Manmohini ( Rudhita OS ) part 9( updated ) pg 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I so want to know his reaction now

It will be a treat to watch🤣

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Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

I so want to know his reaction now

It will be a treat to watch🤣

Haha sure !😆

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Originally posted by: Iamth

Waiting eagerly for the next part dear...😊

Yaa

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Originally posted by: snowgirl1

Plz continue❤️❤️👍🏼

I will kal hi romantic aniruddh babu milenge ..

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Part - 4

Aniruddh is aww stuck , he can't believe that she is

Ani -haa, wo...H mujhe laga ki uski saheliya aayi hai . Waise bondita badi ho gayi hai aur khoobsurat bhi ( in a low voice )

Trilochan - aao bahu rani , suniye suniye aap sabhi ko aaj hum apni badi bahu se mil vaate hai . Yeh hai humari bahu " Bondita Roy Choudhary " .

Bindiya greets everyone with Namaskaar .

Batuk ; arey bondi aaap ...Toh ekdum se pari ban gayi . Apne devar ko pehchaana ki nahi ?

Bondita : smile. In mind ( ye batuk itna shaitaan aaj itna shareef kaise ban gaya , mujhe kitna pareshan karta tha yeh , kabhi meri choti toh kabhi kuch ab dekhna kaisa mazaa chikhati hoon ) .

Suddenly bondita eyes stopped while glimpsing Aniruddh . Ye toh wohi shaitaan hai . Kaka ko batati hoon .

Bondita- kaka sasur ji woh jo aadmi hai na woh ek number ka shaitaan hai . Aap ko pata hai kal woh mujh par buri nazar daal raha tha .

Kaka - bondita yeh tum kya keh rahi ho. Ab woh tumpe nazar ni dalega toh aur koun dalega tumpe ? Bihari

Bondita is confused ; matlab

Kaka : bondita woh tumhara pati babu hai .

Bindiya is shocked. She hides her face with the help of ghunghat and moves towards the mandir .

Batuk : lagta hai bondi sharma gayi . Badi sharmili swabhav ki hai .🤣

Ani : woh toh mai kal dekh chuka ki kitni sharmili hai tumhari bondi😆.

Saudamini came while shouting Aniruddh

Kaka : yeh ladki ki shaadi kyu nahi karwate binoy tum .Huh.

Friend 2 - ye toh mini hai na ab tak single hai ya sadmei mei hai . ( The friends started laughing including saurabh )

Aniruddh see Mini : tum ... yaha kya kar rahi ho .

Mini - tum jaha mai waha ...

Friend 2 - par bondita and aniruddh ek kamre mei waha tum nahi jaa paaogi .

Mini looked at him . She glare at him

Mini - tum chup raho tumse kisi ne pucha .

Ani - Saudamini ghar mei pooja chal rahi hai tumhe dikhta nahi.

Saurabh; aniruddh babu ab hume chalna padega pooja shuru hone wali hai .

Ani and his friends move towards the temple .

However there is some rules , that only married couple will do aarti . The ladies placed mini in last row where bachelor girls and boys are there .

Friend 2 : ohho , mujhe pata tha tum mujhe hi dhund rahi hogi.

Mini - tum chup raho na . Aur apni shakal dekhi hai anirudh mera hai .

Friend 2 : filhaal toh kisi ka ho chuka hai . Tum kaho toh mai shaadi karlu tumpe . Paise bhi bach jayenge 😆

At Temple

Everyone is praying , bondita is singing bhajan and ani friends tease him as he is blushing.

Friend 1 - aniruddh ..Dekho bondi kitne pyaar se tumhare liye gaa rahi hai . Jao bhi ..

Aniruddh : kaha ? Mujhe toh dikh nahi rahi. Somu tum kya din mei sapne dekh rahe ho .

Kaka see them and gets angry

Tum sab besharamo ko akal ni hai kya , pooja ke samay dhidoli kar rahe ho. Aur tum aniruddh apne sanskar mat bhulo .

Aniruddh can't stop smiling . Suddenly pandit ji ask aniruddh to join the aarti .

Friends : lagta bondi mata ka bhulawa aa gaya . Enjoy Aniruddh

Aniruddh look at them and move towards bondita slowly .

Bondita is shivering as she can't believe that she actually did it . She give him a fake smile .

Suddenly she feels like her hands brushed to a body and it's was none other than Pati babu .

Ani is noticing her reaction . And slowly leans closure and said something in her ear

Bondita is flushed at this moment . But she control her shyness and concentrate on aarti .

Ani see when bondita is focused on arti . And vice versa.

Aarti is over. They both take blessing from elders .

However bondita get slip suddenly due to her long saree .

Aniruddh hold her from waist and she has closed her eyes but her hands on ani chest . The position is so close that everyone is suprised and when bondita open her eyes she found how awkwardly people are watching . And mini temper is going high.

She looked on aniruddh who is passionately looking at her . She pinches him

Pati babu , saab dekh rahe hai .

Ani in husky voice : toh dekhne do ., Maine roka hai kya ..

Kaka cough and aniruddh realise it .

Woh ...kaka... bondita ki saree phas gayi thi pair mei . Tum thik honaa na bondita ?

Bondita : haa she said with her numb voice and join the ladies group .

Ani looks on and winked at her.

Bindiya is shocked and thinks . Yeh pati babu ya rakshas babu ho hi ni sakte woh toh karele ki tarah kadwe the yeh kab rasgulle ki chasni ki tarah ban gaye. Nahi nahi bondita tu sapna dekh rahi hai .

To be continued .





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Posted: 5 years ago
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so cute and very very nice especially enjoyed the karela and the rosgulla part😆


enjoying it


thanks

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumsukor

so cute and very very nice especially enjoyed the karela and the rosgulla part😆


enjoying it


thanks

Thanks alot

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautiful

Thnx for the update❤️

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Originally posted by: tmaya

Beautiful

Was waiting for the update❤️

Will do

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Part 5

Nazrein Milana , Nazrein Churana

Trilochan kaka - bondita bahu , yaha aao zara .

Bondita - aayi kaka sasur .

Kaka - tumne inhe pehchaan ? Bachapan mei tum mili thi .

( Bondita is confused she looks for Aniruddh )

Bondita : kaka sasur , haa mujhe yaad hai.

Kaka - bahu abb jao rasoi mein aur tumne jo kheer banayi hai sabko dedo .

Bondita - ji.

Aniruddh is finding bondita . He ask one of her friend and ask about her .

Her friend : waise jamai babu kisse dhund rahe hai ?

Ani : tumhari dost ko jo mujhse dar kar kaha bhag gayi . Tumhe pata hai kya ?

Her friend : woh toh kitchen mein hai. Prasad lene gayi hai .

At kitchen

Bondita is unable to one of the utensil , she stand on the stool to see . Suddenly she slips as her stool unbalanced . Aniruddh again holds her . She is in his laps .

Aniruddh : ohho , aaj lagta hai kisi ka dyan nahi hai .

Bondita : aaap , yaha kya kar rahe hai . Aur neeche utariye koi aa jayega .

Aniruddh : mai toh nahi utarunga , ab chahe baba bole ya kaka . He speaks in his husky voice . Tumhe itna dar kyu lagta hai bondita ?

Bondita is shivering and is till numb with the effect ani is causing to her . She didn't speaks a word .

Ani : bolo bolo bondita mai tab tak neeche nahi utarunga jab tak tum mere prashno ka uttar na dedo .

Kaka called her . Bondita gets panic and request him to leave her .

Ani : pehle sawal

Bondit: aap kyu aisa kar rahe hai. Mujhe koi dar ni lag raha . Bas woh ..

Ani : woh .

Bondita : aapko saudamini bula rahi hai jaiye . Aapko iss samay saudamini ke pass hona chahiye na ki mere pass.

Ani is shocked after hearing this . He leaves her and bondita is hurts as she didn't want to say this but she has to do . His closeness will lead to cause this relationship a different angle .

Bondita comes to hall . Relax herself and starts serving the kheer . While serving she looks at saudamini and binoy .

Bondita moves towards binoy and gives him the kheer . When she steps towards mini to serve her , she is angry because she is the one who is a hurdle in the relationship . Bondita smiles at her and gives the kheer .

Aniruddh comes too and thinks about those words . He was not expecting bondita to say . Aniruddh looks at bondita who is coming with tray in front of him. He is again mesmerised with her .

However when it was ani turn she

Ask the servant to serve it . She ignore Aniruddh .


The dinner is set . Everyone is sit and ani besides table is empty . Aniruddh called bondita to join. But she refused and make saudamini sit besides him leaving him anger and frustration .

Saudamini is happy that she is getting what she wanted . She placed her hand in aniruddh hand.

Ani is angry he asked her to maintain discipline .

Saudamini thinks to insult to bondita . As today everyone praised bondita . She starts saying.

Bondita mujhe toh pata hi ni thi ki itni badi ho gayi hai. Tumhe yaad hai na tum kaisi thi bachpan mei . Aur tumhe yaad hai tumhe saree pehna ni aata tha , aur tum bistar ..

Bondita cut her and said - waise didi aap ki shaadi nahi huyi abhi tak. Aur aapke baal bhi safed ho gaye aur chehre ki chamak bhi kitni feeki ho gayi hai.

Ani got it . He is happy seeing this side .

Bondita continues - kaise thik hogi . Aap pure din yaha pe jo rehti hai .

S

Mini - ye mera bhi ghar hai

Bondita - bolne mei toh aapka ghar bhi mera hai par bolne mei aur hone mei faraq hota hai didi .

Sampoorn gesture her to stop . Sourabh looks at aniruddh and says something in his ear .

Aniruddh babu yeh sahi nahi ho raha hai . Usse pata chal gaya hai .

Ani is understood and he looks at bondita who is standing hurt .

Ani has not started eating . Saudamini asked him to eat.

Aniruddh stand up and moves towards bondita seat where one chair is empty and sit besides her leaving saudamini shock .

To be continued








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