Originally posted by: kriya_12
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Unpleasant truths
Your little little break
then matching title for update ๐ superb Begining already take bow in the honor of you sweet sis ๐โโ๏ธ
Ja Jo ๐
She giving him good rum & he fully lattoo๐คฃ
"Absolutely Jo Got way to have him dance on her tunes ๐ besides who won't like this sole attention from her love ๐
Hv to say am looking forward to surya vadan (this one is more interesting ๐) & Ranvijay . Already Jalal is keen to break heads donโt know what more will come will love to see some good games , politics b/w the boys .
"Yeah he will be interesting for you cause Jo is already with Ja ๐ by the way I have some plan for these two boys ๐ณ cannot reveal yet hoping for best ๐ well the politics and game is on already and about breaking head Ja will have to wait ๐
Rain romance was beautiful , captivating & makes us wanting for more....โค๏ธ
"Trust me I wanted to let it continues ๐ but I was getting shy about it in real โบ๏ธ
Loved Jodhaโs sensual side matches well with his passion๐
"We all wanted this but we can fulfill our wish here me to love this side ๐ณ
Then the twist๐
Jalal emotional side v/s clever side . Quite clear this man has been devoid of many genuine love care but it all compensates with his lady loveโs presence though she is tough thing yet he has managed to get her , her love & care
"Absolutely correct ๐๐ผthis entire para speak for Ja his side his ways his tries his hardwork to earn the love from the one he love marvelously truly very well penned Sweet sis ๐ yes he didn't got genguine care and love everything for him comes with expectations but now he got one who could love him like no one and truly cares about him ๐ณ
But the other part the realities offcourse he has some plans regarding his ruling which r not very pleasant to ears but he is that much ambitious better to keep his love away from his political parts or make it that much sensible & meaningful because by the end I also started feeling restless like I would not want him to cut her from her roots in that way.
"Again very beautifully wrote by you ๐ "Like you said previously he managed to get her love and care so I will say here that this is what he's afraid off ๐ณ he don't wants to lose which he earned hard way ๐ at same time he cannot choose one thing among love and ambition ๐ it's very hard for him and eventually her ๐ but that's how things are for them in life complicated๐ต underline is what I wish to work on ๐ณ
Thank you ๐ค thanks lot Kriya this one touch me more because you tey to get in depth of Character their ways which make me think I am truly succeeding in one thing and that's to connect my readers with leads ๐ณ
Thank you thanks lot ๐ค
then matching title for update ๐ superb Begining already take bow in the honor of you sweet sis ๐โโ๏ธ
actually I was trying to test her ๐ she will ask or not ๐ณ


yes he can't help he can only mess it more by his ambition to conquer
and rule
he just can't do much in this

you're just awesome when it's comes to giving analysis to para 
cannot reveal yet hoping for best
well the politics and game is on already and about breaking head Ja will have to wait
underline is what I wish to work on
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