Purvir FF - falling! Part 8updated on page 9 - Page 8

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Posted: 4 years ago
#71

Accha the end aise likha piya aspne..is this the end of this series?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Potterhead_05

Accha the end aise likha piya aspne..is this the end of this series?

yup iss series Ka the end karna pada Varna bohot lamba ho jaata 😔

Koi nah abhi jungle me mangal track aayega na usme continuation mil jayega don't worry🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

yup iss series Ka the end karna pada Varna bohot lamba ho jaata 😔

Koi nah abhi jungle me mangal track aayega na usme continuation mil jayega don't worry🤗

Yayayayaya!!🤩

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Toh ye last part tha 😢😢

As usual beautifully written Piya ❤

Mere do confused paglait 😏

Loved it! Ab jungle mein mangal wala jaldi dedena 😚

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Posted: 4 years ago
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@Piya Update 8 is very beautiful ❤️....the way both are feeling awkward and happy at the same 😆 and cherishing their 1st kiss☺️...love the last part ...Pur understanding her Mukhi's state and and comforting him.


Awaiting the next one ....plzzz udpate soon 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

yup iss series Ka the end karna pada Varna bohot lamba ho jaata 😔

Koi nah abhi jungle me mangal track aayega na usme continuation mil jayega don't worry🤗

Yeh wali series itni jaldi kyu khatam kar di yaar😣abhi to they started coming closer

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Part 1

As soon as Vir sees Pur falling from the terrace he rushes to her and catches her in his arms in the nick of time

(Dhal jaun main plays in BG)

{Tere Bina jeena kya , tere Bina jeena kyu}

Purvi after landing in Vir's strong and safe arms hugged him.

{Tujhe kaise batau yaara...tere bin mujhpe kya guzare...

Vo Zindagi he hi nhi...Jo tujhse Juda guzare...

Dhal jaun main tujhme....

Ghul jaun main tujhme....

Mil jaun main tujhme.......*2

Yaaraaa.....}

Vir buries his head in pur's shoulder ,his face can't be seen , with his arms tightly winding around Pur and his eyes closed. Vir tries to control his raging emotions, but they seem to refuse his every call on seeing the Pur eyes. Those eyes which always reflected cheerfulness, the brightness in her eyes that made vir's face to lit up like a bulb, and even taught him, this kroor Singh to smile after 5 years. Those eyes in which he loved lossing himself were lost of all the things mentioned above instead of hope there was fear and anxiety to an unmatched level, her whole body trembling down.

{Kahi se bhi chalun main, Kahi se guzaru main tujhi se as milu me yaaraa.. ooo

Thoda SA sirphira hu... Thoda SA baawra hu....

Jaisa bhi hu tera hi yaara...}

her shaky terrified breath coming in contact with his face as he puts Pur down with a small kiss on her head.

Vir finally takes in some air in his lungs after checking on her.

{Teri palko talle MERI saanse chale MERI saanse chale tere dum se....

Dhal jaun main tujhme....

Ghul jaun main tujhme....

Mil jaun main tujhme.......

Yaaraaa.....}

They have an eyelock and forget the world around , Vir wipes away her tears though he himself felt like crying.....

Part 2 likhu kya ???

♥️... pucho nhi jldi likho...this is peaceful
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Posted: 4 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Part 5

Pur couldn't take it anymore and closed her eyes Vir still staring....

Purvi was lost in the moment when suddenly Vir poured down a complete bottle of cold water on her Pur shouted "yeh Kya Kiya Aapne!"

Mukhiya VIRENDRA PRATAP SINGH naam he Mera main Kabhi Kisi se nhi haarta. Tanne k laga Tu mere upar paani dalegi or me bhut banke khada rahunga? Haan?

Prakashi-"Arre k hua purvi kyu chillayi"

Everyone reaches at the kitchen and is surprised on seeing purvir in such a condition. MS: arre yeh k Kar liya itni k garmi Chad rhi he tum dono ko

Pur's anger now boiling

Pur(mumbling)"ek to inki wajah se Hume pehle hi itna Kuch Sunna pada , or ab daant bhi khaani padegi"

"Hume nhi pata mama ji Apne bhanje se hi puche " as Pur walks away she slips on water but holds herself preventing any other chances of embarrassement and glares at Vir angrily

Vir: arree.... Pur leaves without listening to him.

Prakashi: hey bhagvaan jab Dekho tum dono ladte rehte ho or Kam se Kam Tu to lihaass Rakh

Vir : k keh rhi ho maa Mene Kuch nhi Kiya yo baawri he Jo jab Dekho bakwaass karti rehti he, mukhi sulks

Prakashi: achha theek he ab jaake usse mana to khaana bhi nhi khaaya usne

Vir : me kyu Manau iss baawri ko

Juhi : nhi Papa aapko hi manana padega

Manas: Haan Papa haathi Kabhi Bina baat k gussa nhi Hoti aap Manao haathi ko

Vir:yo k zabarjasti he!

JnM: zabarjasti hi Sahi par aap haathi ko Manao naaaaaaa....

Vir : achha Baba theek he me mana Lunga tumhare haathi ko ....chamche kahike

Vir leaves with plate in his hand towards their room.


In purvir's room

Pur is drying her hair but ignores Vir

Vir: ib gussa thuk de or Khana kha le thanda ho jayega,

Vir is again ignored

He comes near the mirror, pur's hairs fall on his face he is mesmerized by her beauty and takes in the scent of her hair. Pur notices Vir lost in her hair his eyes closed,she too blushes and enjoys her effect on him then she turns the blower in front of his face jerking him, he regains his conscious self and moves away, Pur slightly smiles while Vir is trying to control his hormones.

Pur:Chaliye Khana kha lete he (she takes the first bite) aap bhi aa jayiye hum jaante he Aapne bhi Kuch nhi khaya he

Vir comes and sits by her side and they eat in the same plate with stealing glances from eachother Vir puts the plate aside and they both prepare the bed and sleep on Thier respective sides.

Late at night

Purvi suffers a nightmare and wakes up terrified , Vir too wakes up on seeing Pur tensed .

Vir: k hua baawri! Bura Sapna dekha !

Pur looks at him teary eyed "humare dimag me Baar Baar vhi Sab chal rha he college, ragging,chhat se girna, hum Chah Kar bhi isse bhul nhi pa rhe he "

Vir : Jo beet gya so beet gya ib in sab k baare me soch Kar Kuch nhi hoga. Aankhe band Kar or soo ja kal college jaana he na. Pur tries, but again wakes up Pur(restless): "humse nhi hoga , humari aankhe band hote hi humare saamne vo pal aa jaata he aap hi bataye hum kya kare!

Vir: shaant baawri shaant....wipes away her tears....mere pass aa...

Pur:(stunned) kya

Vir:(hesitantly) Mai...n yo keh rha tha ki ag..gar tanne koi aitraz na ho to Tu mere pass so Sakti he....

Pur: hu..m!?

Vir:haa...nn tanne hi to Kaha tha jab Tu mere pass Hoti he tujhe surakshit mehsoos hota he... Darr nhi Lagta....

Pur is in awe of her husband.....Vir extends his arm towards her...Pur feels a little shy and butterflies in her stomach....Vir too feels a tingling sensation all over his body...both of them are a little awkward and effected but none was ready to accept.

Pur places her head on vir's arm her heartbeat racing while Vir diverts his gaze to the other corner of the room,Pur places her hand on his biceps "thank you"and sleeps

Vir looks softly at her ,smiles and closes his eyes.

bs yha puri ki puri aag lg gyi... ohh piya oh piya... ye haal tumne kya kiya😍😍
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sargamif

Yeh wali series itni jaldi kyu khatam kar di yaar😣abhi to they started coming closer

sirf ek track khattam hua he story nhi 😃n iska conti. Milega next track me 😉
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome update n both are embarassed n confused with their feelings n purvi knows that virendar slowly slowly accepting her n whenever she is near him he forgot everything n lost in her n she is happy that she is coming out of his shell n accepting her n thnxx for pm me

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