Faded- Suvan Story (Epilogue Page 21) - Page 12

haaye yaar!! kaash aisa koi sweet sa scene dekhne ko miley show between Suman & Kavita

i really loved the way you portrayed the entire conversation between them.. felt extremely natural. do continue soon

Originally posted by: nancy56

THANK YOU SO MUCH DEAR 💓

Looking at the Army part of this story makes me flutter, and of course with all your lovely motivation I would love to continue with this story.

Rani ne Raja ke liye Bullet khayi, toh ab Raja needs to care a bit. Let's see what happens ahead.

You're welcome🤗

Yes Raja gotta care for his Rani now....

Let me warn you before itself that I am going to read all chapters now so be ready for my comments😆

Chapter 2-

Awesome chapter!

Shravan kind-off took back his harsh words

Silly girl....went on a walk...I guess she is going to get scolded again😆

The way you write is beautiful Harshika....it's amazing!

I am very glad that the next chapter is already up for me to read

Chapter 3-

Such a tragic yet beautiful chapter!💔

OMG....Devraj committed suicide?! I can't even imagine the turmoil he must've been....

And Tiwaris being Tiwaris never informed Suman about it

Shravan poor boy went through so much even though he wasn't at fault!😭

Glad Kancha and Suman still share the same bond!

So Suman is going to meet Shravan now...

Well written chapter👏

I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Chapter 4-

It feels like I am watching some movie...

How beautifully do you write!

Top notch writing I must say!

Shravan has matured over so much👏

Suman's much needed apology is here... I feel sad for both of them...situations have been cruel🥺

Can't wait for them to come over this hurdles!

Originally posted by: nancy56

Covid effect.

I had so many plans after my NEET.

Shopping, going out with friends, travelling.... all dusted into nothing.

So now I am scratching my head with stories and novels and movies.

Anyway,trying to keep myself sane.

But I am kinda introvert so it helps as well.

Ikr....I too am planning many things rn 😆

Covid ruined everyone's plans! Anyway glad you're writing this because we are loving it!❤️

Chapter 5-

Such a lovely chapter!

Suman is cooking Shravan's fav food and making sure he doesn't recognise

Shravan even noticed her cuts and burns❤️ they are so observant of their loved ones!

Shravan feels he might take away Suman's happiness...idioto😆

Can't wait to see his reaction!

Neatly written chapter👍🏼

Chapter 6-

Yipeeeeee.....Shravan at least accepted her apology...

Her apology sounded so real...amazingly written!

I can see him melting😆

Why do I feel Shravan will end-up seeing Vikku bhaiya with Suman?

Awesome chapter👍🏼

Chapter 7-

Yesss....I was right! Shravan met Suman at the pub

How sweet of SuVan to go the pub for their friends even though they didn't wish to!

Suman got drunk🤣 poor Shravan had to handle her!

Loved this chapter!

I won't speak the obvious of this chapter being written beautifully!❤️

Originally posted by: MishtiNew

Hayeeee so cute and mushy chapter and so meaningful! I totally loved this.

And loads of love to youuuuuuu for this write-up! ❤️

PS- Shravu!

Other people, kuchh yaad aaya☺️

Ofcourse....kaise na yaad ata😆