This comment is very special, had me in tears. Thank you so much 🤗
Its one of the best excerpts I have ever read!!!❤️❤️❤️ I literally read it twice. Once as Veer-Bani in naagin universe and another as veer-bani in a mills n boons novel!
I can't thank you enough. This means a lot because I did the best I can.
I loved the characterisation of bani here!!! You have etched her out so well dear! Brilliant!🤗This bani is all heart! Very sorted and vulnerable! She comes across as a wonderful women! Scarred but still hopeful, giving a very fair chance to this marriage and trying to feel veer's love and reciprocating in her own sweet way!
I am grateful for how her character turned out to be. You know when I started thinking about writing the update, I started stressing out because there is literally no reference point for how Bani will reciprocate to Veer's feelings. I began from the beginning and just tried to give her the emotions that she must be feeling.
I always find your writings very noise free! As in, your veer-bani are not tained by the surroundings! No satyug, kalyug talks, no revenge sagas, no negativity! They talk about themselves, feel each others company! Its outright romantic dear!😳
I am a hopeless romantic. Vani is my inspiration and focus so my stories will be about them for most part. I feel we have enough of Shukla, Mayuri, Jay Boss, Markat and Shakura aur screen. So the forum should be our sanctuary where we can read and write about the Vani we want.
Take a bow for the descripitions and the analogies you used! Its amazing how you compared bani's inner turmoil to the overlapping waves in the ocean and the clear blue sky as a hopeful source for her to heal herself! I found it ingeneous!❤️
Given the point in my story, I just thought about the places where Bani can be herself and pour her heart out without the fear of being judged and misunderstood after everything that happened with Jay.
And what to say about Veer!❤️ Words would fall short! Man of every girl's dream, the millennial prince charming cladded in black with a heart of gold! One woman man! That's how I imagined this veer!
I love Veer. But more than that I respect him. I strongly feel that there is a mature side to him which we will see when Bani let's her gaurds down and he helps her.
Please keep writing dear! You bring so much depth to veer-bani in my head while I watch them onscreen! I am able to invest more efficiently!
I truly hold those words very close to my heart.
More peaceful scenes like these please!😳 Veer-Bani on a beach! Uff, itni shaanti bechaaron ke actual mei naseeb kaha hogi kabhi!💔
Working on it... Karwachauth Pooja coming up in next update.
Kya hua agar tv par shaanti nahi mili toh
Forum par aa jaao main hoon naa!!!
Unki aankon ki gustaakiyan is pure bliss to read from your words!😳
An absolute treat. Do let me know if you want to read something specific
Keep bringing such masterpieces sweetheart!😆
Okay sweet heart
❤️ Its such a delight to read! Eagerly waiting for the next part!🤗
Coming as soon as possible
