Rudhita OS Series|Last OS- Aye Dil Laya Hai Bahaar|Updated on Pg.26 - Page 14

Arere both of them are crying...pl update soon. Can't see them cry😊

You are such a talented writer!!This was amazingly poignant and Serene at the same time.Could love grow stronger without burning in the blazing fire?Your writing just showed it, in the most beautiful way possible.

What a blast it was

But loved this os limitlessly, Jyoti 🤗👏

Pichhli baar spechless kiya tha tune aur is baar ruladiya mereko yaar😭

Tere os series ki toh baat hi niraali hai😆

BTW update soon please na yaar aur haan next baar bomb blast mat karna dear🤣👍🏼

If I am being over-analytical ,I'm sorry. But I sincerely sympathize with Anirudh.No doubt one can be dead hurt and devastated at what Anirudh has done,but what Bondita did to him without doing anything, is worse.

This is exactly what small scale silent manipulation/silent torment is ! Unjustified and overly done , of course unintentionally, by her !

Silent manipulation is very torturous and afflicting ! I just want her to stop with this immediately !

Jyoti, how do you write so profoundly and gracefully I don't know,but I was literally feeling every ounce of the pain , the helplessness , the guilt in my gut! The emotions are miserable ,but the story is terrific,top notch, exceptionally well written! Perfection would hail itself imperfect , reading this!

How wonderful is that,when the author takes control over your impulses and reasoning!How effortlessly they engulf you in their writings ,from which there's no escape! You never fail me Jyoti👏.I respect you so much !You're a true talent!

I'll not suggest you or request you anything!It's going beautiful and more than that!Keep up the uniqueness and expertise!

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Areyyy yaaaar ... Dono hi udas udas ghoom rhe hain iss Os mien tou.

But wow! What a brillian depiction of their feelings. 👏

As always, very well written, Jyoti. 🤗

Ani ko chot bhi laga di tumne. Bechara. Poor boy. Bol de na zara...dil mien jo hai chhupa. 😆

Ohh next song-fiction tum iss song per ker sakty ho ager mann kere tou. 😳

Kher... all in all... Such a beautiful write up! Thank you for this, buddy. 🤗

Thank you so much doctor🤗

Well sab kuch simply and smoothly ho jaye toh yeh jaruri toh nahi hai😆 toh ghumne do sad dono ko😆 waise bhi yeh ishq nahi asan bas itna samjh lijiye😳

And about chot don't worry Bon will do marham patti 😳

@bold- haha dekhnege sochenge😆

Thank you again doctor🤗 will post next part soon👍🏼

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Omg 😲

Ye kya ho gaya 😭

Wahi huya jo makers ne humare sath kiya Rimi😭

I could totally feel what Bon is going through! It is her pehle pyaar ka pehla hurt 🤪 Jokes apart, I know how it feels like 😭 No matter what she was not able to forget that incident and get over it 😭 Poor Bon 🥺

Bon to Ani-

Iss dard-e-dil ki sifarish ab krde koi yaha 😭 jokes apart🤪

Yup that incident and saudamini's sudden entry.. she wasn't expected..upar se Ani usko akele chod ke chala😭 koi bhi hurt ho jaye yar woh phir uski patni thi👍🏼

Aur Anirudh ki aisi ki taisi 😡 Iski toh 🤬 I have only one word for him - ullu 😳🥱 Kyu gaya vo uss Mini ke paas Bon ko chhod ke 😭 Ye ladka nahi sudhrega 😡

Ani ki toh😡 main bhi aisi ki taisi karna chahti hoon😈 but mere pas bhi koi words nahi hai🤪 han yeh nahi sudhrega...Afifa ke dande marne padhenge🤣

When that happened mujhe bhi laga ki Bon ke jaise ro ro ke aankhe suja du 😭

It means i'm successful😳 mere mein woh skills hain ke apni writings se rula skti hoon😆

Awww baad me he went to her but 🥺 Of course Bon is too hurt to just let it go like that 😭 But I also feel bad for him now 😭 I feel bad for both actually 😭 ohh God jitna ye dono OS me nahi roye utna toh mai ro li hu comment me 🤣

Yup she is hurt...she just can' forget that but on the same she knows ke woh Ani ko hurt kar rahi hai apne behavior se...mere ko actually dono ke liye bura lag raha..he wanted to talk, he wanted to remove her insecurities but woh bat nahi sun rahi😭

Han mujhe bhi lag raha ke tu hi jyada royi hai is OS mein....or tere sath main bhi ro rahi hoon🤣

It was very beautiful jyoti 👏 I could feel the pain while reading it... nicely written!

Now I can't wait to see how he manao her

😎

Thank you Rimi❣️Thank you so much dear...

About manayo I can't say anything...because pehle se soch ke nahi rakhti...with flow likhti hoon🤭

But yeh bat btayo acha response kyu nahi mil raha hai yar😭😭

Originally posted by: Cherryrose

Arere both of them are crying...pl update soon. Can't see them cry😊

Aww actually no one can see them crying...bas thoda intezar aur you will see them happy😳

Thank you for reading Cherryrose...may I know your name?😳

Originally posted by: nandinishelat

You are such a talented writer!!This was amazingly poignant and Serene at the same time.Could love grow stronger without burning in the blazing fire?Your writing just showed it, in the most beautiful way possible.

Thank you so much for your words Nandini 🤗 this is what I want to hear😳 isi liye I didn't give direct confession..kyunki yeh ishq nahi aasan bas itna samjh lijiye....ek aag ka darya hai or doob ke jana hai...right?😳

Thank you so much for reading...I will post next part as soon as possible👍🏼

My name is Shivani🤗

Can I know your name😊

Originally posted by: Cherryrose

My name is Shivani🤗

Can I know your name😊

Hi shivani, it's jyoti😳