The Caged Whispers||House Ravenclaw||Hogwarts House C-Championship(R2)

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Holaaaa mis amigas/-ossmiley36

This is Ravenclaws' intriguing and mysterious piece of fanfiction is heresmiley40

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Special mention to Gryffindor girls, who were amazing! It's sad we couldn't get to talk to them much and write a story togethersmiley18 The wind was heavy and the weather was stormy

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However, Ravenclaws didn't give up and in whatever time was left for them, they came up with an awesome story for their house and for Hogwarts Schoolsmiley14 (After a lot of scratching and plotting and more and more )

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Bhshre95 and Renee.Clare thank you for helping out with IMMJ2 plot! RoshniMenon88, you were brilliantly on task! Hope4U was always there help even with all the writing she did! Tris, where do I start with you * self-praising mode on* SO CREATIVE, uff *dramatically poses*

EXOL, you are an amazing prefect! Guided us through every step! Got the team together every time necessary! Also, thank you for the fitting and mysterious title for the story!


House Ravenclaw thank you for your feedback and proofreading! It only helped us improve as the writers and helped the story get better! Sarangneee ❤️❤️❤️



Now, for the story! Here it is, colored in its awesome house color, ready to shine its way through your amazing heartssmiley27smiley36

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The Caged Whispers


“Ommm” Siya chanted the mantra for the nth time with her eyes closed. She was sitting by an archway inside the Singhania house. It was a place she usually visited to meditate and to keep her mind stable and calm. She opened her eyes and saw a blurred white ceiling and sighed in peace. It’s white as snow and white as peace.


However, wasn’t the color of the ceiling different? Wasn’t it yellow? Or was it green? She closed her eyes back tightly as she tried to relax her mind. As if the world was against her peace, she heard a loud noise.


"SHUT UP Aryan!"


There was an ear-piercing female voice coming from the living area. She sounded angry and almost tortured. Siya’s heart sped up and she opened her eyes wide. She didn’t like loud noises or people screaming at each other. In fact, she hated anything that came anywhere near the word ‘violent.’ Funny, because her brother and her whole family was anything but non-violent.


With a darkened mood, she looked up to see the golden ceiling of the corridor. Yes, it was golden and it was ugly. As gloomy as ever.

- x - x - x- x -x - x -


Ron huffed and puffed as he knocked on the door leading to Harry’s office.


Harry, who was looking at a case file on a Death Eater hiding in the muggle world, looked up from his work and raised his eyebrows at him, “What happened?” Harry asked.


“It’s Hermione!” Ron sputtered out, his hands going in every direction as he tried explaining. “She’s gone.”


Harry looked stunned for a second but then slowly gave an approving smirk. Hermione is gone. Like she should have, a long time ago. Harry thought darkly.

- x - x - x - x - x -


“Of course, you will come back running! This loser middle-class attitude won’t give you any of the riches you need to lead a good life!” Aryan exclaimed, looking smugly at Riddhima.


Riddhima felt shameful but angry at Aryan and Ishani standing in the room. There was a smirk on their faces as if they were silently laughing at her. What were they made of? How could they treat her like trash just because she had less money than them?!


"This 'untouchable' act? Really? You think I don’t see you playing ‘hard to get’ with Vansh and me?” Aryan laughed. “Think again.”, he said, breathing dangerously close to her. Riddhima looked humiliated and angry. She wanted to slap Aryan, wanted to curse him and his whole god damn family! But Kabir's injured body kept resurfacing in her mind and so she stood still and endured it all.

- x - x - x - x - x -


There was a loud pop, like a cork being pulled out of a bottle and a young woman with bushy hair appeared in the middle of the room. She looked around, alarmed at the unfamiliarity of the place. The paintings on the walls, the decor, the carpets everything hinted at an Oriental or Indian theme. She had read about these strange designs and patterns in "Magical Masters: Artists and Art from India and the Far East." She scowled, thoroughly irritated with Ron. Six years in Hogwarts and the Great War later, he could still mess up spells with incorrect wand movements and incantations. Now, where was she??!!!


She twirled her wand around herself and a trickling sensation from the top of her head moving down her back told her the disillusionment charm had worked. Satisfied that no one could see her now, she decided to explore her surroundings a little. She heard a loud voice coming from somewhere above and set off in that direction, her curiosity thoroughly piqued.

- x - x - x- x - x -


"What's the matter? You can stop the damsel in distress routine now, Vansh is not here", said Aryan as he moved a step closer to Riddhima. Ishani watched him with a smirk. She had despised Riddhima since the minute she laid eyes on her and she enjoyed her humiliation now, thank you very much.


"That's enough, don't come any closer", warned Riddhima just as she felt Aryan's hand snake around her. Revulsion coursed through her along with something else. Something she couldn't recognize; something dark and powerful. Before she knew it her hand slashed through the air and Aryan staggered back, his lip cut and bleeding.


"You're going to pay for that", Aryan hissed and turning around he stormed out. Ishani looked at Riddhima loathingly before following him. She hesitated a minute at the doorway but then continued on silently.


Riddhima stood stunned and looked at her hand. She hadn't slapped him. Or had she? In her anger and fear, her hand had probably acted on its own accord. "Well, he deserved it. At least now, he might stop pestering me" , she thought, breathing a sigh of relief.


Hidden due to the disillusionment charm, Hermione had witnessed the entire exchange from the doorway. She smiled to herself. She had ended up exactly where she needed to be. And her work here had just begun.

- x - x - x - x - x -


“I can't believe this! How dare that low-class girl slap you Aryan?” cried Ishani, throwing her hands up in the air dramatically while Aryan sat quiet, his eyes burning in extreme fury and humiliation. He spoke nothing but only he knew what plans ran in his evil mind.


“Aryan, are you even listening?” asked Ishani, irked by his passiveness.


“I am.” spoke up Aryan finally as he ran fingers through his hair. “I'm listening to you and I very well know what to do now. I'll make sure that Riddhima regrets what she did to me! All you have to do is, stay by my side and enjoy the game.”


Ishani had no idea of his plan but the way he said it, with that devilish grin playing on his lips, she knew one thing; that Riddhima was in trouble, big trouble.

- x - x - x - x - x -


Siya sat looking out the open window wondering why things were going haywire in the otherwise calm house, lately. Sighing, she turned to close the window, when suddenly a little bird flew in and got caught between the window and the seal. The blood sprayed out on Siya’s face, and she screamed.

- x - x - x - x - x -


"Help!!!” Riddhima was absolutely stunned when she heard someone scream as she walked past the old storeroom. “Isn't it Ishani's voice”, she thought as she anxiously walked up to the door of the storeroom and tried to catch a glimpse of what was going on. “Yes, Ishani treated her badly but if she was in trouble, she should be helped”, thought Riddhima as she entered the storeroom.


The storeroom was an absolute disaster, filled with nothing but broken furniture, old curtains, and artifacts, and all these were covered in layers and layers of cobweb and dust. No one usually entered the room and in reality, Riddhima was planning to sneak in whenever possible to see if she could find something, some evidence.


She walked forward rubbing her nose in irritation due to the dust and craned her neck to see where Ishani was.


And then she heard the door close behind her with a thud. She quickly turned only to find Aryan and Ishani at the door, smirking at each other. In that instant, she could sense trouble, but mustering up all her courage, she quietly asked “What...What are you guys doing here? Ishani, I heard you scream, what was that?”


“Oh my God, I never knew it was so easy to fool you!” laughed Ishani as the duo paced towards Riddhima.


“What? I don't get you?” Riddhima muttered in a panicked state while Aryan grasped her elbow from behind, making her hiss in pain.


Riddhima's heart was beating in panic. She screwed her eyes shut in disgust as Aryan moved dangerously close to her, his barely two-day-old stubble pricking the skin of her cheek. How she wished for a miracle, some savior to come to her rescue from thin air?


Boom! With the flash of sharp light, the trio's attention shifted to the other side of the storeroom, where the black curtains were moving a bit. As they watched, a female figure clad in a long hooded cloak appeared with a stick in her right hand and her face bowed down. Aryan's eyes widened in shock while Ishani and Riddhima were more than surprised.


“Hey! Who are you?” asked Ishani while the figure lifted her head and removed the hood off of her head revealing her face and blond bushy hair. Aryan loosened his grip over Riddhima in shock and she took it as a chance to run near Hermione, with whom she felt strangely safe. Hermione looked at her and smiled in affirmation while Riddhima looked at her in confusion.


“This is going to be so much fun,” said Hermione to herself while Aryan tried moving forward, raising his hand, probably in an attempt to hit the intruder. Hermione, however, waved her wand in the nick of time and Aryan ended up tripping under his feet.


“Not so soon!” said Hermione as she waved her wand again and this time, a wisp of thick smoke surrounded Aryan. As everyone watched over, Aryan shrank in size and turned to a shade of black, as the hair grew lushly over his body. From gaining a pointed head and tail to replacement of his hands by forelimbs and legs by hind limbs, everything was too quick for the naked eye to comprehend. In the bat of an eye, Aryan was turned into something else, to be precise, a little ugly rat.


"Well, that’ll teach you a lesson! " Hermione said while Ishani’s jaw dropped open in shock watching her brother's state. Riddhima's state was no different. She was finding it hard to believe her eyes! Aryan, the bully had turned into a rat! How did that happen?


The rat, meanwhile, watched the crowd for a good two seconds and then ran under a table as Hermione turned to Riddhima.


“We need to talk!” she said while Ishani quickly reached her and turned her around harshly.


“You filthy blondie! What have you done to him?”


“Uh oh! That was offensive!” Hermione said as she shook her head. “Verto Alba” she cursed as she pointed her wand at Ishani's hair and in no time, each strand of Ishani's hair started turning grey.


“Oh my God!!! ” cried Ishani as she held the loose strands of her white hair lying over her shoulder in panic and quickly ran to the broken mirror at the corner of the store to get a better view.


“A woman with her reflection stared back at her in horror. But in the place of her expertly highlighted and styled waves lay limp strands of snow-white hair.

“What have you done to me? Who are you?” she wailed, as she reached Hermione and shook her shoulders hard.


“Sorry but I've no more time to deal with you," said Hermione and casually waved her wand while Ishani fell unconscious and the next moment waving her wand again, she disappeared from the room much to Riddhima's surprise. She felt her head throbbing. The mysterious woman, whoever she was, came in an instant and left in even less time. “Is she even real”, thought Riddhima, as she looked at an unconscious Ishani.

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The figure lying ahead of her looked dead. She poked a finger on the face but the body limply rolled over and now there was blood in its place. The blood made her freeze. Her head started throbbing and she looked around for help, but there was no one. The pain and anger from the morning felt too raw. She saw a scabby rat pass by her and she grabbed the metal stick from the side in protection but the rat only scurried away quickly, without much attention to her. There was no one to see her. No one to see what she’ll do next either. Lifting up the metal stick, she shifted herself and pushed the seemingly dead body to the side. The blood was everywhere on the light floor, but the room in itself was dark so it was hard to see. Maybe she could just grab a few towels and wipe it clean before anyone comes in? She could then pretend it never happened. Yes. “That’s exactly what I’ll do”, Siya thought happily as she rolled herself out to grab a few towels. The said dead body though, looked on curiously, chirping away happily on the windowsill.

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"If there was ever an afternoon which seemed like out of a parallel universe, it had to be this one", thought Riddhima, still reeling from all that she had seen. Who was that woman, where had she come from, where had she gone to, and most importantly had she really turned Aryan into a RAT?” Riddhima giggled thinking of Aryan, the rat, and Ishani looking like the wicked witch from Disney fairytales. Whoever the mystery woman was, she, Riddhima, owed her a big debt of gratitude.


"Bullies are only as strong as you let them be", said a voice behind her, and Riddhima turned around to find the bushy-haired woman standing near the door. "You can't always have someone to protect you, and you don't need anyone too. You, your nerve, and wit are all you need. The day you stop being afraid and stand up to a bully like Ishani, she will cease to have any power over you. Trust me, I've faced it too", Hermione chuckled as she remembered how she had shown one Draco Malfoy exactly what she, aka Hermione Granger was made of.


Before Riddhima could ask her any of the 20 questions she had in her mind, something hot streaked by the side of her ear. "Protego", screamed Hermione, and Riddhima was thrown backward. She hit the wall hard and wincing in pain, she opened her eyes to see Aryan and the bushy hair woman facing each other 10 feet apart, their hands outstretched and pointing something resembling a stick at each other."Harry was right then", muttered Hermione, her wand arm steady as she pointed it at Aryan. She remembered briefly her conversation with Harry and Ron.


"The Auror office has been hunting down missing death eaters since the war and we now have intel that there's one hiding in India. In Mumbai. We can't have any Aurors disappearing now to track him down. That might lead to questions and leaks. I feel it's best if you go to Hermione. You're in a different department where you travel frequently. There will be no alarms raised if you disappear suddenly".

"Harry you know I don't mind going, but what story do we put out to cover our tracks", asked Hermione.

"I'll make you disappear", said Ron suddenly. Harry and Hermione looked at him, eyebrows raised.

"I mean to say I’d "accidentally" make you disappear. I'll get a spell wrong and poof, no Hermione", he grinned.

"That's brilliant Ron", said Hermione beaming at him. "Always the tone of surprise", Ron said dryly, rolling his eyes at Harry who grinned at them both.


"I was looking forward to facing the great Harry Potter one day", said Aryan softly, his eyes gleaming as they faced Hermione. "But what is this? Has he sent you? Did he think that a witch and a mudblood can defeat me", Aryan cackled, his eyes now alight with mad anger. His wand sliced through the air but his spell was deflected easily. His eyes widened fractionally while Hermione smiled. "It's time now for you to see what this witch and mud blood can do", she said pleasantly deflecting another spell. Wands swished and flicked now, so fast that they were no more than a blur at times. Aryan was a powerful wizard who knew a vast array of dark spells. Not for nothing though, was Hermione the brightest witch of her time. She slashed her wand and before Aryan could react his wand was blasted out of his hand and he was thrown backward. Thick ropes bound him from head to toe and he lay on the floor unable to move an inch as Hermione towered over him, her wand held at his throat.


“WHAT ARE YOU DOING! You’ll kill him!”


Hermione heard Ishani’s voice from somewhere, but she didn’t pay attention as she pressed her wand further on Aryan’s neck and his face turned red.


“Let me go! Please!” Hermione heard another voice, but it wasn’t coming from Aryan who could barely move any part of his face, but it was the sound of a young girl. Suddenly, as her vision blurred, Hermione found herself consumed in darkness. It was so dark, Hermione could barely see her own hand now. Did Aryan send her to another universe?


“I won’t tell anyone! P-please, I-” Slowly Hermione’s eyes adjusted to the darkness and she found herself standing next to a young girl. It was dark and Hermione could hardly see anything, but the desperate plea and fear in her voice were visible. It looked like there was another person laying next to the girl, with clothes torn apart.


“P-please, d-don’t hurt me” the young girl begged with tears streaming down her face and her loud sob tearing the silence of the night. Hermione felt numb. She wanted to reach out but it was as if her body couldn’t move at all.


There was a loud thud and she saw a man lifting a long rod and bringing it down next to the young girl. Hermione could hardly see the horror of the scene with the blur in her vision, her throbbing head and the darkness of the night, but there laid another person next to the girl, with their clothes torn apart and blood gushing out. Hermione tried reaching out to the girl but as if the girl was very far away from her, her hand could only reach the empty night. She wanted to protect the girl who looked like she would be killed at any moment if not saved. The boy chuckled, looking at the figure laying on the ground. He looked like Aryan, same hair, same figure, but at the same time, a very different voice. However, the resemblance was enough to make Hermione see red as she lunged at the boy.


“ENOUGH!” She cried loudly and grabbed the neck of the guy. “STOP PLAYING YOUR GAMES! STOP HURTING PEOPLE!” Her scream was heavy with distraught and pain as she caught hold of his throat.


“Have you gone nuts?! What are you doing!” Ishani screamed at the woman choking Aryan, but that only resulted in the opposite as the woman increased her pressure on his throat. “Let her g-go. Let them go.” The woman repeated in a low and dangerous voice. Eyes streaming, her vision blurred, she couldn’t see who was in front of her anymore. Her mind was spinning but she was clear on one thing- this man was the worst. He’d hurt her and hurt others she cared about. He’d rip her apart the second she lets him go. Before he killed her too, she had to kill him. “Let me go!” She screamed at Aryan.


Suddenly, her hands that were choking Aryan, not a second ago, were now hanging in the mid-air.


“-iya! Siya! SIYA! What are you doing!” With that, Vansh pulled a red-eyed Siya away from Aryan who was laying blue on the floor, his eyes almost popping out. Siya tried fighting and reached out to him. He HAD to die today! He’d try to kill her again if she didn’t kill him. However, Vansh was stronger and he pulled her away and made her sit on the dark sofa nearby. Ishani and Aryan’s mother ran to him and helped him up, while Riddhima stood wide-eyed outside of the room. Everyone was in Siya’s room now. They’d all seen her try to kill the man they all cherished.


Siya looked around like a cornered animal, her breath coming out in harsh sobs. Hermione seemed to be fading away. She looked down at her hands; they were empty where minutes before she had held a wand. Siya’s eyes hurriedly went to the window that had the bird’s blood. But it was all clean now. Like it never happened. Had any of it happened? Feeling a heavy stare on her, Siya’s gaze went to Riddhima who stood next to the door. She was watching her. She was carrying a blank face, but her eyes hid secrets. Dark secrets. Just like Siya’s eyes did. Siya felt a sort of excitement as she looked at Riddhima who simply stood there staring back at her. Her presence was chilly, making everyone else look like the background of a dark movie.


THUD.


A loud noise came and Siya stared at Riddhima in shock. Riddhima had a hand on her chest as the blood sprayed out from the hole there like a jet spray. Her blank face from a few minutes ago was filled with horror that mirrored Siya's own, as Siya felt salt in her mouth and shooting pain in her own chest. The two girls stared at each other from across the room, and the mahogany clock outside slowed down to a stop, like a bad omen.

Edited by Tris007 - 4 years ago
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REVIEWS BY THE MEMBERS WHO APPRECIATED OUR FF


1) Pain-In-Ur-Neck smiley27smiley27 (Page 11 and 12)


SHUT UP Aryan!" - This shall be the cue every time someone irritates me! smiley37

"Magical Masters: Artists and Art from India and the Far East." She scowled, thoroughly irritated with Ron. Six years in Hogwarts and the Great War later, he could still mess up spells with incorrect wand movements and incantations! - Love the innovation here and inclusion of International Magical world, not to mention Hermione making a MISTAKE - *THE HORROR* smiley37


Aryan shrank in size and turned to a shade of black, as the hair grew lushly over his body. From gaining a pointed head and tail to replacement of his hands by forelimbs and legs by hind limbs, everything was too quick for the naked eye to comprehend. In the bat of an eye, Aryan was turned into something else, to be precise, a little ugly rat.

- smiley37smiley37smiley37smiley37 I checked out Aryan's pic and he legit looks like an overgrown rat - smiley37 BESTTTEST!


“You filthy blondie! What have you done to him?”

“Uh oh! That was offensive!” Hermione said as she shook her head. “Verto Alba” she cursed as she pointed her wand at Ishani's hair and in no time, each strand of Ishani's hair started turning grey.

“Sorry but I've no more time to deal with you," said Hermione and casually waved her wand - smiley37 - Our BADASS Hermoine


"Bullies are only as strong as you let them be", said a voice behind her, and Riddhima turned around to find the bushy-haired woman standing near the door. "You can't always have someone to protect you, and you don't need anyone too. You, your nerve, and wit are all you need. The day you stop being afraid and stand up to a bully like Ishani, she will cease to have any power over you. Trust me, I've faced it too", Hermione chuckled as she remembered how she had shown one Draco Malfoy exactly what she, aka Hermione Granger was made of. - Touche mate Touche. Something we should own in our lives. Don't be the damsel in distress, rather be the one to protect another damsel in distress. In the end only you and your strength can protect yourself! smiley10


"I mean to say I’d "accidentally" make you disappear. I'll get a spell wrong and poof, no Hermione", he grinned.

"That's brilliant Ron", said Hermione beaming at him. "Always the tone of surprise", Ron said dryly, rolling his eyes at Harry who grinned at them both - Ofc that had to be the plan, I mean Hermione and MISTAKE can never happen! smiley37



Siya looked around like a cornered animal, her breath coming out in harsh sobs. Hermione seemed to be fading away. She looked down at her hands; they were empty where minutes before she had held a wand. Siya’s eyes hurriedly went to the window that had the bird’s blood. But it was all clean now. Like it never happened. Had any of it happened? Feeling a heavy stare on her, Siya’s gaze went to Riddhima who stood next to the door. She was watching her. She was carrying a blank face, but her eyes hid secrets. Dark secrets. Just like Siya’s eyes did. Siya felt a sort of excitement as she looked at Riddhima who simply stood there staring back at her. Her presence was chilly, making everyone else look like the background of a dark movie.

THUD.

A loud noise came and Siya stared at Riddhima in shock. Riddhima had a hand on her chest as the blood sprayed out from the hole there like a jet spray. Her blank face from a few minutes ago was filled with horror that mirrored Siya's own, as Siya felt salt in her mouth and shooting pain in her own chest. The two girls stared at each other from across the room, and the mahogany clock outside slowed down to a stop, like a bad omen - THESE LAST TWO PARA and how it wraps the beginning, middle and the end - BRILLIANT - Will explain more as I review the work in the bottom!


Amazing work ALL the writers - smiley32smiley32smiley32

I loved this little twisty and dark take on "HP meets idiotic IMM2 (smiley36)"

Above parts stood out for me the most! - smiley40

You guys made IMM2's world so much more better, gave it a heart and soul by telling us the story from Siya's perception - A survivor who withstood it all and is still standing tall!


What blew my mind was how well "Child Abuse, PTSD and Hallucinations" were given an outlet via incorporation of the dark side of the magical world i.e Death Eaters!


From what I understood, Siya has a dark past. She was abused as a child by Aryan or someone who looks like him. Hence her frustration and anger that got projected onto Aryan. I would like to assume it was Aryan who made Siya's childhood a living hell, reason why she's still haunted by those memories and her struggle with PTSD and vivid hallucinations!


When she saw Aryan bullying Riddhima, it triggered her defensive mechanism in trying to save her against a bully and a tyrant! While she couldn't do much as a helpless child, she was no longer that child. Hence her imagination/hallucination in the form of Badass Hermoine who wouldn't tolerate any such nonsense. Hence her "Bullies are only as strong as you let them be" - smiley40

Siya's trigger of PTSD at the sight of Aryan- Riddhima's confrontation and her Hallucination of bird, rat, Hermoine and the blood rushing through Riddhima's chest were clear indication the girl is still struggling. She has grown to stand up for herself and others, but she is still a broken soul in need for a closure. And her closure just may come with family being subjected with Aryan's past deeds and him getting punished for his crimes - I guess that's why this FF has an open end!


Tho the story still ended on a satisfying note because Siya owned up to her demons and stood against her own abuser. She was no longer that weak, vulnerable child. smiley10 smiley10 smiley10 smiley10 smiley10


P.S - I loved how you guys channeled Aryan's evil side as a death eater who are pro at sucking happiness/life outta an individual. And for Siya, he was that DEATH EATER who sucked out her happy childhood!

ONCE AGAIN - Amazing effort everyone - From writers to editors to their Prefect to everyone on the team who contributed towards this creativity gem and to have managed this feat on their own!

Proud of you girls (and guys if there are any)!smiley40

Storyline is subjective and upon reader's imagination! - Brilliant man - I am not much into writing nor am I familiar with writing elements but I bet this is what many writers may opt for where readers can form their own conclusions! smiley10

And yes - It can also be a murder angle which may have triggered her PTSD or it could have been the child abuse!

For me "Childhood abuse" floated out as I read along. So I'll go with that perception because it made it so much more heart wrenching with Siya being the Phoenix rising out of her own ashes! smiley40

P.S.S - This was my take on the story - I wonder if that's how writers viewed their storyline - Do let me know! smiley14


2) Confused_Soul smiley27smiley27 (Page 10 and 12)

To our amazing writers, @roshni, @tris @hope  you guys killed itloved reading the work and will read again

#RavenclawsFTW 

My fav part is revelation of Sia's delusions. It is so intriguing and very well written! Kudos to the writers.

And also Aryan turning in to rat and ishani's hair turning greysmiley37

Overall it is a thrilling piece of work that would keep the reader hooked to it throughout. Only a person with excess of creative mind can understand what our writers have done in the storysmiley36




3) Nahiiinn smiley27smiley27 (Page 8)

The last bit added last min adds more punch to the story. smiley20 This story gave some dimension to bland TV characters. smiley36

Dedicating this song to Siya to Aryan..

https://youtu.be/uR8Mrt1IpXg


4) Little Beasty smiley27smiley27 (Page 3, 4, 6 and 8)

Well first of all i like the title  the starting of the story is really mysterious for me ...Shows how much peace siya wants her in her life but can't have enough luck to get her peace of mind so she tries to find peace through meditation!!

Bullies are only as strong as you let them be", whoever wrote this line Kduos to her  absolutely agree with this 

I love the way Hermione turned Aryan into a Rat nd Ishani to a Disney fairytale witch

The ending was really thrilling as well

The said dead body though, looked on curiously, chirping away happily on the windowsill."

I m getting this Rubic cube nevertheless... The Dead Aryan! 

I like Hermione's dhamaka entry.


5) Panditaain_ji smiley27smiley27 ( Page 11)

Panditaain_ji -My oh my!

What an interesting story you guys have written there! Loved it absolutely

You guys have done an excellent job

Go team Ravenclaws! 

My favourite part -Hermione turning Aryan into a rat and and Ishani's hair into grey. Loved the sassy Hermione.

Since, I am not at all familiar with HP or IMMJ(lol), I had a little difficulty understanding the symbolism related to that. And now that I think about it, the ending is just mind blowing.

Ravenclaws nailed the creativity part for sure in this one!

I love such stories where the writers leave you thinking.


6) sarah24998 smiley27smiley27 ( Page 12 )

this is damn awesome ravenclaws..I'm reading it again and again..so interesting! even though I don't know anything about IMMJ2, still this story had pulled me inside! Great work Tris, Hope, Roshni...Roshni my girl, I know about your writing very well that's I suggested your name! and Tris and hope now came to know your writing skills guys! such a fantastic team work. great going ravenclaws!


7) Billi_Bangalan smiley27smiley27 (Page 2)

Omg awesome guys🎇🔥🎆🔥🌸🔥💐🔥. Thank you so much to brilliant writers. This piece is superb and has all the elements in place. Many congratulations to the team 

Thrilling🔥 to read it again and again.


8) EXOL ❤️❤️ ( Page 4, 5 and 11)

I loved the moments when Riddhima pulls back into the wall and sees all the battle between hermoine and Aryan . . and the painful flashback .. so many good parts are there .. not a single boring moment in the story .. truly u guys are so creative .. take my bow

liked how the two worlds come together as one . Nice amalgamation guys.


@PIUN : wow you are bang on about hallucinations and ptsd . That was the entire crux of the story . Hermoine, an alter ego of Siya which emerges when she perceives ridhhima in similar helpless situation ..

Thanks for liking the story


9) Unique.Sheep ❤️❤️ (Page 13 and 14)


Go Team Ravenclaw! Go prefect EXOL!smiley41

I was invested into the story as soon as it started...though this rarely happens with me, having read so many stories, it takes me time to invest myself into a story especially a FF....so great job!

Being a psychology student, I love stories which address social issues and psychological stuff so I noticed all that in here toosmiley14

I love how including magic didnt make you guys go OTT and get carried away with your writing either

I love how all the characters here were written out

I love how the bullying was addressed

Most of all, I loved the open unpredictable endingsmiley20 Me loves open endingssmiley14

I also like how all the scenes are connected to each other effortlessly.

























Edited by Renee.Clare - 4 years ago
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Yay!!!!

What a team we are!!! 🤗

Love our story.

And I'm proud of all of us...

Ravenclaw FTW!!!! 🥳

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Originally posted by: Renee.Clare

Yayy, Our writers have done a superb work. 🥳Feeling proud. Tris, Hope, Roshni. You all killed it.🥳I love the story ❤️ Thanks for this ❤️

And our prefect EXOL has managed so well. Thanks for being such a good prefect. ❤️🥳

And yes, finally our team for giving feedbacks and contributing so beautifully and for being such a cooperative team , the Ravenclaw house. Cheers to all my fellow Ravenclaws 🥳

It would have been great if Gryffindors would have been with us as they were amazing team but it's OK. ❤️

Ravenclaws FTW🥳

I love our team for always coming together so amazingly🥳

Our focus was the story and everyone stuck to the task so well! Such a small amount of time was left, I'm glad we got this done so amazingly ❤️

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SUPER PROUD OF OUR TEAM RAVENCLAWS! 🥳🥳

Tris, Hope, Roshni, you guys are aaahhmaazing 👏

Love our story ❤️ Well done Team! 🥳

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Originally posted by: Tris007

I love our team for always coming together so amazingly🥳

Our focus was the story and everyone stuck to the task so well! Such a small amount of time was left, I'm glad we got this done so amazingly ❤️

So true Tris. 🤗I love you all. 🤗what a good team we have ❤️🥳

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Originally posted by: hope4u

Yay!!!!

What a team we are!!! 🤗

Love our story.

And I'm proud of all of us...

Ravenclaw FTW!!!! 🥳

Me too, so proud!!

The story looks wonderful in our Ravenclaw colors

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Originally posted by: -Obsessed-

SUPER PROUD OF OUR TEAM RAVENCLAWS! 🥳🥳

Tris, Hope, Roshni, you guys are aaahhmaazing 👏

Love our story ❤️ Well done Team! 🥳

ObsessedVampire, thank you thank you! 🥳

Thank you for reading and giving feedback!

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Omg awesome guys🎇🔥🎆🔥🌸🔥💐🔥. Thank you so much to brilliant writers. This piece is superb and has all the elements in place. Many congratulations to the team ⭐️👍🏼⭐️😎

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