Rudhita AU Fanfic: Roopkothar Aalo Chhaya [PART SIX AND SEVEN UPDATED] - Page 11

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: briti_asfiya

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Britttttt🤣🤣🤣

why so serious?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujz


Britttttt🤣🤣🤣

why so serious?

Main kya karu IF is 🤬


Your comment was so sweet. I'm really so touched.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: briti_asfiya

Main kya karu IF is 🤬


Your comment was so sweet. I'm really so touched.


🤣bhaiiiiii oh bhaiiiiiiiii🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Finally someone updated after long time 😆 I forgot the story 🤪 binge read all four parts 😆 Thanks for your late update 😵


Ani and kakiya bond is so pure ❤️ just loved this part so much 😳 beautifully penned Briti 😊

That ande ghol food reminded me of my bachpan with cousins in my native and kakiya pampering ani

Equally Ani loves his badimaa so much ❤️ awww tri kaka entry

Complete family vibe 🤪(Ani, bon, kaka, kakiya)

Can't wait for next update, write soon Briti 😳

Will update soon Lalz. Thank you for your precious comment. Meri Nani bachpan mein aise hi khana khilati thi mujhe. So I included it.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Dedicated to: @Home786, @--Lalz-- and @Prit_007 they are the constant. ❤️


Part 5.


Special Thanks to: @Sujz my pyaariest behen. ❤️


"Nahi karungi vrat phir, khana toh khayega naa Ani? Kitna dimag garam hai tera, zara si baat pe itna gussa. Kakiya ko zara sa chakkar ayaa aur pura ghar sar pe utha liya?" Chayanika Devi said hurriedly, trying to calm her petulant 6 feet 3 inches tall baby.


"Kakiya aapke paas mere jaisi kaki nahi thi, isliye aap nahi samjhengi mere liye apki ki kya kadar hai," came Aniruddh's muffled voice as he hugged his Kakiya tight.


Trilochan Roy Chowdhury then turned at Bondita smilingly and winked at her. Who would think a Zamindar could wink at a servant girl? Bondita smiled and bowed her head again.


"Boni Maa dar mat. Yeh humara Sonai Baba tere Bhutoo se kam nahi," he added humourously, at which all laughed except Aniruddh, who instead turned to look at Bondita's shy smile.


"Ab yeh Bhutoo kaun hai? Mere jaane ke bad kitne prani aur jud gaye iss grihasthi mein, koi mujhe bhi batayega?" He asked in mock anger.


"Bhutoo is the most ugly looking puppy, our Boni found him stuck in the rose bush patch all stuck among the thorns. I guess she cried more than her Bhutoo and was much more hurt too. But she refused get treated at all till Mr. Bhutoo was tended." Trilochan Babu narrated eagerly. "You should meet her Bhutoo sometime..." he added as an afterthought almost, the smile never leaving his face.


Bondita came near him shyly touched his feet and ran away from the room. Aniruddh was now intrigued... What was she doing here? She might not remember him but he remembered her, Bondita was the girl from the open theatre who narrated the story "Banjh Hoon Main". But why did she fear him so much? Som was also there, and Kaka was also talking to her normally. She didn't react all scared with any of them, it was not a gender issue then. Aniruddh never thought of himself one of those who repulsed people by just his look or demeanor, yet here was this girl who refused to meet his eyes even! Also her similarities with his Kakiya were uncanny. She didn't look much like Chayanika Devi, but her characteristics and mannerisms were very similar.


Or is it that he himself who was noticing or seeing things that didn't exist at all? Aniruddh was confused. He had always known his Kakiya was one piece in the whole universe and no one could be like her or could there be he asked to himself as Bondita once again captured his thoughts. Ani left the room, his musings messing up his already tired head some more.


The next morning Aniruddh woke up late, and stepped down without looking when he landed on a puddle. Then he yelped, WHAT THE HELL was this? He was apparently standing on a pup's puddle. Yuckk!


"Kakiya.... Kakiya yeh ghar ke andar puppy kaise aaya? Aur mere kamre mein kya kar raha hai?" Aniruddh growled in anger, forgetting about Mr. Bhutoo and Ms. Bhutni in his momentary rage.


Entering his room and smilling, Chayanika Devi addressed the puppy instead of Aniruddh. Oh the horror! "Bhutoo tum Dadamuni se milne aaye ho? Abhi dadamuni uthe hi hai isliye woh abhi Grouchy Bear ki tarah behave kar rahe hai. Hum Dadamuni se milne bad mein aayenge theek hai? Chalo Maa Bhutoo Babu ko Dhudh Bhaat degi. Bhuk lagi hogi na beta? Aao."


"Wah! Wah! Kya baat hai. Adbhut! Kakiya meri, aur pyar lene sab pahuch jaate hai. Pehle Ms. Bhutni aur ab Bhutoo. Lagta hai yeh sab mujhe hi theek karna padega." Aniruddh raged on.


"Yeh sab nahi chalega ab bus. Sara kamra ganda kar diya. Bhutoo and Bhutni dono ab bas ghar se out honge. I can't handle this anymore. Kakiya meri aur laad bhi mera bus. Baat karna parega Kaka se." The last part he muttered slowly, as he took in the scowling face of his Kakiya who left his room in anger.


Just in that moment he found Bondita standing at the door with a bucket of Phenoel water and mop. Eyes still not looking at him, she was chewing at her lower lip and didn't even knock, just stood there to get his permission to enter. He took advantage of that time to study her and then mumbled "Bhutoo and Bhutni what a combination?"

Edited by briti_asfiya - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: briti_asfiya

It's absolutely alright. You know that I love to do nautanki waise bhi this was a filler chapter.

Unresd par 4 on page 11

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you again Rosogolla for dedicating part 5 also for me 🤗❤️

I am loving how you progressing the story ❤️❤️

And I loved this part filled with love, pure affection, values of inner qualities, little fun and some suspense and mysteries too waiting for us I guess 😆❤️

I loved Kakiya's 6ft. 3inch baby jealous of Bhooto and Bhootni 😆❤️

And really loved the Bhootu and bhootni thing ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

First of all thank you so much for dedicating this part for me Britu 🤗It means a lot❤️

What should I say for your writing style, I feel lack of words to describe. The flow of your writing amazes me everytime. You took a long time to update but still I am not feeling disconnected to story ❤️

I loved Kakiya's love for Ani Kash show me v aisi Kakiya hoti ❤️ I wish Tri Kaka Koeli se sadi kar le to ho sakta hai aise hi laad pyaar kare Ani ko uski Kakiya🤪

Our hero is falling for our Bondu ☺️❤️

The story becoming more interesting update karo jaldi jaldi ❤️

Thank you so much Prit. You're so sweet. Thank you for encouraging me to do better. Always.


I've updated part 5.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Thank you again Rosogolla for dedicating part 5 also for me 🤗❤️

I am loving how you progressing the story ❤️❤️

And I loved this part filled with love, pure affection, values of inner qualities, little fun and some suspense and mysteries too waiting for us I guess 😆❤️

I loved Kakiya's 6ft. 3inch baby jealous of Bhooto and Bhootni 😆❤️

And really loved the Bhootu and bhootni thing ❤️

The entire story is dedicated to you, Lalz and Shaheen Di. Special chapterwise dedication are for others. You three are the constant.


Yes, many things are waiting for you all.


He is a possessive man.


Thank you Rosogolla.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank You for dedicating it to me :)


A complete package filled with family bonds, comedy, romance, everything. Liked how you retained Aniruddh's possessiveness.


Waiting for the next chapter. Cheers.

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