TJNJ - prt10 pg3 and a Note...

k this is a new ff on Prem and Mukti and Rohan and Simran(Meri Doli Tere Angana)this ff starts from way back wen Prem about Prerna being his mom and keeps calling her Mother India...but he does not noe about Mukti yet...(i forget does he even noe about her in this part?)

Character Sketch:

Basu's

Anurag and Prerna Basu- been married for over 25 years, are good friends with Kapoor family
Sneha Basu/Kapoor- she is the oldest daughter of the family
UD/Prem Basu- he is the middle child and hate staying in the house day and night so he leaves for parties and comes back drunk everyday..
Rohan Basu-he is the youngest and he really cares for his sister and parents, he is in love with a girl @ the collage but hasn't told her yet.

Kapoor's

Kiran and Ramesh Kapoor- have also been married for over 25 years and are good friends with Basu family.
Yuvraj Kapoor(Jatin Shah)- the olest son he is ver intelligent and smart he and Sneha are married
Mukti Kapoor- she is very nice and sweet girl...her whole family loves her alot...her brother is overly protective about her and she loves her babhi and siblings alot
Simran Kapoor(Simi)- she is the youngest she is ver bubbly and cares for everyone and everything she noes...she is in love with someone in the Collage but hasn't told him yet...she plans on telling him after school one day...

well thats the charaters and if i get atleast 5-8 comments ill post part 1 up in a while! hope u liked it

Umam

heyyy! uh oh, Prem's a bad boy type! 😆 cont soooon!

here is the update...

Part 1:

We c a huge house decorated as if there is a wedding going on, then slowly we enter the house and c that there is no wedding but a ceramony of someone's wedding happening then we c the bride and the groom(aka Sneha and Yuvraj)Then everyone else! Prerna, Mr.Bajaj, Anurag, Rohan, Prem, Mukti, Simran, Kiran, and Ramesh.

This is what all the girls are wearing:

Sneha:

Prerna:

Mukti:

Simran:

Kiran:

Prerna: Sneha chalo tum aur Yuvraj nacho!
Sneha: nahin mom! mein nahin....Rohan se poocho!
Prerna: nahin tumhari Ceramony hain tum karo
Yuvraj: im up for it!
Sneha: ...umm....ok fine chalo...lekin, lekin, lekin! Prem, Mukti, Rohan, aur Simran ko bhi dance karna hoga! ok
Prerna: mujhe lagta hain ke sab nachein ge lekin Prem nahin
Yuvraj: Prem mera dost hai voh zuroor dance kare ga!

Sneha and Yuvraj: Chalo guys! hum nahein ge
Rohan and Simran @ the same time: OKAY!
Mukti: acha chalo sneha...oopssss i mean bhabhi!
Prem: nahin mein nahin nachoonga
Yuvraj: c'mon Prem!!!! chalo man...mere liye!
Prem: nahin i dont like to dance....
Yuvraj: ok w/e c'mon guys lets go dance

They dance to Gori Gori from Main Hoon Na

Yuvraj and Rohan: Gori Gori Gori Gori Gori Gori
Kabhi Kabhi Kahin Kahin Chori Chori

Gori Gori Gori Gori Gori Gori
Kabhi Kabhi Kahin Kahin Chori Chori
Chhup Chhup Ke Tum Mila Karo
Pyaari Pyaari Baatein Waatein Kiya Karo
Par Yun Na Milna Kisise Kabhi Hamare Siwa

Sneha and Simran: Gore Gore Gore Gore Gore Gore
Bhole Bhole Naye Naye Kore Kore
Dekho Dekho Hum Dono Meet Hai
Suno Suno Dil Ki Jo Preet Hai
Par Sun Na Paaye Inhe Na Koi Hamare Siwa

Yuvraj and Rohan: Gori Gori Gori Gori Gori Gori
Kabhi Kabhi Kahin Kahin Chori Chori

Sneha, Mukti and Simran: Gore Gore Gore Gore Gore Gore
Bhole Bhole Naye Naye Kore Kore
(Prem cums in but doesn't sing, just dances)
Yuvraj: Jo Tum Ho Aa Gaye, To Sapne Chha Gaye
Jo Tum Ho Meherbaan To Rut Hai Jawaan

Sneha: Jo Hum Hai Mil Gaye, To Gul Hai Khil Gaye
Jo Hum Tum Hai Yahan To Mehka Sama

Yuvraj: Bheegi Bheegi Dheemi Dheemi Hai Hawa
Khoyi Khoyi Soyi Soyi Hai Fiza

Sneha: Dheere Dheere Humein Yeh Kya Ho Gaya
Howle Howle Hosh Hi Kho Gaya

Yuvraj and Rohan: Ab Na Rahe Tumhe Yaad Koi Bhi Hamare Siwa

Gori Gori Gori Gori Gori Gori
Kabhi Kabhi Kahin Kahin Chori Chori

Sneha, Mukti, and Simran: Gore Gore Gore Gore Gore Gore
Bhole Bhole Naye Naye Kore Kore

Rohan(thinking):Jo Hai Yeh Dooriyan To Hai Betaabiyan
Jo Paas Aao To Haazir Hain Jaan

Simran:Jo Tum Betaab Ho To Tum Ab Yeh Suno
Jo Tum Is Dil Mein Ho To Doori Kahan
(Rohan stops thinking)
Rohan: Zara Zara Jhuki Jhuki Si Nazar
Abhi Abhi Thodi Thodi Thi Idhar

Simran:Meethi Meethi Baatein Kaho To Kaho
Pore Pore Lekin Abhi Tum Raho

Sneha: Kuch Din Kaato Aur Zindagi Hamare Siwa

Yuvraj and Rohan: Gori Gori Gori Gori Gori Gori
Kabhi Kabhi Kahin Kahin Chori Chori
Chhup Chhup Ke Tum Mila Karo
Pyaari Pyaari Baatein Waatein Kiya Karo
Par Yun Na Milna Kisise Kabhi Hamare Siwa

Sneha and Simran: Gore Gore Gore Gore Gore Gore
Bhole Bhole Naye Naye Kore Kore
Dekho Dekho Hum Dono Meet Hai
Suno Suno Dil Ki Jo Preet Hai
Par Sun Na Paaye Inhe Na Koi Hamare Siwa

Yuvraj: Gori Gori Gori Gori Gori Gori
Kabhi Kabhi Kahin Kahin Chori Chori

Sneha: Gore Gore Gore Gore Gore Gore
Bhole Bhole Naye Naye Kore Kore

Prerna: oh ho! Sneha!(getting angry)
Sneha: ab kya?
Prerna: Prem aur Mukti ko toh ane bhi deti!
Sneha: meina kab roka??? Prem toh ana hi nahin chata aur Mukti ko...meina use nahin roka
Prerna: Prem aur Mukti!
Mukti: ji Choti Maa
Prem: what is it Mother India???
Prerna: ab tum dono nacho!
Prem: nahin!!! abhi toh nach ke aya hoon!
Mukti: mein bhi!
Prerna: lekin ab mein keh rahi hoon ke tum dono nacho!
Prem: fine!
Prerna: kya hua Prem itni jadli maanli
Prem: mein aapko baad mein dekhta hoon
Mukti: ji Choti maa agar Prem karega toh mein bhi!!!

k thats were ill stop it today plzzz comment bad and good(i need some to continue) plzz and thank you!!!!
bye for now

Luv ya

Umam

hey umam nice stsart ...continue s00n 😊

Part 2

Prerna: ok but ill pick the song ok! w/e song i give u'll dance ok!
Both: ok
Prerna: umm Jhoom Barabar Jhoom
Mukti: choti maa lekin voh gana toh 2 couples ke liye hain
Prerna: yeh toh hai....hmmm phir...Rohan aur Simran...ok!!!!
They all say yes then go to the center...

Prem: Kar dhoom dhamaka
Rohan: Ho jaye tamasha
Mukti: Chod gullepeki
Simran: Tu aaj ka paasha

Prem: Kar dhoom dhamaka
Rohan: Ho jaye tamasha
Mukti: Chod gullepeki
Simran: Tu aaj ka paasha

All: Kar dhoom dhamaka
Ho jaye tamasha
Chod gullepeki
Tu aaj ka paasha

Prem: O re masti mein aaj jhoomo re
Simran/Mukti: Kar masti mein aaj jhoomo re
Rohan: Tu bin bajae jhoom
Prem: Ya tin bajae jhoom
Simran/Mukti: O ek lagave thumka
Rohan/Prem: tu teen lagake jhoom
All: O sa re ga ma ga ma sa re choom le
Phir Ghoom le
Aaj Jhoomo re Jhoomo re Jhoomo reeeeee
Jhoom barabar, Jhoom barabar, Jhoom barabar jhoom
Jhoom barabar, Jhoom barabar, Jhoom barabar jhoom

Prem: Badmasi hai
Ishq hai aashiqi ,ayaashi hai
Rohan: Ayaaashi hai charo dil choro ki talashi hai
Simran/Mukti: Baazi mehengi lagi hai aadi seedhi lagi hai
Prem: Tu bin bajae jhoom
Rohan:Ya tin bajae jhoom
O ek lagave thumka
Simran/Mukti: tu teen lagake jhoom
Rohan/Prem: O sa re ga ma, ga ma sa re choom le
Phir Ghoom le
Aaj Jhoomo re Jhoomo re Jhoomo reeeeee

All: Jhoom barabar, Jhoom barabar, Jhoom barabar jhoom
Jhoom barabar, Jhoom barabar, Jhoom barabar jhoom

Rohan: ohhh ghoomaya raat ka chakka jo chalaya hai
Simran/Mukti: chalaya hai chand ko dau pe lagaya hai
Prem: Khise khulne lage hai
Rohan: Hire tulne lage hai
Prem: Tu bin bajae jhoom
Rohan: Ya tin bajae jhoom
Simran/Mukti: O ek lagave thumka, tu teen lagake jhoom
Simran/Mukti: O sa re ga ma, ga ma sa re choom le
All: Phir Ghoom le
Aaj Jhoomo re Jhoomo re Jhoomo reeeeee
Jhoom barabar, Jhoom barabar, Jhoom barabar jhoom
Jhoom barabar, Jhoom barabar, Jhoom barabar jhoom

After the party was over everyone left....@ Kapoors house:

Mukti and Simran share a room...

Mukti: simran...
Simran: hmm kya hua?
Mukti: i think i like Prem
Simran: kya? i mean u just saw him once and that too at the party!
Mukti: i noe...but...
Simran: well u wanna noe my secret...
Mukti: sure...wat is it?
Simran: i...love..Rohan..dont tell neone not even Bhabhi
Mukti: this is weird we both like boys from our parents friends house....
Simran: yea...lekin kisi ko kuch nahin batana!
Mukti: mein nahin kahoongi agar tu kuch nahin kehegi!
Simran: ok...promise
Mukti: promise...ab good night humhe sona hain kal college hain yaad hain!
Simran: oh yea...good night!

The Next Morning @ College:

Mukti enters wearing a magenta Churidaar with matching jewllery and Simran enters
wearinga blue skirt and a white top, some braclets on one hand and her purse hanging
from her other shoulder. Then they c Rohan from a distant and call him to come with
them to there lockers and so rohan comes but with Prem by him.

Rohan: hey Mukti ur new here so i thought if u didn't figure out Prem's name @ the
party so i'd introduce him to u here
Mukti: ok....hi im Mukti!(she takes out her hand) friends?
Prem: ok im UD not Prem! and i dont want to b friends right now! later!(and he leaves)
Mukti: ok so not the way i thought he'd b
Rohan: wat?
Mukti: nothing chalo class shuru ho rahi hain!

In the Class:

the teacher started talking about a trip they'd b having in a couple of days for
a little holiday...Mukti was not paying attention @ al she was writing her and
Prem's name in a book with hearts, then the teacher caught her and asked if she could read
wat she wrote to the class.

Mukti: no..i cant(she luked @ Prem)nahin mein nahin par sakti
Teacher: c'mon ur a new student u shouldn't have been doing that...ne ways this is ur
first day here so i will let u go...but dont let it happen again. wats ur name?
Mukti: Mukti Kapoor...
Teacher: c'mon go to ur seat!
Teacher kept talking and Mukti just kept looking @ Prem
Teacher: ok guys start ur packing cause we'll b leaving in 2 days.
Prem: hey r u done yet?
Teacher: no im not but i think that u'll be staying after school today!
Mukti starts laughing
Teacher: same goes for u Ms. Kapoor!
Mukti: kya??? fine...
Teacher: u may go...but come back @ the end of the day!

Canteen:

Rohan and Simran were sitting and chatting wen finally Mukti gets there laughing.
Rohan: are Mukti kya hua?
Mukti: aaj Prem ko dettention mila
Rohan: aur tu has rahi hain!
Mukti just nods
Rohan: tujhe pata hain agar Prem ko pata chala to...
Simran: toh????
Rohan looks up...@ a figure behind them...
Simran looks back and is shocked...
Mukti: tum logo ko ho kya gaya! mein akeli has rahi hoon tum bhi...kahan dekh rahe ho
She looks back...
Mukti: heyy tum kaun ho?
"Mein...mein toh Rocky hoon..."

nice.. i love it.. plz continue soon!!

bisma

hey i loved ur ff plz cont. soon!!!

Part 3

Mukti: oh to tum Rocky ho!
She stands up and slaps him
Mukti: Besharam! how disgusting! Go away from me!
Rocky slowly walked away.
Simran: Mukti! yeh kya kiya tumne!
Rohan: just wait Mukti, he'll be back!
Mukti: mein kisi se nahin darti! so let him come...lets c wat he can do.
Then Prem comes with his friends.
Prem: wat did u do Mukti, you noe wat he does to girls
Mukti: no and im not afraid either
Prem and his friends just leave.

Simran: Rohan to mere ghar umm 5 baje? ok
Rohan: yea...cya later(he leaves)
Mukti: yeh kya ho raha hain?
Simran: project keliye...Rohan is my partner.dont worry!...ok chalo lets go home!
Mukti: nahin remember i have to stay for detention!
Simran: oh ya...lekin tu ghar kaise ayi gi?
Mukti: mein ajaongi tum jao!
Simran: ok bye di!
Mukti: bye!

Class:

the teacher was waiting for PM, Mukti got there on time, the teacher gave her some work...30 mins later Prem came.
Teacher: Mr. Basu!...u now have to stay 30 mins longer!
Prem: and y?
Teacher: because ur 30 mins late
Prem: w/e..heyy Mukti u noe wat i heard!
Mukti: wat?
Prem: Mother India was talking to rohan and he accidently said that he...loves ur sister!
Mukti: wat really!!!
Prem: and mother india already called the pandit too omg! she is so annoying!
Mukti: Prem aise nahin sochte apni maa ke baare mein
Prem: yea w/e

The teacher gave Prem some work too.

Mukti: Prem kya Simran ko pata hain yeh sab?
Prem: of course she was at my house
Mukti: wow! my youngest sister! can't beleive it!
Teacher: then go check! cause ur time here is over!
Mukti: really! thanks! bye Prem!
Prem: bye!
Teacher: oh ms. kapor!
Mukti: yes!
Teacher: our trip is post-poned! we'll be leaving in about a week...
Mukti: ok madam!
Mukti leaves.

She was waiting @ a bus stop wen she saw Prem drive by...then he stopped and reversed...
Prem: kahan ja rahi ho?
Mukti: tumhare ghar!
Prem: mein tumhe drop kar doon?
Mukti: nahin mein theek hoon bus ane wali hogi!
Prem: Miss Mukti! meine transit station ko phone kardiya hai aur yahan aaj koi bus nahi ayi gi! sorry toh mein tumhe drop kar doon?
Mukti: ok!
She goes to the car...but before she opened the door, Prem came out and opened it for her
Mukti: thank you!

Basu House:

Simran: Mukti! guess wat! mere sagai ho rahi hain!! aur yeh bhi guess karo ke aur kis ki ho rahi hain!
Mukti: batao...by the looks of it...sirf mein aur Prem hain...
Simran: ...umm Mukti sorry lekin...tumhari sagai ho rhai hain..lekin Prem ke saath nahin...
Mukti: kya!
Simran: aunty ki behen ke bete ke saath...unke naam Rudraksh.
Mukti: oh...
Simran: Mu..
"heyy everybody! kis ki sagai ho rahi hain!?"
Prerna:Prem beta...Rohan ki sagai hain...aur Mukti ki bhi
Prem: oh! Congrats bro!...
Rohan: thanks..
Prem: and to u too Mukti!
Mukti nods.
Prem: Kya hua Mukti tumhari ankhon mein ansoon?
"are! meri behene ki sagai hain aur mujhe kuch pata hi nahin!"
She runs to someone behind Prem...
Mukti: bhaiya!
Yuvraj: are Mukti!...tum ro kyon rahi ho?
Mukti: kuch nahin...yeh bas kushi ki ansoon(lieing)
Yuvraj wipes her tears and hugs her: are Simran...tu kyon akeli kari hain?
Simran just runs to Yuvraj and hugs him to.
Yuvraj: ok no crying!...Maa wen is the sagai?
Prerna: in 2 days!
Ramesh: are! bete koi baath nahin! hum jald se jald thayariyan karenge!
Kiran: haan! dont worry!
Anu: ab in sab ki shadi hone do phir hum Prem ke bare mein socheinge
Prem: no...not me i dont wanna get married!
Anu: c'mon Prem kabhi toh shaadi karni paregi!
Prem: toh baadh mein karoonga abhi nahin..abhi toh is musibaath(pointing at Rohan) ko nikale phir mere bare mein soche!
Anu: ...theek hain! tere bare mein nahin sochenge!
Rohan: hey!! im not a musibaath!
Prem: yea w/e...acha toh mein jata hoon!...
Prerna: kahan ja raha hain?
Prem: the...bar! do u have a problem..ab mein ja raha hoon bye!
Prem leaves...
Mukti: mujhe bhi jana hain...bye choti maa!
Prerna: bye beta!
Mukti walks outside: Prem!
Prem: U...D
Mukti: Prem...mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai
Prem: bolo...mein sun raha hoon...
Mukti: mujhe bhi tumhare saath ana hai.
Prem: kya?
Mukti: haan! mujhe bhi jana hai!
Prem: ok toh ao...meina kab roka?
They leave for the bar...
In the Car:
Mukti: Prem...kya hum mere ghar ja sakte hain?
Prem: sure lekin kyon?
Mukti:...mein vahan jake tumhe dekhaongi!
Prem: ok

They get to Muktis house and Mukti tells Prem to wait..she'll be back...soon she comes back wearing a very long sweater that reached upto her knees..she sat back in the car.
Prem: ur wearing that to the bar?
Mukti: chalo!

They finally reached the Bar.
Prem: f ne one asks i dont noe u...
Mukti looks @ him...oh yea ill tell them that!...

Then Mukti leaves Prem... soon the lights turn off, som gas blows on the floor...then the songs Crazy Kiya Re starts.
Some guys starts singing: C C C razy...Yeah Sexy
(the girls back is shown)
Some of the girls: Sexy lady on da floor keep you coming back for more
Sexy lady on da floor
keep you coming back for more
(the girl turns around and its Mukti she is wearing: )
Prem is shocked
Chori chori kiya re
Dil yeh dil liya re
Chori chori kiya re
Dil yeh dil liya re

Jadu se jadu kiya, Kiya re

Jaagi soi rahoon
khoi khoi rahoon
uski yadoon mein uske khwaabo mein
jhome jiya re

Crazy Kiya Re, Crazy Kiya Re, Crazy Kiya Re
ho Crazy, Crazy Kiya Re
Crazy Kiya Re, Crazy Kiya Re, Crazy Kiya Re
ho crazy
Crazy Kiya Re

a guys comes to her...and she with him dances him
Na usko pata
Na uski khata
Mein us pe margai
Zara usko bata

a diff guy comes and she dances with him
Na usko pata
Na uski khata
Mein us pe margai
Zara usko bata

Dheree dheere ikraar mein
kabhi kabhi intezaar mein
uske hi pyaar mein jhoome jiya re

Crazy Kiya Re, Crazy Kiya Re, Crazy Kiya Re
ho Crazy, Crazy Kiya Re
Crazy Kiya Re, Crazy Kiya Re, Crazy Kiya Re
ho crazy
Crazy Kiya Re

she walks to the left of the stage
Mein yahan bhi gayi
Mein wahan bhi gayi
socha pal pal use
Mein jahan bhi gayi

she walks to the right of the stage
Mein yahan bhi gayi
Mein wahan bhi gayi
socha pal pal use
Mein jahan bhi gayi

Din ho ya raat ho
woh mere saath ho
jab uski baat ho
jhoome jiya re

Crazy Kiya Re, Crazy Kiya Re, Crazy Kiya Re
ho Crazy, Crazy Kiya Re

Sexy lady on da floor keep you coming back for more
Sexy lady on da floor
keep you coming back for more

She walks to Prem and starts dancing with him
Chori chori kiya re
Dil yeh dil liya re
Chori chori kiya re
Dil yeh dil liya re

Jadu se jadu kiya, Kiya re

Jaagi soi rahoon
khoi khoi rahoon
uski yadoon mein uske khwaabo mein
jhome jiya re

Crazy Kiya Re, Crazy Kiya Re, Crazy Kiya Re
ho Crazy, Crazy Kiya Re
Crazy Kiya Re, Crazy Kiya Re, Crazy Kiya Re
ho crazy
Crazy Kiya Re

Prem and Mukti both get drunk and start acting weird people start
telling them to get lost from the bar...they both go to a room and...

Next Day:

Mukti wakes up...with a huge hangover...and looks @ the bed beside her and c's PRem

NOTE:

srry guys but i had to edit it...my sis teling me some other things to put in it! sorry once again

Umam