Asya SS :- Give Me A Chance - Page 5

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Posted: 5 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Devtaholic

Oh ok! Hope she will get well soon

Thank u 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Devtaholic

Shocking update

Zoya is pregnant! Didn’t expect that. Can we get a flashback with bhang night?

Eagerly waiting for her next update with Zoya showing attitude towards asad

I am very bad when it comes to romantic update....but will try...ok i will give a fb with bhang night

Next update Zoya will show everyone attitude who hurt her

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Posted: 5 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update

Shocking twist

Zoya & baby, both are ok

Dilshad slapped Asad. She didn’t believe that her son can do like that.

Curious to know what happens next

Update soon please

Thanks

Thank u dear

Ya both are fine

No mother will believe if someone tell her that her son did something like that and asad he always respect womens....so it was difficult for dilshad to believe that her son did something like that..

I have updated dear...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#44

When r u updating next part?

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Posted: 5 years ago
#45

Zoya’s pov is well written

Zoya is such an angel she saved Mr.Bhatavadekar & Dolly despite there bad accusations

Zoya is angry with Assad. Well he deserves it. Zoya should show some attitude and give him cold shoulder.

I suppose Zoya doesn’t know about pregnancy yet. Even if she learns about her pregnancy I don’t want her to patch up with Assad soon. Come on there are many unwed single mothers. A women can bring up a child alone if she is independent. Please give a bhang night flashback.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Devtaholic

Zoya’s pov is well written

Zoya is such an angel she saved Mr.Bhatavadekar & Dolly despite there bad accusations

Zoya is angry with Assad. Well he deserves it. Zoya should show some attitude and give him cold shoulder.

I suppose Zoya doesn’t know about pregnancy yet. Even if she learns about her pregnancy I don’t want her to patch up with Assad soon. Come on there are many unwed single mothers. A women can bring up a child alone if she is independent. Please give a bhang night flashback.

Thank u dear...

U know na our Zoya is a angel👼👼👼 if she knows someone is in trouble or sad she will.do anything to make that person happy.....


No Zoya doesn't know she is pregnant...... dont worry Zoya will not forgive asad so soon....

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Posted: 5 years ago
#47

When are you updating next part?

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Posted: 5 years ago
#48

Part :- 6


City hospital


Zoya was still thinking what happened before few hrs or minutes(according to her) when the door opened and a nurse entered....seeing the patient awake she started to check her....

Zoya: sister what is the time....gow long i am here... actually i have a flight to catch... Allah Miya what if i miss the flight how will i go to New York... god Zoya u r unbelievable(and started to scold herself)

Nurse:(amused)...its 8:30 pm and u r here from past 2hr....

Zoya: whattttt 8:30 Allah Miya i had a flight at 7 now what to do that Mr Dhurandar will not spare me...wait (to nurse) sister with me 2 no 3 of them came na they are alright na...they didnt get any hurt right

Nurse: who woo that 2 handsome and that lady ah...no they r fine only...both handsome also got hurt ah

Zoya:(thinking " Allah Miya handsome and mr Dhurandar and that driver... what's wrong with this nurse ) are u alright.. i mean u...hmm...wooo(dont know how to tell)


Nurse:(laughing) i get it u r jealous i am taking about ur wooo

Zoya: Allah Miya what's wrong with u me and jealous that to about Mr Dhurandar Bhatarwa......whatever...

Nurse: who is that.... i am taking about Mr Asad Ahmed Khan....UR HUSBAND

Zoya: Whatttt Mr Khan is here....waittttttttt did u just call him my...m..y....my....

Nurse: ur husband... wait i will cal him he is so excited to meet u(Zoya sees the nurse with shock expression)....as u have given him such a good news

Zoya:(still shocked)good news

Nurse: hmmm that he is going to become father soon and she saying this she went out


Zoya: oh father.....WAITTT what father.. mr khan Allah Miya what's happening here....how(still didnt understand nurse full sentences)

Outside ward

Dilshad is crying and a shocked ayan is consoling her. Asad is standing with his head down front of dilshad

Nurse: Mr khan(all sees her with tears in there eyes and nurse think its happy tears...) ur wife is awake and she is asking for u(seriously)

Asad just runs towards the room and open the door and sees Zoya with tears and Zoya sees him blankly


Zoya hearing the door opening sound sees only to meet asad and before she understand or say anything asad come and hug her tightly.... shock would be underestimated to Zoya as she dont know how to react but hearing him speaking she feelt rage fill in all her nerves... she has never felt so anger for anyone in her lifetime

Asad: Zoya how can u be so selfish... u didnt think about me for once before doing all this... u r really a musibhat magnet....(before he speaks further Zoya pushed him with all her strength)


Asad is seeing Zoya with shock... dilshad and ayan who came with asad are seeing him in disbelief as how can he say something like this to Zoya and Zoya is burning with anger..


Khan villa


Najma and tanveer are sitting in living room and waiting for asad and dilshad... they are worried if something happened as the way both of them went and that to with ayan...


Najma: tanveer did bhaijaan answer the call(hearing a no from her she got more worried)..tanveer what's happening to our house we all were so happy today morning and see now how sad it has become... u know tanveer before Zoya came our house was just a house but after she came she changed it in to home a place where always laugh will be....i was soooooo happy after she came but now my best friend left me...no no was forced to live me and go( couldn't control her tears Najma ran to her room)

Tanveer in living room was first angry with Najma but soon started to laugh her evil laugh😸😸😸😸😸


Tanveer: tst... tst...tst...poor Najma is so sad that her best friend left but she dont know that she can never see her again....hahahaha😹😹😹...now i will become Mrs Asad Ahmed Khan... and all this property everything will be mine only mine 😹😹😹😹😹😸😸😸(if only she knows 😛😛😛)


Precap:- u guys guess😜😜😜


Ps:- from now u will see a brand new Zoya😝😝😝 are u guys ready for it

Nirupari25 thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Devtaholic

When are you updating next part?

I have updated dear

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Posted: 5 years ago
#50

WTH was wrong with Assad?

Why did he call Zoya selfish after all the mess created by him and his precious Tanu?
Do give a flashback of bhang night.


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