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Posted: 4 years ago
#61

Wow piya...it's 🔥🔥


Aakhir mukhi ne dikha diya ki wo kitna jawan hai...🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Wow piya...it's 🔥🔥


Aakhir mukhi ne dikha diya ki wo kitna jawan hai...🤣

Haan 🤣aise kaise Baar Baar Bande ki ego hurt ho rhi thi ab to proof dena hi padega jawani Ka 🤣
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Posted: 4 years ago
#63

I was just hooked from start to end...so well written dear. Such a hot story and such a bold image of Purvi ☺️

Loved it totally. 👏

Keep the musings going dear.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#64

Fabulous update n virendar took her to his special place n he share his memory of that place n she feels happy bcoz he brought her to his special place n she teases him n love their cute nok jhok n waiting for next update.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Part 7

Pur grabs him tightly from his waist ,and they disappear in the cold blanket.....

Soon the fog disappears, a vast lake whose edge was marked by grasslands , the moon was at its best today and stars in the sky,so close that she wanted to grab them with her baby hands , shinning even brighter than her diamond ring Which Vir had gifted her once. The surface of the lake formed a silvery mirror reflecting the glittery blanket along with a soft cool breeze making her hair swift by her side. Pur is left awestruck by the serenity of the place...

Vir: yo jagah se kayi yaade Judi he, college k Dino me aaya karta tha , yha aake aisa Lagta tha Jaise wakt tham gya ho , issi talab me main pehli Baar Sakshi se Mila tha . Yo jagah mere liye bohot khaas he baawri, jab bhi Mera Mann pareshan hota to me yha aa jaata tha, Inn chandini raaton or thandi Hawaon me sukun dhoondta. Aaj me tanne yha Laya Hu

Pur: (overwhelmed by his gesture) hum khudko khushnaseeb maante he ki Aap Hume yha laaye ,yeh jagah sach me bohot sunder he yha hum shanti se padh Sakenge, Pur starts studying, Vir too helps her, "finally ho gya kaam ib chale Ghar baawri"

Pur: nhi! Abhi nhi...kaam k chakkar me humne iss khubsoorat jagah ko to dekha hi nhi , aap dikhaiye na Hume please...and made a puppy face

Vir couldn't say no seeing that cute innocent expression, they roam around the lake ,

Pur: mukhi ji humare dimag k peeche wale kone me ek baat aayi....

Vir: bol baawri..

Pur: Aapne Kaha ki aapki Sakshi hi se pehli mulakat issi talab me hui thi or humari pehli mulakat bhi sariyu Nadi me hui thi ....

Vir : to k?

Pur: hum yeh kehna chahte he ki aapko swimming karna Pasand he kya tabhi to aap Nadi or talab me kudte rehte ho ??

Pur cheekily laughed

Vir: k?? Baawri agar tanne Aisi baate Karni he to Ghar chal abhi...

Pur: nhi nhi achha sorry hum nhi karenge baat...

Par ek cheeze to pakki he jawani me Aapke peeche kayi ladkiya pagal Hoti hongi, humne to Kabhi socha nhi tha ki Aap Chand taaro ki Baat karenge... Just then Vir interupts her

Vir: jawani se k matlab he tera ? Tanne me Budha dikh rha hun k?

Pur : isme dekhne wali kya baat he Umar ho gyi he aapki....humare tauji k bhi na jawani me bade kisse the pehelwaan the na vo isiliye...

Vir: yo k Bala he tera tau do pal chain se jeene nhi dega k? Jab Dekho din Raat tau tau tau karti rehti he me tera tau jaisa to bilkul nhi hu or na hi budha...aaj bhi jawani Rago me daudti he mere....or Haan Shadi se pehle gao ki saari chhoriya Marti thi mhare upar.... mukhiya hu gao Ka k samaj rakha he tanne manne ?

Pur:(mocking) dikhta he kitte Jawan he aap har teesre din to aapki Kamar lachak jaati he, bachho k Saath masti bhi nhi karte, bas baate karwa lo badi badi....Jawan ...huh... Chalte he ab...

Pur walks away only to be stopped by Vir when he holds her wrist and pulls her close to him...and their chests collide.

~~~~eyelock~~~~

(Jab tak-ms dhoni plays in BG)

{Jab tak tujhe pyar se

Beinteha main bhar na dun

Jab tak main duaaoon sa

Sau dafa tujhe pad na loon}


Pur looks down realising their position and shyly pushes Vir away while Vir pulls her even harder (her back collides with vir's chest) and back hugs Pur and snuggles near her left ear taking in her scent.

{Haan mere paas tum raho

Jaane ki baat na karo

Mere sath tum raho

Jaane ki baat na karo

Woh oh o.}


~~~insrtumental~~~

Vir's hands automatically glides over pur's reaching all the way to her waist and belly button and he again twists her to his side.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The sky turns crimson due to sunrise as if it was also blushing seeing the waves of emotions experienced by two mad lovers.

{Tum aa gaye baazuon mein mere

Sau sawere liye

Sau sawere liye

Haan baadalon se utaara gaya

Tumko mere liye sirf mere liye}

Vir's strong manly hold made Pur go weak in her knees, she couldn't control as she wanted him so much she could ever want anything else ,Pur raised on her feet , taking support of his waist coat that she held tightly and implanted a sensous kiss on his cheeks,she wanted to eat him a whole ,Vir too closed his eyes in anticipation and let the feeling sink in .

{Jab tak meri ungliyan

Tere baalon se kuch kehna le

Jab tak teri lehar mein

Khwaahishein meri behna le

Haan mere paas tum raho

Jaane ki baat na karo

Mere sath tum raho

Jaane ki baat na karo }

After pur's it was vir's turn he removed her hair strands from her face and cupped her face Vir advanced towards her,both staring at eachother's lips , he stops just a cm away after noticing pur's shivering lips and starts moving away due to hesitation, Pur sees him moving away and clutches his waistcoat even tighter and grabbed his lips.


{Woh oh o *2}

The tides came to a standstill as if time stopped , with cool breeze regulating the raging emotions as they taste each other, pur's one hand clutching vir's waistcoat near his chest n other between his nape diminishing in his hair while Vir had his arms all around her reaching her bare back and gliding towards her waist as they get lost in each other leaving no space even for the air to come in between.......

Sorry for being late Piya😳


Lovely chapter❤...finally they kissed hayeee 🥰🥰🥰...i was waiting for that

😳😆🤣


Piya plzzz update soon...wanna read how they after their first kiss ☺️😆😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Ziva01

Sorry for being late Piya😳


Lovely chapter❤...finally they kissed hayeee 🥰🥰🥰...i was waiting for that

😳😆🤣


Piya plzzz update soon...wanna read how they after their first kiss ☺️😆😆

aa gya update 🙈 abhi post karti hu
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Posted: 4 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

aa gya update 🙈 abhi post karti hu

Piyaa kya baat hain..Bahut fast ho tum😜😜

But anyways hamare liye to acha hi hain😜😜

Update fast😴😴

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Posted: 4 years ago
#68

Part 8

they get lost in each other leaving no space even for the air to come in between.......

It was only the sunshine that brought them back to the real world n break the kiss.

Pur immediately looked away so that Vir couldn't see the pleasure n desire in her eyes while on the contrary Vir was struggling so hard to control himself n his need for her that he closed his eyes n took in a deep breath trying to calm down the tsunami of emotions that would only result in his complete destruction.

Both looked at each other trying to hide the unsaid emotions,

Pur: (breathing heavily)s...subah ho gyi he G...ghar chalte he

Vir agrees ,

ON THE CYCLE

=================================

Pur in her mind: "hey bhagvaan yeh humne kya Kar diya, kya soch rhe honge mukhi ji humare baare me ab to hum unse nazre bhi nhi Mila paayenge"

Though she couldn't comprehend how this happened but it was their LEGIT FIRST KISS! she Cherished those moments though short, he tasted like smooth hot chocolate ,soo addictive that she could never have enough of him...she knew... but was fearful to how Vir would react to this..."Kahi mukhi ji Hume khud se dur na Karle" this fear only, made her whole numb as she clung to Vir .

=================================

Vir's POV

"Vir akhir Tu Chahta k he! K ho Gaya tha tanne , kyu uski chhoti chhoti baate tujhpe itta asar karti he ,jab bhi vo tujhe Uske tau se compare karti he tera control Tel Lene kyu Chala jaata he"

He was angry at himself but at the same time felt pleasure n satisfaction in her embrace, her sweet Jasmine fragrance that he took in was enough to drive him crazy and her touch...her touch always sent chills down his spine as he lost his breath but today it was something else only, she was never like this before, or he never got a chance to witness it, so bold ,her seductive eyes had always enslaved him he knew that but that one moment of ....... Was like.....he sighed internally, though he knew she was not one of them who would back off as he knew his sherni ,earlier too she used to enjoy their proximity but wat was banging in his head was he made the first move n surrendered himself to her....."kya main...." His chain of thoughts was broken by pur's cutting voice when she said "Ghar aa gya" n quickly went inside...

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EVENING

Pur had returned from college but didn't meet Vir who was also busy in some gov. work, she went to his study to serve him tea but he ignored her... "Lagta he ab kroor Singh Ka naam badal Kar akdu Singh rakhna padega...Sara kaam aaj hi karna he inhe, hamari taraf ek Baar bhi nhi dekha subah se" she muttered, she kept the cup on the table, and went to shut the window down as it would disturb Vir.Vir again got hold of her scent and his hormones go in for another toss as he stared at her hair blowing in the wind and started feeling jealous even of the wind ,"ib band bhi Kar, k bhoot ki Tarah khadi he khidki pe" Pur who was certainly enjoying in the wind turns around to give him a look which instantly turned into a flushed pink blush as her eyes meet his.

The depth n desire in those eyes surely will melt her down someday,Pur thought

Within a sec an awkward silence creeped btw them, "vo..o Ch..chai " Pur points out

Vir:"Ha..nn , tanne banayi he ?"

Pur:"nhi...matlab Haan"

Vir: "achha ma..nne tere se Mera matlab tanne merese k..kkuch baat Karni thi Kaha tha subah tanne?"

Pur interupts ",nhi?!"

Vir makes a frown in confusion

"Matlab haa...ann" she said in a low voice ,

Both knew what was to be spoken but both were hesitant, Purvir muttering

Pur: itna kya soch rhi he purvi bol de na

Vir: arre Tu k itta Sharma rha he usse Dekh kaise khadi he himmat Kar mukhi or bol de!

Purvir together: vo Hume yeh baat Karni thi ki!

Both were flustered n felt butterflies in their stomachs

Pur: aap bol lijiye

Vir: pehle Tu bol le kyonki Bina bole tujhse Raha nhi jaayega

Pur: nhi pehle aap hi kahiye !


Vir:"Theek he !" To sun...manne aaj subah k baare me baat Karni thi...Jo hua vo theek na tha ... (pur's face dropped) me..ra matlab Kuch galat nhi tha usme...me tujhe dost maanta hu par he to Tu meri patni hi (Pur is confused trying to figure out what is he saying) Mera matlab pati patni k beech yeh sab hota rehta he....main apni or se tujhse maafi maangta hu (pur's eyebrows darken making a frown as she's unable to comprehend vir's saying) me yeh sab karna na Chahta tha par ho Gaya.... tanne samaj to aa rha he na me k keh rha hu ? Pur:(controlling her laughter as his words n expressions were completely off sync ) Haan Hume sab samaj aa gya aapko maafi maangne ki koi zarurat nhi he aapka haq he humpe.

Vir(flustered): nhiii... Aisi baat nhi he...Mera matlab Aisi hi baat he ....arre k bak rha he mukhi tanne khud samaj nhi aa rha usse k samjhayega ! For the first time he's disgusted at his own self, "hosh me aa Vir Kuch bhi bakke ja rha he k soch rhi hogi vo tere baare me "

Pur realises his condition n comforts him: aap zyada mat sochiye Hume sab samaj me aa gya he , her sweet reassuring smile brought him out of his mess, "ab hum chalte he aap bhi aa jayiye khaane k liye"

"Aata hun bas yeh thoda SA kaam or bacha he ,pata nhi kyu MS ne aaj hi pure hafte Ka kaam de Diya Karne ko "

Pur admires her man , did she ever knew he looked so cute while complaining like a 10 year old who was supposed to do HW when he wanted to play outside.... "Lagta he dheere dheere mukhi ji Hume accept Kar rhe he, aaj to aap keh nhi paaye par hum aapka intezaar karenge....jab aap Puri Tarah se taiyaar ho jayenge" she leaves with the rosy pink blush n smile on her face.

**************THE END*****************

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Posted: 4 years ago
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The beginning was so romantic 💖

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Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Part 8

they get lost in each other leaving no space even for the air to come in between.......

It was only the sunshine that brought them back to the real world n break the kiss.

Pur immediately looked away so that Vir couldn't see the pleasure n desire in her eyes while on the contrary Vir was struggling so hard to control himself n his need for her that he closed his eyes n took in a deep breath trying to calm down the tsunami of emotions that would only result in his complete destruction.

Both looked at each other trying to hide the unsaid emotions,

Pur: (breathing heavily)s...subah ho gyi he G...ghar chalte he

Vir agrees ,

ON THE CYCLE

=================================

Pur in her mind: "hey bhagvaan yeh humne kya Kar diya, kya soch rhe honge mukhi ji humare baare me ab to hum unse nazre bhi nhi Mila paayenge"

Though she couldn't comprehend how this happened but it was their LEGIT FIRST KISS! she Cherished those moments though short, he tasted like smooth hot chocolate ,soo addictive that she could never have enough of him...she knew... but was fearful to how Vir would react to this..."Kahi mukhi ji Hume khud se dur na Karle" this fear only, made her whole numb as she clung to Vir .

=================================

Vir's POV

"Vir akhir Tu Chahta k he! K ho Gaya tha tanne , kyu uski chhoti chhoti baate tujhpe itta asar karti he ,jab bhi vo tujhe Uske tau se compare karti he tera control Tel Lene kyu Chala jaata he"

He was angry at himself but at the same time felt pleasure n satisfaction in her embrace, her sweet Jasmine fragrance that he took in was enough to drive him crazy and her touch...her touch always sent chills down his spine as he lost his breath but today it was something else only, she was never like this before, or he never got a chance to witness it, so bold ,her seductive eyes had always enslaved him he knew that but that one moment of ....... Was like.....he sighed internally, though he knew she was not one of them who would back off as he knew his sherni ,earlier too she used to enjoy their proximity but wat was banging in his head was he made the first move n surrendered himself to her....."kya main...." His chain of thoughts was broken by pur's cutting voice when she said "Ghar aa gya" n quickly went inside...

==================================

EVENING

Pur had returned from college but didn't meet Vir who was also busy in some gov. work, she went to his study to serve him tea but he ignored her... "Lagta he ab kroor Singh Ka naam badal Kar akdu Singh rakhna padega...Sara kaam aaj hi karna he inhe, hamari taraf ek Baar bhi nhi dekha subah se" she muttered, she kept the cup on the table, and went to shut the window down as it would disturb Vir.Vir again got hold of her scent and his hormones go in for another toss as he stared at her hair blowing in the wind and started feeling jealous even of the wind ,"ib band bhi Kar, k bhoot ki Tarah khadi he khidki pe" Pur who was certainly enjoying in the wind turns around to give him a look which instantly turned into a flushed pink blush as her eyes meet his.

The depth n desire in those eyes surely will melt her down someday,Pur thought

Within a sec an awkward silence creeped btw them, "vo..o Ch..chai " Pur points out

Vir:"Ha..nn , tanne banayi he ?"

Pur:"nhi...matlab Haan"

Vir: "achha ma..nne tere se Mera matlab tanne merese k..kkuch baat Karni thi Kaha tha subah tanne?"

Pur interupts ",nhi?!"

Vir makes a frown in confusion

"Matlab haa...ann" she said in a low voice ,

Both knew what was to be spoken but both were hesitant, Purvir muttering

Pur: itna kya soch rhi he purvi bol de na

Vir: arre Tu k itta Sharma rha he usse Dekh kaise khadi he himmat Kar mukhi or bol de!

Purvir together: vo Hume yeh baat Karni thi ki!

Both were flustered n felt butterflies in their stomachs

Pur: aap bol lijiye

Vir: pehle Tu bol le kyonki Bina bole tujhse Raha nhi jaayega

Pur: nhi pehle aap hi kahiye !


Vir:"Theek he !" To sun...manne aaj subah k baare me baat Karni thi...Jo hua vo theek na tha ... (pur's face dropped) me..ra matlab Kuch galat nhi tha usme...me tujhe dost maanta hu par he to Tu meri patni hi (Pur is confused trying to figure out what is he saying) Mera matlab pati patni k beech yeh sab hota rehta he....main apni or se tujhse maafi maangta hu (pur's eyebrows darken making a frown as she's unable to comprehend vir's saying) me yeh sab karna na Chahta tha par ho Gaya.... tanne samaj to aa rha he na me k keh rha hu ? Pur:(controlling her laughter as his words n expressions were completely off sync ) Haan Hume sab samaj aa gya aapko maafi maangne ki koi zarurat nhi he aapka haq he humpe.

Vir(flustered): nhiii... Aisi baat nhi he...Mera matlab Aisi hi baat he ....arre k bak rha he mukhi tanne khud samaj nhi aa rha usse k samjhayega ! For the first time he's disgusted at his own self, "hosh me aa Vir Kuch bhi bakke ja rha he k soch rhi hogi vo tere baare me "

Pur realises his condition n comforts him: aap zyada mat sochiye Hume sab samaj me aa gya he , her sweet reassuring smile brought him out of his mess, "ab hum chalte he aap bhi aa jayiye khaane k liye"

"Aata hun bas yeh thoda SA kaam or bacha he ,pata nhi kyu MS ne aaj hi pure hafte Ka kaam de Diya Karne ko "

Pur admires her man , did she ever knew he looked so cute while complaining like a 10 year old who was supposed to do HW when he wanted to play outside.... "Lagta he dheere dheere mukhi ji Hume accept Kar rhe he, aaj to aap keh nhi paaye par hum aapka intezaar karenge....jab aap Puri Tarah se taiyaar ho jayenge" she leaves with the rosy pink blush n smile on her face.

**************THE END*****************

My mostttt favourite part in your this series!!! Loveddddd ittttt soooo muchhh❤️❤️🤩😘😘🥰😍🍫🍫🍫💥🌟🎉🥳🍬

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