|PurVir Drabble Series|Part 14 on Pg 19

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Posted: 4 years ago
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aryapdane, Potterhead_05 and Srilata.Mineil proudly presents a PurVir Drabble series that you absolutely didn't ask for (but we're still going to give it to you because we love you all 😂😂)

The prompt that started this series was :

what if Purvi confesses her love to Vir while he's still hung up on Sakshi

Happy reading.


Part 1

Her caramel eyes find his and for one long second, he is frozen to the spot. Her lips curve to form a soft smile. A smile that somehow looks resigned.


"I love you," she says. The words are barely a whisper but he hears them. They burn like vitriol in his ears.


Virendra shakes his head, stumbles a step back, his heart beating in his mouth. He wishes he'd imagine those words like a fever dream but Purvi doesn't even allow him that comfort as she continues repeating the three words, twisting the knife in his heart.


"Stop," he croaks.


"I know that Sakshi Ji... "


Virendra closes his eyes briefly, finding the strength that he needs. "What are you hoping to hear from me? You must give up your madness."


Her eyes widen, as if in shock. "My love isn't a madness."


"It is if you're hoping that I'd return your feelings."


Tears pool in her eyes and for a moment, he wants to take the words back.


"I can only ever love Sakshi."


He doesn't wait for her response as he storms away from her. But he's not sure who he is angry at anymore. At himself or her.


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Index.

Part 2 and 3 on pg1

Part 4 on pg 2

Part 5 on pg 3

Part 6 on pg 4

Part 7 on pg 7

Part 8 on pg 8

Part 9 on pg 9

Part 10 on pg 10

Part 11 on pg 12

Part 12 on pg 13

Part 13 on pg 15

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Posted: 4 years ago
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So I can pass my comment right

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Good job arya and potterhead (yr tum nam batao apna)👍

Eagerly waiting for next one sri🙈🙈🙈

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Originally posted by: Nezuko

So I can pass my comment right


Good job arya and potterhead (yr tum nam batao apna)👍

Eagerly waiting for next one sri🙈🙈🙈

Mera naam Jiya hai 🙈😂

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Mera naam Jiya hai 🙈😂

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Wow this is a new year gift for purvir fans ☺️🥳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 4.


So guys here I present my version continuing the part written by arya... Don't throw chappals if you don't like it.... 🙏


"ji mukhiji.... Mein intazam kar dunga.... "


Vir disconnected the call and leaned back on the chair but he can't come out of her thoughts...he just slept off there thinking about his bawri...his phone ring woke him up...


"mukhiji intezam ho gaya hai... Kab nikalna hai aapko"


"abhi ke abhi munshiji...mein aa raha hun gadi tayyar kijiye... "


"ji mukhiji.. "


Vir disconnects the call and packs his stuff... He saw her sleeping...he was so into her thoughts that he don't even notice that she came and slept.... He went to her saw her..couldn't stop himself from caressing her beautiful face.... He can feel wetness near her eyes.... He cursed himself for making her cry and go through all this... He pecked her forehead....


"manne maaf kar de bawri... "


Saying he just stormed out of the room.....


Later in the morning....


Purvi woke up to see he is no where in the room... She saw few of his wardrobe is missing too.... She just took a deep breath and went down to prakashi...


"maa... "


"arey tu aa gayi purvi....key hua Teri tabiyat thik hai na... "


"ji maa..hum thik hai... Bache... "


"wo dono to school chale gaye chinta na kar... "


"aur maa wo... Mukhiji... "


"virender to Delhi gaya hai na... Tanne na bataya usne.."


"Delhi... Nahi Hume nahi bataya unhone.. Wo kal raat jab baat hui tab.... "


Purvi stopped in middle...she understood why he went to Delhi suddenly...he wanted to escape from her... He din't want to be with her... She felt someone has pierced a knife in her heart... Thinking that he don't want to be with her... Her heart bleeded just by the thought that she have stay alone without him....


"key hua purvi.. "


"kuch nahi maa... Shayad hum so rahe The isoiliye wo hume bataye bina chale gaye... "


The days were just passing by missing each other... They got so used to each other that they can't stay without each others presence...


Mukhi wanted to be with her but he don't want to get be her false hopes... He was missing her presence around him... He saw that he has packed her kamarband and her dupatta also with his stuff... He could feel her scent in the dupatta... He inhaled it... Dint want exhale her scent from him.... He recalled how she gets ready...how she puts the sindoor so lovingly and so proudly.... He was distracted with a phone call... It was video call from from juhi....


"baba... "


"bol chori... Kaise ho tum log... "


"hum sab thik hai baba... Aap kab aa rahe ho... "


He could see purvi in the background but can't see her clearly as the whole family was occupying the screen.... Purvi was dying to see his one glimpse but nobody was letting her to see her....


"baba boliye na... "


"haa aa jaunga beta... Bus kuch kaam hai wo ho jaue aa jaunga... "


All were talking in a queue with vir... But purvi was not in the queue... She wanted to see him but she can't snatch the phone.... Mean while manas took the phone from yogi....


"arey phone mujhe do na chachu... "


"haa le... "


"baba aapne sabse baat ki par hathi se nahi... Yeh lo baat Karo... "


He handed the phone to purvi.... Vir wanted the phone to land on her hands deep down in his heart.... But when she has the phone he dint say a word.... Purvi was just seeing him without uttering a word... It was like she just want to fill him in her eyes..... Vir wants to speak to her but again his love for Sakshi fore shadowed his love for purvi.... He was happy that he could see her...


"acha manne kaam hai mean baad me baat karta hun.... "


Saying he disconnected the call and left a lone tear...


"manne khud na samajh aa raha ki mein kyun tujhse door na reh pa raha hun... "


Thinking about his bawri he was getting ready for the meeting.... His phone Rang again... This time it was vaibhav...


"haa bol vaibhav... Abhi to baat hui na mhaari... Key hua.. "


"bhayya.... Bhayya... "


"arey key Bhaiyya Bhaiyya laga rakha hai... Key hua... "


"bhayya wo Bhabhi.... "


"key hua bawri NE... "


"Bhabhi ka accident hua hai.... "


"key bol raha hai tu... Abhi aadhe ghante pehle hi use Maine dekha tha... "


"haa bhayya uske baad hi hua... Bohut khoon beh gaya hai Bhaiyya.... Hum unhe hospital leke aaye hai...icu me hai Bhabhi.... "


"ICU me.... Mean abhi nikal raha hoon.... "



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So that's it guys.... Pata nahi kaisa hai... Hope u all like it.....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Omg.. Mukhi ke bina yeh toh hospital pohoch gayi.

Very nice Sri. I loved it yaar. And what a cliffhanger you have given us. I think Potterhead_05 should continue this

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: aryapdane

Omg.. Mukhi ke bina yeh toh hospital pohoch gayi.

Very nice Sri. I loved it yaar. And what a cliffhanger you have given us. I think Potterhead_05 should continue this

Phir se hospital but is bar mukhi pura pagla jayega😭😭🤣🤣🤣

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