Asya SS :- Give Me A Chance - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
#31

Nice story

Asad hurt zoya

Ayaan showed them right video & also tanveer truth.

Zoya had an accident

Waiting for next update eagerly

Update soon please

Thanks

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Posted: 5 years ago
#32

Part -4 A Shocking Twist


City hospital


It has been half hr asad, Dilshad, Ayan were waiting for doctor to come out and say something about zoya


Mr DB: Mr khan if i am alive today then its bzo of Zoya.... she didnt even think before saving my life.... if in her place anyone would have been there then they would have not saved me bzo the way i behaved.... i called her criminal but she is a angle👼 who is very innocent.......


Dilshad and Ayan were listening to Mr DB...they were both sad and proud....proud bzo they know there zoya is selfless but sad bzo of her condition in which she is...


Asad's whole world came into crashing the moment he hered zoya's accident in phone....he is standing like a lifeless person.... he still remember what happened in mangalpur and is very scared..... seeing him like this dilshad and ayan are shocked and scared....


Ayan: Bhaijaan y r u standing like this plss sitdown(seeing asad not moving even an inch).....bhaijaan... bhaijaan


Seeing him not responding to ayan dilshad was worried... she thought asad is guilty.... but if only she knows.......


Seeing the doctor coming out ayan and dilshad were about go to him and ask but before everyone asad was asking dr about Zoya....


Asad: Doctor what happened to Zoya....she is alright....there is nothing seriously na.....i am asking u what happened to my Zoya damit.....(holding his shirt collar)


Both dilshad and ayan rushed to asad and pulled him back...

Ayan: i am sorry doctor... my brother was tensed about Zoya so he behaved like that i am sorry from his side..


Doctor: its ok....i can understand mr khan's mental situation when he got to know that his wife met with an accident that too in this condition means....


Asad: in this condition.....what happened to zoya doctor.

Doctor: i think mr khan dont know that he is going to become father😊😊


Everyone were shocked to here it "father" means Zoya is pregnant... how is it possible


Asad:(shocked) pregnent... baby....

Doctor: dont worry mr khan u r very lucky.... ur wife and the baby both are safe....but

Asad: but....what do u mean but....everything is alright na..

Doctor: ya its alright but i feel ur wife is in some sort of stress..... and she is very weak now if sge takes more stress then....its not good for baby and her...just take care of her.....saying this he went to check on other patients


A very shock dilshad said


Dilshad: Zoya is pregnant... that to....ya allah now what to do

Ayan: badi ammi i know u r shocked even i am also...i couldn't believe mona could something like this.... bhaijaan

Dilshad: asad i never thought Zoya would do like this....today i am ashamed of her...she disappointed me....


Asad: ammi dont talk like that about Zoya...


Now again both are shocked the person who talks about Tabeez and Tameez now is supporting Zoya after what doctor told....


Dilshad: asad Zoya is....


Asad: pregnant..... WITH MY CHILD.....


Dilshad:(stunned) asad what are u saying.... do u even know what u r saying...


Asad: i know ammi.... and i am telling the truth.... that Zoya is pregnant with my child.........woo that day zoya tried to stop me to reach court.... we accidentally had bangh and we dont know when we crossed the limi.......

Taadddddd....badi ammiiiiiii

Dilshad slapped asad after what he told she was shocked that her son will do something like that....for the first time she is ashamed to call him her son...


Ps:-i dont know what i wrote i am fully tensed my grandma is not well from 2 days i am very worried for her😨😨😟😟😞😞.....i just wrote something....

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Posted: 5 years ago
#33

Sorry for late update dear.....my grandma is not well i am taking care of her...and had my online exams also...😢😢

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Posted: 5 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice story

Asad hurt zoya

Ayaan showed them right video & also tanveer truth.

Zoya had an accident

Waiting for next update eagerly

Update soon please

Thanks

I am glad u liked my story dear😊😊.... i have updated next part hope u like it...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#35

Read all parts in one go.

Wonderful story.
tanveer exposed

Zoya is pregnant! Omg! Didn’t expect that twist.

Now what will Assad do? I really hope Zoya don’t forgive Asad soon.

Don’t worry your grandma will get well soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Az07

Read all parts in one go.

Wonderful story.
tanveer exposed

Zoya is pregnant! Omg! Didn’t expect that twist.

Now what will Assad do? I really hope Zoya don’t forgive Asad soon.

Don’t worry your grandma will get well soon.

Thank u i am happy u liked my story😊😊

I am glad u liked my twist..... dont worry dear Zoya will NOT forgive asad soon.....

Thank u so much ☺

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Posted: 5 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Nirupari25

Sorry for late update dear.....my grandma is not well i am taking care of her...and had my online exams also...😢😢

Oh ok! Hope she will get well soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#38

Shocking update

Zoya is pregnant! Didn’t expect that. Can we get a flashback with bhang night?

Eagerly waiting for her next update with Zoya showing attitude towards asad

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Posted: 5 years ago
#39

Nice update

Shocking twist

Zoya & baby, both are ok

Dilshad slapped Asad. She didn’t believe that her son can do like that.

Curious to know what happens next

Update soon please

Thanks

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Posted: 5 years ago
#40

Part:- 5 Flashback


Zoya's POV


Ahhhh i felt a pain in my head..i tried to open my eyes and with great difficulty i opened them and to my shock i am not in my room.... i started to panick and when i observed the place where i am i realized i am in hospital.... Allah Miya y i am in hospital i should be in home with phuphi tamter and Mrkh.......and (just like that she remembered what and all happened today... think it she started to cry)..how big fool i am what i thought... by going there making mr khan see rabert's engagement he will be happy... Mr Akudu and happy.... first that lady slapped me and humiliated me and phuphi in front of so many people😢😢 if that is not less mr khan he called me a criminal....(getting angry) he called me a CRIMINAL...ZOYA FAROOQUI A CRIMINAL.... how dare he....what does he think of himself just because i was silent he can speak anything.... and phuphi and tamatar also didnt tell anything(felt more sad) do they think i poisoned humara .....WAITTT humara is poisoned..... and by the sweet given by me...how is it possible..... that Halwai i will kill him...but how did i come to hospital oh that accident.... omg i hope Mr Dhurandar Bhata........ahhh Mr Dhurandar and his PA dolly are safe ya Allah plss protect them....i still remember what happened after i left khan villa


Flashback:-

After mr khan closed the door on Zoya's face....dolly took zoya to the car and made her to sit in the car and she sat in front and Mr DB sat with Zoya

Mr DB: what u thought u will fool me and misuse mr khan and do fraud to stay here then i am sorry to say miss i am very strict with rules and regulation... now what happened y r u silent... last time u were such a talkative but not what happened cat caught ur tounge hahahaha


Zoya was just thinking the movments spend in khan villa suddenly

Pussssssssssssss

The car stopped and tire got puncture seeing it Mr DB got angry


Mr DB : i know u only did this so that we dont reach airport on time but u dont know that if i have to deport u today means i will deport u today only... (to driver) how long it will take

Driver: sir 2 tires got puncture sir we have only one spare.....

Mr DB: ahhhh cant u see it before only ah....no problem i have solution for everything.... dolly book a taxi now

Dolly: yes sir

Mr DB : now u will see miss Farooqui how i will deport u and saying this he got out of the car and was waiting for the taxi


It has been 15minutes still taxi didnt come so he called dolly and told her to call the taxi driver.. due to singnal problem dolly moved front and even Mr DB...they are standing in middle of the road and a car was coming in there side but they didnt see the car and even the car driver didnt see them as he was seeing his mobile.... but Zoya saw this and without thinking anything she opened the car door and ran towards them and pushed them to the other side of the road and got hit by the car....it was not a serious accident as thw car driver saw them and put the break but it hit Zoya's leg and she just fainted as finally everything started taking a troll upon her......the last think she front of her eyes was dolly running to her..


Flashback ends


Ps:- i wana give Zoya's POV and i dont know whether it was upto the mark or not i am just wrote like that only.... hope u guys like it and plsss do like and comment what u feel about this update....

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