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Posted: 5 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: AryanSahil

Hahahah it’s ok 👍 dear 🤗🤗

❤️❤️ Little drama is also good for us 😉

Uske liye koshish karte rahenge 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

This has to be one cutest messages hands down.. i love it🤩 Thank so so much 🤗

Really sorry 😐 dear for my late comment smiley31smiley19

Please don't be sorry.. i loved it as it came as a surprise..

I just love this OS because it’s more than

wonderful,amazing and fabulous smiley16smiley41smiley41smiley41smiley40smiley41smiley41

While reading 📖 I enjoyed every bit of it smiley19smiley27

U wrote so beautiful 😍this OS yaarrrrr smiley27

Thank you so much for your lovely words. You have no idea kitna encouragement I get when I get to read reader's views.. and to super dupet cuteness se filled hai 🤗


Oh god I don’t understand what’s wrong with

chomo 🤔🤔🙄🙄🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️ that interferes in Prerna

and Rishabh personal life smiley7 Their marriage is deal

ya love marriage it’s not none of your business smiley7

You jerk smiley7 stay out of their life smiley7 he brought

again tears 😭 in Prernas eyes 👀 smiley19

And why he feels so jealous of prerna being so

close to Rishabh smiley7🤔🤔🤔 he pushed her out his

life naa🙄🙄 and trying to show that it feel hurts

when he see prerna with Rishabh really??? 🙄🙄

He has always been like that, isn't he? Last track mein bhi kept instigating Prerna. Itna zyada ki hamne dekha kya hua track end mein. This time also he threw her off the bridge but he still feels he is the thorn bird.. even while dancing he was a bit rough with her..so usi ke basis pe I wrote him in this OS..

Anyway I loved the way prerna gets worried 😟

Yeyy.. i am so glad you liked her


about Rishabh ufffffffff It was so beautiful 😍 I wish

we could see like this scene in the show too smiley19smiley19smiley19

Show mein bas 30 secs phone calls hain hamare liye nothing else..😒🤔


When she kissed and hugged him from behind

uffffffffffff I can imagine how beautiful they were looked ❤️❤️❤️😘😘😘🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥳😊😊😊😊😊😊☺️☺️😊☺️😊☺️☺️🥰😍😍 and When he asked “ You are home” 😘😍

🥰😚😍😍 ufffffffff my god that was awesome 😎 smiley41smiley41smiley40smiley40smiley41

And she responded “ Hmm.... I Am Home”

Ohhhhhhhh Mammmaaaaaa 😭😭😭😢😢😘😍

😍😘😍😍😚😍🥰😍😍😚😍🥰 what a answer 🥰😍😚😚😍😘🥰😚😚😍😘

You are so cute.. this makes writing stuff so much worth 🤗How cutely you have expressed yourself on that part..

I’m so happy that Kuki seen her parents like this 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙂🙂😘🥰😍😘😚😍🥰😘😉😉😉☺️☺️😊😊☺️

Kukki chhoti wali has been my fav.. but cvs usko bhhi nahi chhode.. but jo bhi.hai I always loved hers and Bajaj ka relationship. Isiliye achi wali Kukki in this story 😎

For god sake Anu now please move on and let our PreRish also live their life happily smiley31smiley43😘😍🥰😍😘😍😚😍🥰😘😍😍😚😍😘🥰😍😚😍🥰😘😍

In this OS he will move on...but show ❓🤔

Thank you so much once again dear for this beautiful Os Really love it 😍 and sorry 😐 my English is not good smiley19 smiley19 I hope you understand what I wrote in my comment smiley19smiley31smiley31

Your feelings have reached in the best words and manner I could ever expect.. i not just understood but it touched my heart. So a big Thanks to you...🤗

Arey dear u and all PreRish writers deserves the best comments but know how bad I’m in English 🤢🤮🙄 so I couldn’t write better 😐😑🤐 And you don’t need to thanks 😊 me dear 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥰😍😘😍😘😍😍😚😚😍🥰😘 U r always welcome 🙏🥳🥳🥳😘🥰😍😚😍🥰😘 We readers should say thank you 🙏 to u all for making time and writing ✍️ so beautiful stories about them 🥳🥳🥳😘🥰😍😚😍😘😘😗😘🥰😍😚😍🥰😘 God bless you all 😘😘🥰😍😚😍😍🥰😘🥰😍😚😍🥰🥰😘🙏🙏🙏🙏❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🙏🙏🙏🙏😘🥰😍😍😘😘🥳😚🥳😘🥰😍
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Posted: 5 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: AryanSahil

Arey dear u and all PreRish writers deserves the best comments but know how bad I’m in English 🤢🤮🙄 so I couldn’t write better 😐😑🤐 And you don’t need to thanks 😊 me dear 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥰😍😘😍😘😍😍😚😚😍🥰😘 U r always welcome 🙏🥳🥳🥳😘🥰😍😚😍🥰😘 We readers should say thank you 🙏 to u all for making time and writing ✍️ so beautiful stories about them 🥳🥳🥳😘🥰😍😚😍😘😘😗😘🥰😍😚😍🥰😘 God bless you all 😘😘🥰😍😚😍😍🥰😘🥰😍😚😍🥰🥰😘🙏🙏🙏🙏❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🙏🙏🙏🙏😘🥰😍😍😘😘🥳😚🥳😘🥰😍

As far as English is concerned I am no expert.. i make millions of mistakes in every update but fir bhi reader like yourself understand it and appreciate every writerz work. And I say thanks because I far will I or anyone for that matter will feel motivated to write agar koi read hi na karne wala ho to.. isliye mutual relationship it is.. so thank you goes both ways.. becausd a writer writes jo bhi mann mein aaya (mera to yahi hai) but you as readers spend time on reading, that's very much appreciated. 🤗

Please take care, stay home and stay safe

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Posted: 5 years ago
#84

One of the most beautiful story I have come across based on post 8 years leap PreRish. I am sure CVs can't even think at this level. I read the latest update of your FF and came across this amazingly beautiful piece of work in your index. Everything about this one is so on point. Drama, suspense, emotions, story flow everything was on point from start till the end. Every character was so beautifully written, I usually don't like reading Anurag but even he made sense and his characterisation was very cleverly retained from that part of the show. And Rishabh, Kukki and Prerna were just ❤️

Loved this Prerna a lot (I liked her in your FF too), her anger for Anurag who is responsible for her daughter's death, her retaliation, her revenge looked more real unlike show which was nothing but a joke in the name of revenge. Her worry for Bajaj when she couldn't locate him. Kukki was again like the grown up Kukki from the show, one who is her mother's guardian angel.

Last part of the story was.. their conversation on the couch .. oh my my.. I don't think I have enough words to express how beautiful it was. I could imagine each and every word and emotion. I wonder jo read karne mein itna beautiful hai, how amazing will it look if inacted by Karan and Erica on screen. Their life is their own matter, nobody needs to know.. so Bajajs like... they don't explain.

I cam go on and on .. on this one. You have a talent with bringing the best out of the characters in the most subtle manner and this story is an example of that. Though Bajaj was not a part of quite a good chunk of the stort but he was still there all across. You successfully maintained his presence even in his absence. Wowww..

I am excited to explore more of your work. This probably is the longest comment ever. I might read it again and write another one that's how much I loved it 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
#85

Like I said in my last message.. I read it again and I can't get over the beauty of this. This is a masterpiece nothing less. ❤️

PS..reading chapter 3 of Fight against destiny tonight. I understand you feel a bit lost right now but, I hope by the time I reach last updated chapter you'd have found your way back to us readers.

Take care

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Posted: 5 years ago
#86

Read this for the third time. This is incredibly beautiful❤️

Now coming to the one you have discontinued, I'm heartbroken dear as a reader. But I understand that you are feeling a bit lost right now. I'm gonna read that again right from the first chapter only for you. That is the best PreRish FF till date and is very close to my heart. Just in case you read this, it's a request pls do come back and continue it. Lots of love. 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Sunita1986

Read this for the third time. This is incredibly beautiful❤️

Now coming to the one you have discontinued, I'm heartbroken dear as a reader. But I understand that you are feeling a bit lost right now. I'm gonna read that again right from the first chapter only for you. That is the best PreRish FF till date and is very close to my heart. Just in case you read this, it's a request pls do come back and continue it. Lots of love. 🤗

@bold- I agree..

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