Rudhita OS Series|Last OS- Aye Dil Laya Hai Bahaar|Updated on Pg.26 - Page 13

Originally posted by: RUDY575

Haa🤣

Sure jyoti🤗

Oh ohk pyar mein pagal ho chuki ho tum🤣

Btw I will post next part tommorow...stay tuned👍🏼

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

It was very cute

Good selection of song and lyrics 👍🏼

Thank you Rimi🤗

And about songs selection toh *flipping my hair*😆

I am glad that Ani has realized his feeling towards Bon ☺️ I loved how he was touching her in the pic and talking 🤣☺️ he is so cute 🤪

Me too so glad that he finally has realized *hushhh*😆

Han cute toh woh bahut hai☺️☺️

Aur ye banda binoy ke saath baith ke apni biwi ko taade jaa raha tha 🤣🤣🤣 and Binoy ne pakad liya 🤣🤣 omg 🤪 that was so funny and cute 😳 I can totally imagine Binoy saying that and Ani going laal peela hara neela 🤣🤪

Lmao hara peela lal neela🤣let me tell you woh bas lal hi huya tha☺️

Haina daring banda☺️

You know mujhe bahut hasi ayi thi yeh scene add krte time😆socha binoy ko chashma adjust krne ke ilawa kuch kam dedu🤣

Awww Bon is so cute 😳 No wonder Ani uske peechhe Paagal hua pada hai 🤪 bechara davai lagate huye bhi kho gaya ☺️

Yup she is han bahut pagal ho chuka hai yeh banda☺️ next one mein you can see😭

Omg ye kya Bon gussa ho gayi? 😭 I know ye uska nibbi vaala gussa hai 🤣 she wants Ani aake usko manaaye 👍🏼

Han Bon gussa ho gyi..iska Zimmedar Ani babu hai😆

Abey nahi hai woh nibbi meri story mein🤣

Bas jyoti abb mujhe inka first kiss dekhna hai 🤣🤣 Mera dimaag 🤪

First kiss☺️ yeh sirf tere akele ke dimag ka maal nahi hai sabka hai🤣

I will wrote for sure but may be 8th or 9th part😆

Anyway 😆 It was very beautifully written as always 👏 you are very good with expressing the characters feelings ❤️

Thank you Rimi🤗mujhe bahut khushi hoti hai tere comments dekh ke😳

I will post next OS tomorrow...stay tuned👍🏼

Originally posted by: Blackrose92

Jyoti tum bhi na kya karti rehti ho😆

Hamesha itna achha likhkar hume speechless karna zaroori hai kya😭👍🏼👏👏👏👏👏

BTW loved it very much ❤️

And do continue soon🤗🤗

Hayee ek pal ke liye laga pata nahi kya kr diya maine😆

Tu bhi na snan darra hi diya😆

Aww thank you so much dear.. glad that you are liking my OS Series🤗

Yup I will post next one tomorrow. Stay tuned👍🏼

Originally posted by: rikara94

Hayee ek pal ke liye laga pata nahi kya kr diya maine😆

Tu bhi na snan darra hi diya😆

Aww thank you so much dear.. glad that you are liking my OS Series🤗

Yup I will post next one tomorrow. Stay tuned👍🏼

Aur haan khabardaar jo tune next os ke liye wait karwaya toh😆🤣😆🤣😆🤣

Originally posted by: Blackrose92

mera kaam hi darana hai dear🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Aur haan khabardaar jo tune next os ke liye wait karwaya toh😆🤣😆🤣😆🤣

Hell no🤣

Aise drayogi toh meri itni himmat ke main wait krwayungu🤣🤣

But itna jrur kahungi ke jo tum has rahi ho na kal ke update ke bad I doubt tum hasogi🤣🤣

Originally posted by: rikara94

Hell no🤣

Aise drayogi toh meri itni himmat ke main wait krwayungu🤣🤣

But itna jrur kahungi ke jo tum has rahi ho na kal ke update ke bad I doubt tum hasogi🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Blackrose92

kyun aisa kya atom bomb bispot karne wali hai tu🤣🤣🤣

Kuch aisa hi samjh lo🤣🤣

Areyyy yaaaar ... Dono hi udas udas ghoom rhe hain iss Os mien tou.

But wow! What a brillian depiction of their feelings. 👏

As always, very well written, Jyoti. 🤗

Ani ko chot bhi laga di tumne. Bechara. Poor boy. Bol de na zara...dil mien jo hai chhupa. 😆

Ohh next song-fiction tum iss song per ker sakty ho ager mann kere tou. 😳

Kher... all in all... Such a beautiful write up! Thank you for this, buddy. 🤗

Omg 😲

Ye kya ho gaya 😭

I could totally feel what Bon is going through! It is her pehle pyaar ka pehla hurt 🤪 Jokes apart, I know how it feels like 😭 No matter what she was not able to forget that incident and get over it 😭 Poor Bon 🥺

Aur Anirudh ki aisi ki taisi 😡 Iski toh 🤬 I have only one word for him - ullu 😳🥱 Kyu gaya vo uss Mini ke paas Bon ko chhod ke 😭 Ye ladka nahi sudhrega 😡

When that happened mujhe bhi laga ki Bon ke jaise ro ro ke aankhe suja du 😭

Awww baad me he went to her but 🥺 Of course Bon is too hurt to just let it go like that 😭 But I also feel bad for him now 😭 I feel bad for both actually 😭 ohh God jitna ye dono OS me nahi roye utna toh mai ro li hu comment me 🤣

It was very beautiful jyoti 👏 I could feel the pain while reading it... nicely written!

Now I can't wait to see how he manao her 😎