This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 96

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 50

🤣🤣🤣Agar yeh dono ko kisine dekha toh sochenge ki ailah role change hogaya... Geet keliye Maan paani la raha hai. wow... Ab Geet toh ekdum se jwalamukhi ki thara phat rahi hai Maan ke upar. Aur woh flirt bhi karne laga kya socha tha Maan...agar woh flirt kare Geet ke saath Geet uske woh pasta ki cheese ke thara melt ho jayegi... Bilkul nahi par ek baat toh hai sahi ki communication is the key to any situation... Dono ab ache bache ki thara baitke baat karke problems ko suljhana hai toh kabhi koi complications nahi hoga na... Lekin last wali siyapa kya tha...?kaun hai yeh ladki...? Arre yaar Didi mujhe ghantian sunnai derahi hai woh bhi Geet ki dhimag ki ghanti.... Ab toh Maan gayi... Arre humari woh Sherni jo usse kha jayegi... Super duper sarcastically awesome update Di.... 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 49

Di you definitely should sign a contract to write a sequel to GHSP...... a comical one ...... it would be a hit .......smiley20

Poor maan is waiting on geet hand & foot & geet is not just acting like a queen but actually a royal pain in the ass smiley36

Maan is making an effort , he is cooking for her , compliments her, even explains that he kept his distance b/c he did not want to hurt her ........ suprised though he still does not have an answer to her question even 6 mos later considering he probably had a lot of time at rehab ........ perhaps when they are 90 they will be able to sort this all out smiley37

And geet is mad at maan but did she forget that she called his mom who put him in rehab for 6 months in the first place ? Maan could still hold a grudge but he doesn’t

Liked when they just sat there holding hands quietly..... they have such comfort & ease in their relationship only when they are not talking smiley37smiley37perhaps they should date but do a Mohan ?? Vrat where they don’t talk ....,, everything would be so simple , no problems smiley37smiley37smiley37

Uh ho, now who is this bimbo at the door?? Don’t tell me she is maan’s girlfriend or I will have to borrow geet’s chainsaw smiley37smiley37

Thank you di enjoyable as always smiley31

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Posted: 4 years ago

50

congrats for part 50

geet is giving cold treatment to maan n ordering him

maan trying to confess why he dint contact her but same time someone interrupt him

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update..

Continue soon..

Thank you for pm..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Geet afraid to b alone with him

Is she joking what about when she forcefully made him stay with her

Maan told her his reason of not contacting her both commit they missed each other now whose this young lady

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Posted: 4 years ago

Maan knows he can't offer any type of comittment, but he wants to stay in touch with Geet. He cooked for her so that was nice. Now who is this girl at the door?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Congrats on fifty updates..... 👏well deserved ⭐️ 🥳

do appreciate the continuous updates 😃

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

congrats to all the winners


Part 50

Fantastic update........ beautifully written

at least Maan is hospitable and made Geet comfortable

Gosh she could have at least helped Maan

liked that he confronted her and that she was honest

wow he called her Darling

admire his efforts but Madam is full of attitude

at least he wanted to explain

hate that she did not let him

of cos she is confused with his behavior

ha ha she is a master piece... teaching flirting in rehab?

so he is making an effort.

Why did she agree to have dinner if she was going to ignore him?

glad that they had a discussion and was direct with each other

loved that Maan opened up with Geet

awesome moments......

oh no who is the lady at the door?

impeccable timing.........

hope no mu between Maan and Geet!

well where is that chainsaw lol?


update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Very nice update dear

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 50)

Winners: Creampuff,Umadevi 97

Runner Ups: Kkiran,Alamelu

Special Mention: Khwaishfan

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): Kavitha_r,akkub.92, Kkiran

Congratulations to all the winners

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Please share the story with your friends on IF or any groups to popularize it. The reader base is getting really low. Please help me out


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Part 51

Both of them remain there for ...maybe which felt like an eternity in silence and holding hands

The doorbell rings after a while

Geet gets up in an impulse to open the door

As she opens the door, she finds a beautiful young woman in stylish clothes and accessories standing

Lady-Heyyyyy Ma- Geet? Its Geet right?

She asks while walking inside

Geet just manages to nod in confusion

Lady-Maan, you didn’t tell me she is here

Maan is also paused in his position

He manages to stand up

Geet looks at Maan for answers ki, ye ladki kaun hai? How does she know me? Is she his new gf?

M-She....she is my cousin-Mona. Mona, this is Geet

Mona-Your?

G-Friend

Geet answers on his behalf

Mona-By the way, it seems I came at the right time

She says glancing at the laid table

Mona-Maan, you jerk! You never told me Geet is here

M-Yeah...she is here for work...seminar...doctor stuff

Mona-Great!

M-Why are you here?

Mona-Why? You don’t want me here?

Mona asks mischievously while Maan is signaling her to leave

G-No. You are most welcome

Geet answers on his behalf

Mona-Thank you Geet. You are the sweetest. But I came here to request cum invite this jerk for the family wedding we are having. All the cousins are going to xyz island. it’s a destination wedding. Come on! You jerk

M-I told you I am not coming

Mona-Your mom won’t be there

M-Doesn’t matter

He says looking away

Mona-Geer, why don’t you come too? it would be so fun! Spouses are invited too....I mean friends too,else this unsocial guy won’t come

G-Thanks Mona. But I am leaving after my seminars

Mona plate leke pasta khaane baith jaati hai signaling Maan and Geet to take a seat and join

Mona-Oh come on! You know naa Maan has hots for you

Maan’s ears turn red

Geet looks down

Mona-Aww look at him blushing

She says pulling his cheek

Mona-Trust me, it would be so great ...the island is beautiful...you guys can have a lovely vacation and maybe you could also...

Maan stuffs a spoonful of pasta into his cousin’s mouth before she could finish

M-Mona, I think it’s time for you to leave, hai naa?

Mona-Okay

Mona-See ya, Geet.

She hugs Geet and leaves

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Maan aake baithta hai table par

Both are fiddling with their forks

M-Well....that was awkward

Geet smiles awkwardly

G-I thought she was your girlfriend

M-Oh no no no. I am not dating

She nods

M-Are you dating?

G- No...I mean, a lot of work…

M-Good. Yeah…yeah...I mean work ...work is good

She nods

5 min silence.

Bass cutlery ki awaaz

M-I see, you have got a new look

G-Yeah, I have got a roommate she taught me about makeup

M-Yeah great. ...sexier

Then looks at Geet for her reaction

G-Yeah

M-Do you want to go for shopping some day?

G-No

M-Okay

Geet finishes her food and helps with the dishes

G-I should be leaving now. It was nice seeing you...and knowing that you are fine

M-But it’s raining...there's a storm

She looks outside

G-So you don’t want to drive me back?

M-I do...I can...you can even stay here...I will drive you back,first thing tomorrow...tomorrow is a weekend anyways

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago

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