for you…toh voh kabhi nahi hoga!
"Hey Prem…Mukti…"
Prem and Mukti turn around to see someone, his age was probably around 40's…and he seemed a little bit too old, to be coming to a college, cause he was dressed in Gangster clothes but was really old.
Prem: um…aap kaun…?
"Mujhe pechana nahi…?"
Mukti: aap batayenge aap hai kaun…
"Mein toh Rocky hoon…"
Prem and Mukti get shocked…
Avni: oh…this is rocky! I thought that R.J's dad would be a little more younger, not that much wrinkled skin…omg! You totally need a make over…eww look at… (Rajeev covered her mouth)
Prem: get lost from here!
Rocky: wait, listen to what I have to say first…
Mukti: we don't want to listen to any of your baqwas!
Rocky: not even if I say that, the plan on killing you guys was mine and Apo*na's!
Mukti: what are you trying to say…
Rocky: that, that night when you too died, that night I was there. Apo*na had shot Prem three times didn't she. But once you both were dead, I came there…Apo*na gave me my money, as I told you I know a lot of people who will do work for me…I sent those gunde to kill you too…and my plan worked…

kk, and next time ill only be updating on Kasauti Forums, so there well be no updates on this forum,for this ff...kk hope you enjoyed this part...and if you all want to keep reading it here is the link for it in Kasauti Forums...

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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=812895&TPN=1

Luv ya

Umam

Nice story !!--
am slightly confused tho-- so does prerna knw that this isnt really her prem and mukti although they actually look alike ??
newez-- gr8 stuf-- cant wait to read the nxt part !! :D