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Posted: 4 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: apurva...

OMG, mai abhi se ro rahi hun yeh padh kar.. Painful yaar!.. But inevitable... Kisi na kisi din yeh show mein zaroor hoga..

True.. He is going to break her heart and I will be there with half my heart crying for purvi and the other half loving the angst 😂😂

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Posted: 4 years ago
#42

Aryaaaaaaaaaaa.....kya Likha hai...bacha liya aapne cliffhanger seeee....loved it...so beautiful i could see it right there...ab sri di jaldi se next part dede...bas aise hi chalta rahe...loving it really...❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Potterhead_05

Aryaaaaaaaaaaa.....kya Likha hai...bacha liya aapne cliffhanger seeee....loved it...so beautiful i could see it right there...ab sri di jaldi se next part dede...bas aise hi chalta rahe...loving it really...❤️❤️❤️

arre you set the scene so well ki mera kaam aasaan hogaya.

ab sri ka intezaar hain. This is going really well.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

Very painful 🥺yet very beautiful 😍

Continue soon 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

Read all the parts in one go..You guys are so Awesome and talented..👏

Damn this is painfully beautiful❤️ This is so dreamy.. I felt this was happening for real..

Please do continue..

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Posted: 4 years ago
#46

Part 7


Purvi put on a bright smile for him, a grin that hurt her cheeks as she nodded, stifling the question she wanted to ask him. That if what he was saying was true, how come he couldn't fall in love again?


And the reality stuck her that he is thinking that her love is a mere infatuation which will end once she get someone else in her life... And that the final nail on the coffin....


"aapne Hume samajh kya rakha hai... "


"key ho gaya bawri... Gussa kyun kar rahi hai... "


"aapka pyaar pyaar aur humara... Ek baat samajh lijiye aaj... Aaap Hume pyaar kare ya na kare par aapka koi haq nahi banta ki aap humare pyaar ka apmaan kare... "


"par bawri... "


"haa bawri.... Aapki bawri... Aur kisiki nahi.... Yaad rakhna... "


Saying this she stormed out of the room... He was puzzled by her behavior.... What made her so angry that she said all this.....


"pata nahi kya sochti rehti hai bawri... " which made him think of her words... Aapki bawri.... "mhaari bawri... " a smile crept on his just by thinking that she is his... But again his love for Sakshi brushed his thoughts and he came to reality...


.........


The next day it was a normal. Day for everyone.... Mukhi was waiting for some ppl from the nearby village who wanted to meet him for some development work...


"mera nashta jaldi laga do...kuch log aa rahe hai miln waste... "


"haa haa... Sab bana diya hai purvi ne... Ya le mein paros Deti hoon... "


He saw purvi was not all looking at him since morning which was making him more restless... She was busy with kids feeding them...making them.ready for school.... And he was not at all her priority....


"ib jisne banaya hai wo bhi paros sakta hai na ma... Tu kyun chinta Karti hai.... "


He said too loud that whole haveli can hear and even purvi heard it but she give him a damn....


"chup kar... Bechari subah se bacho ke peeche lagi hai aaj unke pareeksha hai na isilye...."


Saying she gave him the breakfast... He ate his breakfast and left for the meeting which was about held in lawn.... Soon the ppl arrived and they started discussing.... Purvi came out with the servant with tea and some snacks.... Everybody greeted the mukhiyayni... But one person was more surprised to see her....


"arey purvi.... "


"Vipul... Tum yaha... "


"haa wo mukhiji se kuch development ki plans ke baare me baat karni thi.... Kaisi ho run... "


"hum thik hai...aur tum kaise ho... Aur kaka aur kaki kaise hai... "


Mukhi was surprised the way she was talking to the guy in front of him.... "koun hai yo... Jo bawri itna uchal uchal ke baat kar rahi hai... poochu... Ke na poochu... "


Purvi understood the look mukhi was giving....


"ji yeh Vipul hai... Humare Bachpan ke dost... Hum ek hi school me The... Air vipul yeh mukhi ji...h.. Hum...humare pati... "


The sound pati was so soothing to him that he forgot that he had a meeting and was just staring his wife.... He was distracted by purvi voice....


"arey vipul isme aloo hai... Tumhe aloo pasand nahi hai na... Ruko hum tumhare liye kuch aur bhejte hai... "


Saying purvi left to get something else for vipul... Here mukhi was fuming with jealousy... "bawri ko bada pata hai ki iss chore NE key pasand hai key nahi... Apne pati ko to nashta bhi na parosa par dost ne sab apne haathon se paros rahi hai... "


So that's it guys... Hope u all like it.... 🙏

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Posted: 4 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Part 7


Purvi put on a bright smile for him, a grin that hurt her cheeks as she nodded, stifling the question she wanted to ask him. That if what he was saying was true, how come he couldn't fall in love again?


And the reality stuck her that he is thinking that her love is a mere infatuation which will end once she get someone else in her life... And that the final nail on the coffin....


"aapne Hume samajh kya rakha hai... "


"key ho gaya bawri... Gussa kyun kar rahi hai... "


"aapka pyaar pyaar aur humara... Ek baat samajh lijiye aaj... Aaap Hume pyaar kare ya na kare par aapka koi haq nahi banta ki aap humare pyaar ka apmaan kare... "


"par bawri... "


"haa bawri.... Aapki bawri... Aur kisiki nahi.... Yaad rakhna... "


Saying this she stormed out of the room... He was puzzled by her behavior.... What made her so angry that she said all this.....


"pata nahi kya sochti rehti hai bawri... " which made him think of her words... Aapki bawri.... "mhaari bawri... " a smile crept on his just by thinking that she is his... But again his love for Sakshi brushed his thoughts and he came to reality...


.........


The next day it was a normal. Day for everyone.... Mukhi was waiting for some ppl from the nearby village who wanted to meet him for some development work...


"mera nashta jaldi laga do...kuch log aa rahe hai miln waste... "


"haa haa... Sab bana diya hai purvi ne... Ya le mein paros Deti hoon... "


He saw purvi was not all looking at him since morning which was making him more restless... She was busy with kids feeding them...making them.ready for school.... And he was not at all her priority....


"ib jisne banaya hai wo bhi paros sakta hai na ma... Tu kyun chinta Karti hai.... "


He said too loud that whole haveli can hear and even purvi heard it but she give him a damn....


"chup kar... Bechari subah se bacho ke peeche lagi hai aaj unke pareeksha hai na isilye...."


Saying she gave him the breakfast... He ate his breakfast and left for the meeting which was about held in lawn.... Soon the ppl arrived and they started discussing.... Purvi came out with the servant with tea and some snacks.... Everybody greeted the mukhiyayni... But one person was more surprised to see her....


"arey purvi.... "


"Vipul... Tum yaha... "


"haa wo mukhiji se kuch development ki plans ke baare me baat karni thi.... Kaisi ho run... "


"hum thik hai...aur tum kaise ho... Aur kaka aur kaki kaise hai... "


Mukhi was surprised the way she was talking to the guy in front of him.... "koun hai yo... Jo bawri itna uchal uchal ke baat kar rahi hai... poochu... Ke na poochu... "


Purvi understood the look mukhi was giving....


"ji yeh Vipul hai... Humare Bachpan ke dost... Hum ek hi school me The... Air vipul yeh mukhi ji...h.. Hum...humare pati... "


The sound pati was so soothing to him that he forgot that he had a meeting and was just staring his wife.... He was distracted by purvi voice....


"arey vipul isme aloo hai... Tumhe aloo pasand nahi hai na... Ruko hum tumhare liye kuch aur bhejte hai... "


Saying purvi left to get something else for vipul... Here mukhi was fuming with jealousy... "bawri ko bada pata hai ki iss chore NE key pasand hai key nahi... Apne pati ko to nashta bhi na parosa par dost ne sab apne haathon se paros rahi hai... "


So that's it guys... Hope u all like it.... 🙏


Aapki bawri 😍😍 I could hear it so loud in her voice... Jealous Vir uff 🔥🔥🔥 ab pata chala jab kisi aur ko bhaav milta hai toh kaisa lagta hai. You Sakshi rant has always pierced her from inside.. aur jalo Virendra 🙈


Sri you just killed it. What a piece 👏 This is going so smooth and beautiful... please someone continue this jealousy wala yaar 👌👌

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Posted: 4 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Part 7


Purvi put on a bright smile for him, a grin that hurt her cheeks as she nodded, stifling the question she wanted to ask him. That if what he was saying was true, how come he couldn't fall in love again?


And the reality stuck her that he is thinking that her love is a mere infatuation which will end once she get someone else in her life... And that the final nail on the coffin....


"aapne Hume samajh kya rakha hai... "


"key ho gaya bawri... Gussa kyun kar rahi hai... "


"aapka pyaar pyaar aur humara... Ek baat samajh lijiye aaj... Aaap Hume pyaar kare ya na kare par aapka koi haq nahi banta ki aap humare pyaar ka apmaan kare... "


"par bawri... "


"haa bawri.... Aapki bawri... Aur kisiki nahi.... Yaad rakhna... "


Saying this she stormed out of the room... He was puzzled by her behavior.... What made her so angry that she said all this.....


"pata nahi kya sochti rehti hai bawri... " which made him think of her words... Aapki bawri.... "mhaari bawri... " a smile crept on his just by thinking that she is his... But again his love for Sakshi brushed his thoughts and he came to reality...


.........


The next day it was a normal. Day for everyone.... Mukhi was waiting for some ppl from the nearby village who wanted to meet him for some development work...


"mera nashta jaldi laga do...kuch log aa rahe hai miln waste... "


"haa haa... Sab bana diya hai purvi ne... Ya le mein paros Deti hoon... "


He saw purvi was not all looking at him since morning which was making him more restless... She was busy with kids feeding them...making them.ready for school.... And he was not at all her priority....


"ib jisne banaya hai wo bhi paros sakta hai na ma... Tu kyun chinta Karti hai.... "


He said too loud that whole haveli can hear and even purvi heard it but she give him a damn....


"chup kar... Bechari subah se bacho ke peeche lagi hai aaj unke pareeksha hai na isilye...."


Saying she gave him the breakfast... He ate his breakfast and left for the meeting which was about held in lawn.... Soon the ppl arrived and they started discussing.... Purvi came out with the servant with tea and some snacks.... Everybody greeted the mukhiyayni... But one person was more surprised to see her....


"arey purvi.... "


"Vipul... Tum yaha... "


"haa wo mukhiji se kuch development ki plans ke baare me baat karni thi.... Kaisi ho run... "


"hum thik hai...aur tum kaise ho... Aur kaka aur kaki kaise hai... "


Mukhi was surprised the way she was talking to the guy in front of him.... "koun hai yo... Jo bawri itna uchal uchal ke baat kar rahi hai... poochu... Ke na poochu... "


Purvi understood the look mukhi was giving....


"ji yeh Vipul hai... Humare Bachpan ke dost... Hum ek hi school me The... Air vipul yeh mukhi ji...h.. Hum...humare pati... "


The sound pati was so soothing to him that he forgot that he had a meeting and was just staring his wife.... He was distracted by purvi voice....


"arey vipul isme aloo hai... Tumhe aloo pasand nahi hai na... Ruko hum tumhare liye kuch aur bhejte hai... "


Saying purvi left to get something else for vipul... Here mukhi was fuming with jealousy... "bawri ko bada pata hai ki iss chore NE key pasand hai key nahi... Apne pati ko to nashta bhi na parosa par dost ne sab apne haathon se paros rahi hai... "


So that's it guys... Hope u all like it.... 🙏

I loved it! Vipul is back. Ab mukhi ke hosh thikane lagenge. Potterhead_05 please continue this soon!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#49

Loved it sriiiii..... awesome....the ringing was as if i could hear it...aapki baawri...haayeeee...

Yah i will surely continue...ig tmrw... Agar aaj possible hua toh aaj hi kar dungi...

Loved it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Part 7


Purvi put on a bright smile for him, a grin that hurt her cheeks as she nodded, stifling the question she wanted to ask him. That if what he was saying was true, how come he couldn't fall in love again?


And the reality stuck her that he is thinking that her love is a mere infatuation which will end once she get someone else in her life... And that the final nail on the coffin....


"aapne Hume samajh kya rakha hai... "


"key ho gaya bawri... Gussa kyun kar rahi hai... "


"aapka pyaar pyaar aur humara... Ek baat samajh lijiye aaj... Aaap Hume pyaar kare ya na kare par aapka koi haq nahi banta ki aap humare pyaar ka apmaan kare... "


"par bawri... "


"haa bawri.... Aapki bawri... Aur kisiki nahi.... Yaad rakhna... "


Saying this she stormed out of the room... He was puzzled by her behavior.... What made her so angry that she said all this.....


"pata nahi kya sochti rehti hai bawri... " which made him think of her words... Aapki bawri.... "mhaari bawri... " a smile crept on his just by thinking that she is his... But again his love for Sakshi brushed his thoughts and he came to reality...


.........


The next day it was a normal. Day for everyone.... Mukhi was waiting for some ppl from the nearby village who wanted to meet him for some development work...


"mera nashta jaldi laga do...kuch log aa rahe hai miln waste... "


"haa haa... Sab bana diya hai purvi ne... Ya le mein paros Deti hoon... "


He saw purvi was not all looking at him since morning which was making him more restless... She was busy with kids feeding them...making them.ready for school.... And he was not at all her priority....


"ib jisne banaya hai wo bhi paros sakta hai na ma... Tu kyun chinta Karti hai.... "


He said too loud that whole haveli can hear and even purvi heard it but she give him a damn....


"chup kar... Bechari subah se bacho ke peeche lagi hai aaj unke pareeksha hai na isilye...."


Saying she gave him the breakfast... He ate his breakfast and left for the meeting which was about held in lawn.... Soon the ppl arrived and they started discussing.... Purvi came out with the servant with tea and some snacks.... Everybody greeted the mukhiyayni... But one person was more surprised to see her....


"arey purvi.... "


"Vipul... Tum yaha... "


"haa wo mukhiji se kuch development ki plans ke baare me baat karni thi.... Kaisi ho run... "


"hum thik hai...aur tum kaise ho... Aur kaka aur kaki kaise hai... "


Mukhi was surprised the way she was talking to the guy in front of him.... "koun hai yo... Jo bawri itna uchal uchal ke baat kar rahi hai... poochu... Ke na poochu... "


Purvi understood the look mukhi was giving....


"ji yeh Vipul hai... Humare Bachpan ke dost... Hum ek hi school me The... Air vipul yeh mukhi ji...h.. Hum...humare pati... "


The sound pati was so soothing to him that he forgot that he had a meeting and was just staring his wife.... He was distracted by purvi voice....


"arey vipul isme aloo hai... Tumhe aloo pasand nahi hai na... Ruko hum tumhare liye kuch aur bhejte hai... "


Saying purvi left to get something else for vipul... Here mukhi was fuming with jealousy... "bawri ko bada pata hai ki iss chore NE key pasand hai key nahi... Apne pati ko to nashta bhi na parosa par dost ne sab apne haathon se paros rahi hai... "


So that's it guys... Hope u all like it.... 🙏

So ye vir ka sakshi rag kab khatam hoga🙄

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Ye sakshi ne swarg se jina haram kar rakha hai

Vipul ki entry that was not expected at all😂😂😂 I can imagine vir's reaction

Jealous vir will be the best vir

Apki bawari 🤧🤧🤧 my heart❤❤

Good one sri👌👌❤❤❤❤

Ab jiya ki turn hai😂😂😂

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