FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thd#3 (Chapter 28-34) - Page 59

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

hey thanks for analysing my comments analysing the chapter... what a mouthful .

I got carried away I guess 😆 My problem.. once I start I can't stop 🤣

love it tho 😆

i agree with everything you're saying, theirs been no decent storyline for anyone & everyone (except mohini) have been written so inconsistently. They have shafted P's character soo badly this season, in a time where were used to strong female characters she's been such a dissapointment.

Every word is nothing but TRUTH. Prerna was a huge disappointment. Huge lessons for what not to do. I am saying that they should have made her look like 'I know it all' wala FL jo sab khud karte hain. But she was written then that. I should shut up nahi to fir se I'd get detached with her and story mein reflect hoega.😆 it's hard writing her 😒

i feel your pain 😒

don't even get me started on what they did with RB 😔 such a waste of a golden opportunity to make KZK great. The whole reboot had been a MISTAKE of epic proportions.

I agree..''waste of golden opportunity" theFACT. it's like 3 idiots wala dialogue. Sab kuch ready tha.. gadi gate par khadi thi? Bas ek baar himmat kar li hoti (cvs) ne to life ( KZK) kucj aur hoti.. 💔

lol, such an apt dialogue. the best one I've never heard until today. 🤣

At least i can look forward to your fic, can't wait for the next chapters. 😃

Working on it...🤗

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Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

I agree..''waste of golden opportunity" theFACT. it's like 3 idiots wala dialogue. Sab kuch ready tha.. gadi gate par khadi thi? Bas ek baar himmat kar li hoti (cvs) ne to life ( KZK) kucj aur hoti.. 💔

🤣This is epic 🤣🤣

Such an apt dialogue for this situation 🤣 I can't stop laughing🤣

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I rcvd so many notifications today for the first time

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Aww.. i loved the conversation 🤗

We can do it again sometime..

Same here. Would love it

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You are most welcome. I had a great time🤗

Me too.. me tooo🤗

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Ohh my God! You have actually broken down to the scenes.

I loved it so much 😊

Prerna-Shivani

Let me begin with Prerna. Her conversation with Shivani was amazing. Shivani telling her that she may fear losing Kukki but she can never feel like a wife (RB) because she never acted like one. As a reader I agree with Shivani because it is the truth. She was always concerned with Anurag.

Thank you very much. I have to agree, show mein she was always concerned for Anurag. I can not forget her "SORRY" she said to RB right before Dhunuchi Dance. 🙄

I agree.. she was unbearable in the show

Shivani though was trying to take Anurag's side in her conversation did raise a valid question. Did Bajaj ever get uncomfortable when Prerna was busy playing house with Anurag in his presence. She put Prerna on a thinking mode.

Wo humesha sochti kuch hai aur ho kuch aur jata hai..:)

Aisa hi chalta rahe

Prerna-Mr. Bajaj

All those dialogues from the show brought back memories of Bajaj1 ❤️ Intellegent inclusion to connect the show events with the story. Did you remember all these dialogues. You have kind of pushed me to watch the show again

I remembered scenes in bits and pieces, so I had watch all the scenes dhund dhund ke. I hope watching the show again wasn't a painful experience as it was for me.😆

I watched only the good scenes.

So Prerna finally realises that it used to affect him too. Him inspite of not being a very expressive person, did convey his feeling and discomfort, but she never cared. Instead she kept on going with her Anurag rant, telling him how her life only revolved around Anurag. Beautiful aspect touched upon. Loved it.

Exactly, she never cared for his feeling even when he was vocal. He wasn't forcing her to stop from doing from what she wanted, but usry na bataye yeh bola.. wo bhi nahi mana Prerna ne😒

I know. I got it all through the update.

Prerna-Kukki

Kukki's breakdown in the office scene was beautiful and emotional, I shalk talk about it in next post. Prerna.witnessing Kukki and then Masi virtual slap of reality was such a treat to read. She should know what her action has done to a child, she so mercylessly left.

Thank you so much. This puts Bajaj on track, and realise that his daughter needs him more than she ever did. He can't be all for her if he can't take care for himself. And many more things like littlr unopening of his mother and father too..

Ohhh I love that. I always wanted to know uska backstory. This already soubds so interesting

This is just about Prerna. Wooww.. I wrote so much. But.it was.amazing. 🤗

I am so glad you spent so much time to share. It's always amazing to hear from you and all the wonderful people here

My pleasure. Jo man main aya share kar diya

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

RBKukki-Menaka (the dream)

Such a small glimpse into his past with Menaka 21 weeks pregnant with Kukki, but so beautiful. I think I know what you did here. You actually showed the connect between RB-Kukki then and now.yeah that was the purpose.. thank God it cae across and not just like his married life.. it was crystal clear to me 😁I noticed how both in dream as well as reality he had returned from Pune 😎 and how Kukki needes him to calm down even in the past when she was in her mother's womb and now waiting for him to wake up. If I didn't read a little too much into it, It was just amazingly done. Ohh yesssd exactly this. It feels like you read my mind. It was to show the deep connection father-daughter shared even before she was born. Thank you for your words.

It was very beautifully written. I like Menaka too in that moment. I have always liked her 😆

Kukki's restlessness for not being able to talk to him as he was away and then becausd of his illness.yeah she always like to be with him. And ab jab ghar par hai to kaise na baat kare so thoda restless she was.. she was. Baar baar checking on him waitimh to wake up I could imagine a cute little Kukki following Masi or bending down over to look if her father waz awake.hahaa. Kukki was cute indeed even in the show. I loved their bond only thing that kept me sailing through all that happened 😒 I agree. But usko bhi almost use kiya to show other pair. They are so adorable together. You must write a series on just these two. You told me you love these two characters and it's so evident.i would love to but isi mein sab mil jayega. Like I said it's not PreKukRish but RishKukPre.. so Kukki does hold and will always hold the most special place in his life. It comes special in your writing.

My rant ain't stopping here. Aaj to scene wise review dena hai as I am so much in love with this update.🤗

No need to step because I love it 😊

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See you on the next post

Yes please 😃

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

RB-Mr. Mehra

Every employer should get an employee like Mr. Mehra.. awaz se samajh jate hain that his boss is in distress. He knows him very well..it looks like I read his backstory in previous updates how he ended up with Rishabh though he had close realtions with Adhiraj family. He worked for them and Aditya pulled him out to work with RB. I think I remember it.right. Most loyal and kind of a father figure.for RB. Little conversation but meanigful.

All of it is all true. He didn't leave Rishabh even in his bad times. When Aditya stoof against RB tab bhi he was with him. Jabki there was hardly anything RB had to offer when he began again from scratch after Aditya took away WebFlix from him. Yeah WebFlix revelation was amazing. I had loved all those businessy vibes wala chapters

RB-Adi- coming up next 😃

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Mr. Negotiator vs Mr. Planner (the game)

Loved their bonding. Aditya taking care of his friend be it giving his meds or helping him sit, all these little details (not neccessary) when added makes it such great reading experience.

Thank you. I can't write something I can picture in my mind. Jo dikhta hai wahich apun likh deta hai 😆

Fir wahi picture humko dikhnr lagti hai while reading.

Aditya doesn't want to go but the way Rishabh almost forced him, leaving no way to escape. Poor guy had to decide to either by himself or let his sick friend go. Rishabh never makes it easy on anyone 😎 i agreeNot an easy choice but the little game that began between them gave an insight into their friendship. Yeah a deep bond they share likr brothers they were before things changed for worse. Colored TextI could imagine a fun RB and Aditya when they were younger. So still have that left in them.

Glad to know. Adi-Menaka-Ara's presence in his life did make him a happy guy till things shattered again. I want to know more about young Bajaj.

RB knows his weakness and Aditya knows RBs. Good that the game ended at a tie score of 1-1.

Yeah doni ke pass plus points hai.. but RB is little more stubborn and Aditya doesn't mind giving up..vo to hai. RB sabse aage.

Loved that fake call to Nidhi and Aditya's frustration for falling for his act.

Hahaa.. he know Adi's weakness that he loves him. And RB knew how to use it in his favour.

Light moment was fun.

Glad you enjoyed iti did. A lot 🤗