Manmohini ( Rudhita OS ) part 9( updated ) pg 7 - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part -6

Bondita flashback :

Bondita gadi mei baith ke choudhary mansion jaa rahi hoti hai tabhi usse yaad aata hai ki usne mithayi( sweets) nahi li hai. Woh driver se bol ke ek shop mei rokne ko bolti hai . Woh jab uss shop se bahar nikalti hai tab kuch ladies gossiping kar rahi hoti hai . Jo saudamini ke baare mein hoti hai . Bondita isse pehle kuch kehti e, ek aurat bolti hai ki tumhe pata hai Roy Choudhary ke ghar woh bhawmick babu ki beti aati jaati rehti hai , tabhi dusri aurat bolti hai ki Aniruddh aur Mini shaadi karne wale the par unhone uss bachhi se shaadi karli . Bahot bada sadma laga tha mini ko par usne aniruddh babu ko phir se pane ki koshish kar rahi hai. Bechari choti malkin ko toh jaise bhul hi gaye hai. Bondita shock hoti hai aur gaadi mei baith jaati hai . Woh bachpan mei saudamini aur aniruddh ke baare mein sochti hai . Aur sochti hai ki itna bada paap kaise kar diya .

Bondita sampoorna ko batati hai aur roti hai . Sampoorn usse puchti hai ki aage kya socha hai . Kya woh aniruddh ko chhodakar .. Jisme bondita mana kar deti hai .

Bondita wants to help Ani and give love and care to his and family as he save her life and she is grateful . Bondita says that saudamini never loves Ani . Sampoorna ask how you know that? Bondita says that when she was a kid saudamini used to come in their house and used to play evil tricks which she mistook as caring .

Bondita says if mini love is pure she will not play games with me . And if she try to do anything with my family . It will be me who will thrown her out of the house.

Flashback ends .

Guests are gone including Mini. Bondita friend dhood ka glass leke aati hai aur bondita ko deti hai .

Bondita: kya hai yeh ? Aur tujhe pata hai na mujhe dhood ni pasand phir kyu ?

Her friend : tere liye nahi hai jamaibabu ke liye hai .

Aur haa khud mat peena.

Bondita : tu pagal hai . Ekdum pagal de mujhe dhood mai bhi toh dekhu kya jaadu hai iss dhood mei .

Bondita apne kamre mei jaati hai. Jaise hi enter karti hai pura room flowers se saaja hai . Bondita yeh sab dekh ke shock ho jati hai . Aur dhood ka sip leti hai.

Bondita : yee sab kya hai .Yeh phool mala yeh mombatti kya hone wala hai yaha ? Kahi rakhas babu koi jaadu tona to nahi kar rahe . Mai jaa rahi.

Ek min pehle apni saree badal leti hoon .Bondita changes into a light and loose saree , and when open her hair suddenly Ani enters. He is mesmerized to see her as her hair is waiving .

Aniruddh : woh mai takiya lene aaya tha ...

Bondita : kkkkyuu , aap yaha soyege nahi ?

Ani : acha , mujhe toh laga tum bahadur ho ( in a teasing way )

Bondita : ye lijiye ( the glass is empty and she doesn't know ) aapke liye dhood .

Ani : while maintaining eye contact as both are staring each other like hawk. When aniruddh sip he doesn't get anything .

Ani : ye kya hai ?

Bondita : dhood kya sharbat ban gaya ?

Ani : bondita dhood khaali hai . Tumhari shararatein abhi bhi khatam nahi huyi kyu ?

Bondita : nahi nahi , woh to mai bas ghabra gayi thi . Ki kahi aap mujhe.

Ani : ki tumhe khaa na jau 🤣

Bondita look at him in anger.

Bondita : aap se yeh umeed nahi thi . Aap bahar mat soiye na.

Ani : toh kaha sou ?

Bondita : kaka se saath so jaiye .( She

Says in her mind )

Ani : kya soch rahi ho bondita. Kuch baat hai toh batao .

Ani took her hand and they sit in the edge of bed.

Aao bondita baitho ab batao kya hua . Tumhe mei subah se dekh raha hoon tum kahi khoyi huyi ho. Mayke mei kuch hua ? Mami ne kuch kaha ho toh.

Bondita cuts him - nahi nahi aniruddh ( she look at him ) mera matlab rakhas babu . Nahi nahi mera matlab pati babu woh aap yaha bistar par so jaiye mai neeche so jati hoon

Ani : bondita ... Tum mere hote neeche kyu sogi .

Tum bistar par soo jao mai aaj neeche so jaunga .

Bondita :. Aap so jaiye na kyu behas kar rahe hai .

Ani : acha theek hai par ek shart mei tumhe bhi sona padega .

Bondita : ( embarrassing ) agar maine aapko sote samay laat mardi to ?

Ani : to kya mai neeche gir jaunga . Ab so jao . Tum bhi thak gayi hogi .

Bondita : haa waise mujhe kuch kehna tha .

Ani : bolo .

Bondita : woh uss din jo maine kiya uske liye sorry .

Aage se aisa nahi hoga shauti.

Ani laughs and come closer . Pull her chin up as she was seeing down all the time .

Tum kuch bhi karogi mujhe ab kuch ni hoga .

Bondita : waise aap haste huye aache lagte hai .

Ani : achha matlab rakshas toh ni lagta na .

To be continued .

Sorry for late update













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Posted: 5 years ago
#32

Thanks for updating.I logged in to check and you posted just 25 seconds before.what a timing 😉😆. Waise achsa laga bondu is not giving bhav yo saudamini's feelings or not in any guilt.I like this bondu and the flow.You have remained her character intact.loving it.Waiting for long updates.Update soon.Will comment more tomorrow.now good night.Ninny aa rahi hai.bye.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: TinkiGogoi

Lovely

It is so nice to read this playful, light hearted grown up story.Please keep it light always..i am liking this nok-jhoks between them and it's a request please no more tension wala misunderstandings.We have already a bunch of great stories here which giving me loads of heart attacks from time to times😭😆. And thanks for updating regularly and so fastly..

Looking for the next update..


Saach mein yaar. Mujhe toh kabhi kabhi laktha ki kahin show ke writers woh sab padh ke misunderstanding vala track na lele. Like I wanna see bondu teasing Anu while talking about the Mini matter. I don’t like it when the girl decides to leave thinking that the boy loves someone else even though he has never said that.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aaj update milega kya??😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: TinkiGogoi

Aaj update milega kya??😊

Kal subah

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Posted: 5 years ago
#36

Wow

Thanks for the update

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Ok.am wating.

Good morning 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS


Saach mein yaar. Mujhe toh kabhi kabhi laktha ki kahin show ke writers woh sab padh ke misunderstanding vala track na lele. Like I wanna see bondu teasing Anu while talking about the Mini matter. I don’t like it when the girl decides to leave thinking that the boy loves someone else even though he has never said that.

Ha tab woh obvious track ho jata hai.hero heroine sacrifices for each other..arey pehle jaan to lo dusra banda kya chahta hsi.fir sacrifice karo.But here BB possibility is high as Ani actually sacrificed his love for an unknown girl like Bondita (We know it is not love,but buddhuram ko toh wahi lagta hai na😉) .. so i am ready to get that track in future..but again i have a feeling too that jab tak bandu bari ho jayegi tab tak mini ki shaadi ho jayegi.Itne saalo tak kaun baap apni beti ko bin byaahe rakhega?Upar se ye 1902 ki kahaani hai.so fingers crossed.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part -7

Bondita : bahot raat ho gayi hai . Ab hume so jaana chahiye.

Ani : haa . Good night

Bondita : good night to you !

In morning , bondita wakes up early glance at ani who is still sleeping. She get up from bed and get ready and went to downstairs. She started singing bhajan.

Trilochan : waah bahu waah . Aisa lag raha hai jaise maa saraswati tumpe viraji ho .

Bondita ( she takes blessing ) : kaka sasur , ye lijiye prasad.

Kaka : umm bahot swadisht hai yeh toh.

Batuk and Som came : baudi aap toh chashni ki tarah gaati hai .

Bondita smiles and gives them prasad as well.

Kaka : Aniruddh utha ki nahi abhi tak

Bondita : woh ..

Ani is standing , ready and see bondita .

Ani - kaka mai yaha hoon . Woh kya hai na mujhe kuch kaam khatam karna tha . Waise itna surilla gaa koun raha tha ?

Kaka : bondita bahu . Tum ko barristery ke alawa kuch yaad rehta hai . Biwi ko na pehchaan paaye na uski awaaz .

Bondita : kaka sasur aap kyu unhe daant rahe hai . Keval woh hi nahi mai bhi unhe pehchaan ni paayi thi . Kher aap log naashta kar lijiye thanda ho raha hai . Bihari kaka sabki plates lagaiye .

Bondita has made breakfast which includes aloo poshtu , roti , makkan , juice , and tea .

Kaka : isse kehte hai sanskar binoy .

Binoy : dada woh ab badi ho gayi hai . Agar humari bahu badi hoti toh hume yeh din itne saalo baad dekhna ni padhta .

Bondita gets sad . She knows what he meant . It's only binoy who haven't accepted her as DIL . But bondita has not lose her hope .

Bondita serves the breakfast to everyone . When she saw ani is coming towards dining table . Bondita goes to kitchen as she forget something .

Ani smells and comment :

Waah bihari tumne toh aaj khana bada acha banaya hai .

Bihari : chote maalik . Ye khaana humne nahi choti malkin ne banaya hai . Woh bhi apne dono haatho se. Aur yeh makkan bhi unhone khud se banaya hai .

Ani : acha acha thik hai . Ani is impressed with bondita cooking. He loves the food .

Kaka : bahu yeh lo . Tumhara inaam .

Bondita : aap mujhe yeh tohfa dekar sharminda mat kijiye .

Ani ; Bondita yeh inaam nahi yeh ashirvad hai . Meri maa ko unki saas ne diya tha jab unhone tumhari tarah swadisht khaana pehli baar banaya tha .

Ab itna sankoch mat karo rakho .

Bondita : yeh toh ek jimmedari jaisa hai . Agar aap kehte hai toh mai rakh leti hoon . Kaka sasur aapka dhanyavad .

Kaka to ani : aniruddh tum mujhe woh mr ghosh ke ghar milo . Hume kaam hai . Aur som tum bhi chalo . Ab tumhari umar khelne gudhne ki nahi . Balki apne ani dada ki tarah bada aadmi banne ki hai .

Bondita : haa som dada , ab aap jaldi se seekh jaiye phir aapke liye bhi koi rajkumari dhundh lenge .

Som ; bondi aap bhi na . He blush .

Everyone get up and is going to their work. When ani grab her hands.

Ani : sach mei yeh khaana tumne banaya hai .

Bondita( teasingly ) : nahi , meri aatma ne .

Ani taking her closer. Their moment got disturb when som called him

Ani : haa aa raha hu . He bends towards her face .

Bondita is awkward with this and blushes .

Ani : zyada sharmao mat . Tum tamatar lagti hoo

Bondita widened her eyes.

Aap bhi na , jaaiye warna kaka mujhe dand denge.

She pushes him while saying that .

Acha bondita , jewellery wala aayega.

Bondita : kyu kisi ke liye kangan banwane hai .

Ani : haa ,

Bondita : kiske liye ?

Ani : tumhare liye . Dekho bondita mujhe pata hai tumhe kangan banwane the . Aur ab jab tumne mujhe apna dost mana hai . Toh yeh mera faraz hai ki mai tumhari ikchaiye puri karu . Aur paise ki chinta mat karna .

Bondita : aaap , kyu

Ani : bondita. Maine keh diya hai . Woh aayega toh tum usse bata dena .

He left . While bondita smiles and thinks he cares for so much . Will she able to do the same ?

To be continued .

( Sorry guys I went to outing so I am tired and didn't got the time to update )

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thanks for the update😊

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