Manmohini ( Rudhita OS ) part 9( updated ) pg 7

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Lalz

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Posted: 5 years ago

#41

Ayushi lovely update 😊

Read all the parts.. nicely penned 👍🏼

Keep the good works going on 😳

Keep writing 😃

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Posted: 5 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: --Lalz--
Ayushi lovely update 😊
Read all the parts.. nicely penned 👍🏼
Keep the good works going on 😳
Keep writing 😃

Tysm lalz ❤️

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sumsukor

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Posted: 5 years ago

#43

Lovely one

Soothing flow

Bondi has won my heart ♥

Love all the characters and the way you're twining them

Update soon (haha I know I am greedy.. I am Udaan forum and my favo is Sukor / Ragkor and have penned few stories) so the reader in me yearns for fast updates 😜 but as a writer I know how challenging it is.

Love this BB forum.

Keep going with your stories, 👍

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Padosan12

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Posted: 5 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Lovely one

Soothing flow

Bondi has won my heart ♥
Love all the characters and the way you're twining them

Update soon (haha I know I am greedy.. I am Udaan forum and my favo is Sukor / Ragkor and have penned few stories) so the reader in me yearns for fast updates 😜 but as a writer I know how challenging it is.

Love this BB forum.

Keep going with your stories, 👍

Ya I will update soon

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Padosan12

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Posted: 5 years ago

#45

Part -8

Bondita is doing household chores when one of her friends came .

Lolita : bondita !

Bondita : lolita tu yaha . She hugs her.

Bondita : baith na kitne saalo baad aa rahi hai . Aur bata sab theek

Lolita : haa sab theek. Mai teri shaadi mein aa hi nahi paayi.

Bondita : woh sab chhod. Tu meri madad karna kangan banwane mei. Usse pehle mein tere liye khaane ke liye leke aati hoon

Jewellery kaka came . Choti Malkin Choti Malkin !

Bondita : ji aap koun ?

Jewellery wala : woh aniruddh babu...

Bondita : haa aapke baare mei bataya tha. Aaiyye

Jewellery wala : toh bataiye aapko kaise kangan banwane hai .

Bondita : mujhe bengali kadah jaise . Zyada bhari nahi chahiye .

Saudamini enters. Sauda mini looks at jewellery and thinks kiske liye hai

Lolita : ye kaun hai bondita?

Bondita take a pause : unki behen hai . Muh boli

Mini : aniruddh kaha hai ?

Bondita : aapki tarah nahi hai woh . Unhe kaam tha toh woh bahar gaye hai kuch kaam se. Aap mujhe bata dijiye mai unhe bata dungi.

Mini : mai khud bata dungi.

Bondita took a breath and gives the money to jewellers .

Part 2 :

Ani : somesh aur batao , suna hai tumhari shaadi ho rahi hai

Somesh : kya aniruddh kuch bhi. Baba pehle maan toh jaaye . Waise tum batao bondita bondi kaisi hai.

Ani : woh toh thik hai .Ab badi ho gayi hai toh uske nakhrein bhi badal gaye hai .

Somesh : Ek baat puchu ?

Ani taking a sip of tea . Haa pucho

Somesh : aapne apne aur mini ke baare mei bondita bodi ko bataya ki nahi .

Ani is shocked.

Somesh: aniruddh uss din pooja main bondita bahot gussa mei thi . Aur roo bhi rahi thi.

Ani: kya ro rahi thi .

Somesh : bondita ab bachhi nahi hai aur nahi tum aur mini . Ab aaj agar tumne decision ni liya to tum bondita ki zindagi kharab karoge na ki mini ki .

Ani : tum aisa kyu sochte ho . Tum jaante ho na mini bhi mujhse .

Somesh : sachhi woh aap se pyaar karti hai ? Apne dil par haath rakh kar puchiye . Kya sach mei pyaar karti hai . Kya usne kabhi aapse apne dil ki baat ki.

Ani : tum yeh sab kyu keh rahe ho ? Tum kya kehna chahte ho saaf saaf kaho .

Somesh : yahi ki mini ko bhul jaiye . Aap ka aaj bondita hai mini nahi . Mini ko bas apni sundarta se matlab hai. Kabhi aap ke liye care ki hai nahi na.

Jaise bondita bondi karti hai m .

Ani is thinking . Flashbacks starts one side mini and other side bondita .

Kaka : kya soch rahe ho . Jao jaake mahesh babu se milo.

Somesh and ani goes .

To be continued.

Sorry for short update .