Rudhita OS Series|Last OS- Aye Dil Laya Hai Bahaar|Updated on Pg.26 - Page 11

Fabulously written...loved it❤️

🤗🤗 Jyotiiii! Hii!

Finally aaj miene 4th OS padha iss series ka. And I was mind-blown! It suited so well with the current molestation track! 😳 Tumne itne days pehle aise track ko socha aur phir uss per itne acchay se likha bhi. Which makes me think...are the makers stalking the forum? 🤓 Makers tumare write-up se hi impress tou nahi hogaye? 😃 Ager aisa hai tou buht acchi baat hai. Our forum has beautiful stories and they should definitely take help from the forum. 😆

Kher...coming back to the OS... Wow! Even last lines where he kept caressing her hair and sat by her side until she slept...you wrote that scene soo well... and felt soo realistic since abhi show mien bhi aise hi milta julta hua. Yaaar... what a brilliant write-up it was! And the song...and the emotions... ❤️❤️ Very very well-written. 👍🏼 Shabash...

I loved it very much. Now, I have to read the 5th and 6th parts... 😳 I am sorry I am so late in reading these amazing stories yar... But I will catch up with the other two soon and will comment again.

P.S. Your choice of songs is WOW! ⭐️❤️

Okayyy... Review for the 5th OS...

Bhai! Kia likkha hai yar! I am in awe... seriously! 😳👍🏼

You know Jyoti, I am a voracious reader. When I read a well crafted story na, pata nahi kyun mera dil buht hi ziada khush hojata hai. Aur tumhari stories padh ker I feel that happiness. So, thank you very much dear for these brilliant write-ups. ❤️🤗

While reading this OS, I felt as if I was reading a book. Well-connected scenes with moments so beautiful that i had a smile all the while.

I chuckled when Som caught them in that 'RK style catch and fall scene' and they both were so lost in their discussion about the case that they even forgot their situation. 😆

It reminded me of a novel I wrote several years ago... Uss mien bhi when the hero used to hold the girl's hand, they would completely forget about it... They used to get so lost too.. 😆😆 Aisa madhosh kerne wala pyar I hope humare RudhiTa ka bhi ho when the right time comes.. 😆

Okay, so I have started blabbering now...

Abh next OS padh ker comment kerun gy. 👍🏼😳

Jeety raho aur khush raho ladki... 🤗

Aaaannnd finally, done with another beautiful part of this series by you. So, OS number 6 padha abhi abhi and man! 😆😆 Ani is soooo cute! In the middle of the meeting he was all consumed by her thoughts only...and his father got that! 🤣 That was brilliant!

Yar tumhari stories ki sab se awesome baat yeh hoty hai ke koi mazay daar sa angle jo reader ne socha bhi nahi hota, who aik damm se daal dety ho. And then it catches the reader with an amazing surprise with a loud chuckle too! 😆

Baqi story tou kher buht hi acchi hoty hai...very well-crafted...aur har cheez, har scene, har dialogue aise feel hota hai jaise maano aik damm perrrrrfect ho. 👍🏼❤️

Abh next part jaldi se likhnaaaa please.. 😳 🤗

I always want to know anirudhu monologues but very rarely we get in the show... ☺️The way you right aniudh monologues I just feel you complete my wish...thank you... Kadwa roshogolla🤣

Aww their bond growing steadily and strongly...🤗well done rikaara....

Finally something from Ani's POV 😭

I feel so excited after reading this! Want more!

Originally posted by: Priiii

Awwwww it was full off awww moments yaar and your signature :') nostalgia hits hard

It part was sooo soothing yaar 🖤💞 loved it

Thank you much prii❤️

Btw did you read previous OS🤔

P.s. Yup this signature reminds a lot na❤️

It was very cute

Good selection of song and lyrics 👍🏼

I am glad that Ani has realized his feeling towards Bon ☺️ I loved how he was touching her in the pic and talking 🤣☺️ he is so cute 🤪

Aur ye banda binoy ke saath baith ke apni biwi ko taade jaa raha tha 🤣🤣🤣 and Binoy ne pakad liya 🤣🤣 omg 🤪 that was so funny and cute 😳 I can totally imagine Binoy saying that and Ani going laal peela hara neela 🤣🤪

Awww Bon is so cute 😳 No wonder Ani uske peechhe Paagal hua pada hai 🤪 bechara davai lagate huye bhi kho gaya ☺️

Omg ye kya Bon gussa ho gayi? 😭 I know ye uska nibbi vaala gussa hai 🤣 she wants Ani aake usko manaaye 👍🏼

Bas jyoti abb mujhe inka first kiss dekhna hai 🤣🤣 Mera dimaag 🤪

Anyway 😆 It was very beautifully written as always 👏 you are very good with expressing the characters feelings ❤️

Jyoti tum bhi na kya karti rehti ho😆

Hamesha itna achha likhkar hume speechless karna zaroori hai kya😭👍🏼👏👏👏👏👏

BTW loved it very much ❤️

And do continue soon🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Ka_ta

OS 6? 🤔Did I miss any part😲

Jyoti 🤗again fantastic job.

More than fantastic.Its so so lovely ❤️

I feel so light, good and full of love everytime I read your os's.

Aisa lagta hain ki khatam hi na ho yeh joh tum likhti ho❤️

I'll not say I'm impatient, but ek request hain😳Tiny intimate sequence toh banta hain ek❤️😆☺️

Haha,ise kamsekam dobaar padhke souungi❤️

Han os6😆

Thank you so much koyal🤗

Awww the way your appreciate na..it literally made me smile from the bottom of my heart❤️

Your request or dream will be complete soon but for that you have to wait a little😆

Phir do bar pdhke sone ki bat chod main teri neend udha dene wali hoon☺️🤣🤣