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Posted: 4 years ago
#51

Sri maza aa gaya..Jealous Vir is a treat❤️ I can even imagine him being all jealous still looking cute !😆

Please do continue..🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Nezuko

So ye vir ka sakshi rag kab khatam hoga🙄

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Ye sakshi ne swarg se jina haram kar rakha hai

Vipul ki entry that was not expected at all😂😂😂 I can imagine vir's reaction

Jealous vir will be the best vir

Apki bawari 🤧🤧🤧 my heart❤❤

Good one sri👌👌❤❤❤❤

Ab jiya ki turn hai😂😂😂


God the meme is so apt on vir.... 🤣🤣🤣


Thanks nezu.... 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Amaraddict


Aapki bawri 😍😍 I could hear it so loud in her voice... Jealous Vir uff 🔥🔥🔥 ab pata chala jab kisi aur ko bhaav milta hai toh kaisa lagta hai. You Sakshi rant has always pierced her from inside.. aur jalo Virendra 🙈


Sri you just killed it. What a piece 👏 This is going so smooth and beautiful... please someone continue this jealousy wala yaar 👌👌


Thank you asma for liking it.... 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: aryapdane

I loved it! Vipul is back. Ab mukhi ke hosh thikane lagenge. Potterhead_05 please continue this soon!


Thanks arya... 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Potterhead_05

Loved it sriiiii..... awesome....the ringing was as if i could hear it...aapki baawri...haayeeee...

Yah i will surely continue...ig tmrw... Agar aaj possible hua toh aaj hi kar dungi...

Loved it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️


Thank you jiya... Waiting for your update.... 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: darkchocolates

Sri maza aa gaya..Jealous Vir is a treat❤️ I can even imagine him being all jealous still looking cute !😆

Please do continue..🤗


Thanks ayushi... 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil


God the meme is so apt on vir.... 🤣🤣🤣


Thanks nezu.... 🤗

Welcome and hera pheri memes are relatable and hilarious on different level🤣🤣🤣 I can never get bored

Sri🤗❤❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nezuko

Welcome and hera pheri memes are relatable and hilarious on different level🤣🤣🤣 I can never get bored

Sri🤗❤❤



Just love that movie.... 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 8.


"arey vipul isme aloo hai... Tumhe aloo pasand nahi hai na... Ruko hum tumhare liye kuch aur bhejte hai... "

Saying purvi left to get something else for vipul... Here mukhi was fuming with jealousy... "bawri ko bada pata hai ki iss chore NE key pasand hai key nahi... Apne pati ko to nashta bhi na parosa par dost ne sab apne haathon se paros rahi hai... "


Just then Purvi came back with a plate of kheer puri.

"Ye lo Vipul...dekho wo hi layi jo tumhe pasand hai..." Purvi said, setting the plate down.

"Arrey pur tujhe yaad hai...mujhe laga Shaadi hote hi hum ko bhi bhool gayi aur hume kya pasand h wo bhi..." Vipul laughed.

Vir then finalised the deal with Vipul's boss and as everyone got up to leave, Vipul said "Purvi tu aaya karna kabhi wapas milne hum se...bohot accha laga aise achanak se mil gayi"

"Haan toh Vipul abhi kitni baatein karni thi hum ko tum se...tum ruk jao do char din" Purvi said, then looked at Mukhi suddenly "Agar aap ko koi dikkat na ho mukhiji..." She trailed off....


Vir thought unconsciously- dikkat toh hai manne...jaan na pehchan mhaari baawri se itna ghul mil raha hai...yeh yahan kyun rahega bhala...na keh de mukhi na keh de... Baawri ko baad mein mana lena...

"Thik hai baawri...manne kyun dikkat hogi, chak ab fatafat bol vipul ko naha dho le sab... Sab se milwa de isne.." Vir said, against his wishes, because he had seen the smile on Purvi's face when she saw her childhood friend.

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In the afternoon, when everyone had had lunch and went to rest, Purvi went to her room, she had to arrange the clothes that were there... Mount Clothmore always keeps growing, she thought to herself.


Vir was changing his clothes in the bathroom then as he had spilled something on it during lunch.


As Purvi started arranging her sarees, Vipul entered.

"Arrey mukhiyain ko bhi kaam karna padta hai kya yahan..?" Vipul laughed, startling Purvi...and also Vir, who was suddenly aware that Vipul had entered his and Baawri's room....How dare he...


"Haan Vipul ab kaam toh sabko rehta hai na...tum baitho na...kitni baatein karni thi tumse..."

"Ji hum toh aapse hi baat karne ruke hain"...

Now Vir was almost fuming...what right did that Vipul have to come and chat with his baawri when it was the only part of the day when Purvi sat with him, with Vir, to talk... So he decided to stay in the bathroom to listen what they would talk about, hopefully not his age...

"Sab koi kaise hain wahan, sab bhool toh nahi gaye na hume?"

"Arrey na na... Uss sherni ko kaun bhool sakta hai jo nadi mein aise hi jump maar deti thi toofan mein bhi, jo kisi se bhi lad leti thi, jo sabki muskaan thi...kaise bhool Jaye..."

Purvi just smiled at this... getting emotional on remembering everything. And Vir's eyes were almost circular plates, so concerned about how Purvi could jump in like that and other stuff...


Both continued talking, unaware that Vir was also listening in when suddenly Vipul said "Purvi mujhe maaf kar do..."

"Kyun kya hua vipul..." Purvi asked, confused

"Hum tumhe bacha na paaye...humko pata tha tumhari molkki ho rahi hai, bataya hum ne priyu ko par agar sahi samay par kuch karte toh shayad tum yaha mol ke bandhan mein na phasi hoti...sorry Purvi..."

"Vipul aisa kuch nahi hai...yahan sab itne acche hain ki kabhi yeh mehsoos hi nahi hota ki hum molkki hain....isme tumhaari koi Galti nahi... Hum khush hain yahan...aise bhi jaise hi apna mol chukayenge chale jaayenge yaha se..." Vir was pained to hear this- no she won't leave, i won't let her leave...

On saying this even Purvi hoped that Mukhi ji would stop her...

" Aur mukhiya ji bhi thode umardaar na lagte tumhe?" Vipul suddenly asked jokingly, trying to lighten the mood...

There it was, Vir thought, now she will start her tau chalisa and probably she would also tell Vipul about her his and Sakshi's part...what would he think then...?

"Nahi Vipul bilkul bhi nahi.... Mukhiji se accha pati hume mil hi nahi sakte...unhe kuch mat bolna..." Purvi started praising mukhi so much, both Vipul and Vir were shocked... Vir 's heart was almost dancing, when he heard both of them laughing and a rustle of sarees, as if both were playing and throwing sarees at each other... And a clanking of bangles as if Vipul had held her hand... Now Vir couldn't take it anymore, these undefined pangs of jealousy were too much to take in...how could that Vipul even try to hold his baawri's hand...all thoughts about Sakshi now vanished...

"Ahem ahem...wo baawri..humari ghadi kahan rakhi dekhi hai?" Vir said, coming out awkwardly... He saw Purvi was near his table, laughing, few of her bangles on the table and Vipul on the other side, a pallu on his head and hand on his waist, a bangle in his other hand as if trying to wear it.

Both Purvi and Vipul were shocked to see Vir there...and Vipul almost fell down, trying to look as dignified he could with a half way saree on him... None of them had expected, neither Vir nor Purvi and Vipul...

"Aap yahan...?" Purvi asked bewildered...

"Ib kamra mera hai patni meri hai toh aa toh sakta hoon na main..." Vir said, looking very pointedly at Vipul. Though he couldn't continue for long...Vipul was looking disastrous in a saree...

"Aa sorry sir bina permission ke aa gaye aur yeh...hum chalte hain..." Vipul said, his face red, and embarrassed to the roots.

"Arrey Vipul tumne ice-cream nahi khayi...main deti hoon tumhe...chalo" purvi said, trying to get out of the room. She had seen a certain prominent flare of jealousy on Vir's face and she couldn't helo having false hopes again and again and again...which was very wrong indeed, as she thought.

"Manne bhi dede ice-cream, main bhi chalta hoon" vir said, now he was pretty sure that even though he didn't know why he was feeling so damn jealous and possessive, he would see ki uski pirvi ne koi aur na le jaaye...

In the kitchen, by chance, Purvir were left alone. When Purvi was opening the fridge, Vir came from behind and held her hand, turning her towards him so that she was between him and the fridge door...

"Ke hua hai tanne..na mere se baat Kar rhi na meri taraf thik se dekh rahi na kuch bhi..."

"Aao ko toh accha lag raha hoga hume laga... Ab hume jaane dijiye koi dekh lega... Vipul kya sochega..." She felt that how could someone be happy and heartbroken at the same time, she wanted to run away and stand there with him forever, both at the same time..

"Manne na farak pare hai wo ke sochega...tu soch rahi mere baare mein? Manne jalan na hoti ke?..." He trailed off, realising what he had said...

How could he, when he loved only Sakshi?...but his feelings for Purvi couldn't also be ignored

"Ji hume ice-cream nikalni hai..." Purvi said, trying to free her hand in vain...

Both were confused by what Vir said, his admitting being jealous, even though he could only ever love Sakshi...


"Ahem ahem, Purvi aaj ice cream milegi ya pighla ke do gi..." Vipul entered suddenly and turned away seeing both like that, and started laughing...

" Sorry galat moment pe aa gaya...tu baad me le ke aa ice cream"

And as Vipul left, both Purvi and Vir's faces turned pink, both smiling softly...


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Potterhead_05

Part 8.


"arey vipul isme aloo hai... Tumhe aloo pasand nahi hai na... Ruko hum tumhare liye kuch aur bhejte hai... "

Saying purvi left to get something else for vipul... Here mukhi was fuming with jealousy... "bawri ko bada pata hai ki iss chore NE key pasand hai key nahi... Apne pati ko to nashta bhi na parosa par dost ne sab apne haathon se paros rahi hai... "


Just then Purvi came back with a plate of kheer puri.

"Ye lo Vipul...dekho wo hi layi jo tumhe pasand hai..." Purvi said, setting the plate down.

"Arrey pur tujhe yaad hai...mujhe laga Shaadi hote hi hum ko bhi bhool gayi aur hume kya pasand h wo bhi..." Vipul laughed.

Vir then finalised the deal with Vipul's boss and as everyone got up to leave, Vipul said "Purvi tu aaya karna kabhi wapas milne hum se...bohot accha laga aise achanak se mil gayi"

"Haan toh Vipul abhi kitni baatein karni thi hum ko tum se...tum ruk jao do char din" Purvi said, then looked at Mukhi suddenly "Agar aap ko koi dikkat na ho mukhiji..." She trailed off....


Vir thought unconsciously- dikkat toh hai manne...jaan na pehchan mhaari baawri se itna ghul mil raha hai...yeh yahan kyun rahega bhala...na keh de mukhi na keh de... Baawri ko baad mein mana lena...

"Thik hai baawri...manne kyun dikkat hogi, chak ab fatafat bol vipul ko naha dho le sab... Sab se milwa de isne.." Vir said, against his wishes, because he had seen the smile on Purvi's face when she saw her childhood friend.

-----------


In the afternoon, when everyone had had lunch and went to rest, Purvi went to her room, she had to arrange the clothes that were there... Mount Clothmore always keeps growing, she thought to herself.


Vir was changing his clothes in the bathroom then as he had spilled something on it during lunch.


As Purvi started arranging her sarees, Vipul entered.

"Arrey mukhiyain ko bhi kaam karna padta hai kya yahan..?" Vipul laughed, startling Purvi...and also Vir, who was suddenly aware that Vipul had entered his and Baawri's room....How dare he...


"Haan Vipul ab kaam toh sabko rehta hai na...tum baitho na...kitni baatein karni thi tumse..."

"Ji hum toh aapse hi baat karne ruke hain"...

Now Vir was almost fuming...what right did that Vipul have to come and chat with his baawri when it was the only part of the day when Purvi sat with him, with Vir, to talk... So he decided to stay in the bathroom to listen what they would talk about, hopefully not his age...

"Sab koi kaise hain wahan, sab bhool toh nahi gaye na hume?"

"Arrey na na... Uss sherni ko kaun bhool sakta hai jo nadi mein aise hi jump maar deti thi toofan mein bhi, jo kisi se bhi lad leti thi, jo sabki muskaan thi...kaise bhool Jaye..."

Purvi just smiled at this... getting emotional on remembering everything. And Vir's eyes were almost circular plates, so concerned about how Purvi could jump in like that and other stuff...


Both continued talking, unaware that Vir was also listening in when suddenly Vipul said "Purvi mujhe maaf kar do..."

"Kyun kya hua vipul..." Purvi asked, confused

"Hum tumhe bacha na paaye...humko pata tha tumhari molkki ho rahi hai, bataya hum ne priyu ko par agar sahi samay par kuch karte toh shayad tum yaha mol ke bandhan mein na phasi hoti...sorry Purvi..."

"Vipul aisa kuch nahi hai...yahan sab itne acche hain ki kabhi yeh mehsoos hi nahi hota ki hum molkki hain....isme tumhaari koi Galti nahi... Hum khush hain yahan...aise bhi jaise hi apna mol chukayenge chale jaayenge yaha se..." Vir was pained to hear this- no she won't leave, i won't let her leave...

On saying this even Purvi hoped that Mukhi ji would stop her...

" Aur mukhiya ji bhi thode umardaar na lagte tumhe?" Vipul suddenly asked jokingly, trying to lighten the mood...

There it was, Vir thought, now she will start her tau chalisa and probably she would also tell Vipul about her his and Sakshi's part...what would he think then...?

"Nahi Vipul bilkul bhi nahi.... Mukhiji se accha pati hume mil hi nahi sakte...unhe kuch mat bolna..." Purvi started praising mukhi so much, both Vipul and Vir were shocked... Vir 's heart was almost dancing, when he heard both of them laughing and a rustle of sarees, as if both were playing and throwing sarees at each other... And a clanking of bangles as if Vipul had held her hand... Now Vir couldn't take it anymore, these undefined pangs of jealousy were too much to take in...how could that Vipul even try to hold his baawri's hand...all thoughts about Sakshi now vanished...

"Ahem ahem...wo baawri..humari ghadi kahan rakhi dekhi hai?" Vir said, coming out awkwardly... He saw Purvi was near his table, laughing, few of her bangles on the table and Vipul on the other side, a pallu on his head and hand on his waist, a bangle in his other hand as if trying to wear it.

Both Purvi and Vipul were shocked to see Vir there...and Vipul almost fell down, trying to look as dignified he could with a half way saree on him... None of them had expected, neither Vir nor Purvi and Vipul...

"Aap yahan...?" Purvi asked bewildered...

"Ib kamra mera hai patni meri hai toh aa toh sakta hoon na main..." Vir said, looking very pointedly at Vipul. Though he couldn't continue for long...Vipul was looking disastrous in a saree...

"Aa sorry sir bina permission ke aa gaye aur yeh...hum chalte hain..." Vipul said, his face red, and embarrassed to the roots.

"Arrey Vipul tumne ice-cream nahi khayi...main deti hoon tumhe...chalo" purvi said, trying to get out of the room. She had seen a certain prominent flare of jealousy on Vir's face and she couldn't helo having false hopes again and again and again...which was very wrong indeed, as she thought.

"Manne bhi dede ice-cream, main bhi chalta hoon" vir said, now he was pretty sure that even though he didn't know why he was feeling so damn jealous and possessive, he would see ki uski pirvi ne koi aur na le jaaye...

In the kitchen, by chance, Purvir were left alone. When Purvi was opening the fridge, Vir came from behind and held her hand, turning her towards him so that she was between him and the fridge door...

"Ke hua hai tanne..na mere se baat Kar rhi na meri taraf thik se dekh rahi na kuch bhi..."

"Aao ko toh accha lag raha hoga hume laga... Ab hume jaane dijiye koi dekh lega... Vipul kya sochega..." She felt that how could someone be happy and heartbroken at the same time, she wanted to run away and stand there with him forever, both at the same time..

"Manne na farak pare hai wo ke sochega...tu soch rahi mere baare mein? Manne jalan na hoti ke?..." He trailed off, realising what he had said...

How could he, when he loved only Sakshi?...but his feelings for Purvi couldn't also be ignored

"Ji hume ice-cream nikalni hai..." Purvi said, trying to free her hand in vain...

Both were confused by what Vir said, his admitting being jealous, even though he could only ever love Sakshi...


"Ahem ahem, Purvi aaj ice cream milegi ya pighla ke do gi..." Vipul entered suddenly and turned away seeing both like that, and started laughing...

" Sorry galat moment pe aa gaya...tu baad me le ke aa ice cream"

And as Vipul left, both Purvi and Vir's faces turned pink, both smiling softly...


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Loved it so much. I have read it around 3 times continuously. Jealous Vir is a treat 😍 thank you so much for this ❤❤

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