Main tujhme apni jaan rakh doon,st 5 on pg 28,teaser on 31,11/1 - Page 11

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Posted: 4 years ago

Interesting Teaser


Param wants to run away abroad


while Shagun wants him to stay


but he is surely scared now

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Posted: 4 years ago

SHOT 3

Ashok was sitting in his mansion when his lawyer came and he asked-raman ke case ki date kab hai,usse bail nahi milni chahiye,I want him to rot in jail for hurting my baby like this .

Lawyers look at each other and lowered their head.

Ashok-kya hua,jawaab do??

Lawyer-mr bhalla ko bail mil gayi hai.

Ashok-kaise,aur kyun.usne meri bachchi ke saath itna bura kiya ,usse kaise mili bail ??he roared .

Lawyer-uske lawyer ne directly judge ke paas se bail order liye hai,we couldn't explain the case and he released the bail order.

Ashok throw the vase in anger and said-i don't know anything ,mujhe Raman jail ki salakhon ke peeche chahiye,I want that bloody man to get punished badly.uske khilaaf case banao,bahut strong case ,woh bachna nahi chahiye,samjhe tum log,woh bachna nahi chahiye.usne meri bachchi ko choone ki himmat ki hai,he will not be spared .he was screaming on top of his voice when shagun came and said-ashok ,Ashok,calm down,itna stress aapke liye achcha nahi.aap please itna gussa mat kijiye.

Ashok-gussa naa karun,I feel like killing that man.usne meri bachchi ki kya haalat kar di hai,kyun tumne usse hamare ghar mein aane diya,shagun.kyun usse baahar nahi phenkwa diya.

Shagun-i am sorry,mujhe nahi pata tha ki woh iss niyat se aaya hai .mujhe lagaa tha woh kaam se aaya hai ,and he was playing with ria,mujhe andaza hota ki woh aisa karega toh main usse kabhi ghar mein aane nahi deti .

Ashok-main apni bachchi ko bacha toh nahi paaya,par Raman ko chain se jeene bhi nahi dunga.i will maje sure that he rot in jail,make a strong case against him ,he ordered the lawyers and they went .

Shagun-ab aap bhi thoda rest kar lijiye,subah se bahut pareshan hai,u must be exhausted,she said in sugar coated voice.

Ashok look at her and said-ab kisko chain milega,I can't sleep until my baby is fine,main hospital jaa raha hoon ria ke paas,tum apna khayal rakhna aur kisi ko ghar ke ander aane mat dena,kisi ko bhi nahi.samjhi tum??

Shagun nodded and said-u don't worry about me,param hai mere saath.

Ashok-haan usse rok lo,he will be a big help for u in this time.sorry,I am going leaving u alone but mujhe chain nahi aayega,I want to be with ria,he said and went out of the mansion.

Shagun sighed in relief and went to param's room ,only to see him packing his stuff.

Shagun-what r u doing??

Param-packing my stuff,I am going abroad.

Shagun-u can't go anywhere now??tum kahin nahi jaa sakte,samjhe tum.

Param-kya matlab main abhi abroad nahi jaa sakta,shagun please let me go.mujhe jaana hi padega,main yahan nahi reh sakta aur agar main yahan rahunga toh jeeju ko sach jarur pata chal jaayega.

Shagun-aur tumhe kyun lagta hai ki bhaag jaoge toh sach chup jaayega.aisa kuch nahi hoga balki sabka dhyaan tum par chala jayega.i don't want ki kisi ka shaq tum par jaaye.

Param-but main yahan rahunga toh jarur kuch gadbad kar dunga.listen abhi case strong nahi hua hai,let me go.mujhe jeeju ko dekh kar bahut darr lagta hai,jiss tarah woh uss raman se naraz hai,agar unhe pata chal gaya ki maine,he was saying when shagun slapped him hard and said-chup karo,chup karo,bandh karo apni bakwaas.kisi ko khabar nahi honi chahiye ki yeh kaand tumne kiya hai warna Ashok tumhari jaan le lega .aur agar Ashok se itna darr lagta hai toh kyun kiya aisa.kyun chooya tumne unki beti ko.

Param-arey sharab ke nashe mein kuch samajh nahi aaya ki kiske saath kya kar raha hoon,aur jab hosh aaya,sab kuch barbaad ho gaya tha.ria bahut ro rahin thi,usse chup karane lagaa ,ussi mein usse chot lag gayi aur woh coma mein chali gayi.

Shagun-aur tumhari wajah se meri zindagi mein toofan aa gaya,agar Ashok ko zara si bhanak bhi lag gayi ki tum ho inn sab ke peeche toh tumhare saath saath main bhi marr jaaungi.sirf issliye tumhara saath de rahin hoon main,kyunki mujhe bhi ashok se bachna hai .

Param-waise Raman ko kaise phasaya tumne??Ashok bada bewakoof nikla ,kaise tumhari kahani ko sach maan liya.

Shagun smirked and said-usse toh manna hi tha,after all I am his wife,meri baat nahi sunega toh kiski sunega.aur uss raman ko toh main bahut din se phasana chahti thi,mujhe shagun Arora ko reject kiya tha usne .I loved him,kya chaha tha usse,bas yahin ki woh mera keep ban jaaye.mujhe satisfy karta toh badle mein main usse malamaal kar deti,but nahi usse toh apni biwi ka loyal rehna tha,toh rahen ab.dekhti hoon uski biwi kaise bachati hai usse iss ilzaam se.waise I must say,tumhare iss ek kadam se mere raaste ke do kaante nikal gaye,pehla Raman ko uski aukaat bata di maine aur dusra,uss ria se bhi chutkara mil gaya mujhe.brilliant move,ab bas tumhe bacha loon iss case se,phir to hamari zindagi set hai.she said smiling making him smile too.

On other hand,ishra were sitting together thinking about their next move ,when the door bell rang.

Both look at each other and then Raman was going to open the door when ishita said-aap baitho,main dekhti hoon.

Raman-police hogi toh darna mat,main wapas jarur aaunga.

Ishita-main aapko kahin jaane hi nahi dungi .aap nirdosh ho aur main aapko innocent saabit kar ke rahungi.she said and went to open the door.

She opened the door and saw mihir standing there.

Ishita-mihir,aao naa.she said welcoming him.

Mihir came inside and walked to the room with ishita.

He saw Raman sitting there and hugged him.

Raman-ria kaisi hai??

Mihir-thik nahi hai ,bhai.but hum aapko bacha lenge.

Raman broke the hug and said-mujhe khud se jyada uss bachchi ki chinta hai,uski medical report aayi,kya likha hai usme .

Mihir-she has been forced,someone actually did wrong with that little girl,he said making ishra feel bad for her.

Ishita-uske thik hone ke kitne chances hai.

Mihir-very less,bachchi hai naa,chot ke saath saath shock bhi lagaa hai usse.

Ishita-bhagwaan uss aadmi ko nark mein bhi jagah nahi dega,uss bachchi ke saath aisa karne ke liye.

Raman-aur uss shagun ko bhi nahi,mihir tumne uske bhai ke baare mein pata lagaya.

Mihir-haan bhai,ek number ka sharabi hai.ashok ko pasand nahi hai woh but shagun usse hamesha bachati rehti hai,suna hai pichle ek hafte se unke ghar mein hi reh raha hai.

Raman-matlab uss raat bhi woh wahin tha??

Mihir-cant say exactly but yes,he is staying with them only.

Raman-sir ko pasand nahi hai,phir bhi woh wahin hai.

Mihir-yes,and he is pervert.jitna maine suna hai uske baare mein,he is not a good man.

Ishita-matlab woh gunahgaar ho sakta hai.

Mihir-may be.

Ishita-aur Raman ke khilaaf kya saboot hai shagun ke paas.

Mihir-bhai ka uske ghar aane ka aur jaane ka video footage,wapas aate hue video mein bhai apne kapde thik kar rahen hai,like tucking his shirt,buttoning his shirt ,jisse isne yeh prove kiya hai ki bhai ne kuch galat kaam kiya hai.

Raman-she has ruined my clothes,was literally all over me ,so I pushed her and went out angrily correcting my clothes.maine ria ke saath kuch nahi kiya hai,main toh bachchi se mila bhi nahi tha.

Ishita-we know Raman,we trust u.no need to explain.achcha mihir,ria ki report mein uss aadmi ke DNA sample ka mention toh hoga jisne uske saath jabardasti ki.

Mihir-shayad,sir ne mujhe woh report dekhne nahi di ,after knowing I am from ur side.

Ishita- uske report mein joh sample hai,agar raman ka sample usse alag hua toh ,Raman innocent prove ho jayenge.

Mihir-but woh log bhai ka sample uss sample se kyun match karenge.

Ishita-agar Raman khud saamne se jaa kar iss test ke liye kahe toh??

Raman-aur agar shagun ne report manipulate kar diya toh,main innocent ki jagah culprit saabit ho jaaunga .

Mihir-yes,she can do this.woh bahut shaatir hai.

Raman-yes,we have to think of some other way.he said and all start thinking when ishita said-i think ek hi raasta hai,we should talk to Ashok sir.

Raman-aur tumhe lagta hai woh hamari sunenge,he is mad ,mujhe maar daalna chahte hai and he is not wrong either.

Ishita-phir bhi,mujhe lagta hai we should talk to him .agar woh confidentially yeh test conduct karaye toh culprit saamne aa jaayega,only he can do this and for that we have to talk to him.she said to which mihir said-i think bhabhi is right,jab hum galat nahi,toh sach bolne se kyun dare.we should talk to him and convince him to conduct this test of bhai and that param confidentially.he said to which ishita nodded while Raman was still thinking about it.

That's all for now,enjoy.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome chappy Di

Poor girl

Disgusting shagun

Update soon Di

Thanks for Pm Di

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesomen update

Disgusting param and shagun

How can anybody do this

Poor ria

Hope she get well soon

Eagerly waiting for next part

Plz continue soon

Nd thanks for pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Shot 3


Its wrong that a small child should be

destroyed in this manner

whoever harmed her should rot in prison

but strangely Shagun is taking all this so lightly

she is not even worried about Ria

while Raman is worried about the little girl

Shagun wants to trap Raman all because he is

loyal to Ishita

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Posted: 4 years ago

Fabulous update di

Ashok’s anger was justified but it’s getting poured on the wrong person 😢😢

Shagun and param are disgusting 😤😤😤😤

She doesn’t even care for that little girl😡😡😡😡😡

Poor little girl😭😭💔💔💔

Both ishra are tensed but are giving each other strength ❤️❤️❤️

Hope they make a smart move

Lets see what happens next

Ty 4 d pm too di

Edited by cooldilkaur - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Interesting update

Cont soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

superb update Di...


so param was real culprit who did heinous crime..and shagun framed raman instead of param to take revenge him..


ishita suggested to go for DNA..but raman has a doubt that shagun is cunning who can manipulate..the report in her favor


it's going to be intriguing ride to see how the truth wins..

Edited by -RKB- - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Fabulous update

Disgusting shagun

Loved it

Please update soon its a request

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